RAYA NEW SS : Dilwale 'PART 1' 03/01/16

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Posted: 9 years ago
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His name is Ram and i love him...


Her name is Priya and i love her

Agar Sach me pyar karti ho Mere Ram Se to Apnao Use...(if you really love My Ram then Accept him...)
I always love Ram and ll will Love him only...
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I know you never leave meI know i kn...i k...Love You
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.READ HERE FULL PART

PROLOGUE

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Posted: 9 years ago
#2
Interesting!!!
Love it😊
Continue soon!
And thanks 4 pm!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#3
Very confusing start..
If they love each other. Why Ram is scolding Priya..
Please continue soon..
Thanks for PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
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ye ram hamesha RB mode me kyu hota hai??
but it us a nice start.
thanks for pm.
pl continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice start of story
eagerly waiting for next update
thanks for pm
continue soon
plzzz jaldi update krna
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Seems the work of Ram distance him from his love Priya. Thank u for the pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb prologue!!!!!
Thanks for pm and continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ok
.. that was confusingly interesting but a short prologue...

Are they together or not? They love each other or not? Who is calling whom as Jaan? Starting msi who is asking whom to aapnoa Ram?

Lol

Many questions .. looking frwrd fr updates. .. long pls
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Posted: 9 years ago
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very interesting.
Thnxs 4 pm.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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"Ohh God "

She slips and falls on ground

"Are you blind ????" Ram too falls on ground when he collides with Priya...both falls on ground...

He gets up from ground and dusting his hands and clothes without looking at her he says to priya " Andhi ho kya Dekh ke chala karo, mere Sab kapde kharab kar diya Mujhe ab ese Class attend Karni padegi "

(Are you blind please see and walk you have screwed my clothes Now i have to attend class like this )

Still on ground She hesitantly replies him " Haa Andhi hoon aur mujhe maaf kar dena meri wajah se Apke Kapde Kharab ho gaye " ( yes i am blind and i am sorry because of me your clothes screwed )

Ram with open mouth looks at her Still on ground she is searching Something his eyes falls on the Stick behind her...ohh God She is actually BLIND and what fool i am...he walks to her to help her but before he reaches She somehow find her stick and gets up on her feet her face still behind her hair...She is struggling with them tugging them (her face still invisible to Ram because of hair )

Cold wind strikes her face her hairs blow in Air She turns her face in other direction

Ram looks at her with open mouth A divine beauty with with her dark black hair that looked like night's sky her innocent face showing the lil disappointment her White lagging and Blue Kurti fitted to her perfect with White stall around her neck flowing in Air with her hairs how can God be so cruel He gave an angelic face to this woman but she dont have eyes to see own beauty he thinks

khuda ne jab tujhe banaya hoga,
to ek nasha sa chaya hoga,
jannat mein tujhe dalne se pehle,
mera khayal to aaya hoga

he thinks and in his thoughts he automatically find himself in front of her saying "may i " and next he finds himself tugging her hairs behind her eyes and her reply "thanks"

Next he finds himself apologising on his behaviour...She is saying "its ok"

Next he is escorting her upto library...

"Library" "But you" He blurts and bite his tongue

There is language invented Called "Brail" She replies innocently

"Ohh Yes And i am sorry Again" he says

"No its okay no need to apologies Its not your fault " She says he feels sadness in her voice

"it is actually i have ruined your mood what can i do for you " he says and before She reply He adds " Please don't say No at least this will reduce my guilt please "

"okay ...hmmm Today is Auto strike So can you please Drop me near Zaveri Bazar ???? She replies

"Anytime Ma'am" he replies back

and both laughs

They reach Library

Here we are at the Library He says And She bid bye to him...okay will meet you here after 1 hour says he turns and walk ...suddenly he turns and calls her

READ HERE FULL

PART 1

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