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Posted: 9 years ago
PART-46

Next morning, At 5.30 AM

Ram woke up from sleep. Actually he did not even sleep for a second. He sat in the couch. He is feeling heavy and have headache. He got up, freshens up and went for a walk.

Around 6 o' clock,

Priya stir from her sleep. Her back is paining as she slept in an awkward position. She adjusted herself, suddenly she remember yesterday's night incidence. She looks on other side and saw Ram is not in his place. She recollects everything and her eyes filled with tears.

She knew what she did is wrong and she hurt Ram very badly. She wanted to apologize Ram for whatever happened.

She came out of the bed. She searched everywhere but Ram is nowhere in the house. She freshen up and waiting for Ram.

Around 7 o' clock,

Ram came back from his morning walk. He enters into the room and saw Priya is sitting on the bed. Seeing him Priya got up from her place. She tries to say something but before she says anything Ram went to wash room for freshen up. Priya can sense that Ram is very upset. After some time Ram came back to room.

Priya:- Raa... ram interrupted her

Ram:- Mein India wapas jaa raha hoon. Project start hone wala hai usse pehle mera wahan rehna jyada zaroori hai. Kal ki ticket ke liye kaha hai. Agar aaj sham ki ticket milti hai toh aaj hi chala jaaunga. He said without looking at Priya.

Priya said nothing and Ram came out of the room. Priya sat on the bed, started weeping.

Around 9 o' clock,

Jyothi came to Priya's house. She hears Ram's voice from kid's room. She knocks Priya room twice and slowly opens the door. She saw Priya is sitting on the bed putting her head down. Jyothi entered.

Jyothi:- Oh my god Priya...tum abhi tak bed par hi ho. Aur tumhara phone kahan par hai. Have u noticed subah se kitne call kiye hai. Sorry, eisa toh nahi hai na meine tumhara morning romance disturb kar diya. Aur eise mooh chupakar kya baithi ho. Tell me what's the matter. Ram se confess kiya...Ram ne kya kaha...kuch hua tum dono ke beech. Arre bol na...Jyothi asked her very excitedly.

She shook her little when she hears the sobbing sound. Jyothi become tensed.

Jyothi:- Ohh god kya ho gaya Priya. Jyothi becomes worried. Priya...say something...Priya cry more. Priya...please kuch bolo...muje bahut darr lag raha hai. Ram ne kuch kiya toh nahi na. Priya hug her very tightly. Jyothi allow her to let out her heart and patted her back.

After some time Priya become calm. Jyothi broke the hug and took her face in her palms.

Jyothi:- Abb bolo Priya kya baat hai. She asked with full of concern. Her eyes also filled with tears seeing Priya's state.

Jyothi:- bol na Priya kya ho gaya. Dekh agar nahi batayegi toh mein jaakar Ram se puchungi.

Priya:- Raaa...Raam..Raam

Jyothi:- Kya hua ...Ram ne kuch kiya. Priya nodded in negative.

Jyothi:- Ram se jagda hua...Priya again nodded in negative.

Jyothi:- Phir kya hua Priya.

Priya:- Kal dinner ke baad Ram mere paas aaye the...and she narrated every single detail of what happened. Saying this she hugs Jyothi and crying loudly.

Jyothi:- Bass Priya bass...Its ok...jo hua usse bhool jaao. Isme tumhari koi galti nahi hai. Im sure Ram bhi tumhari condition jante hai aur samajthe bhi hai. Tum bass apna rona bandh karo.

Priya(crying):- Nahi Jyothi. Ram bahut hurt hue hai. Meine Ram ko hurt kiya hai. Ram ne kaha woh wapas jaa rahe hai

Jyothi:- Eisa kuch nahi hoga Priya. Mein Ram se baat karungi.

Priya:- nahi Jyothi...tum Ram se iss baare mein koi baat nahi karogi. Mujse wada karo

Jyothi:- Teek hai...teek hai...lekin pehle muje yeh batao tumhe kya ho gaya achanak. Kyun tum uss purani baat ko abb bhi dil mein lekar ghum rahi ho...bhool jaao Priya..kitne baar toh kaha...jo hus usse bhool jaao aur aage bado.

Bahut kam log hote hai jo apni galti mante hai aur sudharna chahte hai.

Ram tumse bahut pyar karta hai. Sab kuch bhoolkar aage bado Priya. Purani baato ko yaad karke tumhe sirf takleef hi hogi. Mein janti hoon eisi baato ko bhoolna aasan nahi hoga lekin tumhe yeh karna hoga Priya aur mein janti hoon tum yeh kar paaogi.

Priya:- Nahi Jyothi...mere liye yeh itna aasan nahi hai. Meine koshish ki lekin...

Jyothi:- Ek baat batao tum pyar karti ho na Ram se. Tumne Ram ko maaf kar diya na phir tum wahi purani baato ko saamne kyun aane deti ho. Kya tum Ram se alag jee paaogi. Nahi na ...Toh agar tum chahti ho Ram tumhare zindagi mein rahe toh tumhe Ram ke saat milkar aage badna hoga and I know u will do it. U r very strong. Jo ladki itni badi company chala sakti hai woh itni strong toh zaroor hogi na.

