New OS Meant to be together pt 5 on pg 12 25.3.17 - Page 9

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Posted: 8 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: Mitwaa

Awesome update
But why u stop at this situation
Plzz update fast
Eagerly awaiting for for update



Thank you sooo much... i will update next part soon...😊😊😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: LovingRaYa

It was wonderful yaar

Especially RaYa little bit of romance between the game and icing on the cake was Priya dance on the song which irritated Ram but u ended it on high note RaYa kissing each other.



Thank you sooo much dear... thank you for liking and lovely comments... 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 5:
Recap : Here in raya bedroom, priya entered fidging her pallu in between her fingers, ram stood near window looking at sky.. priya in slow pace reach him... her hands are shivering with fear... she keeps her hand on his shoulder
Priya with trembling voice : mr... mr. kapoor.. theres no response..., priya tightens her grip on his shoulder.. Mr.kapoor.. please am sorry, mein mein jaan bhujke nehi ki... majaak... all of sudden ram turns and attacks on her lips... priya didn't expected this and her eyes are wide opened, ram closed his eyes busy in sucking her lips... finally priya comes out from shock , forcefully pushes ram away..
Priya wiping her lips glaring angrily at ram : ye kya tha... Kya majak hai ye ...
Ram placing his palms on her shoulders : ye majak nehi... sajaa hai... jo niche tumne ki hai uski sajaa...
Priya : sajaa... wo bhi mujhe...? Meine kya kiya...?
Ram : ithni bholi math bano... mein sab samjhtha hu... kya ... mein kya karu ram mujhe Buddha mil gaya... hmm.. steps towards her with a wicked smile...
Priya stepping back.. blushing... her back bumps with the wall...she stops..looks straight in to his eyes... stammering : wo...wo...
Suddenly ram places his both hands on wall either sides so that priya cant escape...
Priya in a mock anger... holds his arms and pushes slightly... with so much attitude she goes to prepare bed ..: toh... stands crisscrossing her hands
Ram stepping towards her : toh isliye ye saja... ( caressing her lips with his thumb )... priya shyly turns aside... ram hugs her from back... keeping his chin on her shoulders
Ram : tum chaahe mujhe kuch bhi kahe..buddha ya khadoos, dinosaur kuch bhi... lekin iss janam ke liye mein he tumhare ram.. pathi paremeshwar .. toh jaise bhi hu... tumhara hu...
Priya turns facing him.. cupping his face in her palms.. : sirf iss janam ke liye nehi... meri har ek janam ke jeevansaathi sirf aapko he maangungi bhagwan se... waise 2 baar shaadi ki hai mein aapse... toh poore 14 phere ... toh ek janam ka nehi janam janam ka hai ye hamara rishtha... she pecks on his forehead... it's a pure kiss... symbol of their togetherness, love, affection, relation... both looking at each other with lots of love...
In hall everyone very tensed...
KK : ithni der hogayi priya ram ko leke kyu nehi aayi...
Natasha: maa aapko toh patha haina bhai ke gusse ke baaaremein...
Daadi : ussi baath ka toh dar haina choti... patha nehi meri priya puttar kaise hai..
Here in room... ram caressing priya cheeks with his thumb fingers... priya closed her eyes she holds his both palms... open her eyes..
Priya : mr. kapoor..., abhi nehi... abhi humein bahaar jaana chahiye... sab tensed hongey... She steps towards the door.. at some point she could go further because her saree pallu end in rams grip... Ram stood there with a wicked smile... priya holding her pallu keeping her palm on shoulder.. turns her head and looks at him... ram nods his head saying no... priya blushing to the core... still hiding her blush... pleads him to let her go... whenever priya pleads him.. everytime he pulls her towards him by saree pallu... this step continued till priya came back inside room..., again ram pulls her... both are very close to each other... ram nods his head saying no... ram nearing to her lips... priya smirkingly... carefully takes off