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umayal

@LuvSSever

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Posted: 8 years ago

#111

Hi..

Now I completed another one of sandhya's too..the story 'Raya -love and lost'.

Again its a nice one with different concept and good amount of suspense with priya's past to hold the grip on readers...

Like ekta's promos of her shows, i should say the character sketch and intro of sandhya's stories are so hooking too, to hold the readers on track.and eager to know whts next...

Here,wah,it started of with Raya divorce and whts with raya's past to go thru the divorce phase..then again shocked,priya hving two kids but still left ram, why..whtsup with tht...

Then the story traverse nicely with past events and then with present events, both going on smoothly,

Many parts were written beautifully...

Diff Raya's first encounter, how culd ram do tht, but he had his own reasons but for priya too she was right in blasting him at hospital, it was very delicate first meet,so awkward...then ram coming to know about priya's story, felt something tht he wanted to help her, so helped, then their meet happened again, slowly the equation between two of them too started changing, priya fell in love.Ram too started feeling for her but unknown of his feelings... but ram's step family step in to create problem between Raya but ended up in Raya milan..

Then priya attempted to kill herself,

But the major twist of her past revealed too to readers and vikram.. ..she is Mrs.Rajat kapur😲 ..ufff..

but raya marriage happened good..they were happy, two kids born,then after 7 saal leap, story move forward..

And now priya getting her memory bck, the turmoil for both raya to go thru tht phase with shipra hindrance and rajat in pic and his parents too... too hard for them,but only saving grace was, nadhini wasnt priya's beti, rajat loved ayesha, priya accepted marriage just for nandhini..

This hope finally paved way for raya's togetherness and ended on a happy note with Raya complete family..

I loved the way the scenes,parts are written, raya scenes written, the character sketch of raya, as usual VikNeha being the best buddies and helping Raya , nutz here had little part alone, she just helped babysitting..😆

And shipra, initially she was intolerable, but at last parts, exactly like serial wali shipra, those teasing of Raya, dialogues with sudhir, happy tht finally priya got a loving support frm shipra..

NeVik hamesha ki tarah , caring sweet buddies...and as always helping Raya and teasing them too..luved them ...

Rajat parents behaved irreasonable ...they shuld hv understood the situation, then abt Rajat ,wht to say...again a sweet lover,good hearted human, thnk god ,this time he was ayesha's😆...

Finally he pushed priya in a filmy way to Ram... chalo no problem ...

Highlights...

Priya's vulnerable state when she culdnt remember her past, she doesnt want to do operation,since whts the reason to live when u dont hv anyone as ur own, all those loneliness,vulnerable state written well..she feeling solace with ram's closeness and her love towards ram, so strong tht she dont want to know past only, after knowing, the tug of war her heart had between love for ram and her past responsibilities was nicely captured...

Then also Ram character, his past bitterness, love , caring lover cum hubby and the possesive hubby as he always is , everything was written well too...

Their misunderstandings and how miscommunication and ego most time spoils a relation, hw one can took advantage of tht,all explained well...

Then the Raya moments, happy, teasing, last saree one and the kiss,chai wala one all too good..

Hmm...Ram tests priya's patience, mk her anger, vulnerable, then finally manofy her with a kiss and hug..He definitely knows hw to convince his wife...

Overall, a nice story to read, beautifully written with needed twists and turns...

I too await to read her stories further..😳

And Naseem from u too..😳

Hope u remember,tht in viji's SS dhadkanein thread ,U promised for a story..😊

Edited by LuvSSever - 8 years ago

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peeyara

@peeyara

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Posted: 8 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: LuvSSever

S reading that saath saal baad, its seems sharan is way too emotional,but knowing tht u two are the writers for khayali pulao, and seeing ur emotional type of stories, its hard to believe both are same writers😆
But too good yaar..kept it up...👏

hamare liye bhi difficult hota tha to imagine we hv split personalty 🤣 Sharan ka ek aur story hai i guess 4-5 parts par uske baad she have not updated yet...i got tired reminding her again n again but madam is too occupied😆

And s sandhya's second story 'Raya - love and lost' also i started to read dear, it was also nice start, i mean diff, but yet to finish and once again she proved in tht also tht she writes a part tht hooks u to know whts in next... again good parts, the way story traverse between past and present...
Will come up with comments on tht too,once i finish...

