SS: I Belong to You updated on pg:22 - Page 13

Originally posted by: LuvSSever

Yaar naseem,

This is not fair dear...

You gave a curious sweet preview but with a bitter note that update will be late...

This is not done..grr...😆

Ok chalo..understood...under sakshi effect ,so its ok...update asap on your convenience. :)

Originally posted by: bpatil3

I loved reading the last update ,bahot badi transformation hui hai Naseem me as a writer . You made the readers glued to the character very promptly .Genuinely I loved priya's discomfort ,duvidha Khud se dar yet loving being cared by Ram ,craving for his attention agle pal apne pagal pan ko reality k saath tol mol k dekhna then Ram ka teasing and flirting jhukav and Priya ko Kisi bhi tarah kheenchna ,apne baatome uljhana,apni zid manwana,har choti badi cheez ka care Karna is something Priya cannot deny and close her heart annkhein to chodo.

uff Esha chalo acchi baat hai koi Hona zaroori hai Raya k beech lol tabhi toh beqrari badhegi . u wrote this longingness so well in this Ff ,applause .

Good night ,Happy new year a thank you .

Originally posted by: leena04

yaar this is not fair Naseem giving such an exciting promo you seriously can't fmdelay the update for sure plz yaar try to update soon n I guess in 2 to 3 parts story is abt to end hope it don't but let's wait & watch...

Originally posted by: peeyara

thanks leena

i will update this week possibly😊

awesome will be waiting for that for sure gonna love it hope to get update soon...

Originally posted by: peeyara

everything is fair :P

what curiosity does it have? i thot it gave preview of story n the next sequences 😆

this week pakka update

Originally posted by: LuvSSever

Yes it gave preview and next sequence of story...

I was curious about the next sequence..

If its your story and about Raya, i am always eager to know whats next and how that is written or happens in story..

I was curious to know raya's reactions, priya's reaction on knowing ram is single and ready to mingle😆

Ok this week pakka update...yayyy..i am waiting :)

Originally posted by: peeyara

@bold: I am on seventh sky😆

i read ur comment thrice😳😆and it did made my day

Esha nhi hai but phir bhi hai😆does this make sense?

Haan Esha nhi hoke fir bhi hai just like Rajjo lol
Sach me Raya ki longingness and attraction me Mujhe actually balh k scenes yaad aagye also those beautiful eye lock and unkahi beqrari.
U hv to be I felt it is this update u wrote something diff from ur previous once. my view.keep it up

Originally posted by: peeyara

ahaan how it is written does matters😆

not badly written..okayishly written 😆

Originally posted by: bpatil3

Haan Esha nhi hoke fir bhi hai just like Rajjo lol
Sach me Raya ki longingness and attraction me Mujhe actually balh k scenes yaad aagye also those beautiful eye lock and unkahi beqrari.
U hv to be I felt it is this update u wrote something diff from ur previous once. my view.keep it up

Originally posted by: LuvSSever

You have written very well dear not okayish..

Thats why the curiosity is more to read on raya and fall in rayaland..lol