her saree pallu from his grip... ram expecting something else... slowly priya steps back with in few secs she burst in to laughter... ram opens his eyes... even he also starts laughing... Priya about to go... ram in a fast pace... again hold her saree pallu... wrapping around him... he swirls towards priya... hugs her from behind covering her pallu on both of them... keeping his chin on her shoulder... moves aside her hair... gives a peck on her neck..., tightens his grip on her waist... Priya feeling heebie jeebies... priya trying hard to control her feelings... as she know in living room everyone waiting for them... ram busy in doing his work... Crushing her ribs..hugs her tightly... priya yelps in pain... she pushes ram hardly.. ram steps back... priya biting her lower lip to control pain , she crisscrossed her arms... and blowing air on both arms where ram held her...
Ram concernedly steps towards her .. but priya moves back... while she step back vase on the table fell down making a huge noise... outside everyone now became very tensed... thinking don't know whats happening inside room... In room, both raya tries to pick up the broken glass.. in the process... one of the glass piece pricks in priyas hand... Rams shouts louder... priyaaa... what are you doing yaar ? in stern voice... ram takes out his handkerchief and wraps on her wound...
By then almost everyone stood outside the room... Inside room.., again priya tries to pick up the glass pieces... again ram shouts in anger...
Ram : don't touch priya... don't you dare... just step back... kehraha hu na... haath math lagao.. warna mujhse bura koi nehi... almost ram in tears...
Now everyone panicking hearing rams voice... finally daadi decides to see whats happening... she knocks on the door... no response... second time knocks became very louder
Ram angrily : kaun hai ? ithni zorse kyu knock karrahe hai ?
Daadi speaks up : golu puttar... mein hu... darwaza kholo puttar..ithni awaaze kyu aarahi hai andar se... kuch hai toh baithke baath karenge na puttar...
Inside the room... tears almost ready to jump out from rams eyes... seeing priya in pain... ram sit beside her with first aid box takes out cotton and removes cloth from her wound and starts to do clean her wound... priya feeling very bad at rams upset face... few secs before some love and lust in his eyes... now there is pain in his eyes...
KK : priya kam se kam tum toh darwaza kholo beta...
Ram feeling very disturbed, actually words are not coming out from his throat..
Priya wipes her tears.. : maa hum theek hai... aap log jayiye ... hum aajayenge..
Outside neha thinks for a while : rishabh tum aur vikram daadi aur aunty ka khyal rakho... mein abhi aayi... she lefts from there... thinking she will get in to the room through balcony... she takes out ladder laid on the ground... she enters to the balcony... there she saw..
By then ram wrapping her wound with bandage... priya watching him lovingly... finally he knots the bandage... keeps aside first aid box... looks at priya
Ram : dard horahi hai kya ??? mein doc ko bulau ??? priya nods her head saying no..
Ram : dekho kithna khoon nikal gayi... ek baar doc se consult karenge... he about to call the doc number... priya gets up and hugs him from behind...
Priya : sorry... meri wajah se aapka mood kharab hogaya ... ram sulking his face
Ram : shhh... don't say sorry... aur meri mood.. sab uski wajahse hua.. am sorry... mein.. mein... ram hugs her tightly... a tear comes out from his eyes... even priya also in tears.. again they hear knocks.. priya comes out of hug... wiping his tears...
Priya : ab apna mood theek kariye... bahaar chalthe sab bahuth tensed hai... thinks to cheer up his mood and am sorry aapko Buddha kehne ke liye... aap toh aap toh... chote bacche jaise rorahe ho... and burst in to laughter... ram also smiles...
Ram blushingly : tum... tum... bahuth buri ho... accha hua tumne sorry boldi... you must feel sorry... jo tumne mere mood ki band bajayi na...
