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Posted: 9 years ago


part 45
wowow RaYa enjoyed with each other a lot that's really good kids are the one who bring them closer... poor Ram every time gets disturb by one or other thing lol but enjoyed their small love scene worth to read... Joyti broke the spins lol she actually opened up Priya's feeling indirectly to Ram ... well this is good she is opening up front of him but where did it ended god the were just abt to become soul mate n her Past again hunt her... she throw Ram away from her now Ram fully ashamed of himself so bad u showed her pain so well with Ram's guilt too moving for next to read...
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Posted: 9 years ago

part 46
Ram really decided to go back India without her this us really sad but he even don't want her to get hurt at any cost phir chahe use Priya aur bachho se dur hi kyun na rehna pade. ... he us just thinking for her batterment so sad to know RaYa will again separate but when there is angle how can this be possible thank god Joyti handled situation very well she made Ram understand her situation well n even told him truth she can't live without him... there our hero took first step made her comfortable first n with passing days they become normal with each other but I guess now Ram won't took first step to her she has to do something now... hope their love bring them back together last part was mind blowing showing uneasiness between them so perfectly too good they back to India together mind blowing moving for next to read...
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Posted: 9 years ago

part 47
OMG OMG u actually used my idea to make jealous of Priya.. it's too good u r going the same way I expected so good to read ab aayega maza loved all the parts.. Ram trying to avoid Priya so he can make her not uncomfortable in his presence but no this is making Priya restless to getting his attention back... Ram wants to love her but stopping himself thinking abt her condition so Good Ram is actually changed now happy to know he loves her a lot n the same way Priya do to him to but this Esha matter spice up the story bit why is this Ajit is there I don't want another Ashwin plz... god well trust on u o m sure u will bring best out of it... so Priya is actually jealous n esha is wanting Ram at any cost but I know she won't Ram is just of Priya no one can take him off from her b'coz he won't go by himself. .. so now waiting for next & after reading preview can't wait my self more plz plz do update soon...
but why u ending the story yaar if there us nothing much then pkz do write new one we don't want to losses another writer. ... plz do comment on this soon plz...


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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow awesome preview dear.. Pls update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow awesome preview...
hmm but sad that it is ending...
waiting for the update

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Posted: 9 years ago
Its a wonderful story i've ever read!
I never commented on urs as i am a silent reader!
Please continue writing such unique stories!
I know at the beginning of the story people may not be accepting a hero as a villan but thats what made ur story a unique one!

Waiting for the next part!
I hope u reveal ur name at the end!
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Posted: 8 years ago


still waiting di when u r going to post??

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pls update next part soon..
eagerly waiting
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NOTE :Hi my dear lovely readers .Im so sorry for updating late . My lil princess is literally behind me .Im too busy in my profession and looking after her . ok coming to the point im feeling so sad to tell ki that this is ending part of Takdeer . But i hats off to my friend she really penned down very well .Actually this story she has sent me 7 to 8 parts . just For Me to read . at that time i requested her to continue and we can post it in IF .but somehw she refused but without knowing her i posted it and the response she got . its obvious u ppl knw . yes this is a negative shadow and few of the social stigma cause she has nailed for that reason few ppl didnt liked it . she wanted to stop so many times but i loved the way the story is progressing . Remember all the stories are happy endings nor thorns pathway .this is also not a roses pathway it has its own negative shade from the begining. Anyhow we faced a lot of conflictions while posting the story , Thank god we overcome and finally completed the story .

To the writer :I love you baby the way you handled the situation and the way you penned down the story . Its too good .and keep coming them i loved to post behalf of you (winks) .Hugs to you .I still want to read this story . still i lik to read this prolongation of story . haha i know your commitments and Thank you so very much for being there always my side .Muhaaa .


THE LAST PART


Next morning,
Krishna ji, Amarnath and Beeji are planning to go to Amritsar in order to attend some family
function. As Pihu and Kush have holidays after exams, they are also going with them.
Priya woke up from sleep. Pihu is sleeping with her one leg over priya. Priya smiles and put
Pihu properly. She kisses on her forehead.
She checks the time. Its 6'o clock morning.
She come out and entered her room. Ram is sleeping on his side. She looks at him once and
went to freshen up. After freshen up she came out and saw Ram is still sleeping. She gets
ready and make Pihu and Kush ready for their journey.
All of them left hurriedly for Amritsar.
Priya in her thought "Ram is still sleeping. Maybe he is not going to office today.
