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Posted: 7 years ago
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Their is definitely something between RaYa which connects them but still don't know when they will feel attraction towards each other. This time arguments turn out to be serious but still well handled off.
But seems Priya will be visiting her father after she get to know the hospital news with Ram.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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mast update. loving this raya banter. keep posting. thanks for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
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THANKS for pm. Read it in Wattpad.
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Part 4

Priya saw that news & she sit on sofa, tears brim in her eyes..

Ram look her, keep quiet & he also sit beside her..

Priya- Ram plz.. I request you.. just go.. papa ko plz.. dekh kar aao.. plz..

Ram- you know what.. you did a mistake.. iss Shaadi ko haan bolne se pehle, tumhe ek baar aapne papa se baat karni chahiye thi..

Priya- I.. I try my best.. but he.. against love.. woh.. nahi mante.. iss liye.. tears rolled down..

Ram- humare parents kabhi galat nahi hote hai.. samjhi.. abhi ke liye news se Kam chalalo.. Mai kuch nahi kar sakta.. Sharma yaad karo.. tumhari wajah se Mai meri maa ke akhari dinno me saath nahi tha.. aur Mai Jo bolta hun wahi karta hun.. Jo tumne college ke time kiya tha wahi Mai aaj karunga.. uss time tumne..

Priya didn't say word & went in bedroom with teary eyes..

Ram pick his shirt & went to washroom..


Evening 9:30 pm.. Ram back from his work.. on lights, went in kitchen first, take relief breath, look his kitchen so well, he knocked bedroom door..

Priya from inside- kya hai..

Ram- bahar aao, baat karni hai..

Priya- nahi.. I'm not interested to talk with you..

Ram- ok then just go to hell.. & he went from there..


A hour later Priya came out from bedroom, she look Ram eating his food, Ram look her from his corner eyes.. but he didn't give any attention to her, he eat his food, Priya came & sit in front of him..

Priya- I'm hungry..

Ram- samne khaana rakha hai, khaa lo..

Priya- mujhe phone chahiye..

Ram- TV ke paas ek drawer hai, waha par phone aur new sim bhi hai..

Priya check food- it's khichdi..

Ram- haan toh..

Priya- kuch aur nahi hai..

Ram look her with innocent smile on his face, Priya look him & listen him carefully - kitchen me jaao.. waha par left side me fridge hai, open that fridge, aur uss me se ek Pani bottle nikalo aur peelo, aur Soo jaao..

Priya- useless.. a rude person..

Ram- then get out from my house.. kisi ko bhi, kuch mat bolo..

Priya serve herself, start to eat- acchi bani hai..

Ram didn't say a word..

Priya- Kapoor kuch problem hai kya..

Ram- kis baare me..

Priya- to-do-list number 4, heartbroken or any other reason..

Ram- there are 2 reasons, one. You are not my friend.. second. Mind your own business..

Priya make irritated face- tumse toh baat karna hi bekar hai.. beast..

Ram- you witch..

Priya throw spoon on him, he catch that..

Ram- shaanti se pure din ka khaana khaao.. pet bhar ke..

Priya- ek minute, how do you know.. maine subhe se kuch nahi khaaya hai..

Ram- Mera kitchen thik tha.. aur kal raat ka khaana bhi fridge me waisa hi tha.. iss liye.. pata chala..

Priya- waise tum boyfriend yaa husband kaise rahoge pata nahi, lekin insan thode bahot acche ho..

Ram forcefully smile & say- Jo bathroom me, aapne kapde rakhe hai, usse clean kar dena.. mere yaha kapde dhone ke liye.. koi maid nahi aati.. ok.. bathroom clear karna khaane ke baad, aur plate bhi saaf karna.. khud ki.. & he stood up from chair, with his empty plate..

Priya- you are not human, thodi si bhi tareef karne layak nahi ho.. mujhe laga tha.. tum insan bure nahi ho lekin, I was totally wrong.. beast..

Ram from kitchen- I know, I'm beast.. you witch..

Priya eat her food, & came in kitchen with empty plate, look Ram cleaning kitchen so well, she clean plate, Ram open dish drawer & say- iss me rakho..

