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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello frnds, i am back with next update.So sorry for delay,actually i change my mind for any missunderstanding.
Part 8
KAPOOR MANSION
Niharika : hello i am niharika kapoor.Tumhe mera ek kaam karna hai.
Lady: ji ...
Niharika : me janti hu tum ram ko pasand karti ho aur ram tumhe jyda attention bhi nahi deta.Aaj me tumhe chance deti hu ram ko apna banana chathi ho toh.
Lady : ram ke liye me kuch bhi krugi boliye kya krna hai.
Niharika : ram aaj delhi me hai meeting ke liye gya hai tum bhi uske sath hi ho i know.
lady : yes i am toh muhe kya krna hoga.
Niharika : jaisa ki tum janti ho ram ye deal to crack kar hi lega aur isi khushi me tum uski drink me pills mix kr dena and then he is urs.
Lady : oh what a plan but you think it will work because ram loves priya very much he will never do such a thing.
Niharika : isliye to bol rhi hu usko itni drink karana ke tum me use priya najar aye.
Lady : ok i will do it.
IN DELHI
Ram get the deal and he call priya
Ram : hi baby kaisi ho.
Priya : hi me theek hu aap kaise ho.
Ram : not well baby.
Priya : (worridely) kyu kya hua apko.
Ram : vo kya hai i m missing some one badly,
Priya : achaa kis ko..
Ram : jis se mein is waqt baat kar rha hu.
Priya : ohh aisa hai me too missing u Acha deal ka kya hua.
Ram : kya hota i got it.
Priya ; very good but promise me u will not take drinks.
Ram : arrey yar ab ye sab kyu.
Priya : plz Mr.Kapoor promise me i dont like when u drink it is not good for u.
Ram : ok baba nahi karuga.
Priya : pakka promise.
Ram : ha pakka promise,bs aaj ka din aur tuhare bina, kl me tumhe apne ghar le auga aur fir...
Priya : fir kya...
Ram : fir sirf mein tum aur hamara pyar.
Priya : Ramm...
Ram : yes dear...
Priya : Bye Mr.Kapoor maa bula rhi hai.
Ram : yar ye tumhari maa na hamesha galat time par bulati hai.
Priya : bs kriye aap Aur ha promise yaad rakhna,
Ram : ha yar i will bye baby i love u.
Priya : i love u too.
IN my story Juhi is Priya frnd and work at Ram office.
Juhi : sir may i order drink for u??
Ram : look at juhi nahi rehne do meine priya se promise kiya h i will not take drinks .
Juhi : (herself) ye priya bhi na...ok,so juice...
Ram : nahi...
Juhi : ok coffee.
Ram : nahi na kya ho gya hai tumhe mujhe kuch nahi chaiye i am fine.tum jao.
juhi : sir hum vapis kb tk jyege.
Ram : bs kl deal sign ho jyrrgi then we will leave.
Juhi : R u sure sir you dont want anything,
Ram : yes juhi i am fine.
Juhi leave,IN her room.
Juhi : aaj bhi mein tumhe apna nahi bna saki ram sab kuch us priya ki wajah se.Uski kismat itni achi kyu?????Aisa kya hai usme jo tum uske alawa kisi aur ko dekhte bhi nahi.Mujhe hi kuch karna hoga.Mein tumse bhaut pyar karti hu ram aur tumhe pakar hi rhugi chahe is ke liye mujhe bhi karna ho.
NEXT MORNING
Ram sign the deal and leave for Mumbai.
He came to kapoor mansion and go to his room and switch on the lights he find priya there.
Priya : surprise...kaisa lga.
Ram : tum yha...
Priya : ha kyu aa nahi sakti.
Ram : aa sakti ho tumhara hi ghar hai par kiske sath ayi ho.
Priya : kis ke sath matlab akeli ayi hu bacchi ni hu.
Ram :(angirly) jb mene tumhe bola tha ki me aa juga tumhe lene ke liye toh tumse thoda wait aur nahi hua.
Priya : arrey aap gussa kyu ho rhe hai dekhiye i am fine na.
Ram : nahi priya tumhe pta hai na kya hua tha tumhare sath aur abhi tak mujhe ye bhi nahi pta chal paya hai ki Sid ke sath aur kaun hai.Aur tum aise kahi bhi akeli bhar ghum rhi ho agar fir se kisi ne kuch kiya toh Why dont u get that.Kaise samjau tumko.
Priya has tears in her eyes.
Ram : bas ab rona shuru kar diya tumne chup bilkul chup.
Priya cry more.
Ram anger melted seeing her in this state.
Ram : arrey yar ye kar diya mene...and go near her and wipe tears hold her face between his palms...i am sorry baby mujhe tum par gussa nahi hona chaiya tha.
Priya turn to other side.
Ram : hold his ears acha dekho yar i hold my ears i am sorry plz.
Priya : didnt turn...
Ram : lovingly priya baby i am sorry.
Priya : turn to his side and see him...its ok and hug him.
Ram also respond.
Priya : ap itna gussa kyu hue,
Ram : sorry na yar. mujhe bhi acha nahi lagta tum par gussa karna.
Priya : kiss on his chest and again keep her head on his chest.
Ram : priya...
Priya : hmm
Ram : baby i am feeling teired kya me fresh ho sakta hu.
Priya : breaking hug,ha aap jyiye me khane ki liye kuch lati hu,
Ram : arrey nahi meine flight me kha liya tha tum preshan mat ho.
Priya : ok.
Ram Left.When Ram came from washroom he see priya fall asleep on couch.
Ram : priya...priya...so gyi.and put her on bed and sleep beside her.