Its 9'o clock,
Ram is still sleeping. Priya decided to call Ram and she enter into her room.
Priya:- Yeh abhi tak so rahe hai...She goes near him and call him. But Ram did not response.
She again calls him but he did not move and finally, she call his name loudly and shake his
hand. She then touches his forehead and neck. Ram is running with high temperature. Priya
become worried and called him but he is not moving. Priya held his face with her palm and
shudder him a little.
Priya:- Ram uthiye na...Ram please uthiye na. She immediately called the doctor.
Doctor check him and gave him injection to settle down his fever. Priya still worried for
Ram.
Doctor:- Gabrane wali baat nahi hai...meine dawai de di hai...thode der mein inhe hosh aa
jaayega uske baat inhe kuch kila dijiye aur yeh dawai de dijiye. Fever jyada hua toh aap
muje call kijiye. Doctor left from there.
Priya:- Sab meri wajah se hua hai...woh meri wajah se kal baarish mein beeghe...and she
remember the incidence.
Priya sit beside Ram and check his temperature. She is not leaving his side for a second.
After two hours Ram finally open his eyes. His eyes captured the most beautiful person of
his life. Priya is sitting near him with her head down. Ram touched her head and Priya looks
at him.
Priya:- Abhi aap kaise hai and she touch his forehead.
Ram:- Muje washroom jaana hai and he got out of the bed and Priya help him till the wash
room door.
In the meantime Priya brought the food for him.
After freshen up Ram came out. He feels very weak. He still having fever. Priya help him and
made him to sit on the bed.
Priya:- Aap nastha kar lijiye uske baad yeh medicine bhi lena hai
Ram:- No Priya muje bilkul bhi kuch khane ka mann nahi hai
Priya:- Please Ram thoda khaa lijiye...Doctor ne kaha hai ki aapko khane ke baad hi dawai
de.
Ram keep on telling her no but Priya fed him forcefully. While eating he continuously
watching Priya's expression.
After food Priya gave him medicine. Priya turn to go, Ram held her wrist.
Priya turn back and looked at him.
Ram:- Kal jo tumne muje aur Esha ko dekha...I mean jo tumhe dhikane ki koshish ki jaa rahi
thi woh sach nahi hai...trust me Priya meine kuch nahi kiya
Priya:- Mein janti hoon...I believe u Ram
Ram becomes shocked. He looks at her with mouth open.
Ram:- Kya kaha tumne
Priya:- I trust u...aapko muje kuch bhi explain karne ki zaroorat nahi hai
Ram felt very happy. Finally, she starts trusting him.
Ram:- Thank u...Thanks u so much Priya. His eyes filled with happy tears.
Afternoon,
The door bell rang and Priya went to open the door. She becomes irritated seeing the person
but composed herself. Esha gave annoyed look to Priya and enter into the house. She looks
around then turn to Priya.
Esha:- Where is Ram and how is he???. Ram ka room first floor mein hai na.
Priya nooded "First floor right side
Esha:- Thanks and she ascended the steps. Priya followed her.
Esha saw Ram and ran towards him. Esha goes near him and hug him tightly. Ram shudder
with her actions. Esha started her blabbering.
Esha:- What happen to you Ram??? You still having high fever..??? Kaise ho gaya yeh sab.
Tum jante ho na tum baarish mein beegthe ho toh kya hota hai???. Yaad hai ek baar college
mein hum kaise bheege the...aur uske baad jo tumhe fever hua uske baad meine decide kiya
tha mein kabhi tumhe baarish mein bheegne nahi dungi.
Achha abb mein aa gayi hoon na...Abb mein tab tak yahan se nahi
hilungi jab tak tum teek nahi ho jaate.
Priya is watching them silently. Ram looks at Priya. Esha follow his gaze and saw Priya.
Priya wipes her tears and turns to go. Esha stops her.
Esha:- Priyaaa...Mein aa gayi hoon na. Mein Ram ka khayal rakungi. Abhi tum jaao aur Ram
ke liye vegetable soup banakar lekar aavo.
Ram:- Eshaaa..!!
Esha:- Mein janti hoon Ram tumhe vegetable soup pasand nahi hai lekin tum muje jante ho
mein tumhe pilakar hi rahungi.
Priya left from there without saying anything.
Here, In room:
Ram:- What is this Esha???? Tum yeh sab kyun kar rahi ho
Esha:- Because I love u Ram...bahut pyar karti hoon.
