NEW os on NEW TOPIC RASHI 2nd part page 4

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iluvusakshi

@iluvusakshi

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 8 years ago

#31

sanju di...itna chotusa update kyu??? next wala update bada chahiye...
loved rayas convo. waiting for next.
jaldi Karo.

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bishop22

@bishop22

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#32

thanks for the pm.

Building up nicely.. Please continue soon

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reshak

@reshak

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Both parts read in one go beautifully written..
i think ram is falling for priya.. let c waiting for next update..

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leena

@leena04

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#34

part 2
thank God u changed their name ab title bhi de do "opposite attracts" aewwwewewe Ram is so sad he loved his wife but she left him without any reason but happy Priya is there to handle him so in first meet only both have might be fall for each other interesting... you r writing really small part yaar plz write little bit more so Priya is at Ram's home waiting for next part do update it soon...

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Sanjukta

@BALHLOVER

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: LuvSSever
Sanju dear,
Nice update again..slowly the story building up.so this is the next meet of Raya.
It seems both Raya slightly smitten with their first meet... :)

So now the next meet,i thought a dinner but it turns with a vulnerable Ram and priya to help him..
Lets see hw this goes...

Ram's pain is understandable...even though his wife cheated on him and used him, for him the feeling was pure..so dard will be there..

Waiting to see hw priya helps him to overcome.

Ek problem is..update was short..😆
But its ok,can understand u r busy...

Continue on ur convenience...

Just now saw, i am the first to comment,.😃😆

Thank u dear for ur lovely comments

only Love and pure love can heal the pain.hope Priya will.

and about Ram ,and his feeling..pic abhi baki hai mere dost

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Sanjukta

@BALHLOVER

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Rayaland
Superbdi loved it n thanks for keeping it Raya n now waiting for next part n here priya has fallen in love with ram wow now pls update soon

I had to.as all of u were asking only RAYA

but true confession.it became easy for me to imagine

Thank u dear

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Sanjukta

@BALHLOVER

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: iluvusakshi
sanju di...itna chotusa update kyu??? next wala update bada chahiye...
loved rayas convo. waiting for next.
jaldi Karo.

time nehi mil rahi hai yaar

but sure next time will try to update some more

Thank u