SS-Tere mere darmiya last part B updated on pg 82 dated 05/3/2017 - Page 40

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Posted: 9 years ago
superb part...
wow ram proposed priya...
lovely moments
contd sooon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update!!
Thanks 4 pm!!
Continue soon!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update.
Really scared about priya's reactions when ram's truth will be revealed to her?
Thanks for pm and please continue.
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Posted: 9 years ago
itni scary update kyu.. Ram shoots someone
but story is going great ..
full diff concept..
and bechara RAJAT
šŸ˜† super line. brain jo pehle se hi kam hai šŸ˜†

thank u d for ur pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Woaw Thats Awesome Man! Loved it just superb, Ram's don's character is one my fav nowadays, love it to see him in RB mode. And about the story its going fantastic, Ram dont want priya to know anything of his work, he wants to save priya from all these and he has just proposed her, lets see what you have stored for us to read. I AM LOVING THIS STORY! please update soon, I am dying to read more more and more.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very nice update..
Ram ha behavior dekh kr bhut dar lag rha h..
itna pyar krtah priya se ki jaan de bi sakta h aur le b skta h..
raya r very much in love romantic pairs...
waiting for next update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
why ram is dng such things? :(
dnt knw wat will be priya's reaction when she come to knw abt Ram..!!

Raya part was so gud.
please continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 25

rajat walk toward door...ram was relexing on his chair...after a min rajat turn back in study and said...

raj - mai apna bag bhul gya...vikram isme se papers nikal k bag dedo...

vikram do the same and handover the bag to rajat...jase he rajat bag pkdne lgta hai...ram kick on rajat leg and he fall on floor...vikram look at ram...for answer..

raj - standing immidently and try to punch him...ram push him aside..raj shout how dare u kick me ram..kya kiya tha Maine...

ram - laugh...achaa bade sidhe ho tum CBI wale na kutte ki dum hote ho kbhi sudher nhi skte...Kya lgta hai mai ase he betha hu yha mujhe kuch pta nhi chlta...ram come near raj or Said tere jase pta nhi kitne aye or kitne gye beta tere jase officers jeb ( pocket ) mai laker ghumta hu Mai...don't b over smart..

v - ram bat Kya hai..

r - viki bag k niche camera hai...vikram immidently cheque the bag and yes ram was ryt camera hai...

rajat was so scared now don't know what to do...

ram immidently place his gun on his temple or said...

r - ab bol kya kru tera...viki bta kya kre baht preshan ker rkha hai isne...her Time kuch na kuch or mere pass itna time nhi hota ki mai roj roj isk piche bhagu...

raj - ram I m sorry plzz maf krdo agge Se nhi hoga...

ram - laugh waooo great officer rajat apni jaan ki bhikh mang rhe hai...mjaa aa gya...rajat mere list mai mafi dena matlab dusre glti ka moka dena...tujhe maf to nhi ker skta lakin haan ager tu mere kuch kam aa gya toh mai soch skta hu...

raj - tum jo b khoge mujhe manjur hai...

ram - home minister k murder ka case tere pass hai na...mujhe uski sare detail chahiye...vo laker de...

raj - ram vo to hmare chief k pass hai mai nhi la skta ase...mai kase launga...he was so scared don't know what to say how to make ram agree...

ram - toh fer tum Kya kroge jiker baht case solve ker liye aram kro...and put the gun on his head...

raj - shout...nhi ram plzz goli mat chlana mai launga plzz goli mat chlana he was drenched in sweat..and tear also in his eyes...

ram - put the gun aside or Said good..vry Gud rajat ye jo mot ka der hai na bade bado ko badal deta hai...or koi chalaki krne ko sochna b nhi mere nazar her pal tum per hai...ye smjh lo tumhare jaan mere pass girvi hai ek glti or tum and look at his gun...and smile...

raj - hmm and going from there...

vikram - ram home minister k murder ka case detail tu Kya krega...

ram - viki I want to know singhaniya ka us case Se kya connection hai...

vik - ram tune usk sath kam krne Se mna ker diya yar I m shure vo tujhse badla jarur lega...or Maine suna hai Vo india aa raha hai...

