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DiehardRaYafan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Ramsakshi
This was amazing OS
Beautifully written I love your writing
Plz do write more

Thanks so much...will do😃

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DiehardRaYafan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Sakshiashu

I absolutely love your stories and this is another brilliant one.
The ghazal's lyrics perfectly complement the feelings of the characters in the OS but I felt the story is incomplete.
Please do write more often.

I could have written more but sometimes too many explanations take away from the story so I have subtly given hint of their eternal love where they communicate without saying anything ...so I left it to readers to imagine more or less. Thank you for your feedback and appreciation.

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DiehardRaYafan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Janilover
"Tumhe Dil lagi Bhul jaane Padegi"
Mohabbat Ki Raho me Aakar to dekho"

This is the Qualli By legend Rahat Fateh ali khan and i am writing

raya scene on this since month but every time i deleted bcoz the scene is not fitting with the lyrics and when i read Your Os i was dumbstruck.😲
The exact scene exact moment and excat word i wanted in my Os and you updated wow just amazing The scene suited to the lyrics No word can describe the awesomeness of this OS
Was thinking about Your story
(Dil to hai dil if i m not wrong in which she fallen in love with her fiance's friend Ram) Do continue this and please write more Os on ghazals you are Awesome

Aman

What a beautiful Quaali you have chosen! Looking forward to your write up on it...sorry for stealing your imagination...I guess all of us RaYan's think alike😆 Thank you so much for the appreciation and feedback...it is very hard to find the right words to portray the depth of the lyrics. I will try and finish up Dil toh hai Dil too😃

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DiehardRaYafan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: shonuz_mom
Very nice OS.

Thank you so much😃

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leena

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

awww deear what a awesome cobination of love & music... in simple sobar way I just loved it too good Flashback momnts were master strock so as ppresent one... but why did Priya left Ram or it was based on after 5 years sepration or what? but what ever was it it was too good awesome to read I must say I enjoyed it a lot & missed it too...waiting for more ffrom u but this time extra romentic one...

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DiehardRaYafan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: leena04

awww deear what a awesome cobination of love & music... in simple sobar way I just loved it too good Flashback momnts were master strock so as ppresent one... but why did Priya left Ram or it was based on after 5 years sepration or what? but what ever was it it was too good awesome to read I must say I enjoyed it a lot & missed it too...waiting for more ffrom u but this time extra romentic one...

Hi Leena, thanks for reading and commenting...when RaYa met again after 5 years of separation, it's written keeping that time frame and their feelings in mind. I will write more when I feel inspired again ...right now struggling to finish up what I had started but thank you for your encouraging feedback!😃

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abhishekpanchal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Diehard fan!! ur story :-/ jaldi update it plzzz

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iluvusakshi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

aila...maine to ye story padhi hi nahi pehle. lekin ab read ki. what a beautiful gajhal and equally a brilliant story. pl continue Karo na.

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DiehardRaYafan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: abhishekpanchal
Diehard fan!! ur story :-/ jaldi update it plzzz

Sorry brother have lost all the motivation to write for now ...I am trying and frankly, I feel it's not worth it when most readers read the story but don't even take the time to hit like not to mention comment...as a writer, one devotes lot of time and energy but I do want to finish it for the sake of ones who appreciate the effort...so hopefully soon!

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DiehardRaYafan

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: iluvusakshi
aila...maine to ye story padhi hi nahi pehle. lekin ab read ki. what a beautiful gajhal and equally a brilliant story. pl continue Karo na.

Thank you for liking and appreciating my effort! Same answer to you, my friend ...have lost motivation to write for now but trying😕

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