SS: I Belong to You updated on pg:22 - Page 23

Originally posted by: MyLuvRaShi

Now, I've read all the parts,😆
AWESOME !!! I love it! All 5 parts are beautifully written! I could picture all of this so perfectly in my mind!
Beautiful work as always
If possible do continue
Thanks for the Pms

Originally posted by: humeraansari

Hahahaha Arry twitter pe patar patar Karna Kia mushkil hai 😛
Sare to fazool bakwas pagalpan karty hain hain wahn pe 😆

Originally posted by: LuvSSever

I am always eager and waiting to read your new story whether it has tht clan or not..:)

And i am sure if you plan to write a story with that clan then it has to be sensible.. :)

Originally posted by: bpatil3

Apnoan k liye time banana padta hai 😉
We females are tough to understand And difficult to read .yes we are what we are and we can not understand what we want and why we are like this 😆 poora confusion ki bhandar and research ki topic hai hum 😆 jispe thesis to bahut likhe hai but abhi tak koi appropriate hal nhi Mila lol.
Haan hum kisi ko bhi bina reason v dislike others especially our own species type rofl. Kamiyan n nakhre dhoondte hai lol godd

Originally posted by: leena04

last part...
awww I know I m sorry I know I m very late to comment but was really busy so here we go for it...
so all plan is set for confession but dame this Ram's nervousness is spoiling everything so finally he divided to take her home I hope now her dream of Isha will finally break & it happens the same way too loved the way her conversations with house workers awww it was too cute & so as Aran so he asked her to stay that night in his home she agreed n waiting for his confession but our Golu Ram is too cute... I do so so enjoyed this one... so they decided to go on Mumbai Darshan perfect plan to propose from Ram hope he able to do this time... & yes he did it he confesses his love which she accepted lovingly awesome too good but I wish you at least penned down trio's conversation it would have been fun plz try to put down if u cannn... it's a humble request...

Originally posted by: lovelysakshi

Hii Naseem

Finally got time to read ur SS

before that yeh kehna chahti hoon ki seedhe seedhe bolo na Rajat ko use karna chahti ho jaise mein use karti hoon...kyun copywrite ka issue bana rahi ho.

Meine bhi notice kiya hai tumne bhi achhe se apne stories mein Rajat ko use kiya hai...chotta role hi sahi lekin kiya zaroor hai...issliye dont point ur finger on others😉

Please iss par apna view matt dena...isse na meri soch badlegi na tumhari😛

Reading...

Originally posted by: lovelysakshi

Part 1

Good start.

After 10 long years she came back to Mumbai for the business purpose and that too with Ram.

chalo Ram bhi Priya se pyar karta hai toh uss din kya hua hoga jab Esha ne propose kiya tha...pata chal jaayega.

Reading next part😉