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Hi guys🤗

I am back with another Os, I wrote this before the recent promo aired and I hope you guys will like it.


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Kya hua mr. Kapoor? Itna kyu shocked hai? Aap kbhi kisi ke liye knees par nahi gaye?’ Priya said in no nonsense tone.

‘Priya.. kya keh rahi ho?’ Ram asked.

She got up and said ‘Mr. kapoor Vedika showed me the video where you proposed to her.’

Ram was shocked and said in fear ‘main tumhe batana chahta tha Priya par tum hi sunna nahi chahti thi’

‘Isliye maine apko kuch nahi kaha. I know maine hi nahi suna, I won’t say ki mujhe farak nahi pada. Main shocked thi then I realised ki maine hi mana kia tha lekin maine expect nahi kia tha ki vo Vedika hogi’ Priya tried to sound normal.

Ram could see some other emotions also but he was upset that at this point also Priya chose to show her fake emotions.

‘Mr. kapoor main kuch kehna chahti hu’ Priya spoke.

Ram replied in a hope ‘ha kaho na’

‘Aap chaho toh Vedika ke paas ja sakte ho yeh rishta todke. Aapne hi kaha tha ki aap aage nahi bad paoge or Vedika ki baton se bhi laga ki vo vapis aana cahhti hai. Toh.. aap ja sakte ho’ she spoke with a lowered gaze.

Ram took a step back, the hope in him died, he was angry, he was upset.

‘Tum mujhe chodna chah rahi ho?’ He asked, his heart was totally broken.

‘Nahi.’ She replied instantly. ‘Main aap ko keh rahi hu ki aap vapis ja sakte hai’

‘Kya maine tumse kaha? Ki main jana chahta hu?’ Ram asked, wiping a tear before it could fall down.

Priya replied ‘Nahi’

‘Toh kabhi maine tumhe aisa feel karvaya ki main khush nahi hu? Ya upset hu’

‘Nahi’

‘Toh kabhi tumne mujhe Vedika ka naam bhi lete suna?’

‘Nahi’

‘Toh tumhe aisa kyu laga Priya? How dare you, Priya?’ Hurt was clear in his tone, tears didn’t stop.

‘Par aapne hi toh kaha tha Mr. Kapoor’

‘Kya kaha tha? Ki main vapis jana chahta hu?’

‘Nahi.’

‘Toh tumhari himat kaise hui Priya? Tumne bhi kaha tha ki tumhara past hai Neeraj ke sath. Even mom or Vedika ne mujhe kaha tha ki tumne Neeraj se apne pyar ka izhaar kia tha sangeet vale din. Par maine tumse puchna bhi thik nahi samjha kyuki us waqt bhi maine tum pe bharosa kia tha ki Priya ne jo kaha vohi sach hai. Toh tumne kaise socha Priya? Maine toh Vedika ko ghar par rukne tak ka option nahi dia tha, aya tha na main tumhare pas? Kyuki mujhe tension tumhari thi ki Priya kya sochegi.

Pata hai Priya I know yeh baat janne ke baad tum hurt ho or sach kahu toh mujhe khushi hoti agar tum yeh khud mujhe batati. Infact tum ladti bhi na toh bhi mujhe bahut khushi hoti par tumne jo jane ka option mujhe dia hai na, dil tod diya.’

‘Mr. Kapoor..’ Priya tried to speak, she felt like killing herself for making him cry but before she could continue Ram cut her ‘shayad kami mujh mein hi hai Priya. I think it’s really easy to leave me. Pehle mom gayi phir dad, phir vo Vedika chali gayi. Vaha tak bhi I can understand par tum bhi jana chahti ho Priya. I wish main tumhare dil mein itni jagah toh bana pata ki tum lifetime mere sath rehti. Par shayad mujh mein hi kami hai main hi jinx hu’

‘Kya bole ja rahe hai aap Mr. Kapoor? Kuch bhi mat boliye please’ she too cried with him. ‘Aapko koi kyu chodega? Or main toh bilkul nahi. Mujhe sach mein laga..’

‘Kaise lag gaya tumhe? Kaise Priya?’ He held her shoulders and shook her’ ‘oh sorry. ‘ he left her. ‘I am sorry mujhe toh yeh right bhi nahi. I am sorry.’ He said.

‘Kya bol rahe hai Mr. Kapoor? Aapko right hai’ she said. More than him she needed to know that.

‘Hai? Nahi Priya mujhe kaha koi right. Tum jao please. Ek kaam karo divorce dedo mujhe, chod do mujhe mere haal pe’ Ram said, trust him this mere sentence broke his inside.

‘Bakwas mat kariye. Kahi nahi ja rahi main’ Priya said rightfully.

‘I wish tumne yeh haq thodi der pehle dikha dia hota. Aake haq jamati or bolti ki bura laga, main manata tumhe tumhara gussa sehta par tumne…’ he couldn’t complete his sentence.

‘Sirf ek baat Vedika is no one to me.’ He said before leaving the room.

***

Ram woke up late and checked his alarms but they were all off. So, he asked Tarun why he didn’t wake him in reply to which Tarun said that Priya asked him not to.

‘Hai kaha vo?’ Ram asked.