Priya cheeks turns in to crimson red : sharam kijiye mr.kapoor... aap toh aise behave karrahe hai jaise ki kal he hamari shaadi huyi hai... ithna... ek bhi mauka nehi chodrahe hai aap...
Ram mockingly : aur tum... tum toh aise Sharmaa rahi ho jaise nayi naveli dulhan ho... 5 saal ki beti hai hamari... mein paas aatha hu toh tumhe peeche peeche jaane ki kya jarurat thi... aur ye sab nehi hotha... abtak toh... winks at her..
Priya blushingly : hatt... peeche nehi jau toh kya aapki baahon mein aau??? Hadh hai mr.kapoor... ab chaliye darwaaza kholiye...
Ram with a puppy face : priya... sochlo... tum ek baar iss kamre se baahar jaogi toh meri biwi ghar ki bahu banjaathi ho... mujhe bhool jaathi ho... isliye mujhe tumhare saath.. before he completes the sentence.. priya her palm on his mouth..
Priya : kya hogaya aapko... samjha kijiye na... she hugs him... neha , vikram, mummy,paapa kal subah nikal rahe hai... unke saath bhi time spend karna haina... kal se mere saara waqt sirf aapke liye... aapke saath... I promise... aap jithni der chahiye uthni der aap mujhe apne saath rakhsakthe hai... aap jo bolenge mein wo karungi... aapke pass aane ke liye mujhe koi bahaana ki jarurat nehi padegi... samjha ki jiye.. agar neha ko patha chalegi na... toh wo pagal sabke saamne hamare romance daily soap banayegi... aur mujhe ithna chidayegi kya batau... so pls sirf aaj ki raath ... wo bhi bas kuch ghante (hours) hai subah hone mein... waise bhi ab maa aur daadi yahan hai toh... peehu toh jyada waqt unke saath spend karthi hai toh... aap samajh rahe haina... winks...
Ram smilingly : hmm... hugs her... she too responds hugs him tightly...
Priya frees herself from hug : toh ab chalein... ... ram nods his head.. walking hand in hand... before ram open the door... priya entwines her fingers with his... ram looks at her... sweet and simple eye lock... Priya in slow pace lifts entwined hand... pecks on his hand... says I love you ram.. soo much.. ram smiles...takes her in to his hug... Both stood there closing their eyes...
Neha witnessing everything from balcony... She thinks to do some mischevious thing.. so she in cat paws enters in to the room ... with out disturbing raya... opens the door... every one was very tensed so ready with so many questions but what they saw... they are some how relieved in next sec they are feeling very embarrassed... KK and daadi they turned their face aside...
Neha stood behind ram... neha winks to Natasha and sowmya... both Natasha and sowmya stand behind priya... neha silently counts, 1..2...3... one time neha near ram ear says bhow... and sowmya, Natasha in priya ears... priya scares and hugs ram tightly tightly closing her eyes... ram shocked... everyone was there... And these two...
Ram murmuring : margaye... ye darwaza kaise khulgaya...
Neha teasingly : oye hayeee dekho ithni pyar hai... arey mrs.priya ram kapoor ab toh aapke pathidev ko chodiye... ghar ke bade hai ... aapki mummy, paapa , devar, devrani sab hai... Sharma se kapoor kya bangayi... bilkul sharmaa nehi rahi ho... good improvement... priya hurriedly gets out from his hug... she is very nervous that how to face them... With out looking at anyone she runs from there hiding her face...
Its time for nevik, and sharmas return journey... priya thinking that somehow everybody forgot about yesterdays incident especially neha and gang..., she thought that she escaped from their teasings... priya in kitchen packing food for nevik and sharmas... ready to leave... every one bidding bye to each other .., kids hugs priya.., peehu lil upset that she will be alone now... but somehow they convinced her...
Priya holding shipra hand : maa thodi din aur rukiye na..., please neha... vikram ko office hai jaane do... tum aur bacche ruk jaao na... before shipra gives reply...
Neha teasingly : sacchi... priya... Sochlo...
Priya : stop it yaar ... kya sochna hai kyu sochna hai... pagal...
Neha calls Natasha : choti ek baar idhar aao.. nuts comes to her... stood infront of her...
Neha : nutzz tumhe patha haina kya karna hai... ye meri zubaan ki baathein nehi... kapoor khandaani ki bahu aur aapki beti ki dil ki zubaan hai uncle... toh mein hum r.ram kapoor.. aur nutz mrs. Priya ram kapoor toh sun lijiye...
