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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi Naseem dear..
Finally i got a chance to see ur creative side too other than regular posts...😃 i got the chance to read this Story of yours..
Seeing the celebrations thread only , i knew u write well...
But this part was even more lovely...😊

How i wish we wuld had seen such a track in balh...
U have handled the track of pihu obsession and sammy suhani pihu love angle well..
The solution u hv given is the right one for all three of them...
The way priya guided pihu thru this Decision was lovely...
They were many things left intermediate by cvs, this talk of priya pihu on priya's past was one such thing... priya's life herself was a good example for pihu to be on right path and let go of her obseesed one side luv...and i am thnkful tht u brought tht track in ur story...

This kind of family moments, raya as parent, pihu,pari ,myra we didnt get to see at all in balh...
I wish like u put, myra and pari too hv some role and shown being close to priya.

And as usual ur Raya scenes were 😳
I luved it... these kapoors na and mrs.kapoor bhi na, she is not less... handling them is tough for priya but priya is no less tough for Ram...

I liked ur numerous funny posts, but this
Finally a nice written one and i liked this emotional story of urs too...😆



Edited by LuvSSever - 8 years ago
LuvSSever thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
And Naseem,
Its you who hv told me in celeb thread to go thru FF , Os and Ss here in balh forum saying tht they were nice...
And thnks to u dear, i hv started reading some FF's here tht were in the begining pages and they were very nice too...
Really well written FF's and it seems it has been written long bck and updated at gaps and now...
And many loyal fans here waited all along it seems... after reading wht is available, now i am waiting too😳😆

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: MyLuvRaShi

Read all Parts..
Awesome SS
Wow..it's Wonderful...can't believe it's the last Part...
Beautifully written
Thanks for all Pms

thank you Prajakta 😳
waise kahan gayab hojate ho bar bar 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: jodude

Hey finally I'v completed reading.
Great ... very good stry
Serial ka sasupi track
But tumhara best hai 👏
Raya.. ⭐️
Thanks for pm

sacchi mera best hai 😆😳
i am good at emotional stuff 😆 😉 shayad 🤔
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: LovingRaYa

It's like remising old memories when RaYa were sharing their blisfull marriage life with little bit of nok jhok with ther four kids. But again Ram got chance to romance with Priya. It's good all is well that's end well and with so much sensibility Pihu showed made her parents proud on her.

thanks Aanchal...that scene was inspired from my family 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
@Leena:
thank you for the comments...you made seperate comments for each part 🤗 thanks a ton
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: BALHLOVER

aagayi meri comments lekar..

yaad bhi nehi hai comments kar chuki hu ya nehi
and this time i am really super late
sorry darling
Waise one week abhi tak nehi huyi hai 😆

superb ss.. kash balh me bhi aisa hota ..
matured Peehu the way she handled Shammy it was superb.. exactly like Priya
And Ram Golu..
But raya moment kyu nehi diye .. ittusa to de dete na 😭

Thank u for ur pm

chalta hai writer khud late hai toh reader too can pay back 😉 😆
kaunsi one week 😕 😆
kya likhti Raya ke liye 😆 romance is not my cup of tea 🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: LuvSSever

Hi Naseem dear..

Finally i got a chance to see ur creative side too other than regular posts...😃 i got the chance to read this Story of yours..
Seeing the celebrations thread only , i knew u write well...
But this part was even more lovely...😊

How i wish we wuld had seen such a track in balh...
U have handled the track of pihu obsession and sammy suhani pihu love angle well..
The solution u hv given is the right one for all three of them...
The way priya guided pihu thru this Decision was lovely...
They were many things left intermediate by cvs, this talk of priya pihu on priya's past was one such thing... priya's life herself was a good example for pihu to be on right path and let go of her obseesed one side luv...and i am thnkful tht u brought tht track in ur story...

This kind of family moments, raya as parent, pihu,pari ,myra we didnt get to see at all in balh...
I wish like u put, myra and pari too hv some role and shown being close to priya.

And as usual ur Raya scenes were 😳
I luved it... these kapoors na and mrs.kapoor bhi na, she is not less... handling them is tough for priya but priya is no less tough for Ram...

I liked ur numerous funny posts, but this
Finally a nice written one and i liked this emotional story of urs too...😆



thanks Uma 😳
had u not read mai zabardasti padhane wali thi aapko 😆
yeh mere sensible side forum pe sab ne pehli bar hi dekha hai 🤣 i hv always wrote romcom types of stories yeh pehli bar kuch sensible likha and I am glad k i hv handled it well and done justice else mai khud apni story ki band bajati hoon mostly 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: LuvSSever

And Naseem,

Its you who hv told me in celeb thread to go thru FF , Os and Ss here in balh forum saying tht they were nice...
And thnks to u dear, i hv started reading some FF's here tht were in the begining pages and they were very nice too...
Really well written FF's and it seems it has been written long bck and updated at gaps and now...
And many loyal fans here waited all along it seems... after reading wht is available, now i am waiting too😳😆

hmm forum pe there are many wonderful writers and they express too well😳
keep reading
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: peeyara

thanks Uma 😳
had u not read mai zabardasti padhane wali thi aapko 😆
yeh mere sensible side forum pe sab ne pehli bar hi dekha hai 🤣 i hv always wrote romcom types of stories yeh pehli bar kuch sensible likha and I am glad k i hv handled it well and done justice else mai khud apni story ki band bajati hoon mostly 😆


Oh hw culd i miss urs and even i miss, if u made me read by insisting or forced😆, then pleasure will always be mine...😊

Haan, these kind of lines, this sounds like u totally..😆
Oh u hv written other stories too... i hv to check now...


S this forum has many wonderful writers naseem who express well including u😊...
me personally love emotional romantic ones... and also those that hv a entirely diff plot with emotional elements...
I am reading such stories here and enjoying...
And since the character names are Ram and priya,its Raya everywhere,i culd always imagine them such and the imagined scenes so tht bcome even more beautiful.😳...
They add a extra beauty to the story i read...



Edited by LuvSSever - 8 years ago

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