RaYa SS :Kaho na Pyar Hai part 13updated on page 18 - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice update :) and really thnks fr pm... wht th heck. .ashwin appointed his men as rams servant and now he is giving him frugs!! sh*t plzzz ye priya ko jald pata chal jae... and next soon plzzz...priya proposed him!! :-D cute update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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super,,Ashwin to gadha hi pehale use is story se bhagado plsss and continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Pls yar don't make RAM look bad in front of others make that ashwin expose soon in this nice update pls continue soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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ram is so enthusiastic on seeing Priya in his office. both accepts each other. ashwin KO goli maaro. pl continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ram is being happy with Priya yes and so is Vik Neha for him and his mom but the one dose of drug is effecting Ram and he is talking with attitude to his father.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hiii every one i am glad that you are lking my stories thank you very much.
Here is next update hope you will like this.
Part 11
Amar ji : hadd kr di is ladke na kya kru iska pta ni Priya ne isme kya dekha jo ise apne life partner banana chathi hai.Oh god please help her.
Ram and Priya in traning area.
Ram : Hey Priya kya itna man lga kr kaam kr rhi ho kya krogi tum mere sath aao na.
Priya : Ram shyad tum bhool rhe ho ye company mere Dad ki nahi hai i am only employee here.
Ram : oh really baby shyad tum bhool rhi ye company tumhare hone wale husband ke Dad ki hai yani ki meri yani ki tumhari.
Priya : plz Ram dont distrub me aur kaise bete ho tum tumhe ab responsibilities leni chaiye but tum ho ki...
Ram : cut her in middle please ab tum shuru mat ho jana mein ja rha hu.
Priya : kahi nahi kaoge tum yahi rho and learn what they are telling us.
Ram : i cant priya.Its so boooring.
Priya : for me plz...
Ram : ok dont blackmail me like this.
Ram also start taking interest with priya and he also learn how to work.
Now its lunch time.
Ram : priya dehko mene tumhari baat mani ab tumhe bhi meri ek baat manai hogi.
priya : ok but kya.
Ram : tum yahi wait kro mein bs abhi aya.
Priya : ok but come soon.
Ram : go to his dad cabin.
Ram : papa aap mujhe apna card dijiye na.
amar ji : kyu tumhare pass hai na fir mera kyu.
Ram : mujhe pta hai aap mere account me jyada paise transfer nahi kroge toh mein unhe abhi kyu spend kru.Dekhiye apke kehne par mein aj office aya aur mene trainig period bhi attend kiya ab lunch time ha toh mein priya ko bhar lunch par le jana chatha hu plz aap mna mt karna and plz card de do.We will back on time plz papa.
Amar ji : smile only mujhe sb pta hai kyu ab tak tu office me hai kyu training session attend kiya.
Ram : ohh..really...vase acha hi hai ... its okk de do na.
Amar ji : give him ok ye lo but come soon.
Ram : yes i will.
Ram come to priya.
Ram : come priya????
Priya : arrey but where??
Ram : uff these girls just come with me.
Priya : but uncle.
Ram : uncle ka beta tum se bol rha hai chalo and drag priya with him.
Ram stop car in a five star hotel and open gate for priya.Priya step out.
Priya : toh tum mujhe yhalunch ke laye ho.
Ram : yes,come i am very hungry.
Ram and Priya give order for lunch and waiting.
Ram feel like someone is keeping watch on them.
Ram : Priya come lets go from here.
Priya : arrey but lunch??????
Ram : stand up come.
Priya : but what happen suddnely???
Ram : kuch nahi and hold her hand and call waiter and tell him to cancel their order and take priya with him.
Ram and priya come back to Kapoor Industries.
Priya : Ram kya hua tha.
Ram : kuch nahi priya tum jao.
Priya : aise kaise kuch nahi hum vha lunch ke liye gye the to fir...
Ram : cut her in middle and little louldly meine kha na kuch nahi hua hai aur har baat tumhe batani jaruri hai kya tum jao.
Priya : go from there.
Ram made a call.
Ram : i want to meet you now tell me where i should come.
???? : to me strange ok come to my house.
Ram leave from there.
Ram enter in a house.
Ram : Ashwin...Ashwin...
Ashwin : Hey ram come sit...
Ram : mein thik hu.Tum chathe kya ho.Picha kr rhe ho mera.Aaj hotel me meine dekha tumhe samje kya chathe ho tum.
Ashwin : oops pakda gya isi liye tum chle gye vha se vaise Priya was looking so beautiful.and yes you know i want only Priya.
Ram : Ashwin i told you earlier also ki aisa me hone nahi duga.
Ashwin : i promise you Ram mein tumhare samne se priya ko lekar jauga and u cant do anything.
AT THE SAME TIME IN KAPOOR INDUSTRIES
Amar ji : Priya beta Ram kha hai.
Priya told amar ji everything.
Amar ji call Ram.
Amar ji : Ram kha ho tum?
Ram : vo mujhe kuch kaam tha mein bs aa hi rha hu.
Amar ji : ok come soon.
Ram : yes dad.
Ashwin : vaise bhaut chinta hai tumhare papa ko tumhari you can go now.
Ram : just remember one thing tumhari dushmani mujhse hai toh jo kuch bhi tum krne ki soch rhe ho mere hi sath krna kisi aur ke sath nahi.
Ashwin : chalo Ram mein tumhari ye wish puri jarur karuga.
Ram leave from there and reach KI.
Ram go to priya.
Ram : tumne lunch kiya ??????
Priya didnt respond.
Ram : priya...
Priya : har baat tumhe batani jaruri hai kya.
