RaYa FF : Takdeer #THREAD-2# LAST UPDATE ON Page 72 - Page 49

beautifully penned...

Beautiful story n finally sab theek ho hi gaya n Raya ek ho hi gaye n priya got preggy n gave birth to twins boy n love the leap part n end wala pihu bidai thanks for beautiful ff

So beautiful. Nice story. But in real life I don't know if I can ever give the same person a second chance. Exception is Ram though. Loved reading this story

Very nice update...and a beautiful ending...

Hey superb stry i hv read so far
IIts abt very sensible issues of a woman.
Everyone's life is not so gooody goody..
There will b sm serious n sensible issues in some ppl life... its reality. . Thats y i liked this stry very much... 👏
U r a fab writer... u hv the guts to write such a stry...thats y many ppl loved it very much...

Hawww u completed the stry... hmmm ok... but start a new stry very soon..
Eagerly waiting
N coming to the last part ... oh god this esha...
Hamesha raya k beech mai ajati hai..
Priya ne ache se jawab diya usko...
Hmm priya took first step in their relation... 😉
Finally romantic part 😳 loved the way u describsd it

Ohooo vv 😆 naughty boys... lol cute random scenes
Hmmm loved the happy ending...
👏

Thanks to the writer for such a wonderful stry n tq neel for posting it here... fantastic stry...


Waiting to read more stories frm u people. 😉

Beautiful story... finally it ends..
its one of best story i hv ever read n its close reality
Raya become one soul n live happy family..
random scene are so cute.. twins babies, their naughtiness
pihu's marriage n finally Raya's never ending love..
miss this story..but happy its end with an happy note...👏
thanks for giving us such a beautiful story...

Nice ending
Lovely part , but ye tho hai purani baath ko bhulna asaan nahi hai
Keep it up 👏
And love the way it happened

sad coz its last part... but it ended in happy nod.
loved d way priya give back to Esha...
with so much courage she took first step and completed each other...
random scenes r superb...
we miss u ... u r fab writer... if possible start another one ..

wow superb ending,,,,,,finally RaYa ek hogaye air twins bacche bhi hue...thank you for the update and good ending

it ended!!! what!!! oh no... well till last ipdate it seemed tht it will take almost 5-6 updates to get rid of esha...but apne fatak se bhaga diya use... :-/ hmmm... i dont have words to say...dont know why...i want to give a big comment but i wont...as i am blank...this ff has ended and i have to get that in my mind first...but really awesome work...really a great effort and gutts to post such a story...amazing hatts off... superb really