Priya said nothing.

Jyothi:- Toh jaao aur Ram se baat karo. Im sure woh tumhari baat zaroor samjenge.

Priya looks at Jyothi.

Jyothi:- Breakfast kiya???

Priya:- Nahi

Jyothi:- Its Ok...bachhe uthe hue hai...Ram ke saat hai. Mein dono ko lekar jaati hoon aur nashta bijwa deti hoon aur tum jaakar Ram se baat karogi.

Priya nodded

Jyothi:- Mein nikalti hoon.

On the way Jyothi heard Ram is talking with someone on phone.

Ram:- Mein kal aa raha hoon. Aakar baat karte hai...Ram turn and saw Jyothi.

Ram:- Mein baad mein call karta hoon and cut the call.

Jyothi:- Seriously!!!! R u going back.

Ram:- Muje lagta hai yehi sahi hai.

Jyothi:- R u joking????...Aapko sach mein lagta hai yeh sahi hoga. I don't want to be rude lekin aaj jo uski eisi haalat hai na woh aapki wajah se hai.

Ram:- correct aur issliye muje lagta hai mera Priya se dur jaana hi sahi hai.

Jyothi:- How convenient na...Priya ko eisi haalat mein chodkar chale jaana jahan usse sabse jyada aapke support ki zaroorat ho...right...aur bachho ka kya???? Custody case lade the na Pihu ke liye usse bhi chodkar jaa rahe ho. U know what aap Priya se pyar hi nahi karte warna aap chodkar jaane ki baat hi nahi karte.

Ram:- Aur aapko kya lagta mere liye yeh itna aasan hai usse chodkar jaana. I love her. Bahut pyar karta hoon. Aap hi batayiye mein kya karu. Kal jo hua uske baad muje darr lagta hai ki meri wajah se Priya ko kuch ho na jaaye. Mein usse eisi nahi dekh sakta.

Jyothi:- Aap jante hai eisi halat mein usse eise chodkar jaane se kya hoga...mein batati hoon. Woh marr jaayegi.

Sir ...Priya bahut sensitive ladki hai. Usse aapke support ki zaroorat hai. Aapke chale jaane se Priya tutt jaayegi aur mein usse fir se eise nahi dekh sakti. Woh aapse bahut pyar karti hai sir aur sirf aap hi usse iss haalat se bahar nikal sakte hai. Uska saat matt chodiye sir.

Jo kuch hua woh uske haato mein nahi tha.Its all of a sudden. Uss past ke baad Priya ne kabhi bhi kisi ko bhi apne itne kareeb aane nahi diya issliye jo hua its quite natural. Woh bahut guilty mehsoos kar rahi hai aur apke chale jaane ki baat sunkar uska rona rukk hi nahi raha hai.

Ram listens silently.

Jyothi:- I am sorry to interfere in ur personal matters... but mai kudh ko rokh nhi payi .. priya ko aise dekhte hue...Muje jo kehna tha keh diya. Abb aapko jo sahi lagta hai woh kariye. Mein bachho ko lekar jaa rahi hoon. She wipes her face and left.

Ram know whatever Jyothi said is correct. He sat for some time and then left to kitchen to prepare some breakfast. He came back with a tray with two cups of tea and veg sandwich.

He enters into the room, kept the tray on the table. Priya is aware of his presence and is gazing down. Ram looks at Priya and goes near her. He sit beside her. Priya is still looking down.

Ram(coolly):- Aaj pure din yehi baithne ka plan hai kya.

Priya said nothing but her eyes filled with tears.

Ram:- Meri kal ki ticket confirm ho gayi hai.

Priya is silent. Ram takes her hand with him.

Ram:- Mere saat nahi chalogi????

Tears fall from her eyes. Ram kisses at the back of her hand and encircles his hand around her shoulder and placed her head near his chest. Priya broken down and started crying.

Priya:- Im sorry Ram. Im really very sorry. Ram also had tears.

Ram:- Common Priya. Its Ok. Koi baat nahi. He caresses her very lovingly.

Priya:- Pata nahi muje kya ho gaya tha. Kyun meine eise react kiya. Im sorry.

Ram:- Meine kaha na koi baat nahi. Jo hua usse bhool jaao. ..Its Ok

Priya:- Meine aapko bahut hurt kiya

Ram:- Nahi Priya eisi koi baat nahi hai. Mein samaj sakta hoon. Galti meri bhi hai.

Priya:- aap muje chodkar toh nahi jaayenge na

Ram:- Never Priya. Kabhi nahi. He kisses her head and hugs her tightly. Priya cry a lot in his arms.

After some time,

Ram broke the hug and wipes her tears with his thump and kiss on her forehead.

Priya:- Aap kal India wapas jaa rahe hai

Ram:- Tumhe lagta hai mein tumhare bagair akele jaaunga. Nahi Priya mein tumhe chodkar kabhi nahi jaaunga. He takes her in a warm hug.

