Raya SS :Pyar hai vo ashaas part 27 updated on page 40 - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
#81
shee re...ye juhi ko hata do RaYa k beech me se. loved rams idea of teasing Priya. loved their cute romance. thanks for pm. pl continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
#82
beautiful swt update...
i hate this juhi...Raya k bich misunderstanding create krne ki koshish kr rhi h..
love raya nok-jok n teasing..pls continue sooon
n thnx for the pm..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello my dear frnds i know i am upating very late i am so sorry but now i am posting.
Hope ypu will like it.

PART 10

Priya come in room to give coffee to ram meanwhile ram come from washroom.
Ram come near priya
Ram : priya mujhe sach me nahi pta tha...
Priya : cut him in middle i know Mr.Kapoor and i trust you you will not cheat on me and yes after drinking coffee rest for sometime and give me your mobile.
Ram : Why???????????
Priya : dijiye na...
Ram : give her ye lo.
Priya : good ab ye mere pass rhega for 1 hour you please take rest.
Ram : arrey par mujhe calls krne hai.
Priya : i know ap aisa hi krege important call hua to i will tell you.
Ram : ok as you wish.
Priya : mei jati hu juhi mera wait kr rhi hogi.
Ram : yaaa.
Priya left the room.Now its dinner time.
Dadi : Priya ye golu kha reh gya.
Priya : dadi lagta hai hai vo so gye hai mein bula kr lati hu.
Dadi : ha ja beta.
Priya come to room and see ram is sleeping.
Priya go near him and see him
Priya call him
Priya : Mr.kapoor...Mr.kapoor and shake him lightly.
Ram : hmm kya hua.
Priya : its dinner time everybody is waiting for you.
Ram : hmm aa rha hu in 5 mins.
Priya : ok and ur phone is on table.
Ram : yaa
Priya come downward and tell he is coming in 5 mins.
Ram also come and everbody have dinner.
Ram : priya juhi ko driver drop kr dega
Priya : mein juhi ko see off krke ati hu.
Juhi : good night sir.
Ram : good night.
Juhi : chale priya.
Priya :yaa
Priya : thankyou you sooo much for coming here bhaut acha lga mujhetumhare sath thoda time spend krke.
JUhi : same here acha yar late ho gyi now i should leave.Bye good night.
Priya : bye goodnight.Juhi leave.
Priya come in her bedroom.
Ram : so madam mil gya time apko apne husband ke liye.
Priya : ha mil gya ab apko kuch kaam to nahi hai na.
Ram : kyu?????
Priya : isliye ki so jayiye.
Ram : kya yar abhi to so kr utha hu.
Priya is standing in front of mirror Ram come and hug her from back put his head on her shoulder and both see in mirror.
Ram kiss on her neck.
Priya : Mr.Kapoor...kya kr rhe hai ap.
Ram : arrey kya kar rhu hu matlab apni biwi ko pyar kr rha hu farz banta hai mera.
Priya : turn toward ram Acha farz to mera bhi banta hai apne pati ko pyar karne ka and peck his lips soflty.
Ram pick her in his arms and take her to their bed.
Scene faded with flying curtains and dim lights.
NEXT MORNNG
Ram is getting ready in his room actually he is redy only checking himself.Priya is cheching whether breakfast is ready or not.Rishabh is coming from his room at the same time priya come from kitchen.
Rishabh : good morning bhabhi.
Priya : good morning rishabh tum please dadi ko le aao me tumhare bhai ko bula kr lati hu.
Rishabh : ji bhabhi.
Priya take only 2 and 3 steps suddnely she feel dizzy.She call rishabh
Priya : Rishabh...
Rishabh see her and caught her at she become unconcious.
Rishabh call her
Rishabh : bhabhi...wake up...bhabhi kya hua...he pick her in his arms and lay down on couch.
Rishabh call Ram and Niharika ji.
Rishabh : (loudly)Bhai...Bhai...Maa...Bhai...bhabhi ko pta ni kya ho gya ap jaldi se niche ayiye.
Ram listen his voice in room and come quickly.
Niharika ji also come there.
Niharika ji : kya hua priya ko...tum doctor ko call kro.
Rishabh call doctor.
Ram pck up priya in his arms and take her to his room and put her on bed.
Ram : hold her hand Priya kya hua tumhe...wake up.Priya...
Ram : Rishabh doctor ko kitna time lagega.
Rishabh : bahi in 15 min she will be here.
Doctor come.
Doctor is checking priya Ram is getting panick.