Ram : oh toh ye baat hai i am sorry Priya vo mein Ashwin se milne gya tha.
Priya : What???? But why?
Ram : tell her everything.
Priya : Ram tum Ashwin se dur rahoge vo kuch bhi kr sakta hai.
Ram : Ralax priya mein kuch nahi karuga but tum ye baat dad ko mt batana prmise me.
Priya : ok,mujhe bhook lagi hai and i know tumne bhi kuch nahi khaya hoga.
Ram : yes mujhe bhi bhaut bhook lagi hai chalo canteen chalte hai.
RaYa had their lunch there.
Now working hours are over everbody is leaving.
Priya : ok ram i should leave now.
Ram : wait i am also coming i will drop you.
Amar ji : ni ram you are not going home now but if you want to drop priya you can but come back.
Ram : but...working hours are over and i am very tired i will go home directly.
Amar ji : meine ek baar kha na...
Ram : Priya plz wait for me outside.
Priya : ok and leave from there.
Ram : plz dad let me go na dekhiye aaj mene man laga kr kaam kiya plz jane do na.
Amar ji : ok go now but reach home directly dont go anywhere.
Ram : i promise and leave.
Ram reach KM after droping Priya at Sharma House.
Rishabh : good evening bhai.
Ram : good evening rishabh.
Rishabh : kaisa tha apka first day.
Ram : thik tha.
Krishna ji : aa gya thak gya hoga mera bachha ja tu room me ja mein tere liye coffee bhejti hu.
Ram : thanx maa.
Krishna ji : Bansi Ram keliye coffee bna do.
BK : ji mam.
BK prepare coffee at moment robin come.
Robin : me de ate hu.
BK : ok and leve from kitchen.
Robin mix drugs and give it take it to ram room.
Ram : ahh coffee i really need it.
Robin left from there and call Ashwin.
Robin : sir aaj ki dose bhi de di.
Ashwin : good.kisi ko shak toh nahi hai na.
Robin : no sir
Ashwin : ok and hang up the call,
Ashwin : tumhari hi wish thi ram lo me puri kr rha hu.
Ram sleep after some time.
Amar ji come home.
Amar ji : ram aa gya.
Krishna ji : ha aa gya bhaut thak gya hai kya kraya hai us se.s
Amar ji : kuch nahi kiya hai ha training session toh attend kiya hai.
krishna ji : but aap ne us se jyada kaam mt karana.
Amar ji : stare at her and leave.
Krishna ji : mene aisa kya bol diya.
2 months passed everyhing is going smoothly.
One fine evening Ram come back from office and ask for coffee.Bk prepared coffee for ram and take to his ram.
Ram : take a sip BK ye kya hai kaisi coffee banai hai aaj.
BK : sir roj aisi hi banta hu.
Ram : robin kha hai aaj.
BK : sie vo bhar gya hai.
Ram : ok you can leave now.
Ram drink coffee.His head start paining because he didnt get drugs.Actually he dont know but his body need drugs.
Ram : (loudly) Maa...Maa...Rishabh...
Krishna ji and Rishabh come to his room.
Krishna ji : ram beta kya hua tujhe.
Ram : Maa head is paining like hell even my total body.
Krishna ji : Rishabh you please call doctor and your papa.
Rishabh : jiii maa.
Rishabh call doctor and inform Amar ji.
Doctor come and check Ram Amar ji also come.
Amar ji : doctor kya hua hai ram ko.
Doctor : kya apka beta drugs leta hai.
Rishabh : immediately no doctor.
Amar ji : ye kyu puch rhe hai.
Doctor : just symptoms are like this when drugs addicted not get drugs their condition is like this but i am taking his blood for sample whatever it is will come in reports.
Amar ji : ok doctor.
Doctor take ram blood for test and leave.
Ram : Maa coffee...
Krishna ji : ha me lati hu.She prepared coffee and bring it.
ram : take a sip...maa robin aya kya.
Krishna ji : nahi...
Ram : maa plz call him robin jo coffee roj lata hai mujhe vo hi chaiye ye nahi.
Amar ji : Robin...
Ram : yes dad plese call him otherwise i will die.
Krishna ji : wht at are you saying Ram.
Ram : plz maa all the time he is packing in pain.
Rishabh : papa kahi aisa toh nahi Robin hi bhai ki coffee me drugs mix kr deta tha and today he is not here thats why bhai is behaving like this because bhai didnt get drugs.
Amar ji : Shocked WHAT???????
Rishabh : i think we should search.
Rishabh and Amar ji search everywhere but they didnt get anything.
Ram condition is getting worst.
Amar ji try to call robin but his all is connected.s
Amar ji recieve a call.
Amar ji : hello...
Ashwin : hello uncle mein Ashwin.
Amar ji : kyu phone kiya.
ashwin : yahi batane ke liye ki jiska ap wait kr rhe hai vo nahi ayega means ROBIN.
Amar ji : ye kya bakwas hai.
Ashwin : Bakwas nahi uncle ji sach hai vo kya hai apke bete ko drugs chaiye.You can do anything for your son na comeon he want drugs do bring for him.
Ashwin : hahahaha and hang up the call.
Amar ji come quickly to Ram room and see him helplesly.

So sorry for late update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb yar Kavya continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Fab kaavya but hope priya can bring our ram back to normal plsss continue soon plsss
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Posted: 9 years ago
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superb.ye kamina ashwin..nalayak.. isko khatam Karo. one thing I want to tell u. I think it happens by mistake. but every time u send me same pm for four to five times.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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woah!! now thats a twist!! ram is now an addict and here that swine ashwin -_- grr... kill him man... plzzz next soon...i am sure priya will take ram out from this trauma.. :-)

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