SS: I Belong to You updated on pg:22 - Page 15

Originally posted by: LuvSSever

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Dear, Wanted to comment immediately after reading..but was addicted to the way this part written like to raya, That i have read it many times dear...😳😆

Just loved it...loved it to core..be it Raya scenes or the ram and his gang's conference call talk...

It was written very nicely that i could picturize each scene and travel along with them..

Will comeback to raya, little later..still drooling about them 😳😆and that has to be in detail..

Now about the second part...conference call of ram gang...

Had to accept, you are hell good at writing funny banters,funny conversations and maza bhara talks..

Enjoyed to the fullest reading their gang talk... neha is neha always..lol..

She being right at judging..was telling ram from college days, priya loved him..yes neha proves right though her ways and talks are weird and funny...kash ram listened to her..10 yrs wuldnt wasted..lol

But then how we will get to see this longingness , hidden love overflowing ,teasing,romantic encounters between Raya...

These three didnt left a chance for Ram to say his story..

Imagine priya joining them...uff.lol...poor ram..

So finally ram decided to propose, good.. awaiting it..

Then shruthi teasing ram with ashwin in pic, neha joining, then ram pulling vik in, their final banter all good..

Vik was correct..once started, the chat between friends will not end soon.. lol

Ram put vik in trouble, then bid goodbye and went to sleep with a sweet content ..lol

Then now coming to Raya..

What could i say😳

That statement Eye contacts are way more intimate than words or actions will ever be.

So true ,especially in case of Raya... reminding of RaShi, they rocks it each time,being king and queen of it...

I could visualize the scenes, reminiscing Raya...

Ram is smart haan..Ram took the root of jealousy to test priya's feeling for him..and he did succeed😆..could imagine priya's reactions to it and actions of hers..

Then the game , priya writing ram's name and we know ram wuld write priya's and we are in for their dance treat...

He asking her ,comfortable?? And her thought "How can I be comfortable when so close to you",

I loved that... i culd travel along with their thoughts and emotions..written well..

Then his usual tease that makes her go red snd blush..

He asking her on whats certain ways, she avoiding ques..

Then his touch,closeness, caressing, again she trying to hold back,but enjoying it..

Then their epic eye contacts..

Party was enjoyable not to them alone,we enjoyed too..

Then the wayback in car, their convo, priya couldnt reveal reason, felt bad sensing his disappointment, then he smiled to assure her fine...i think its these little gestures of ram tht mk her comfortable is what made her fall in love with him..

Then both couldnt sleep, thts obvious after such instances and if we have seen it in tv, even we wuldnt hv had slept ,kept on drooling on them..😆

Good one naseem...enjoyed thoroughly reading it.👏⭐️

Thanks for the pm..

Awaiting next update, to see their confession and end.. :)

Wanted to read more of it...knowing next part wuld be last..little sad.. 😆

Originally posted by: peeyara

@blue: wow is it? Feeling proud of myself😳😆

writing funny convo is baayein haath ka khel for me 😆 it comes naturally to me and it dont take much tym or thinking but to write first half like parts, i need to think a lot 😆

have to frame, re frame n again re frame to satisfy myself...its bit difficult and isse bhi zyaada difficult is to write confession

i love eye contacts😳 and if rashi are having eye lock so may emotions flow...i love this kind of romance where your eyes do the work n no words or actions are required to convey

Originally posted by: LuvSSever

Yes dear..its true.. i was in rayaland for sure reading yours and a great stressbuster reading second part of yours..you shuld feel great for writing this entire story this way..

Well written that we connected to their emotions remotely we read..its simple,short and sweet...

Yes i know,writing funny ones are your arena, and you excel there ...i still remember your CID writeup on raya and that was my most fav on your funny writeups..it had me in splits for hours..

Writing romance is difficult, ok could understand but your final output was too good..

And i wish to read same like on confession too...

Dont start on Rashi's eye contacts dear..they were😳... ufff..we forget ourselves merging in that..

They speak and convey a lot through their eyes.. really how they do it ..dont know and thats what you call excellence is... par excellence actors...

I love that kind too... :)

Originally posted by: iluvusakshi

loved it loved it loved it.
naseem di...its superb
aap kitna achha likhte ho. ye dil maange more.
coming back to the update... its totally hilarious to read nevik ram n shruti talk. yaar u write so beautifully.
I liked each n very scene. mast. jhakkass. ek number.
waiting for next.

Originally posted by: mitrajayeeta23

Cutie update kash aisa ek series hota raya ke..

Originally posted by: Sakshiashu

Nice and cute update.
Naughty Ram and jealous Priya.
Waiting for Ram's proposal.
Thanks for pm and continue soon.