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Sanjukta

@BALHLOVER

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Posted: 8 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: leena04

part 2
thank God u changed their name ab title bhi de do "opposite attracts" aewwwewewe Ram is so sad he loved his wife but she left him without any reason but happy Priya is there to handle him so in first meet only both have might be fall for each other interesting... you r writing really small part yaar plz write little bit more so Priya is at Ram's home waiting for next part do update it soon...

all r asking for RAYA

and I can imagine so well aftr keeping the name RAYA

will try to give long update from the next time pakka

Thank u dear

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leena

@leena04

Sparkler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: BALHLOVER

all r asking for RAYA
and I can imagine so well aftr keeping the name RAYA
will try to give long update from the next time pakka

Thank u dear

awww too good yaar now i also can imagine easily... n also plZ keep name to this story n plz make it SS or FF then OS

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krunalidivecha

@krunalidivecha

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#43

Finally done

As usual awesomeness overloaded

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SakshiAddict

@SakshiAddict

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#44

Part 1

Intro is so good,u know it takes time to get those names registered as Ram Priya is so much etched in our hearts

But I know in new show their names will be changed

I loved it totally

It was an elegant writing

Will read the next part 😊

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SakshiAddict

@SakshiAddict

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#45

Part 2

Raya sounds so sweet always and it's easy to imagine

Finally their first meet was so sensible,waiting how it will be in show but u really did a sensible work

God Ram in such a pain. Not to worry priya is there to support him

Seems like he is attracted to her more already

It was a neat and beautiful writing,but it was a short update

Need a lengthy one next time,so update it soon

Will be Waiting eagerly

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peeyara

@peeyara

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#46

Thanks for PM Sanju

hahaha u changed it to RaYa 😆

Ram loved someone hopelessly and got ditched by her and have turned alcoholic

Priya visited his place for dinner as she don't want to leave him alone on his mrg anniversary

waiting to see how they will end up together

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RisingDynamite

@RisingDynamite

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#47

Sorry for being late to comment.

This was really really good chapter 😃 loved the meeting and conversation between Raya, oh and yes thank you for changing their names as we hopeless people have become habitual of calling them Raya so it is quite convenient for us.

Ram has flirty nature 😉 okay nice nice.

Looking forward to more of their conversations and flirt 😆😃

Thank you so much for pm.

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aanchal

@LovingRaYa

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#48

Part 1

Very different concept of story compare to previous one you wrote. A man with depression issue contacted a Doctor whoc can help him to recover back. But on their first meeting their is spark can be seen beyweee Raj and Nisha.

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aanchal

@LovingRaYa

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#49

Ram is such a poor soul betrayed by his wife only for money and Priya as his doctor will surely help him to move him on but with all this their is hope for them to fall in love and why Ram is calling her by her name and not Priya. Thank u for the pm dear and sorry for late reply.

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Malati

@bpatil3

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#50

HI Sanju ,
I know I m very late ,but kya hua its better to be late rather being a silent reader right 😛 😉 I appreciate myself 😆 ,tumse to daant hi milnewali hai late hone k Karan.
Btw,tymhara hero Meri heroine ko Kitna flirt Karta hai uyeee maa 😆
Hamari heroine bhi kam nhi hai ok 😉 dekh Lena aage kya karegi 😛
I loved it so much flirty ram ,sensible Priya caught up with many times his flirtatious nakhre, omg it's hilarious sometimes too good 😆 awesome convo between the two

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