ram - haan...vikram pta hai...vase dushman ager kmjor ho toh khel mai mja nhi ata...or shukar hai isbar Dushaman thoda taker( braber) ka toh hai...ab is khel mai or b Mja ayega...and smile like Don...

vikram - look at him...don't forget ram ab tere sath ek or jindgi judi hai..kisi ki jimedari hai tujh per...

ram - mujhe achi trah yad hai isliye Maine singhaniya ka sath chodne ka fesla kiya...kyuki mai janta hu usk sath jude rhna mere or mere priya k sath rishte k liye thik nhi halaki usse muh mod ker b dushmani he ayegi mere hisse ye mai janta tha...per priya k liye mai koshish ker rha hu vikram...I'll try my best...

vik - I know ram...I m proud of u my frend...and both share brotherly hug...

other side..
priya in her room setting on bed...think ye Kya ho gya kl rat mai itni confuse thi...rajat or ram ki bate...I m totally confused but aj ek he din mai 1 hour mai sab badal gya...Vo ek thandi hwa k jhoke ki aya or Sab kuch bdal gya...or mai usse koi shikayat tak nhi ker payi..mere man mai kitne swal the Maine puche kyu nhi...use roka kyu nhi mere krib ane Se...jo hua kya sach mai main vhi chahti thi...ram kitna pyar krte hai mujhse...mai kase shak ker skti hu un per...

ohh God ye kya ho gya...kya ho raha hai ram kyu man gya ek dam shadi k liye aj apne ghar b bula rhe hai...ho kya rha hai...priya take a deep breath...

told to herself priya ab jo bhi ho tere sare swalo k jwab tujhe ram k ghar per he milenge...vha jaker tu sbkuch pta lga skti hai...ye sab chal kya raha hai...vase b vha rhungi toh ram k sath time bita payungi use jan paungi...tbhi kuch smjh ayega...she look at that ring which ram gift her...she kiss that ring or smile lil and think ram hop hm kbhi dur na ho...sbkuch galat ho jo b log sochte hai yaa jo kbhi mere man mai dobut hua apko laker God plzzz sab kuch juth ho...ram mere heartbeat hai usk bina mai ji nhi paungi...vase b Vo her insan mujhse dur ho jata hai jo mere dil k sbse krib hota hai...ab ye derd mai seh nhi paungi...

ram send his car with driver on priya home in evening...

ram to neha - neha sari tyari achi Se hone chahiye...mere priya first time yha aa rhi hai kash dayi jaan b yha hoti but unki toh Mandir yatra he khtam nhi hote...pta nhi kya mangti rhti hai bhgwan se...or vo bhi sbhi bhgwano se...and vikram and neha both r laughing hear ram..

vik - shram ker salle...shayed unhe ki duyao or mannto k karan hm jinda or Shi slamat hai...

neha - haan hmne jitne pap kiye hain..dayi jaan un Sab k liye mafi ka certificate hai yar I mean Vo hmare liye itne dil Se dua krti hai or hmare pap dhul jate hai...and three of them r laughing...

ram - vikram k pap maf nhi hue shayed..

vik or neha confused Said kyu ?

ram - dekh na use tu jo mil gyi toh sja mil to gyi "neha...isse badi sja or kya hogi. .and winks at her...vikram was laughing and ram neha look at both of them with haww expression or said..

n - I show u ram...k Bache and running behind him...vik was enjoying that moment and think thank God dono k bich sb kuch thik ho gya...

after some time..
priya car enter in mention she just staring at the name plate KAPOOR MENTION...and saw the banglow it's really big...and thinks itna bada ghar or isme rhne wala sirf ek...uff...or ab do and lil smile across on her lips..her chain of thaught broke when driver open the door of car for her...priya coming out or see the door of big house...she go toward intrance and stop on door or look inside its so beautiful...very very beautiful and the home is looking just like a heaven... she staring at home and the word came from her mouth is waoo beautiful...but not more then u sweetheart...priya heartbeat Increased hear the voice...and she look behind...and yes her man her love was standing just behind her...

