RaYa SS :Kaho na Pyar Hai part 13updated on page 18 - Page 11

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Posted: 9 years ago

Part 9
awww awesome Ram proposes Priya so nicely I just love his style he was too cute n mind blowing in his terms awww Priya even said yes to him too good now moving for next do Ashwin didn't do anything yet... still
I enjoyed it a lot moving for next...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Part 10
OMG Ashwin is really thinking something big don't know what he is planning now hope not any kind of disaster but I guess as he is quite from so long he must be upto something big ... hope Kapoor's found abt Robin soon... why AK is delay RaYa marrige this I m not seeing good sign... here Ram is joining company just for Priya awww my lover boy... RaYa r so magical too good awesome mind blowing too good so
I enjoyed it a lot moving for next...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Part 11
awww RaYa's small cute moment was really enjoyable too good awesome mind blowing I so loved it.. but what Ash did was beyond the imagination he made Ram drug addicted ohh goes now at will happen next.. so questions still no answers as u didn't updated plz update this soon waiting for it to get continue plz do it now... or at lest reply...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Hello frnds I am so sorry for making you wait so long again and again but i am very busy now a days.I know you all are waiting eagerly but i am so busy in my personal life so sorry frnds i dont like making you wait so long.
Here is next Part
PART 12
Krishna ji : Kya hua hai Ram ko...
Amar ji : no reply...
Krishna ji : boliye na kya hua hai mere bete ko.
Amar ji : ye sab kuch drugs ki vajah se ho rha hai He is addicted of DRUGS.
Krishna ji : what???????? She become numb.Ram...Ram ye sab kar rha tha aur hum logo ko kuch pta hi nahi chala.
Amar ji : nahi Krishna isme Ram ki koi galti nahi hai ye sab kuch toh ashwin ne kiya hai.
Krishna ji : Kya??? Kyu koi bhi mere bete ko kabhi kush nahi dekh sakta pehle Ram apki vajah se aisa tha bacpan me kabhi use Baap ka pyar nahi mila aur fir jb Priya uski jindagi me ayi usne mere bete ke andar ke insaan ko jagaya.Use bhi pyaar ka ashaas hua ab jb mera beta apni jindagi jeena chatha hai to ye ashwin aa gya.Lekin ab aur nahi ab mere bete ke sath kuch galat nahi hoga.
Amar ji : kya krne wali ho tum ????
Krishna ji : Mujhe pta hai mere bete ko thik sirf Priya ka pyar kr sakta hai.
Krishna ji call priya.
Priya : hello...
Krishna ji : hello priya mein Ram ki maa bol rhi hu...
Priya : Namaste aunty ji...
Krishna ji : namaste beta,tum is waqt kha ho jha pr bhi ho plz kapoor mansion aa jao abhi.
Priya : achanak se kya hua sb thik hai na.
Krishna ji : bs tum aa jao i am waiting for you.
Priya : jii i am coming. and hang up the call.
Priya to herself ye kya hua aunty ko mujhe itni jaldi bulaya hai jarur Ram ne hi kuch kiya hoga hadd kr di is ladke ne chalo priya ab vahi jakr pta chalega kya kiya hai tumhare Ram ne.
IN KAPOOR MANSION
1 security guard bring 1 courier to Amar ji.
Security : Sir ye courier aya hai apke liye.
Amar ji : ok and take it.
Amar ji open it and see drugs he is shocked.He open the card and read it.
Mujhe pta tha ki aap drugs nahi la sakte apne bete ke liye isliye meine hi bhej diye ab apka beta thik ho jyega ap ek bar usko de dijiye na dekhiye kitni takleef mein hai aj apka beta sirf apni zid ki wajah se jo mein kabhi puri nahi hone duga.
Krishna ji : kya hai isme
Amar ji : kuch nahi hai.
Krishna ji : arrey bataiye na...