Ram:- But I don't. Kitne baar kahu mein tumse pyar nahi karta. Tum kuch bhi kar lo Esha
mein Priya ko kabhi nahi chod sakta. Please Esha...Aaj pehli baar Priya ne mujse kaha ki
woh mujpar trust karti hai...mere kuch bhi samjane se pehle...u know what it means to me.
Meine ek baar uske dil ko buri tarah toda hai mein ussi dil ko apne pyar se jodna chahta
hoon. Shayad mein duniya ka sabse lucky insan hoon jise dusra mauka mila hai apni zindagi
phir se jeene ka.
Esha:- Aur issliye hum dono ko saat dekhkar bhi tumhari biwi bina kuch kahe yahan se chali
gayi...Right...Ram y don't u understand... u r living in illusion...dhoke mein ho ki Priya tumse
pyar karti hai. Usse koi farak nahi padta ki tum kya karte ho kiske saat rehte ho. Woh aaj bhi
tumhare paas aane se darti hai. Woh tumhe woh saari kushiyaan kabhi nahi de sakti jo ek
biwi apne pati ko deti hai. Bhool jao ki Priya kabhi tumhari hogi. Tum zindagi bhar uske
peeche ghumte rahoge aur woh tumhe eise hi nachati rahegi.
Ram(angrily):- Enough Esha...Just stop it...tum...he stops when Priya came with soup.
Esha:- Priya soup table par rakk do mein pila dungi Ram ko.
Priya looks at Ram and kept the soup on the table and left.
Ram fisted his hand in anger. Before he reacts Esha said ab baaki baate baad mein pehle
Ram soup pee lo uske baad thoda aaram kar lena.
He took soup then medicine. He tries to make her understand and wanted to send her out
but due to medication and weakness he slept.
Priya is walking impatiently to and fro in the room. She is restless.
Priya(self):- Esha...Esha...Esha...what the hell she is doing in my room. Its my room. Its my
bedroom. How dare she sat on my bed. How can she touch Ram. How dare she???? Mein
apne pati ka khayal rakk sakti hoon. Ram kuch bol kyun nahi rahe...no...that's enough. I
don't want to see her anymore in my house.
She felt bad but at the same time very jealous and irritated with esha behavior. She cannot
see Esha and Ram together and her anger increase in each passing second. She prefer to
keep quite because ram's health is more important than discussing these things.
She remembers Jyothi words. Once she said "Apne aap ko purani baato se azad kar isse
pehle ki tumhare haat se sab chutt jaaye and today she felt Jyothi is right. She has to forget
her past incidents, Ram has changed a lot and she can see how much he loves her just by
looking into his eyes.
Priya(self):- Jyothi ne sahi kaha tha. Ram sirf mere hai aur mein kisi ko bhi Ram ko mujse
dur le jaane nahi dungi.
She prepared kada and went to her room. She saw Ram is sleeping and Esha is sitting near
him reading magazine.
Priya entered the room.
Esha:- Tum yahan kya kar rahi ho. Priya kept kada on the table.
Esha:- Yeh kya hai...Ram abhi so rahe hai aur uska fever bhi kam ho gaya hai...abhi inn sab
ki zaroorat nahi hai. Mein kahungi tab aana...yeh jo bhi hai isse lekar jaao.
Ram stir from his sleep and got up due to Esha's voice. He sat on the bed.
Ram(tiredly):- Eshaa..
Esha:- Ram kya hua tumhe???. She looks at Priya.
Priya crossed her arms near chest and stare at Esha.
Priya(sternly) said:- OUT
Esha:- What did u just say????
Priya:- OUT...Get out from here.
Esha(shockingly):- what???? She stood up from her place.
Priya:- Tumhe sunai nahi deta Esha...I said get out of my house. Tum yahan apne dosth se
milne aayi thi...mill li...abhi mere pati ko aaram ki zaroorat hai...Tum jaaogi toh achha
rahega. I can take care of my husband very well.
Ram who is watching all this went numb. He never expected Priya would say all these
things. He did not even guess that she will show her right on him like this. He becomes
happy.
Esha:- How dare u Priya????...Dekha Ram dekha tumne kaise tumhari biwi mujse baat kar
rahi hai
Priya:- Correct...Mein Ram ki biwi hoon aur tum hamare personal life mein interfere kar rahi
ho.
Esha:- Mein interfere kar rahi hoon...hum dono ke beech tum aayi ho Priya aur kaisi biwi jo
apne pati ko puri kushi tak nahi de sakti.
