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Posted: 8 years ago
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hay how could I be late so sad but never mind see se aaye durust aaye... lol aww story is starting on good mood make is SS then OS n ya o e more suggestion plz change Nisha name I liked Raj but plz no Nisha something else plz... but over all u brought Vik too as Rajeev not bad u liked the change in story... awesome will surly gonna live it for sure so waiting for next do post soon...

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi Sanju..:)

So this was the new Os you mentioned that day you were writing.. :)
Nice one dear on the new topic of RaShi.
Too good, loved it...and waiting eagerly to read next part.

Dear u change or not change, the story was registered in raya names only in my mind😳😆
Having read so many stories on them, mindly fastly connect the centre characters to them only.

Good start...good intro of male lead as well as female lead. And seeing a nokjhok starting now itself between them.

Written nicely, awaiting next update and
i too dont mind along with namru, this Os being turned to a SS😆



Edited by LuvSSever - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: Kiruthikaaaru

Yar good story but RAYA this is what missing pls...add that

thank u dear

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: peeyara

Hey Sanju

its nicely written, loved it
bas ek naam ki hi problem hai 😆 we are so addicted to BALH k ram, priya, vikram, neha hi insatnt connect karte hai 😆
but never mind, new concept new names 😳
continue soon and thanks for PM


thank u dear..
RAYA so popular

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: leena04




hay how could I be late so sad but never mind see se aaye durust aaye... lol aww story is starting on good mood make is SS then OS n ya o e more suggestion plz change Nisha name I liked Raj but plz no Nisha something else plz... but over all u brought Vik too as Rajeev not bad u liked the change in story... awesome will surly gonna live it for sure so waiting for next do post soon...



he he u became so busy I guess.

today will post the next

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: LuvSSever

Hi Sanju..:)


So this was the new Os you mentioned that day you were writing.. :)
Nice one dear on the new topic of RaShi.
Too good, loved it...and waiting eagerly to read next part.

Dear u change or not change, the story was registered in raya names only in my mind😳😆
Having read so many stories on them, mindly fastly connect the centre characters to them only.

Good start...good intro of male lead as well as female lead. And seeing a nokjhok starting now itself between them.

Written nicely, awaiting next update and
i too dont mind along with namru, this Os being turned to a SS😆



yes dear , was talking about this one..
ha ha no time for os but u want ss.but I thik i have to do this only
ha ha still RAYA effects in my mind still nok jhok..
thank u dear..hope today I can update the next
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: bishop22

Quite interesting...

Looking forward to the next update
Please continue soon


thank u dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
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On reader's request the names are RAM and Priya ..and if names are same then surnames are same too.

R u helping me or taunting. He asked...

Sorry if I hurt u .I did not mean...

No no its ok, actually .this is my problem, not able to hold back my temper..

Hmm, can understand...so where u met with ur wife?

Ram is not at all comfortable, but the truth is nothing should be hidden from Doctor or Lawyer.

Its long back story Mam.

Excuses me, Sorry for interruption, but keep this Priya.dont be so formal with me..

Thank u. Where I was, I met with her in a shooting place,that time I was struggling actor.and She was famous. For her popularity,I used to away from her.but she had, sorry has some magic that ,everytime caught my attention towards her.and every time i found she was also staring at me. Things were going like this way.and our relationship also transforming from co actor to Friends, close friend.and in few months it took the shape of lover. Our relation became talk of the town then.and within two six months we tied in the most sacred knot. though I heard a lot about her , means about her character that every time She is behind money only.and in every now and then change boy friend, but I never paid attention to that.as she loved me better say she played with my emotion when my account balance was Zero. But I failed to understand that it was a big drama just to clear her reputation in everyone's eyes.and I trapped in this .and within one year all changed..

Priya heard his story with patience. ONE year still not?

Hmm .after 2 days, is our anniversary..

Ok.only one thing Mr.Kapoor can say u have to help yourself until and unless no one can.

Sorry.I did not get that.

What I mean to that U have to forget everything regarding her.at least U have to try.

Forget her...Ram uttered

Humse pucho kya hota hai pal pal bitana,
Bahut mushkil hota hai dil ko samjana,
Yaar zindagi toh beet jayegi,

Priya looked at him for few seconds


Bus mushkil hota hai kuch logo ko bhul pana. Har sagar ke do kinare hote hai,
Kuch log jaan se bhi pyare hote hai,
Ye zaruri nahi ke har koi pass ho,
Kyunki zindagi mein yaadoo.. Ke bhi sahare hote hai.

Move on Mr.Kapoor.

2 days passed, still Priya is thinking about her new case, its high profile case.case is not high profile but the person is.and she cant deny his effect on her.his charm is magical that any lady falls for the man .special for Priya as she experienced the hidden pain behind the expressive eyes.behind the million dollar smile.some grieves are there which has no words to express.

Priya thinks for a while .and yes today is his anniversary. First.today she wants to be him.just to console him.as a doctor she should.and if she considers him her friend, then also.

She dials his no.and rings ...

Hello.Miss Sharma

U fit my no.

Ya I fit u in my heart.

No flirting with me.

Flirting ???? I said what is truth mam.

Ok ok. Happy to hear ur happy voice..

Yup.

this time Ram sounds a lil different as he could understand why she called and why said so.

Actually today I called u for self invitation. Can u join me in dinner at my place?

No .I mean Sorry Priya. Today I want to be at my place..the charm of his voice gone now. Sounding so low.

Hmm ok .

No Priya if u really want dinner date.I am happy to accompany with u,why don't u come at my place.

No Mr.Kapoor.just two days back we met.and most imp ur field and situation are so diff ,if I go in this moment,there will be lots of fuse about this.

U don't need to worry.I will tackle all.and really I will be happy if u accompany me tonight for the dinner.

Hmm , ok let mr think.

Really I mean it Priya.

They disconnects the line.

At around 7.Priya reached at his mansion. Not so big. but so unique in its design.

Priya entered, everything was arranged by Ram that she did not face any trouble while entering.

She was waiting at dinning hall. When one person came and informed that Ram is at his own room.and she can visit there, also the person guides her to the room

Priya knocked at room few times but no response,at last she entered without permission, but the site in front of her was vulnerable.

Ram was at his chair but blabbering something. not in good shape..catching one photo frame.and so many wine bottles ar scattered here and there .Easily Priya can understand that this photo frame of his marriage still he is in love with his wife.true love.

Mr.Kapoor.Priya called ,but no reponse. She stirred him a lil..

Yes yes..who is this..looking at the site Ram asked.

Oh Priya the hottest doc I have ever met and smiled a bit.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sanju dear,
Nice update again..slowly the story building up.so this is the next meet of Raya.
It seems both Raya slightly smitten with their first meet... :)

So now the next meet,i thought a dinner but it turns with a vulnerable Ram and priya to help him..
Lets see hw this goes...

Ram's pain is understandable...even though his wife cheated on him and used him, for him the feeling was pure..so dard will be there..

Waiting to see hw priya helps him to overcome.

Ek problem is..update was short..😆
But its ok,can understand u r busy...

Continue on ur convenience...

Just now saw, i am the first to comment,.😃😆
Edited by LuvSSever - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superbdi loved it n thanks for keeping it Raya n now waiting for next part n here priya has fallen in love with ram wow now pls update soon

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