Precap : Priya is pregnant.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#72
Loved it yaar i always love raya yaar jaise bhi story ho now plsss keep writing like this n update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Even if u delayed the update was good yar pls do continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update yaar.
Please don't separate priya & ram.
Thanks for pm and please continue the story.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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A promise given to Priya by Ram made Juhi and Niharika plan backfired and moreover he love her so much that he can't do any mistakes.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76

Hiii everyone here is next update,sorry i am updating late,hope you like this.

PART 9

After taking nap RaYa woke up.
Ram : Priya mujhe office jana me ready hota hu.
Priya : ok,aap ready ho jayeye mein aur hai lunch krne ke baad hi jana vaise bhi its lunch time.
Ram : ha thik h baba and left for washroom priya go down.
After coming from washroom ram think something naughty He call priya.
Ram : priya...Priya...
Dadi : priya beta tujhe golu bula rha ja use kuch chaiya hoga de de.
Priya : ji dadi mein dekhti hu.
Priya come in bedroom.
Priya : kya hua Mr.kapoor kyu bula rhe ho.
Ram : vo...ha...mera wallet kha hai.
Priya : kha hai mtlb jha par ap roj rakhte hai and give him bs ya kuch aur bhi.
Ram : ha bs jao.
Priya turn to go ram again call her.
Ram : arrey hai mera handkerchief to de do.
Priya : give him and turn to go.
Ram : mer watch bhi nahi mil rahi.
Priya : go near him and hold his left hand and show him yha par hai.
Ram : ohh accha mujhe pta hi nahi chla acha ek kaam kro tum meri tie bandh do na.
Priya : come on Mr.Kapoor kya ho gya hai aj apko aap khud hi kr liyeye na mujhe bahut kaam hai.
Ram : cutely please yar.
Priya : acha thik h aisa face mat baniye mere samne and bring tie.
Priya put tie in his shirt collar Ram put his hands on her waist and pull her close.
Priya : please dont be naughty ram.
Ram : why,hak banta hai mera.
Priya tied the tie and turn to leave She just reached near door.
Ram again call her.Actually he open knot of tie.
RAm : priya : knot open ho gyi.
Priya : haww,Mr.kapoor jhut mt boliye apne khola na.
Ram : na no ways.
Priya again tie the knot and check ab thik hai and turn to go and after taking some steps turn toward ram and see him opening the knot.
Priya : little loudly,Mr.Kapoor i cant believe ap ye sb mujhe preshan krne ke liye kr rhe hai and come near to ram.
Ram : smile,ha tumhe preshan nahi kruga to kise kruga aur ha patni ho meri daat diya kro.
Priya : acha ji next time se daat dugi fir mt bolna daati hu apko and tie the knot and please ab kuch mt krna jaldi se ready hokar niche aa jaiyeye.
Ram : ok my dear wify and kiss on her cheek.
Priya : Rammm,,,,,,
Ram : kya hua aur kuch bhi kru.
Priya : bs bs rehne dijiye muje jana hai and go from there.
Ram had lunch with family and leave for office.
Priya call ram and ask her if she can call juhi at home.
Ram say yes.
Priya call juhi.
Priya : hello juhi.
Juhi : hi priya aaj kaise yaad kiya.
Priya : tum toh jaise muje roj yaad krti ho na.
Juhi : ha ha roj ni kabhi kabhi to kr hi leti hu.
Priya : acha sun tu aaj kapoor mansion aa ja na sham ko.