Ram(finally said):- Shut up Esha. you can't talk like this to my wife. Don't ever try to
interfere in our personal matters. Just leave from here.
Esha:- Tum muje chup hone ke liye bol rahe ho...chup karana hai toh apni biwi ko
karao...kya galat kaha meine...kis mooh se yeh tum par haq jata rahi hai...biwi hone ka isne
kya kaam kiya hai
Ram:- Enough Esha...Just shut up. Tumhe koi haq nahi banta mere aur Priya ke beech mein
bolne ka...behtar yehi hoga ki tum hamari zindagi se dur chali jao. Tum muje apna dosth
manti ho na toh ussi dosthi ke naam par tumse kehta hoon chali jaao...chali jaao hamari
zindagi se...
Esha:- Ram tum mujse eise baat nahi kar sakte.
Ram:- Let me tell u again Esha, I don't love u... I can't spoil my life loosing her again she is
my everything. Esha please go from here.
Esha feel insulted and she left without saying anything. Priya said nothing and left.
Two days passed, Priya take very good care of Ram and he is fine now. After Esha incidence
neither Ram nor Priya talk about that matter. Though both wanted to say so many things but
they prefer to keep silent.
One-day Ram is doing work from his study room. He forgot to take one file which he kept in
his room. He calls Priya but she did not answer. He again calls and his voice become louder
and louder but Priya did not answer.
Ram(frustratingly):- Yeh Priya bhi na...muje hi jana padega...saying this he came out of his
study room and enter his room. The room was dark.
Ram:- Priya aaj itne jaldi so gayi...saying this he switch on the light. Priya is not on the bed.
He saw Priya is standing near the window gazing outside.
Ram:- Priya tum wahan kya kar rahi ho. Mein kabse tumhe awaz de raha tha.
Priya said nothing. Ram marches towards her and looked at her. she beautifully dressed up
in a saree.
Ram:- Priya tum kahi jaa rahi ho...getting no response he placed hand on her shoulder.
Ram:- Priya r u Ok???
Priya slowly takes his both hands and encircles his hands around her waist and entwine
with her fingers. Her back touches his chest. She arched her body. Ram stunned with her
actions. He knew if she continues like this soon he could not able to hold back himself. He
tries to remove his hand from her waist but she tightens her grip on his hands resisting him
to leave.
Ram understand her signal slowly bends and kiss on nape of her neck. Priya gasped. He
continue to shower his kisses and bites her ear lightly. She felt tickling sensation and she
turn towards him. Both stare into each other eyes. A sweet eye lock of full of love. desires
and need. Ram saw her beautifully kohled eyes. Her eyes are attractive and anybody can fall
in love with her with just by looking into her eyes. Both stare for some time and then Ram
said
Ram:- Priyaaa...She kept her finger on his lips to stop him to say further.
Priya:- I love u Ram... I m all urs Ram... Ram is amused, stare at her for some time and
carry her in his arms to the bed without breaking the eye lock. He laid her nicely on the bed
and gaze her from top to bottom. She looks divine.
He traces her face with his fingers. Priya closed her eyes with his touch. For the first time
she is sensing the feeling of love. He came down slowly taking her leg and kissed on her
toe. Priya moan a little. He then slides the sari little up and kissed on her ankle and removed
the anklets from her leg. He did the same with the other leg. He traces her body with his
hand taking his own time ever so gently. He slides the pallu aside. Priya is feeling shy and
enjoys his touch. He then came on top of her. Priya opened her eyes. Both have same urge
in their eyes. Ram bend towards her face and takes her lips in his. He sucks her lips ever so
gently. His one hand strokes her hair making her to respond. He deepens the kiss and Priya
starts responding to the kiss. Ram becomes energetic getting her response and the kiss
turn into passionate one. Priya can feel his arousal near her stomach. He broke the kiss for
air and kiss her all over her face. He came down and nuzzles her neck and shoulder.
Ram put his all effort to express his love to her and at the same time to make her
comfortable with this. For Priya this feeling is completely new. He starts removing her attire
one by one and take off his attire too. A ting of fear came inside her due to her past
incidents. Priya held the blanket tightly trying to control her fear. Ram noticed this and he
slowly remove the sheet from her hand and entwine her fingers with his.
Ram:- Priya apni aankhen kholo.
Priya nods in negation.
Ram:- Mein keh raha hoon na please apni aankhen kholo aur muje dekho.
Priya slowly open her eyes and looks straight into his eyes.