But serial balh mei bhi Rajat was like tht only na, so sweet one sided genuine lover, there also its hard to digest and anywhere rajat name gives that effect😆
So i think she stayed to the character he was shown in serial...

Oh two cutie pie there in her home.❤️. so sweet.😳..oh thts why her convos of mother-daughter duo in her story are too cute too... and her cuties name are cute too...all 'S'😊

Bilkul tumhari tarha😲, naseem i doubt this 😆, u bahut innocent and masoom..😕😆.

My little one, cute hai but innocent nahi😆, tumhari tarha bht badmash hai..😆 ..i think so but if ur not badmash then sorry...😳
When we frnds hv a group chit chat or get together, after sometime, mine will do things such tht, my reaction wuld be
Jaise, in dangal trailer ,sakshi reactions were while telling geeta aur babbita ne ki..😆
Embarassing and shocked..😆

Ab toh she is sirf two and half yrs, her dad also bilkul ram ke tara, pampers her, i hv told him , when she grows up and in school if they call for parents and also in PTA, u wuld only go and answer like tht...😆

Me too wait to read her new story..she too writes well and with diff concepts...
And i know naseem dear, u r so innocent and masoom tht u guys pull her legs always😆
While reading the story, if ur comment is in first page below update, i hv read tht..😳

uff sabko doubt hota k mai masoom nhi hoon 😭 😆 mai sach mai bht masoom aur innocent hoon 😆

Sandy ki betiyan rocks 😳 parents should be indulging to certain age 😆 masti bacche nhi karenge toh parent karenge kya 😆 i hv 3 yr old nephew n he is live wire 🤣 uski energy toh pucho mat...i get tired playing but he keeps pushing me more 😆 some times I feel I should just drop him at Ranveer's house...dono ki energy kabbhi khatam nhi hogi 😆

ur husband is doing good job fathers are meant to spoil kid if mommy isn't doing so 😉

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peeyara

@peeyara

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#113

Maine medication ke effect mai bola tha k likhungi 😆 kidding :P

wen time comes, I will write :P

till then read one more story by Sandy and isme Rajat was villain 😆

Anjana Anjani

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umayal

@LuvSSever

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: peeyara

uff sabko doubt hota k mai masoom nhi hoon 😭 😆 mai sach mai bht masoom aur innocent hoon 😆
Sandy ki betiyan rocks 😳 parents should be indulging to certain age 😆 masti bacche nhi karenge toh parent karenge kya 😆 i hv 3 yr old nephew n he is live wire 🤣 uski energy toh pucho mat...i get tired playing but he keeps pushing me more 😆 some times I feel I should just drop him at Ranveer's house...dono ki energy kabbhi khatam nhi hogi 😆

ur husband is doing good job fathers are meant to spoil kid if mommy isn't doing so 😉

Ok baba, i believe you are bht masoom and innocent..dont cry..😆

May be sometimes ur split personality in forum or ur stories confuse us...😆

Haan, i accept masti bacche hi karenge..yes its fine to be mastikhor... its cute more times and i dont stop her too, but at times it becomes hard to handle..😆

Even she is not less than a livewire dear..😊

Who told her mumma isnt doing so.😳. i do spoil her at times.😆..

But compared to her pappa its much less.. yek tho honi chahihey na to keep her on track... and when her dad doesnt want to be in her bad books..grrr..then it as to be me na😆

Aur whether mumma pampers or not, dads always spoils and pampers theirs daughters, being one and having one i know it for sure...

Edited by LuvSSever - 8 years ago

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umayal

@LuvSSever

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: peeyara
Maine medication ke effect mai bola tha k likhungi 😆 kidding :P
wen time comes, I will write :P
till then read one more story by Sandy and isme Rajat was villain 😆

Anjana Anjani

Medication ke effect mei..??

U r on medication, wht happened dear..not feeling well?

Ya, i was just simply saying or asking you to write, bcoz i wuld be eager to read your stories always..

But S you write when u r ok with it and on your convenience..

And i hope that time comes soon..😳

Oh,s i saw the link for her stories in the previous story i read..

I will read tht and in tht Rajat villain.😲. then should read😆

Tk care dear..