‘Kahi gayi hai vo bahar’ tarun replied

‘Had ho gayi hai. Mujhe manane ki jagah chali gayi bahar.’ He thought to himself.

‘Khane mein kya hai?’ He asked in anger.

‘Tumhare favourite Chole bhature, parathe. Tum us din kha rahe tha na man se’ Vedika replied.

‘Parathe main Priya ke hath ke pasand karta hu. Or Vedika dur raho is matter se’ he replied rudely.

‘Ram tum aise kyu baat kar rahe ho?’ Vedika asked. Ram ignored

‘Tarun.. tarun kaha mar gaya hai? Kam karne ka man nahi hai toh job chod de na’ he shouted.

‘Yeh kya tamiz hai Mr. Kapoor? Aise kaise bat kar rahe hai aap Tarun se?’ Priya said who just entered the house.

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Early morning she went to Sara and Brinda and told them the blunder she did. Brinda filled her with everything how Vedika left him. How he never felt at peace and how after Priya entered he felt the best. Priya was the only family he had now Priya understood why he behaved the way he did. She broke his heart.

‘Ab main kya karu? Kuch gift du kya Unhe manane ke liye?’ Priya asked Brinda.

‘Tum jaisi ho vaisi hi raho Priya bas uske sath raho and jaisa usne kaha apna haq jamao uspe. He would love to be owned by you, ' brinda suggested.

Priya blushed but she knew this was the only way to tame him.

Ram just kept quiet hearing her voice, he was happy that she was back. Also he had to show her his anger.

‘Jawab dijiye?’ She spoke in her usual high tone and he sat there like a kid.

‘Priya yeh kya manners hai? Aise kaise baat kar rahi ho tum Ram se?’ Vedika intervened.

Ram kept quiet because he wanted Priya to say something.

‘Vedika main apne pati se baat kar rahi hu so stop.’ Priya spoke sternly.

‘Tarun, Sir ka khana lao’ priya commanded Tarun.

‘Or Mr. Kapoor apologize’ Priya said.

‘Apologize? Haha. Seriously priya? vo bhi ek naukar se?’ Vedika said, mocking.

Ram smiled a sarcastic one, he knew he was at mistake, after Priya’s arrival in his life he started respecting every human irrespective of their profession.

‘Sorry Tarun. Main tumpe gussa nahi tha’ he apologized like a grumpy child earning a smile from Priya and Vedika was shocked.

‘It’s okay sir,’ Tarun said hesitantly.

Tarun poured some oats on his plate.

‘Main nahi khaunga’ Ram said, folding his arms across his chest.

‘Ram tum chole bhature khalo’ Vedika said.

‘Nahi. Vo sirf oats khaenge. Vedik tum apna khana khao main dekh lungi inhe, thanks for your concern.’ Priya said with a fake smile.

Ram chuckled at her tone.

‘Tum itna bossy kyu ho rahi ho?’ Vedika said.

‘Kyuki biwi hai vo meri. Haq hai uska and Vedika jitna jaldi ho sake leave this house’ Ram said now authoritatively.

‘Ram tum kaise baat kar rahe ho? Dost hu main tumhari’ vedika said.

‘Yeah right. Dost vo nahi karte jo tumne kia, i told you not to tell Priya and what you did? Anyways Please leave my house. Dost hone ke naate main tumhe hotel mein rukva sakta hu bata dena.’ He said sarcastically And turned to Priya who just looked at him.

‘Or tum. Khilao mujhe oats’ Ram ordered her.

Priya just gaped at him. ‘Biwi ho na meri toh khilao’ he said. He was frustrated with everyone.

Priya took a spoon and fed him. ‘Acha hai?’ Priya asked.

‘Hmm.’ He fed her with the same spoon. ‘Tum bhi khao’

Priya smiled at his behaviour. He is upset but still fed her.

‘I am sorry Mr. Kapoor’ she said.

‘Promise karo kabhi aisa dobara nahi karogi’ Ram said.

‘Nahi karungi.’ She replied.

‘Agar kia na Priya toh main bahut dur chala jaunga jaha se vapis kabhi na aa pau’ Ram said looking in her eyes.

Priya replied ‘or agar apne aisa phir kaha toh phir aap dekh lena kya hoga’

‘Nahi kahunga. Khilao ab’ he spoke.

‘Khane hai Chole bhature?’ She asked genuinely.

Ram just nodded in a No and they happily fed each other.

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Wo bhyanak promo k baad this is what I needed🤗

Beautiful shot❤️

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Damn it was so cute.There were so many beautiful scenes excluding vedika band bajaoing by both miya biwi.thunbs up for that.But raya scenes starting with ram expressing his disagreemen,hurt, insecurities, vulnerability by still being damn cute.khilai mujhe waa aww!!! N Priya's khana ai chole bhature was just perfect.I n short loved everything about this os.Would to live further.

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Loved the togetherness…❤️

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This was our love.

Absolutely fantastic

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Ah I wish things were this simple in the show. Not only there was the required drama but the feel good moments too.




Loved how they accepted each other in the end.




Really awesome!

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This was super cute.. loved it !!

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This was cute one, nice one dear 👍

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