Juhi : priya tu janti h na me kaise aa sakti hu yr office ka kaam bhi to hota h.
Priya : uski tension mt kr mene tumhare boss se permission le li hai vaise bhi tu ek bhi baar mere ghar nahi ayi aj to ana hi hoga.
Juhi ; ok mein aa jugi tum mujhe adress send kar dena.
Priya : ok done,aur ha aaj ka dinner hamere sath hi karna.
Juhi : ok done.
Priya : ok bye juhi.
Juhi : bye priya.
Juhi complete her work and go to Ram office to take permission to leave.
Juhi : May i comein sir.
Ram : ya come in.
Juhi : sir i have done my work may i leave.
Ram : kaha jana hai tumhe.
Juhi : vo priya ne kha tha na.
Ram : ahh i just forget,yes yes u may go.
Juhi : ok sir and leave.
She go to her house and get ready for leaving for kapoor Mansion.
Juhi reach kapoor Mansion.She is surprised seeing such a beautiful house and in middle of Hall she saw a big Raya Pick and looking at that picture.
BK : yes madam,aapko kis se milna.
Juhi : ha vo mujhe priya se milna hai.
BK : soory madam kya mein jaan sakta hu ap kaun hai.
Juhi : ha i am her frnd my name is juhi can u plz tell her.
BK : sure mam please have a seat and be comfertable.
BK inform Priya that a come downward and telling herself that she is ur frnd Juhi.
Priya : ha she is my frnd .I am coming.
BK : ok madam.
Bk : come downward and offer water to juhi.
Juhi : Priya...
BK : ji i have told her she is coming.
Priya come downstairs
Priya : happily Juhiii...and hug her.
Juhi also hug her.
Priya : so finally tum aa hi gyi.
JUhi : ha tum bulao aur hum na aye.
Priya : Aao tumhe mein apni family se milwati hu.
Juhi : sure mein bhi milna chaugi.
Priya : take her to dadi room.
Priya : Dadi she is my frnd Juhi.
Juhi : nameste dadi.
Dadi : Nameste beta kaisi ho.
Juhi : ji mein thik hu.
Dadi : tum bhi priya ki colony me rehti ho.
Juhi : ji dadi.
priya : Dadi she work in Kapoor industries.
Dadi : acha hai fir to tum kabhi bhi aa sakti ho kapoor mansion jb tumhara man kre.
Juhi : ji dadi
They chit chat for sometime.
Dadi : Priya beta juhi ko apne kamre me le ja.
Priya : ji dadi.,Come juhi tumhe apna Bedroom dikhati hu.
Juhi : ya sure chal.
Priya take her to bedroom.
Priya : come juhi.
Juhi : wow priya tera bedroom kitna pyara hai bedroom room hi nahi sara ghar kitna sundar hai.
Priya : ha vo toh hai.
Juhi is looking at RaYa picks and ask from her.
Juhi : vaise koi bhi tumhari pick dekh kr bta sakta hai how much both of u love each other.
Priya : vo to hai baghwan ne mujhe itna acha husband diya hai i wish ki mein unki har wish puri kr sku,Pta hai Ram na mere liye bahut protective aur possissive hai.
Juhi : ha vo to dikhta hai.
Priya : Arrey aao me tumhe complete ghar dikhati hu.
Juhi : ok
Priya show her complete house.
Juhi : (in her heart) tum itni khush isliye ho priya kyuki Ram tumhe bhaut pyar krta hai me is pyar ko hi khatam kr dugi.
Ram come from office.
Priya : good evening Mr.Kapoor.
Ram : good evg priya.
Juhi : gud evg sir.
Ram ; gud evg juhi.
Ram : priya mein fresh hone ja rha hu tum plz mere liye strong coffe bna do.
Priya : ji me bhij wati hu.
Rishabh come and Ram left.
Rishabh : hi bhabhi Bhai aa gye.
Priya : ha aa gye tumhe kuch kaam hai.
Rishabh : ha vo mujhe na...
Priya : kya sahi se bol
Rishabh : bhabhi i need some money
Priya : acha kis liye
Rishabh : vo kya bhabhi ap plz bhai se baat kro na.