Priya kept plate in dish drawer & started walking towards kitchen door..

Ram- your dad is fine.. his BP was high.. now he is normal..

Priya turn to him- you went to meet him..

Ram- not exactly.. Vikram office me bol raha tha.. bas wahi baata raha hun..

Priya- thanks..

Ram didn't say a word..


Days passed, Priya talked with Rajat daily, Ram didn't care towards her.. month pass, there arguments remain same.. one fine day.. door bell ring..

Ram send Priya in bedroom, he open door, Neha & Vikram enter in.. they all sit in hall, Ram look Neha's dull face, he asked her..

Ram- Neha something happened to you.. Vikram ne kuch bola kya..

Neha- nahi, he always sweet & nice with me.. & she hold Vikram's arm..

Ram- phir kiu itni shaant hai..

Neha- kuch nahi yaar.. Priya bhaag gayi aur mujhe problem me phasa kar gayi..

Ram- means..

Vikram- Neha ko roj-roj police station me bula lete hai.. even usske family members ko bhi pura din wahi par baitha kar rakte hai.. ab one month ho kar gaya hai phir bhi yahi routine chal raha hai.. abhi bhi hum wahi se aaya hai..

Neha- Priya ko ek baar sochna chahiye tha yaar.. khud bhaag gayi lekin mere future ki laga gayi hai.. I feel regret, Maine usske saath kiu dosti ki.. khud toh khush hogi usske life me..

Ram- tumhe kuch pata tha.. woh bhagne wali hai..

Neha- nahi pata tha yaar.. mujhe toh yeh bhi nahi pata woh kisi ke saath bhaagi hai.. yaa usska koi boyfriend hai.. aaj tak hum dono ek dusre ke saath sab kuch share karte aaye the.. lekin itni baadi baat.. I really feel regret.. kiu Maine dosti ki..

Priya listen everything from behind bedroom door, tears rolled down from her eyes..

Ram- tune usske father se baat ki iss baare me..

Neha- sab kuch ho gaya.. lekin Shipra aunty.. woh maane ke liye tyar hi nahi hai, unnka kehna hai, Mai usski best friend hun toh mujhe sab kuch pata hoga..

Ram- relax Neha, sab kuch thik hoga..

Neha- kuch thik nahi hoga.. jab tak Priya ka pata nahi chalta tab tak Mai phasi rahungi..

Ram- hmm, kuch khaaogi..

Neha- nahi, phir kabhi.. hum abhi nikalte hai..

Ram- ok, take care, Vikram tu office late aayega toh bhi chalega..

Vikram- ok & he hugged to Ram, Ram give side hugged to Neha.. both bid bye to Ram..

Priya came out from bedroom with teary eyes..

Ram- tumhari best friend Neha, she curse herself, kiu ki ussne tumse dosti ki..

Priya didn't say a word..

Ram- tumne ek insan ke liye bahot saare rishte tode hai, pata hai tumhe..

Priya- jab Dil aur dimag ek hi jagah aakar ruk jaata hai aur aapko aage badhne par majbur nahi karta tab tumhe pata chalega..

Ram- kon hai yeh Rajat, jiske liye tumne khud ke rishton ko..

Priya cut him mide, tears rolled down- tum mujhe kitna jaante ho.. one & half year, we were good friends, Right! Usske baad tum baddl gaye, aur mujhe aisa baddl ne par majbur kiya.. ab tumhe koi haq nahi hai.. Rajat kon hai aur kya karta hai, yeh sab puchne ka..

Ram- you are sick..

Priya wipe her tears & say- I know, ab bahot hua, mujhe movie dekhni hai..

Ram- some time ago you're crying, aur abhi tum keh rahi ho TV dekhna hai, in your body somewhere a switch button..

Priya on the TV & volume up, ignore Ram's babbling..

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice update... revealed many newvqueries n open threads ofvl the stories..

Specially raya past... how priya stopped ram from meeting his mother last time... how ram' behavior affected priya to change drastically.


Pls update soon...

Amazing story
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 5

A bang on bathroom door, Priya from outside..