Amar ji : tumhe ek baar bola samaj nahi aa rhai hai kya kuch nahi hai aur tum Ram ko akela mat chordo he is not in his sense kuch kar le vo apne aap ko.
Krishna ji : ha mein jati hu.
Amar ji : loudly Driver gadi nikalo... and left from there.
Aftersometime Priya reach KM.
BK take her to Ram room.
Krishna ji : happily Priya tum aa gyi dekho na ram ko kya ho gya hai.
Priya : she see Ram is sleeping now,Aunty ji kya hau hai ap mujhe bataiye.
Krishna ji told everything to priya.
Priya get shocked.
Priya : What!!!!! How can Ashwin do this.Tears come in priya eyes knowing the truth and seeing Ram infront of her.
Priya : Doctor aunty ji hum sab milkar ram ko is sab se bahar layege ap please chinta mat kijiye.We have to consult the Doctor ASAP.
Krishna ji : we consult priya tomorrow report will come then treatment will go according to reports.
Priya : ok aunty
Krishna ji : abhi toh ram so rha hai lekin jab uthaga toh fir se...
Priya : kuch nahi hoga mein hu na.
ON THE OTHER HAND
Amar ji come to Ashwim father office MR.Mahesh singh.
Mahesh ji : Hello MR.Amarnath kapoor ji kaise hamari yaad ayi apko.
Amar ji : throw the packet on his table iski wajah se apke nalayak bete ne mere bete ki jindagi kharb kar di aisa hi lag rha hoga usko but usko bta dena mere bete ko kuch nahi hoga uske sath uski family hai aur sbse badi takat uska pyaar uske saath hai meri hone wali bahu Priya.
Mahesh ji : ye ap kya bol rhe hai ab kya kiya Ashwin ne vo aisa kuch nahi kr sakta.
Amar ji : vo toh ap jakar apne bete se puchiye aur ha jis din vo mujhe mil gya na i swear i will not leave him.
Abhi bhi waqt hai Mr,Mahesh singh apne bete ko sambhal lijiye.and left from there.
IN KAPOOR MANSION
Ram wake up and he badly need dose,He know no one in KM will give him drugs he close door from inside and run away from window from KM.
Priya and krishna ji is sitting in hall.
Krishna ji : i will be back after checking Ram once.
Priya : ok
Krishna ji : knock door but didnt get any answer so she open the door but find it lock.
Krishna ji : Ram...Ram open the door...finding no answer She call priya.Priya come.
Krishna ji : Priya dekho ram is not opening door.kahi usne kuch...
Priya : nahi aunty ji let me try.
Priya : Ram...Ram open the door.Aunty duplicate keys hai apke pass.
Krishna ji : ha bansi ke pass hai...and call BK he bring duplicate keys.
Priya open the door but noone is inside.
Krishna ji : kha gya ye ab.
BK : madam window i think sir yha se bahar gye hai.
Priya : oh god!!!!!!!!
Krishna ji call in gate security and they tell Ram has gone from KM.
Krishna ji call Amar ji and tell him everything.
Amar ji come home.
Amar ji : tell every security person Ram should not go outside from KM without his permission keep this in your mind.
Amar ji to krishna ji we have to wait till Ram come back.
Amar ji call Doctor and tell him everything about Ram drug addicted and ask him to start treatment from tommorow onward.
ON OTHER HAND , At Ashwin house
Mahesh ji come angirly and call Ashwin.
Mahesh ji : kya kiya tumne Ram ke sath?????
Ashwin :ky...kya kiya matlb mene kuch nahi kiya.
Mahesh ji slap him.Mujhse juth mat bolo samje.
Sunita(Ashwin mother) : ye kya kar rhe hai ap...
Mahesh ji : aaj nahi sunita chup rho tum is nalayak ne aaj kisi ki jindagi kharab kar di hai.You know na ashwin me kis ke bare me baat kar rha hu.
Ashwin : Ha...I will destroy him usne mjhse mera pyar cheena hai.
Mahesh ji : Pyar really beta kya tum sach me priya se pyar krte ho bilkul nahi aur tum kisi ko majbur nahi kr sakte tumhe pyar karne ke liye.
Ashwin : kuch bhi ho...
Mahesh ji : bs mein kuch nahi sun na chatha tum kl yha se ja rhe ho apni packing kar lo.
