Hi dear..
I have finished reading your FF 'Ajab Prem ki Gazab Kahani '
As commented before, the initial parts, their intro scene, their nokjhoks,
Ms.attitude,Mr.driver were all too good... both are ought to be one finally and Raya are always destined to be together, so this time thru neha..
Only Raya can tolerate each other and love each other for a life time..
Neha and vik are superb too..its only neha who culd do such things and come up with such ideas ...
Sudhur and shipra become neha's parents here and shiney her mamaji..😆
Fine, they are good too with their interrogation and concern for Raya.
Priya bonding with them and slow bonding with ram also very good..
Initial parts were funny,entertaining and good feel at heart too..u write nice convos...
And raya scenario as reel hubby wife also nice..the situation they put into and tackling nice..pinky😆
Natasha introduced and she with neha trying to find whts cooking between raya, and raya finally realizing their love for each other, their confession game and finally their confession all cute and good...
All going fine, priya thought on informing neha parents was also correct, though her attempts failed with her friends and ram,finally she made sudhir only accept ...
But what ram told her😲 , it was quite insensitive... he shuldnt hv..
But for that, this much gap...
What have u done naseem dear😲, dho saal leap lei liya... u followed ekta route,surpassed her😲😆
I was thinking, this Misunderstanding lead to 2 yrs leap, then like ram, i too thought, naseem wuld be giving some genuine reasons for tht leap...😆
So let me wait till the reasons are out..😆
Ok about leap,
Peehu was so cute..loved her to core, she resembled priya fir ram, had to, was broughtup by priya na..
Oh for godsake, sid and ayesha r good here😆, accept karne mei thoda mushkil laga😆 ..but fine...
Loved Ram peehu and priya peehu scenes a lot, they r lovely..
Instead of talking, again games between them started..priya was ready to talk, but ram not available and started with his game by looking for a girl thru priya, priya's confusions and finally she teasing ram thru her actions are also nice...
Shopping scenes of raya as a family, ram peehu shopping for priya, all scenes of threesome were nice..
After two years , marriage reception.. only neha could come up with something like this..😆
Ram tried to use this func to mk priya admit...
Priya wanted to wear ram's gifted one 😳, nice..
Ram tried to mk priya admit by using natasha help, priya admitted but knew the plan, and she inturn made ram panic and admit... isme jeeta kyun.. 😕😆
Who won, i am😕..but 'we won' sounded good ..though priya wanted it otherwise😆
Then perhu's star counting and she made all three took part ,cute...
Then finally raya had their private talk time at priya's home, kya hua,kaise hua,reasons for two years separation, has u given in ur prologue enquired and explained😆, so they talked and sort out wht happened..
I too as u said , ok emphasised on they enquired and explained but not on reasons.. 😳
Its Raya, so jo bhi u show chalega.. i am fine until they makeup genuinely...
But if we look for logic in reasons, then slightly problem hai on accepting it...she tried his phone, then not reachable, his employee didnt releave details but priya ke pass , neha vik,sudhir,shipra,nutz ka phone number bhi hongi na, she culd hv tried others to contact ram... and ram broke phone, so number changed, he culd hv got new sim on same number only na,even though sim is lost..option is there..
And he is such a high profile person, for him getting same number wuldnt been a problem..
But saying tht, anyways let it be, u made it up for those reasons by giving good cute priya peehu, ram peehu and their family scenes and good convos and nokjhok between raya..
So i accept ur reasons for extending story, since the story after leap was good too, though reasons for leap was okayish..😆
So nutz tried for her revenge thru dadi...dadi remaining quite,mking ram tensed and then finally broking her silence and giving happy surprise for ram by announcing marriage was good..
Ram tking priya alone for a drive to mk her comfortable was nice..
And ram asking for promises and priya again tackled by putting forth her demanding promises..
Yeh raya bhi na kabhi nahi sudhrengey..
Ok finally there Marriage, peehu so happy with big family and Raya happy too...
I really enjoyed reading it... very good one naseem...
I gv a very lengthy reply i guess rather i expected😕😆
Hope you r kush😳
Edited by LuvSSever - 8 years ago
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