Priya- aye Kapoor jaldi bahar aa..

Ram from inside- nahi aa sakta..

Priya- Kapoor bahar aa.. nahi toh pitega..

Ram- nahi aa sakta..

Priya- I can't wait.. Teri wajah se yeh ho raha hai, tune hi kuch milya hoga raat ke khaane me..

Ram- what..

Priya- tu bahar aa..

Ram- ruk 2 minute..

Priya- nahi..

Ram opne bathroom door, Priya pull him outside & enter in bathroom..

Ram from outside- Sharma kya baat hai..

Priya- sirf Teri wajah se yeh sab hua hai..

Ram- Meri wajah se hua hai.. lekin hua kya hai..

Priya- tu doctor ko lekar aa..

Ram- Tere liye.. tu maar bhi gayi na toh bhi, nahi lekar aaunga..

Priya- tune kal raat ko khaane me kuch alag saman istemal kiya tha..

Ram- jaise ke..

Priya- garam masala..

Ram- haan..

Priya- ab ek kam kar..

Ram- kya..

Priya- hanging yourself.. I'm allergic of cinnamon aur garam masala me cinnamon hota hai..

Ram- accha hua baata diya, tujhe kal se yahi mix karke dunga, khaane me..

Priya- Meri dead body bhi tujhe phasa sakti hai..

Ram murmurs- khud ki jaan uss bathroom me phasi hai aur mujhe phasa ne ki planning kar rahi hai..

Priya- kya bole jaa raha hai..

Ram- tu koi drama toh nahi kar rahi hai..

Priya- Kapoor it's my life issue.. aur tujhe drama dikh raha hai.. she little shout from outside..

Ram- ok, yeh sab thik hai.. lekin doctor tujhe pehchan lega toh..

Priya- ok ek kam kar..

Ram- kya..

Priya- Neha ko call kar aur puch le..

Ram- aise kaise Mai puch sakta hun..

priya- call her aur kuch baatein nikal kar puch le.. yeh baat bhi tumhe baatani hogi..

Ram- you're smart na.. iss liye tumse pucha.. medicine on the way hai.. tab tak bathroom me baithi rahe.. Mera dimag khaane bahar mat aa..

Priya- you beast..

Ram- you witch..

Priya came out from bathroom, taking her medicine, Ram kept that medicine on table..

Priya- itne jaldi medicine kaise aaye..

Ram rubbed his palms with each other, yawing so hard & say- abhi mujhe nind aa rahi hai, soone jaa raha hun.. don't disturb my sleep till evening..

Priya- I'm asking you something..

Ram again yawing- Mai tumhare kisi bhi sawal ka jawab dena jaruri nahi samjhta.. & he went in bedroom..

Priya didn't understand.. she bit confused...


One fine day, Ram back from office early, Priya sit in bedroom, she heard main door sound, she peep out side from bedroom & came out from room- Kapoor good evening, aaj bada jaldi aaya..

Ram remove his shoes & only nodded..

Priya- Kapoor iss Sunday tu kya kar raha hai..

Ram open his shirt's arm button & fold till near elbows- kiu..

Priya- baata na..

Ram open tie knot & say- pura din soone wala hun..

Priya- lazy monster..

Ram- I'm tired today, so.. no fighting..

Priya- Rajat aane wala hai, mujhse milne.. usse tere Ghar ka address diya hai..

Ram less interested to listen her babbling, & he lying on sofa, turn his face, show his back to Priya..

Priya feel bad for his action- so rude Ram..

Ram didn't say word, Priya turn to go, Ram's cell beep, she pick his cell from table, open message of Vikram, she read the message, 'take care Ram, I'll handle everything, you take a rest'

Priya in mind- he not feel well.. or anything else happens..

She check him, if he sleep or not.. she confirm that he deep in sleep, she open his bag, found doctor's prescription.. she start searching for medicine pack, but there are no pack..

Priya in mind- so careless person he is!! Kitchen ko jaara sa kuch ho jaaye toh pura Ghar Saar par lekar nachta hai.. khud bimar pada hai toh dawai nahi laa sakta.. & she went in bedroom, pull out his one of the jacket, she hide her face under in cap.. came out from flat with her credit card.. buy medicine for him & again came to flat with bread pack..