Ram:- Priya u believe me right ...toh jab tak mein nahi kahunga tum apni aankhen bandh
nahi karogi. He takes her hand, kiss on her palm and made her to touch his body from face
to stomach. He then kept her both hands on his back and kiss her once again on her lips.
His lips touch all parts of her body nuzzling, sucking and playing with her giving her all
pleasure. Priya is in heaven.
Ram:- Priya r u sure u r ready for this
Priya nodded assuring him to continue.
Ram:- Priya muje bura nahi lagega agar tum mana karogi...but once if I start this I may not
be able to stop.
Priya:- Complete me Ram. Complete me with ur love. Ram is happy and he took nice time to
make her comfortable and slowly enters into her. Priya held him tightly digging her nails on
his back. He strokes very slowly and then increase his pace. The room is filled with their
moans. For the first time she realizes what actual love making is. She is in cloud 9. He fulfill
her with his love. He completes her. She is ruffling his hair while he is resting on her
bosom. Both stay like this for some time and after that Ram moves aside.
Ram cover her with duvet.
Ram:- R u ok???
Priya nodded with a satisfying smile on her face.
Ram:- Tum chahe toh change kar lo and he gave his kurtha.
Priya clean herself and change into night dress. Ram also changes into his nightwear. He
encircles her in bear hug and Priya kept her head near his chest and slept.
Priya is now feel complete in all senses. She managed to be a great mom, daughter-in-law
and wonderful wife. Now her past has no power to hold her back. She is very happy in her
life. She has a very beautiful family, loving kids, caring and loving husband. This is what
every woman craves for. She has struggled so much in her life, had a bitter past but now
everything is perfect in her life.
Few random scenes...
Priya sold her company and started a trust in India. This trust is specially for old age
people. Priya likes to spend time with them.
Pihu's Birthday,
Raya celebrating pihu's birthday. Pihu is happy because this is the first birthday with both of
her parents.
After the party Priya made Kush and Pihu to sleep. She came to her room and saw Ram on
call with somebody. She hugged him from behind resting her head on his back inhaling his
manly cologne. Ram hold her hand and after finishing his call he tightens the hug.
Ram;- Tired???
Priya:- Hmmm. Ram broke the hug and turns towards her.
Priya:- Aapko kuch batana hai
Ram:- Kya????
Priya take his hand and kept on her stomach
Ram:- Kya hua Priya
Priya:- Huh...Kya Ram aap itna bhi nahi samajte.
Ram- Kya samju...tum kuch bol hi nahi rahi ho
Priya looks angrily at him.
Ram:- Tum eise hitler ke jaise kyun dekh rahi ho...batao na kya baat hai.
Priya held his collar and pulls towards her and whisper in his ears...
Priya:- Hum phir se mummy papa banne wale hai.
Ram:- What????...He could not believe his ears...tum sach keh rahi ho???..His eyes filled
with tears.
Priya also becomes emotional and she nodded her head.
Ram hugs her very tightly. Ohh my god Priya...He kiss her on her head...Mehnat rang
laayi...Priya hits him playfully...I love you Priya...I am so happy...saying that ..he lift her in his
arms.
Priya become shy and she hide her face with her hands. He carries her towards the bed.
Ram:- Mrs. Kapoor aaj se tum kuch kaam nahi karogi...trust bhi nahi jaaogi
Priya:- Arre trust nahi jaavngi toh kaise hoga
Ram:- Woh sab mein dekh lunga
Priya:- Please Ram aapse sambhala nahi jaayega
Ram:- Kyun tumhe mujpar vishwaas nahi hai kya...
Priya:- Please Ram muje wahan jaana unn sab se milna bahut achha lagta hai
Ram:-Achha teek hai tum jaaogi lekin tum kahi bhi jaaogi mein tumhe lekar jaaunga
Priya:- Raaam...!!!
Ram:- Bass abb meine jo keh diya keh diya...tum socho kya karna hai lekin baad mein
socho...kyunki abhi muje yeh moment waste nahi karna hai...he came on top of her...and the
scene fades.
9 months later,
In the hospital labor room
Priya crying with pain. Ram is sitting beside her holding her hand.
Priya:- Raam...Raaam...since long time she is trying. She is fully sweated and tired.
Ram caresses her giving her strength. He cannot see her like this. Anything he can ready to
do to taken out her pain. But Priya have to bear this only he can give her strength.
Ram:- Priya relax ...thoda aur time...relax baby...I love you...bass thoda aur aur uske baad
hamare babies hamare saat honge.