Priya : thik hai agar nahi batana to mat bta khud baat kr le.
Rishabh : bhabhi u know na agar bhai ko koi mna skta hai to vo aap ho.
Priya : first tell me.
Rishabh : ok i want to go with my frnds on dinner aur bahi ne mere sare cards block kra diye.
Priya : vo isliye kyuki tu padhta ni tha bs har waqt part part.
Rishabh : plz babhi.
Priya : ok thik hai mein baat krti hu.
Juhi : may i join u in kitchen.
Priya : ha ha kyu nahi.
Priya : make coffee for ram and send BK upstairs for giving cooffee to Ram.
Priya : juhi tumyahi ruko mein abhi ayi.
Priya : come in her bedroom and bring her card and give to rishabh.
Rishabh : thanx bahbhi.
Priya : dont be late .
Rishabh : ya bhabhi and left.
IN KITCHEN
something fell on Juhi duppata.
Priya : arrey koi ni tum mera le lo mein isko dry krne ke liye bolti hu.
Priya left for giving Duppata to BK.
When priya left Ram peep in Kitchen and see Juhi from backside.He think she is priya as he saw Priya duppata.Ram tip toe and hug her tightly from back and close his eyes feeling her.
Ram : i miss u so much.
Juhi is shocked with ram behaviour.
Juhi see Priya from kitchen window and Priya also see them.Juhi try to say something but priya stop her showing her finger.
Priya came backside of Ram.
Ram : kya hua tum kuch bol kyu nahi rahi i miss u darling.
Priya : acha..kitna
Ram : bahut bhut sara...par tumhari awaj piche se kyu aa rhi hai and he see back side see Priya standing there.He is totally shocked.
Ram : Priya vo mene...
Priya : (fakely angirly)ye kya kr rhe the aap..
Ram : (totally sweating)nahi u r thinking wrong
Priya : kya i am thinking wrong.
Ram : vo jb me yha aya to juhi ko sirf piche se dekha aur ye duppata to tumhara hi hai na isliye mene socha tum ho.
Priya : apko apni wife me aur kisi aur me koi difference ni dikhta.
Ram : arrey yr mujhe to tumhare alawa koi aur hi ni dikhta.I am sorry yar mujhe sach me ni pta tha.
Priya brust in laughing.
Ram : kya hua tum has kyu rhi ho.
Priya : kyuki mujhe pta hai ap sach bol rhe hai.
Juhi also laugh with priya and she is happy.
Priya : ab ap jayiye aur change kr lijiye abhi tk office suit me ho.
Ram : ha me to ja hi rha.Juhi i am sorry mujhe sach me lga priya hai.
Juhi : its ok sir i know.
Ram left from there.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
Hiii sooo sweet n beautiful update yaar but hate this juhi she wants to separte Raya not done but love ram irrating priya n doing naughty things n in last he hugged juhi by mistakeblove the way priya teased him now plsss update soon atleast by friday plsss
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: Rayaland

Hiii sooo sweet n beautiful update yaar but hate this juhi she wants to separte Raya not done but love ram irrating priya n doing naughty things n in last he hugged juhi by mistakeblove the way priya teased him now plsss update soon atleast by friday plsss



Actually my health is not good but i will try
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice and romantic update.
Is juhi ko jaldi hatao yaar!
Raya ke beech kisiko bardash nahi kar sakthi.
Thanks for pm and continue.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Really so good update yar pls continue soon with long update

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