Couple of minutes later..

Priya- aye Kapoor uth..

No reply from him..

Priya stood near him, touch his arm & call him- Kapoor uth..

Ram open his eyes & irritatingly turn his face to her, he wants to open his mouth but she not allowed him..

Priya- uth, kuch khaa aur medicine le..

Ram didn't hear her properly & say- sorry I can't make dinner for today.. plz you manage with milk & have some fruits..

Priya- kaan khule kar aur sunn meri baat, uth aur bread ko butter aur jam lagaya hai, woh khaa le..

Ram still lying on a sofa & he ask her in confused tone- bread toh subhe khatam huye the naa, toh kaha se aaye..

Priya- jaadu se aaye.. ab uth.. aur khaa le..

Ram sit on sofa, look medicine pack near plate of bread, butter, jam- aur yeh medicine!! Sharma kaha se aaya yeh sab..

Priya- Mai lekar aayi hun..

Ram little shout on her- tu pagal hai.. ek toh tu khud ki Shaadi se bhaagi hai.. aur mere Ghar aayi.. Meri aadhi life jhand kar di hai tune.. ab toh Puri life jhand kar ke aayi hai.. ab toh start up bhi khatam.. tune Jo kaha wahi kar diya.. & he grab medicine pack in his hand, throw it on floor, went in balcony, & lite his cigarette..

Priya went near balcony, stood behind him & said- tujhe se jaada mai aapni life se pyar karti hun, tu aur tera start up mere liye kuch bhi nahi hai.. aur rahi baat, logo ne mujhe dekh liya hoga, toh baata deti hun, aaj kal kisi ke paas itna time nahi hota hai.. tere jacket ki wajah se kis ne bhi mujhe nahi dekha.. I hide my face under cap.. relax.. mujhe meri life jhand nahi karni hai.. waha par bread, butter, jam pada hai, khaa le aur Jo medicine lekar aayi hun, usski baith kar Pooja kar.. & she went in bedroom..

Ram realise his mistake, he slapped himself mentally, went near table, pick all medicine from floor, & kept it on table.. he feel bad on his own behavior.. he knocked bedroom door..

Ram- Sharma darwaja khool..

Priya hear him, but she ignore him..

Ram- Sharma darwaja khool.. baat karni hai tujhse..

Priya still behave same..

Ram in mind- yeh pagal kuch kar na de aapne saath, if she cut her pulse.. then.. oh shit!!

Ram- Sharma plz open the door.. look.. I'm..

Priya quitely listen him..

Ram- look.. I'm so sorry.. plz open the door.. bukhar ki wajah se.. I shouted on you.. I'm so sorry.. plz bahar aa jaa.. dekh tu jaan mat de.. I'm saying sorry to you..

Priya disbelief on his words & she can't hear him anymore, she open the door, started glare to him..

Ram take a relief breath- thank to god, you open the door..

Priya- you're disgusting..

Ram- I know.. Mai yeh soch kar pareshan ho gaya tha.. kahi tu pulse cut naa kar de.. aisa agar tu karti, toh mere bedsheets aur bedroom kharab ho jaate.. agar tera aisa koi plan hai toh mujhe baata de.. I'll give you best knife for cut the pulse.. aur ek baat yaad rakhna, agar by chance, tune pulse cut kar di, toh aapna haath balcony se bahar nikal dena.. issye kya hoga, Mera bedroom tere khoon se kharab nahi hoga.. aur haan ek cut se kuch nahi hoga.. 4-5 cut laga dena aapne haath par.. agar issye bhi kuch nahi hua toh.. Mai hun.. I'll push you from balcony.. tab toh tu pakka Marr jaayegi..

Priya- Teri choti si baat ke liye Mai aapni jaan du.. maare mere dushman, aur unn dushman me tumhara naam sab se upar hai.. monster..

Ram mimic her..

Priya slapped him so hard on his arm..

Ram- you witch.. & he grabbed her hairs in his hands, & started pull..

Priya- you monster leave my hairs..