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umayal

@LuvSSever

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#116

Hi dear...

Now i have come back again to post my comments on Sandhya's story 'Anjana Anjani' ...

I had completed it today noon..

Thats a nice story too...as always with the central characters written nicely and again a beautifully written story..

Ram as always the arrogant angry man but before his love,so caring, soft,cute lover boy,and a possesive one too..

Priya, the same humble,simple girl who weakens sometimes by circumstances..

VikNeha as always the cupid for raya , lovable friends forever...

Krishnaji as always the sweet saasuma..

Sudhir shipra too stays the same...they care for her daughter more...

Highlights are,

Again , a different tangent in relationship was taken into account...she always took a situation between couples thts quite different... the problems between the couples are more real than just a love story...

First be it surrogacy, or a accident cum memory loss one and now the baccha planning part...

She explains relationships and nuances in it very well in her writings...

Here the scenario of ram not wanting a kid while priya wants to be a mother, the phases they go thru due to this conflict of ideas, the internal mind thoughts and turmoil they go thru all are explained well...

And after kid scenario also explained well to the core... the phases newly turned parents go through...personal experience bhi kuch yesha hi hai...😆

Scenario and writing is as such ,that it tells you what is what...message reaches ur heart..

It was a fast pace story and finally ending with parents always care for their kids were so true too..

And coming Rajat to be seen as villain...

Dont know what to say, to read him as a out and out villain...culdnt imagine it too..

May be bcoz balh rajat and sameer's effect..😆

Bcoz whatever story read on Raya till today, knowingly or unknowingly always the people in balh are only imagined when scene is visualized...so rajat to be like this culdnt visualize..ashwin hota tho easy to imagine...

Rajat jho bhi character kare, its hard to digest😆

Overall a nice story to read..thanks nassem for making me read ur stories and ur friends stories..it made my time worth... so thnk u once again for allowing me to comment too in Ur thread too..overall 🤗

Edited by LuvSSever - 8 years ago

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umayal

@LuvSSever

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#117

Out of syallabus, i mean apart frm story, in the last story, 'anjana anjaani' raya went to goa after marriage, our last vacation on july, this year was to goa only...but since our vacation is on july, its off season there...total rain...

Rainy rainy everywhere, our kiddo enjoyed to the max... she was dancing all over in rain everytime we step outside and we were running behind her to save her from falling ill...😆

And since we both are not much of a roaming type...enjoyed goa inside resort 😳😆and with little outing only..

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peeyara

@peeyara

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Posted: 8 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: LuvSSever
Out of syallabus, i mean apart frm story, in the last story, 'anjana anjaani' raya went to goa after marriage, our last vacation on july, this year was to goa only...but since our vacation is on july, its off season there...total rain...
Rainy rainy everywhere, our kiddo enjoyed to the max... she was dancing all over in rain everytime we step outside and we were running behind her to save her from falling ill...😆
And since we both are not much of a roaming type...enjoyed goa inside resort 😳😆and with little outing only..

Sandy is Gaonisiliye Raya ko goa bula liye in story 😆

u dont like roaming 😲 i love exploring places either in enjoyable company or alone 😳 mostly alone 😆

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peeyara

@peeyara

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Posted: 8 years ago

#119

Okay now read my Guruji's story...he is one member of trimurti with me second one n VJ the thir one...u can call as gandhiji ke teen bandars too 🤣

he writes feelings the way he connect words uff

Pehli Barish

this is my fav...i love this os peli barish very much 😳 the way he have writeen is magic❤️

other works:

OS Pyar ke rang

OS Ehsaas(incomplete)

Dard ka Rishta

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umayal

@LuvSSever

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#120

Originally posted by: peeyara

Sandy is Gaonisiliye Raya ko goa bula liye in story 😆
u dont like roaming 😲 i love exploring places either in enjoyable company or alone 😳 mostly alone 😆

Oh she is a goan...okok..😊

Good place with nice food, first my perception was that goa is a holidaying place for bachelors😆...but it changed after visit..

That too since we visited during monsoon, the view of nature was spectacular...

Not like or dislike in case of roaming... i like to go out but he isnt so fond of roaming for a long time...

and with little kid, these days i too prefer to go with his idea of roaming less...😆

If all alone , may be i wuld prefer to explore😆