Ashwin : What!!!!! kha ja rha hu mein khi na ja rha Maa ap toh kuch bolo papa se.
Sunita : mujhe lagte haiye sahi bol rhe hai.
mahesh ji : aur ha Ashwin ab aisa kuch mat karna jo mein bhul jau ki tum mere bete ho samje.Sunita samja do isko aaj ke bad ye Ram aur Priya ya unse jude kisi bhi logo ke sath kuch galat nahi karega.
Sunita : ji me baat krti hu.
IN KM
Ram come back he hide some Drugs packet in garden he know he cannot take them with him.
Ram enter in house ...
Krishna ji : Ram...Ram tum kha dye the.
Ram : kahi nahi Maa.
Ram : arrey Priya tum yha par.
Priya : ha vo mein bs aise hi ayi thi.I think mujhe ab chalna chiaye.
Ram : ok come i will drop you.
Amar ji : Driver will drop priya i need to talk to you ram.
Ram : ok papa i just come.
Ram see off Priya and come to study.
Aamr ji : give me your wallet.
Ram : what??
Amar ji : wallet.
Ram : but why???
Amar ji : i said give me.
Ram give his wallet to amar ji.
Amar ji : where are other packets Ram.
Ram : packets...which packets?????
Amar ji : loudly don't lie to me.Tumhe ache se pta hai kon se packet.
Ram : mere pass nahi hai.
Amar ji : i knoe tumhare pass nahi hai isiliye puch rha hu kha hai tell me.
Ram remain silent.
Amar ji call security to search for drugs packet in KM.
After sometime security guard get the packet and they handover to Amar ji.
Amar ji : kya hai ye sab.
Ram : try to snetch he packets please papa give these to me i need them.
Amar ji : beta tum samaje kyu nahi ye tumhari jindagi kharab kar rhe hai.
Ram : nahi papa i will die without them.
Amar ji : mein tumhe kuch nahi duga trust me.
Ram : nahi give me...
Amar ji : thik hai tumhe ye drugs chaiye na toh thik hai fir tum Priya ko hamesha ke liye bhool jao.
Ram : ab hamare bich priya kha se ayi.
Amar ji : tell him everything that Ashwin do with him.
Ram is shocked.
Ram : papa i want only Priya.i will do everything to leave these Drugs.Pta nahi me ye sab kaise kar pauga.
Amar ji : jarur hoga beta we all are with you.
Amar ji hug Ram.

So sorry frnds for updating so late
plz hit like and do comments...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: leena04


Part 11
awww RaYa's small cute moment was really enjoyable too good awesome mind blowing I so loved it.. but what Ash did was beyond the imagination he made Ram drug addicted ohh goes now at will happen next.. so questions still no answers as u didn't updated plz update this soon waiting for it to get continue plz do it now... or at lest reply...


Thankyou vry much that you like my story so sorry i am very busy in my personal life.But i manage to update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very nice update...hope ram will come out of this addiction...
Waiting for the next...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb n hope sab ka pyaar ram ko drug leave kare mein help karnege n hope priya ka pyaar ram ko aur strong bana de now plss update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update after a long time.
Hope to see ram, Priya and family fight together to save ram from this addiction.
Please continue and thanks for pm.

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Posted: 9 years ago
beautiful update...
hope rams parents n priya will help him to come out from drug addiction... pls cntnu soon...thnx for d pm,..
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow finally u updated!!!...i guess ashwin ka chapter over? :-D realy!!!! wow wow wow...soo finaly ram realized his mistake...and poor priya!!! but she will definitely help ram with the drug addiction... :-) next jaldi!!

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