OS-Kya Pyaar Karoge Mujhse... last part B pg 24 updated 14/12/15

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Mitwaa

@Mitwaa

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#111

lovely update
raya romance too good yaar
an kab confess krenge ye dono
plzzz story end mat kro
thanks for pm
continue soon
plzzz jaldi update krna
sorry for late reply
do write more 😊

Edited by Mitwaa - 9 years ago

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Cute_Saakshii12

@Cute_Saakshii12

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#112

Fantastic update!!!
Awesome !!!
The way u wrote raya' s romance was out of this world!!!
Mind blowing!!!!
Plz plz continue sooon!!!
And thanks 4 pm!!!!!

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NutanAttarde

@NutanAttarde

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#113

Hey. ..Rayaland
hi aryana ur writing is Feb.. funtastic ...lvly ...great ...romantic more. ...all are lv most of the raya ..plz keep it up. ...os ff ss on raya write more n more to explore raya lv ❤️ ...Plz update soon. ...its mind blowing. ..
N haaann most of the important. Plz write new ff or ss on raya plz plz plz plz plz ... 😉 😛 Waiting plz update next part lv u like raya 😳

Edited by NutanAttarde - 9 years ago

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akanshac

@akanshac

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#114

really awesome update... and thnk u for such a big nd beautiful update... but sad tht its gng to end soon... but come up more beautiful ff like this... wn is the next update... plz continue soon...

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sandhya

@lovelysakshi

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#115

Lovely update
very big update...very good writing.
all the scenes between raya was superb and romantic.
Raya understands each other and both love each other truly.
Mehendi scene and after that balcony scene was superb😉
I want raya should be more romantic😛
Feeling bad this OS is ending. I like the story.
Waiting for Raya marriage...thanks for PM
please continue soon