After some time,
Really that was a wonderful moment for them. Raya blessed with two twin boys.
Pihu:- Mumma yeh toh dono boys hai...Kush bhi boy hai toh mere saat kon khelega
Ram:- Arre toh kya hua...yeh bhi tumhare saat khelenge na...Kush bhi toh tumhare saat
khelta hai na.
Pihu:- Nahi mumma muje next time ek girl chahiye
Priya(shokingly):- Ek aur!!!!..
Pihu:- Haan mumma muje next time ek chotti si cute si behen chahiye.
Priya:-Woh sab baad mein dekhte hai baby...pehle aap apne chotte bhaiyyo se toh khelo
scene faded...
Priya:- Aap kush toh hai na
Ram:- Kush!!!...tumhe pata nahi Priya tumne muje kitni badi kushi di hai...I am so happy
Priya...I love you very much...He kiss her hand...Kaisi ho abb... pain hai???
Priya:- Tired Ram...stitches ki jagah thoda pain hai bass.
Ram:- Tum aaram karo... mein bachon ko dekhta hoon.
Priya discharged from hospital...Raya went to home with kids.
Babies starts crying.
Priya:- Bachho ko bhook laga hoga.
Ram:- Teek hai mein bachhe ko pakadta hoon tum feed karo. Ram hold his sons and put
them for feeding.
Priya:- Aapne bachho ka kuch naam socha hai
Ram:- Nahi...tumne???
Priya:- Haan
Ram:- Kya???
Priya:- Varun aur Vihaan.
After few years, In VV School
Principal: - Priya... Varun and Vihaan are very naughty. Baaki bachhon ke Parents ke
complaint bhi aa rahe hai. This is the last warning. Agar Varun aur Vihaan eise hi masti
karte rahe aur tang karte rahe toh Im sorry muje hi koi tough decision lena padega.
Priya:- I am sorry ma'am...Mein Varun aur Vihaan ko samjaaungi.
Principal: -I really don't know lekin dono sirf girls ko bahut pareshaan karte hai...kabhi kisi
ko push kiya...kabhi kisi ke baal keech diye...desk kharab karna, uske cheezo ko kharab
karna...unhe tease karna...pata nahi lekin boys ke saat unka koi problem nahi hai.
Priya:- Sorry maam..Mein Varun Vihaan se baat karungi...I will take care of it.
At home,
Priya:- Varun...Vihaan tum dono ko kya problem hai...Kyun tum dono hamesha girls ko
pareshaan karte ho...tum dono ki wajah se pata hai mumma ko kya kya sunna padta
hai...Pihu aur Kush ko dekho kabhi bhi unke teacher se koi complaint nahi sunne ko mila
hai.
Varun and Vihaan:- Im sorry mom...hum phir se eisa kuch nahi karenge.
Priya:- haan..last time bhi tum dono ne eise hi kaha tha...last time nahi use pehle 5-6 baar
se tum dono yehi keh rahe ho...
Both are looking down.
Priya:- Pata hai aaj principal ma'am ne bhi bol diya ki agar aage se koi complaint aayi toh
tum dono ko school se nikal denge..Phir dono baithna ghar mein.
Ram who came back from office saw Priya is shouting at Varun and Vihaan.
Ram:- Kya hua...Abb kya kar diya mere bachho ne
Priya:- Khud hi puch lijiye apne pyare bachho se...Aaj phir se complaint aaya school
se...muje toh lagta hai yeh dono bilkul aap par gaye hai...har kisi ladki ko pareshaan karte
hai...unki izaat nahi karte. Suddenly she realized what she said. She stops and looks at Ram.
He is hurt.
Priya:- Raam...He said nothing and went to his room.
Priya enter into the room. She saw Ram is sitting on the bed gazing at the floor.
Priya:- Im sorry Ram...she sit beside him...Im really sorry...mein aapko hurt nahi karna chahti
thi...Im so sorry...she held his chin and turn towards her...idar dekiye na..please. Naraz ho
mujse...Ram looks at her. She hugs him...I m sorry Ram...woh aaj principal maam ne bahut
kuch sunaya toh mere gusse mein mere mooh se nikal gaya...mera aapko hurt karne ka koi
irada nahi tha
Ram:- Its ok Priya
Priya started crying...Im sorry Ram
Ram:- Hey its Ok baba...bhool jaao jo bola...Priya nodded...arre dekho mein naraz nahi hoon.
