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Posted: 3 years ago
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The story of Ram and Priya, inspired by the Russian song "Dancing on Glasses". I am attaching the text of the song in English and video to my text so that you can fully feel the topic.

I can't undo your pain Priya, I can't rewind the past but I can feel you.

It’s hard for me to imagine what road you went before, with your father, what he did to you, how his words and actions made you walk on broken glass and bleed, but I know the real you - strong, brave and generous. You took a bite of kachori, touched betrayal again, just for me, so that my efforts would not be trampled into the dirt.

Maybe you don’t love me, you won’t love me soon or never, the main thing that I know is how important it is to you. With this act, you put me above your feelings, experiences, resentment and desire to curse the moment of betrayal and memories of it. When you took it, I saw that there were unshed tears in your eyes, then I did not understand what they were connected with, I just wanted to make you happy.

The conversation between Sarah and little Sandy brought me back to reality and led to understanding. You wanted to cry not from happy memories of spicy delicacy, you again danced on those glasses that threw life with the hands of unworthy people under your beautiful, unbending legs. You went again, bleeding again, without showing for a second how much you now want to spit kachori and run away from the hall. I do not have enough expressions to express at least in my thoughts how much I admire your soul, how much hope for reciprocity you gave me, what your silence means to me.

Priya, I will definitely wait for you to share with me everything that was experienced then and on other days. I also have Vedika's secret on my side. It doesn’t matter to me anymore, but I don’t want you to walk on the glass again and hurt yourself with ideas that I can exchange you for another woman. So I will wait for you to open up and open up to you. My love will give me the strength to handle any situation for you, just like you did today. My beloved coconut, I will no longer let you dance on broken glass, even if it happens, I will stand on them instead of you. No, no, you won't let me do this alone, my other half of my heart, you're too stubborn. So we'll dance this painful dance together.

Dancing on Glass

This house is so, so silent

I'll open the door

I'm not expecting anybody

Don't believe me anymore

I won't come back again

I'm building this bridge

So that you and I

Will no longer fall

And so the silent water

Won't carry us away

Ch.: Dancing on glass

Isn't for the faint of heart,

It's where anything goes.

You wouldn't manage

Dancing on glass

And I can't fix anything now

I leave and that's it

No more me, no more us

And the ordinary light

Comforted us

Like neither I nor you could

A shout, somewhere in the silence

Don't call for me

I won't turn back

And forgive me

I won't return


https://lyricstranslate.com/ru/tantci-na-steklah-tantsy-na-steklakh-dances-glasses.html


Video with a song in Russian: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sXBmlh6tmVw


There are many who I would like to tag, my dear people with beautiful thoughts, but while I am relatively new to the forum, all of you do not fit in the mark. If you want me to invite you to read another story, tell me)

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Posted: 3 years ago
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That's is such a different analogy 🥺

Them dancing on broken glass, I never thought that this track could be connected to physical pain metaphorically.

It was a very good take on Ram's thoughts. I think somewhere in the show too his monologue in the bed could be transferred to these lines above.

Very good attempt 👍

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Thank you dear. In our country, this song is a modern legend, it is over 20 years old, but they still sing it, I sing it too. It so happened because the music and words contain living deep human experiences, so there was an association with what our Priya and Ram endured with her. It cannot be called otherwise than bleeding from wounds. In addition, I know that in India, in TV shows and not only, there are tests with walking on coals, glass and the like. I didn't have a chance to pass

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Originally posted by: SEA05

Thank you dear. In our country, this song is a modern legend, it is over 20 years old, but they still sing it, I sing it too. It so happened because the music and words contain living deep human experiences, so there was an association with what our Priya and Ram endured with her. It cannot be called otherwise than bleeding from wounds. In addition, I know that in India, in TV shows and not only, there are tests with walking on coals, glass and the like. I didn't have a chance to pass

Yeah well in ITV they show a lot of bull crap 😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
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I like moments like this, dramatic fun, like candy being eaten by chili) It's especially fun when you have a similar real-life experience. As a therapy, I had to stand on dry peas, it does not bleed, but brings noticeable pain

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Such a beautiful piece👏, it so perfectly describes what Ram might have felt when he had come to know about the real tragedy.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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I am very pleased thank you. My goal was to read and convey feelings that did not fit in the series.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Emotional yet beautiful

Ram and priya has a long way to go to get their happy ever after

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Thanks for the feedback. It's true, for the sake of eternity together, they still have a lot to go through.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This is so beautiful, the way he feels her pain and the magnanimity of her action. If this action of hers does not give a glimpse of her beautiful but badly scarred soul then what else would.

Loved these lines” Maybe you don’t love me, you won’t love me soon or never, the main thing that I know is how important it is to you. With this act, you put me above your feelings, experiences, resentment and desire to curse the moment of betrayal and memories of it.

This is exactly what they tried depicting in the hand holding scene, he was in awe of her that how could she hide such a storm inside her and yet be so normal.

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