p - ap yha..

r - haan bcoz I don't want ki mere princess ko awkward lge..use asa lge ki Vo akeli hai..Mai hu na her pal usk sath..and touch her chicks and hold her hand...priya have tear in her eyes...ram smile or said no rona dhona plzz and wips her tear with his thumb...and smile...both desturbed by neha voice..

n - oyee love birds jra idher dhyan do...neha standing with arti..

p - yesab ki kya jarurt hai yar..

n - ye ap apne patidev Se pucho...

p - look at neha...with shocking expression

n - matlab hone wale patidev...and both smile...neha did arti nd ram and priya both come inside...

r - welcome to UR...home priya...abse her chij tumhare with me...and hold her hand or hug her...priya too hug him and close her eyes...

v - ahamm...ahamm...hm bhi hai bhayi...

n - nhi hm nhi hai yar tum log lge rho..

r - still hugging her tight priya try to broke but ram didn't allow her..Or said to neha thanks neha ye toh idiot hai...ab tum dono niklo yha se bad mai ana...and winks at them..

n - haww how mean...bhad mai jaa chlo viki hm b kahi jaker romance kre and pull his arm and 4 of them r laughing...

after they go ram broke hug or Said so madam kesa lga...

p - baht buraa..

r - haww kyu ?

p - apne neha or vikram ko Jane k liye kyu bola kesa lga hoga unhe or unk Samne u hug me...very bad...

r - ohh God ate he complain...bas kro yar...abhi rest kerlo baki bad mai dant lena mere maa...

p - smile ok...mera room

r - ji haan lets go I'll show u..and took her in his arms and going upstairs

p - ram niche utaro mujhe...plzzz kya ker rhe ho app..

r - vhi jis liye apko bulaya hai..pyarr krne k liye...and naughtly wink...

p - ram baht beshram ho ap...and blushing so much..hear ram...

ram take her too the ram and lay her on the bed and laying beside her...and hold her hand or kiss it..

p - ram apka ghar baht khubrurat hai but apki dayi jaan kaha hai...mujhe unse Milna hai...

r - umm dai jaan abhi to ghar per nhi hai Vo shirdi gyi hai...jb ayegi toh mil lena vase b ab tum yhi rhoge mere pass and look at her...ram come on top of her...Or kiss on her chick..priya close her eyes...ram kiss on her forehead smile crept on priya lips both love moment got desturbed by the phn ring of ram..ram immidently getup nd look at caller I'd..and then priya Or said

r - priya tum rest kro mai ata hu...and going out then ram attend the call or said

r - Maine mna kiya tha na ab mere phn per call mat krna vikram ko ya neha ko call kro smjh nhi tumhe ager dobara mujhe call kiya ya kbhi yha nzar b aye toh goli Mar dunga dekhte he smjh..

other side
priya going to washroom before she enter in washroom her phn ring she attend the call...

p - heloo kon..

heloo priya mai rajat bol rha hu..

p - mujhe koi bat nhi krni tumse..mai ab ram k ghar per hu rajat kuch asa mat krna ki ram gussa ho jaye fer tum jante ho...bad mai mat khna warning nhi di...

raj - ohh really priya tum toh jate he us don ki bhasha bolne lgi...great..chlo tumhe pta chal he jayega...akhir ek Don kab tak chupa rhega ek na ek din uska sach samne ayega he...

priya shout...rajjat b in ur limit...khbardar ager ram k bare kuch b kaha toh dobara bat mat krna mujhse smjhe...sharam ati hai mujhe tumhe apna dost khte hue...and cut the call...

precape - ram priya sweet moment or priya follow ram...









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Posted: 9 years ago
beautiful update.. lovely
while reading each update aisa lagta h shayad iss part me priya ko pta chalega next part me pta chalega..uff
every updates r interesting n afcos thrilling
waiting for next update... thnx for d pm D
n Aru a big thnx for u dear for writing such lovely Don story.. Love Raya..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Finally able to read all parts
A fantastic read,interesting too
Curious to know how future unfold
Good jobšŸ‘

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