OS-Kya Pyaar Karoge Mujhse... last part B pg 24 updated 14/12/15 - Page 14

Superrbb ending!!
Thank u 4 pm!

wow...fantastic. superb. do write more

Firstly a big round of applauds for u arayna..👏👏
its sooo beautiful story n n my fvrt tooo
starting part is sooo emotional tumne toh rulahidiya... Ram bhut pain me h n usse dekh kr priya b bhut sad h.. loved sudhirji n priya convo... priya hr ek kosish krti h jo ki woh ram ko happy kre..
their bonding was superb.. ek duje kliye itna pyar.. priya ram ke dard ko dur krna chahti h..
RaYa ke story toh Vik-neh k bina adhuri hoti h vhi sochrhi thi toh.. tumne inka b entry krwa diya..
So cutely Ram proposed to priya infront of al the people
Finally RaYa got married n lived happly... sabse durrr bt ek duje k sath..
RaYa k everlasting romance ka toh jawab nhi kbi b start hote h...
now their family complete with little cute pari...
live long life RaYa/RaShi...
Thanks for the pm...n do write more Arayna...

Funtastic update. ...do more with raya ff write

Awesome OS
Such a beautiful story
Plz do write more
Thanks for PM

Superb end to the story.

lets see how big this comment ggoes! from the starting scene... wow wow wow...and just wow...again ram was treated as second child...the scene was so imaginable... and then the way priya was hurt..and the way sudhir ji consoled her was soo amazing yaar...he said mere bete ko wo saree khushiyan dena! <3 stole the applause! wow...superb thought... the pool scene...ram broke down completely in her arms..as he shared the darkest past with her! the way she consoled him...and let him relax...in her arms..wow...superb...she was the first one to propose! again! :-P hehe...really awesome...he was having doubt if he could kep her happy? any doubt? woah...the kiss!! and all the kisses <3 haee..*naughty smile* amazing... there marriage on the same day! at the very next moment! OMG..wow what a dare... he picked her up and took her to the mandap! :-P ho ho.. woah..wow... vikram punched him and neha slapped him!! uui maa! she just barged in and yelled at them for touching HER HUSBAND! that was so sweet... marriage done and nevi usual gift...a room...! thy started there romance outside only! :-P again a kiss!! haee... priya was seducing him like...hell! he wnted to tease her but it was vice versa! :-P she wqs so desperate...wanted him to change with her ;) didnt knew why? :-P *innocent souls* hehe.. they made love...!! <3 and ram gave her the first gift...a nighty and she wore it!! to look way to hawt! wow...*again innocent souls* they leave KM!! OMG...ek number... means ek number!! maja aagay wo scene dekh kar. they strted there own life..with each other... 1.5 years leap!! and there daughter!!, <3 THAT LIKE A PERFECT END... and one appreciable thing...u wrote it huge!! it was reading it for more than 40 mins! not my reading is slow -_- it was really huge!! and really beg of u next soon! one same sweet romantic os is much awaited!!!

Very nice OS
Loved it
Nice ending

awesome update
just love it
thanks for pm
do write more

Wow beautiful story and good ending.
Ram married Priya..
divide the property equally and left KM.
happy ending...No fights no separtation.
Enjoying his family life with priya
Kaash eisa hota balh mein...
khair...thanks for PM
write more