Priya giving confused look stood there...
Neha turns aside... nutz holds her hand... and says : priya... sochlo... tum ek baar iss kamre se baahar jaogi toh meri biwi ghar ki bahu banjaathi ho... mujhe bhool jaathi ho... isliye mujhe tumhare saath.. before he completes the sentence.. neha keeps her palm on nutz mouth..
Nutz : kya hogaya aapko... samjha kijiye na... nutz hugs neha... neha , vikram, mummy,paapa kal subah nikal rahe hai... unke saath bhi time spend karna haina... kal se mere saara waqt sirf aapke liye... aapke saath... I promise... aap jithni der chahiye uthni der aap mujhe apne saath rakhsakthe hai... aap jo bolenge mein wo karungi... aapke pass aane ke liye mujhe koi bahaana ki jarurat nehi padegi... samjha ki jiye.. agar neha ko patha chalegi na... toh wo pagal sabke saamne hamare romance daily soap banayegi... aur mujhe ithna chidayegi kya batau... so pls sirf aaj ki raath ... wo bhi bas kuch ghante (hours) hai subah hone mein... waise bhi ab maa aur daadi yahan hai toh... peehu toh jyada waqt unke saath spend karthi hai toh... aap samajh rahe haina... winks..
Priya closing her eyes tightly : shhh... hiding her face in between her palms... tries to run from there but sowmya blocks her way...
Sowmya : arey bhabhi ... kahaan chaldiye... Ole ole sharmaa rahe ho... nayi naveli dulhan ki tarah... Aapki 5 saal ki beti hai...
Shipra, daadi, kk, comes to her... Blesses : hamesha aise he khush raho... baghwan saare khushiya teri jholi mein bharde...
Neha comes to priya : toh priya mein soch rahi thi ki thodi din aur ruke yahaan pe... Rams intervenes : koi jarurath nehi... wahan vikram akela rehna padega... toh tu chal rahi hai... waise socho agar tum paas nehi rahogi toh vikram kahin kisi aur ke saath...
Vikram yells : abbey oye marwaayega kya mujhe... tumhare romance ke liye meri zindagi barbaad karoge kya...
Neha : rehne do baby... ye dono na jithna buddhu, boring hum samajh rahe the na uthni buddhu aur boring nehi... kaafi romantic hai... neha entwines her fingers with priya fingers and gives a peck... now priya shocked... neha runs from there... saying I LOVE YOU RAAM...
Priya in fake anger : Neha ki bacchi ... chodungi nehi mein tumhe... ruk... ruk... everybody covers neha. Behind them... priya stops running behind her...
Finally every one hugs... group hug...
THE END...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#84
cutest OS I have ever read. so so lovely yaar. just loved Neha. mujhe toh tarana ki yaad AA gayi. how sweet r all of them. Thanks for pm.
do write more on RaYa.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#85
Beautiful end of d OS.. enjoyed evry bit of story
Loved neha's teasing n raya's everlasting love n romance..
Thnx for d pm... do write more
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Posted: 8 years ago
#86
Really soo romantic n caring update after watching the promo of ktbm cant for web series
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Posted: 8 years ago
#87
Nice update
But why u stopstory
Pplzz continues
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Posted: 8 years ago
#88
Awesome Yar...pls do write more stories on RaYa
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Posted: 8 years ago
#89
Beautiful ending to a superb story.
You're an Amazing Writer.
Do write more on raya.
Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 4
what a star but really sad ending... like where you stopped was most in perfectly moment for sure... I m not loving it for sure just the end I was expecting little naughty more but the whole part was awesome the way Golu behaved front of girls then the game then Priya getting right chit & song for Ram but poor he that was not so pleasant for him for sure... would have surly like it little more if I got the chance well over all it was fantastic update like always you have awesome & mind blowing with fantastic start n end...

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