He kiss her head...mein bachho ko samjata hoon...ok...he wipes her tears...abb no
rona...mein baat karta hoon Varun aur Vihaan se.
Ram enter into VV room.
Ram:- Aap dono papa ke paas aakar baitho. Both sit on either side of Ram. Ram kept his
hand on their shoulders.
Ram:- Abb batao kya baat hai. Kyun tum dono girls ko pareshaan karte ho.
VV said nothing.
Ram:- Tum dono jante ho tum dono ki badmaashi se mummy kitni pareshaan hai. Mummy
ko school mein bulaya...Principal ma'am mummy par gussa kiye. Aap dono ko achha
laga???? Tum dono ghar mein chotte ho issliye mummy jyada pyar aap dono se hi karti hai
na phir kyun aap dono yeh sab karte ho...Papa se kaho kyun tum girls ko pareshaan karte ho
Varun:- Muje ladkiyaan nahi pasand.
Ram:- Lekin kyun Varun
Vihaan:- Girls kitne nakre karti hai
Varun:- Aur woh Jia muje bilkul pasand nahi hai.
Ram:- Achha ek baat batao aap dono Pihu didi se pyar karte ho
VV:- Haan bahut
Ram:- Toh Pihu didi bhi girl hai na...toh phir tum dono Pihu didi se pyar kyun karte ho
VV:- Kyunki Pihu didi hamari sister hai
Ram:- Aur agar kisi ne Pihu didi ko pareshaan kiya toh kya karoge
Varun:- Mein toh uska mooh tod dunga
Ram:- Toh issi tarah woh girls bhi toh kisi ki behen hogi...unke mummy papa ko bhi achha
nahi lagega na ki koi unke bachhe ko tang kare.
VV said nothing.
Pihu entered and said "Rehne dijiye dad aap bhi kise samja rahe hai...dono nahi sudharne
wale.
VV show their tongue making faces.
Ram:- Varun..Vihaan
Vihaan:- Dekiye na Pihu didi ko
Ram:- Pehle tum dono batao kuch samaj mein aaya mein jo samja raha hoon
VV hug Ram and said "we are sorry dad...Abb hum kabhi kisi girls ko pareshaan nahi
karenge.
Ram:- Good boys...abb jaao mummy ke paas mumma gussa hai unhe promise karo ki abb
se tum dono kisi ko pareshaan nahi karoge.
VV kiss their dad and hit Pihu on her head playfully and ran away.
Pihu:- Varun...Dad yeh dono nahi sudharne wale.
Priya room.
Varun and Vihaan entered into the room and stand in front of Priya holding their ears.
Priya looks at them.
Varun:- Im sorry mom
Vihaan:- Im sorry mom. We promise u mom ki aage se hum kisi ko pareshaan nahi karenge.
Varun:- Yes mom.
Priya still show her anger by not talking with them.
VV bend on their knees and look into Priya's eyes and said "Aap chahe toh hame
punishment de dijiye lekin please gussa matt hoyiye...iss baar pakka promise kabhi kisi ko
pareshaan nahi karenge.
Vihaan:- Please mumma..abb toh maan jaayiye.
Priya:- Iss baar pakka promise
VV:- Ek dum pakka
Priya:- teek hai
VV becomes happy. Varun got up and hug Priya tightly and kiss her cheeks and Vihaan
encircle her and kept his head on her lap.
Ram is watching them. Priya looks at him and mimic "thank you
One day Vihaan is laying on Priya lap eating chocolate. Priya is stroking his hair.
Vihaan:- Mom next month mera birthday hai
Priya:- Haan pata hai...tu yeh bata tuje kya chahiye
Vihaan:- Jo mein kahunga aap papa kehkar muje dilaogi
Priya:- Bike ko chodkar kuch bhi
Vihaan turns towards her...No mom...muje bike hi chahiye..Sports bike.
Priya:- Vihaan abhi tum bike chalane laayak nahi hue ho
Kush entered and said "Maa aapne ek dum sahi kaha
Vihaan:- Shut up Bro...maa mein 18 ka hone wala hoon...bacha nahi raha
Priya:- Vihaannn...
Kush:- Mom yeh bacha hi hai issliye toh aapki godhi mein sir rakkar so raha hai..and wink at
Priya.
Vihaan:- Excuse me...mom hai meri...mein kaisi bhi sovu...and btw bhaiyya mein mom se
baat kar raha hoon.
Kush take the small piece from Vihaan's chocolate and make two piece of it. He ate one
piece and other he forcibly fed Priya.