Ram- nahi chodunga.. & he tight his hands grips on hairs, pull so hard..

Priya wincing in pain, she grab something in her hand & hit on Ram's hand, Ram quickly leaves her hairs, he wincing in pain & now Priya's turn, she pull his hairs, she tight her grips on his hairs, Ram wincing in pain..

Priya- now you paining so hell.. teri naani naa yaad dilayi toh Mera naam bhi Priya Sharma nahi..

Ram- ok & he hold her both arms, tight in his hands, Priya leave his hairs & hold his shirt in her fist, Ram pinned her in wall..

Priya- leave my arms..

Ram- leave my shirt..

Priya- no first you leave..

Ram- dekh Mai bimar hun, tu chod pehle..

Priya- I'm girl, so you leave me first.. & they both came in hall..

Ram- ok, we both leave each other at a same time..

Priya- ok, one..

Ram- two..

Both together- three, they both leave each other, sit on sofa..

They both give irritated look to each other & started laughing..

Priya- after college, I fight with you like these..

Ram- iss fight me, woh wali baat nahi thi.. & he pick one slice of bread butter jam, take one bite..

Priya also pick one, take a bite- Matlab..

Ram- you didn't bite on my arm, issliye..

Priya- you are tasteless person.. toh kiu kaatu.. & I'm not that much hungry to bite you..

Ram look her- yeh Jo koi Rajat naam ka janwar hai, Jo teri jaisi zombie ko mila hai.. waise mila kaha..

Priya- kiu baatau tujhe..

Ram- acche se baat karu toh tujhe problem hai.. naa karu toh problem hai..

Priya- janwar.. zombie.. yeh acche se baat, aisi hoti hai acche se baat..

Ram- dekh aaj tak sidhe tarike se tujhse baat nahi ki hai.. kab ki bhi hogi toh mujhe yaad nahi.. iss liye jitna baat karta hun, wahi kafi hai..

Priya look him & asked- Krishna maa thi, tab tak tu bahot acche se baat karta tha.. woh jaane ke baad aisa kya hua, Jo tu itna baddl gaya..

Ram- uth yaha se.. uth.. with irritating tone..

Priya- what happened to you suddenly.. sometime ago you talk with me good & suddenly you.. you're just pathetic..

Ram- mujhe soona hai..

Priya- dawai lekar Soo jaa, jaada hero mat bann, & she went in kitchen, clean the plate.. kept in dish drawer.. & she open another drawer for kept spoon in that, a one trash paper she found out in that.. she pick up, open, a little messy but she can read that, someone's handwriting.. she look Ram's to-do-list handwriting, same handwriting on that paper..

Priya read Ram's trash to-do-list..

1 maa's treatment..

2 job in top MNC..

3 one small house like, 3 BHK..

4 my love..

5 marry with my love..

6 a long road trip with my family...

7 bike- Royal Enfield & long bike ride with my love at leh ladakh..

Priya in mind- yeh hai real to-do-list, kiu behave kar raha hai aisa.. Jo nahi hai waisa dikha raha hai khud ko.. aisa kya hua hai, Jo Ram itna baddl gaya hai.. we fight in college days, but after Krishna maa's death, he change a lot.. why he change.. aur yeh change sirf meri taraf hai.. aisa kya kiya hai maine.. kuch puchne jaati hun toh, he started barking.. Priya tu bhi kuch kum nahi hai.. you also react same with him.. jaane de.. waise bhi Rajat ke saath ek saal baad jaana hai tujhe.. 9 months remain.. & she again kept that paper in drawer, came out from kitchen, went near sofa, look Ram in deep sleep & she look one thank you note stick on table, she smile & went in room..

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Ohh wow another superb update... childish fight but loved it hilarious.

This us one of the best story hilarious serious drama emotional... all together

Update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#18
Part 4
College friends but still met as stranger.
Priya did wrong by running away but it was not solution of the problem to escape from marriage.
Ram for time being behaving nice but still have so much anger for his new flatmate.

Part 5
Neha Vikram conversation with Ram gave pain to Priya but still she is willing to wait for Rajat but don't know he exist or not but RaYa are cute whenever they fight

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