Ram:- Achha ab ek achhi si smile do uske baad breakfast karte hai. Dekho aaj meine apne haato se chai aur breakfast banaya hai. Taste karo aur batao kaisa hai.

Priya smiles and said "Thanks Ram

Ram:- Ur welcome madam...abb nashta kar le. Bahut der ho chuki hai aur muje bahut zoro se bhook bhi lagi hai.

Priya:- Bachhe???

Ram:- Unhe tumhari dosth lekar gayi hai apne ghar.

He fed Priya with his hand and he also ate the food.

Ram:- Aaj ki kya planning hai

Priya:- jaisa aap kahe.

Ram:- Kal raat teek se so nahi paaya. Mein thodi der sona chahta hoon. Kya tum mere paas thode der ke liye baith sakti ho.

Priya become emotional. She swallows a lump in her throat and nodded in affirmative.

Ram lay on the bed and Priya sit beside him. She presses his forehead softly and slowly Ram drove to deep slumber.

She bends towards him and cupped his face and stares for some time and said "Mein sirf aapki bankar rehna chahti hoon..I love u Ram...I love u so much.

Scene faded...

After few days,

As time passes, everything becomes normal between Ram and Priya.

Ram:- Pihu jaakar dekho tumhari mummy taiyaar hui hai ki nahi

Pihu:- Ok papa and she ran towards the room. At the same time Rajat and Jyothi also came.

Jyothi:- Priya kahan hai

Ram:- Kamre mein hai taiyaar ho rahi hai

Jyothi:- teek hai mein Priya ke paas jaati hoon

Ram:- Jyothi!!!

Jyothi:- Haan

Ram:- Thanks...uss din ke liye.

Jyothi:- Ur welcome. Mein sirf Priya ko kush dekhna chahti hoon that's it. Mein jaati hoon

Ram:- Thanks Rajat...Tum yahan ka kaam dekh rahe ho.

Rajat:- Thanks kis baat ki...and by the way aage ke saare projects tum handle karoge. Priya ko thoda rest do.

Priya room,

Jyothi:- Abhi tak taiyaar nahi hui

Priya:- dekh na Jyothi sari neeche se thoda teek kardo na

Jyothi:- abb yeh saare kaam Ram se karwana. She corrected her sari...Aur haan India jaakar muje bahut jaldi kush kabri sunana

Priya:- Kush kabri???? Kiss baat ki

Jyothi:- Yehi ki tu aur Ram hamesha ke liye ek ho gaye hai

Priya:- Jyothi!!!! said while blushing

Jyothi:- Kya Priya...Mein bilkul sahi keh rahi hoon.

Priya:- Pata hai muje eisa lagta hai Ram aajkal mere paas aane mein thoda cautious ho jaate hai

Jyothi:- Yess...kyunki jo kuch hua uske baad Ram tumhe phir se eisa dekhna nahi chahega. Koi baat nahi Ram tumhara pati hai abb tum hi aage bado and I m very confident that u will do it.

Priya nodded and smiled.

Jyothi:- Abb chale..bahar sab wait kar rahe hai.

Priya:- U know what I m gonna miss you Jyothi.

Jyothi:- And I will miss you too.

India,

Raya entered in home after taking blessing from elders.

Krishna:- tum dono kamre mein jaao thoda aaram kar lo. Mein kamre mein chai bijwati hoon.

Raya bedroom,

Ram:- Tum pehle jaakar fresh ho jaao uske baad mein fresh ho jaata hoon.

After freshen up Priya started unpacking her stuff. Ram went to washroom . She is setting her clothes in the wardrobe. Ram came out and saw she is setting her clothes with his clothes. He smiles. He likes it very much. He wanted to hug her from back. She is looking fresh and water droplets from her hair made him frantic. But then he remembers the incidence and he walk away.

Priya has expected he will say something but when he ignored her she felt bad. She finish her work and came back to room.

Ram:- Mein office jaa raha hoon. Sham ko aane mein late ho jaayega. Mera wait matt karna. Apna dinner kar lena. Saying this he left.

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Posted: 9 years ago
let the beautiful journey between raya starts .beautiful update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update.
You expressed Priya's turmoil beautifully.
Please continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Another wonderful update
Glad that Jyothi put some brain in RAYA... hehe

Or was it u...lol

Pls update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
lv d updt...i hp priya wl tk 1st step dz tym...
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Posted: 9 years ago
very nice update
pls continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
beautiful update abb jaldi se RaYa ko ek kardo intezar bahut hogaya yarrr...continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
now that's a really nice update...so finally they are behaving normally...nice... :-) priya felt bad and ram is hesitating a lot...and he must...and he feels so... hmmm...uff their hesitation...there pure love...their desire...everything In... merged in tension...hmmm...chalo waiting for next... :-) :-D
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Posted: 9 years ago
Finally sab theek hogaya raya ke beech all thanks to jyothi now waiting when raya sorry priya ll confess to him she love him n want to take this relationship forward plsss update sooon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Slow and steady getting there...RaYa need to communicate more instead of going around in circles. Nicely penned!👏

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