Vihaan:- Maa muje bike chahiye
Priya:- Arre bike kyun chahiye..Kush bhaiyaa ki bike haina
Vihaan:- Kush bhaiyaa ki bike...woh katara bike. Mom usee bike nahi kehte...uss bike ko toh
scrap mein bhi koi nahi lega.
Priya:- Kuch bhi matt bol...mein uss bike mein baith chuki hoon
Vihaan:- Mom jab mera bike aayega na mein aapko sabse pehle bithaunga...tab pata chalega
ride kise kehte hai
Priya:- Rehne de Vihaan tere saat toh mein bike mein baithne se rahi...pata chala tu muje
kahi gadde mein girakar chala gaya.
Kush started laughing.
Vihaan(irritatingly):- Mom aap muje bike dila rahi ho ki nahi
Priya:- Haan baba lekin ek sharth par
Vihaan:- Kya
Priya:- Tuje yeh apne noodles jaise baal kaatne honge...ladkiyon jaisa badakar rakka hai.
Vihaan(shockingly):- What!!! Mom isse style kehte hai aur pata hai isse eisa karne mein meri
kitni mehnat lagi hai...No way mom aap kuch aur boliye...mein apne baal nahi kaatne wala
Priya:- Teek hai toh bike bhi bhool jaa
Vihaan:- Mom this is not done
Priya:- kya...apne kush bhiyaa ko dekh kitne ache dhikte hai...aur apne aap ko dekh
Vihaan:- Kush bhiyaa ache...boring bolo...muje dekho kitne ladkiyaan fida hoti hai mere style
se
Priya:- Vihaan bike chahiye toh baalo ko trim karna hoga.
Vihaan to Kush:- U need a change man!!!...aapki wajah se na hum problem mein aa jaate hai
Kush:- Pata chala na mom mujse jyada pyar karti hai. Vihaan left angrily.
Kush:- Bike dila rahe ho
Priya:- Bike hi dungi warna woh meri jaan kha jaayega.
After few years,
Priya:- Bidai ki rasam shuru hone wali hai aur yeh Ram kahan reh gaye
Kush:- Mom mein dekhkar aata hoon
Priya:- Nahi Kush tu yehi rukk mein janti hoon woh kahan honge.
Priya went to Ram study room. He is standing near the window.
Priya:- Ram aap yahan hai...bidai ki rasam shuru hone wali hai...chaliye sab aapka intezaar
kar rahe hai
Ram:- Tum jaao Priya mein nahi aane wala
Priya:- Nahi aane wale...Matlab...Ram hamari beti shaadi karke jaa rahi hai aap use bida nahi
karenge
Ram:- Tabhi toh kaha na mein neeche nahi aa raha...mein apni beti ko bida nahi kar
sakta...tum jaao aur keh do meri tabiyat teek nahi hai
Priya kept her hand on his shoulder and turn towards her. She saw tears in his eyes.
Priya:- Ram yeh system hai...shaadi ke baad ladki apni pati ke ghar jaati hai. Aapko toh kush
hona chahiye ki Pihu ki nayi zidagi ki shurwat hone wali hai.
Ram:- Mein yeh system ko nahi manta. Hum apni beti ko bada karte hai aur koi ladka aata
hai aur shaadi karke le jaata hai.
Priya:- Achha toh aapne kya kiya tha mere saat...Yaad hai...zabardasti shaadi kiye the
Ram:- Shut up Priya...mein Mazak karne ke mood mein nahi hoon aur tum kab tak muje
meri purani galtiyoon ke liye eise sunati rahogi.
Priya:- Zindagi bhar sunaungi.
Ram said nothing.
Priya:- Achha baba sorry...abb neeche chaliye...she wipes his tears...jaane se pehle apni beti
ko dekh lijiye...uske baad hum iss baare mein discuss karenge
Ram:- Ruko Priya tum mere haat mein aavogi dekhna mein kya karta hai.
Priya:- Beti ki shaadi ho gayi hai bidai hai aur aapko eisi baate karne ka sujj raha
hai...chaliye abb
Ram:- Mein keh raha hoon Priya agar Sammy ne Pihu ka ache se khayal nahi rakka na toh
mein dekhna mein uska mooh todd dunga.
Priya:- Uff...aapko handle karne kitna mushkil hai...Aapko jo karna hai kariye lekin abb
chalenge...
Scene fades...
They lived happily ever after.
Hope u like the story. Thanks for all the support.


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