Ram : Doctor kya hua hai priya ko???
Doc : let me check Mr.Kapoor...
Ram : Aise achnak se kya ho gya.
Doc : Mr. Kapoor i am checking na plz relax and wait for sometime
Priya gain her concious.
Ram go near her
Ram : Priya you ok...
Priya : nodded her head in yes.
Doc : Mr.Kapoor please wait outside for sometime.
Ram : Arrey but why?????
Doc : plz Mr.Kapoor for sometime.
Niharika ji : Ram plz,Rishabh le kar jao is ko.
Rishabh : ji come bhai.
Ram and Priya leave the room and come downward.
Doc : Niharika ji congrats you are going to be dadi.
Niharika : (shocked) What??? but recover soon are you sure.
Doc : yes,Congrats Priya.
Priya is very very happy tears come in her eyes.
Doc : i will send an nurse for taking ur blood sample.
Priya : ya sure Doc plz aap Mr.Kapoor ko mat batana i want to tell him.
Doc : ya sure and once again congrats.and take care.
Niharika ji : congrats Priya i am very happy today.
Doc come downward Ram come to her.
Ram : Doc priya kaisi hai kya hua hai usko vo thik toh hai na.
doc : Acha hoga Mr.Kapoor agar ap Mrs.Kapoor se hi ja kar puche.
Ram Run to his room.
Rishabh : Doc kya hua bhabhi ko is she alriht.
Doc : yes you are going to be chachu soon.
Rishabh : what??? really OMG...OMG and hug doctor i am going to chachu yeah
Rishabh left her sorry.
Doc: i can understand.
Ram come in his room and come near Priya.
Ram : Priya kya hua hai tumhe doc ne bhi mujhe kuch nahi bataya tum to batao.
Priya : ek min Mr,kapoor mujhe bolne to dijiye.
Ram : ha bolo.
Priya feel very shy.
Ram : kya hua batao na.
Priya : Mr...Kapoor
Ram : look at her...habolo.
Priya : vo,,,,,,
Ram : yar mujhe bhaut tension ho rhi hai bolo na.
Priya : Ram you are going to be father soon.
Ram : vo toh thik hai and grt what priya said.Kya...Kha...tumne
Priya : yes we are going to parents soon.
Ram : very very very happy OMG priya and hug her very tightly.Priya also hug him.
Ram broke the hug and touch her stomach very lightly...
Ram : Priya...My...my baby.
Priya : yes and our baby
Ram : ya our baby.
Ram kiss priya's stomach lightly priya feel ram's tear on her stomach.
Priya : hold ram face Kya hua Mr.Kapoor.
Ram : kuch ni bas khushi ki vajah se.Tum dekhna mein apne baby ke liye sab kuch karuga i will give every happiness to my sorry sorry our baby.
Priya is looking at Ram.
Ram : kya dekh rhi ho aise.
Priya : yahi ki aap kitne khush bs kisi ki najar na lg jye hamari khushiyo ko...
Ram : put his finger on her lips Ssshh mein hu na kuch nahi hone duga kisi ko.Aur hai sahi kha tumne aaj tak mujhe itni badi khushi kbahi ni mili.
Ram : mein soch rha tha aaj sham ko sb family members ko dinner par bulaye.
Priya : ya good idea.
Ram : aah but promise me tum kisi ko nahi bataugi na neha ko na apni maa ko.
Priya : ok done.
Rishab dadi and Niharika also come in RaYa room,
Rishabh : congrats bhai congrats bhabhi.
Dadi : oie golu aaj me bhaut jyada khush hu alhir tumne meri wish puri kr hi di.
Ram : Dadi aaj sham ko me sb family members ko dinner pr invite krne ki soch rha tha.
Dadi : bahut acha hai sbko ek sath bta dege.
Ram : jiii.
All leave the room.
Ram : Acha priya mein abhi toh office ja rha hu but hai bhaut jaldi aa jauga.Bye and kiss on her forehead.Bye baby.
Priya : bye.
Ram : Aur ha dont step out from bed and dont do any work if you want anything call bansi kaka and if you have any problem call me okk,,,,
Priya : Bs kijiye aap ye mt krna vo mt krna...ufff ap jaiye aur jaldi se aiye.
Ram : okk mam,dekha baby apki mim kaise daatti hai apke papa ko,
Priya : haww Mr.Kapoor baby apke papa kaam hi aise krte hai.
Ram and Priya smile.
IN NIHARIKA ROOM
Niharika : ye kya ho gya Ram aur Priya ka baccha itne saal wait krne ke baad bhi mujhe toh kuch nahi mila aur mere bete ko bhi jail bhej diya Ram ne vaise acha hihua ram ab mein tumhe ashaas dilaugi ki bache se dur hone ke dard kya hota hai.Bhaut khush ho na tum aaj agar meine tumhari khushi ko matam me na badal diya to mera naam bhi niharika nahi.

So sorry for late update and errors
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Posted: 9 years ago
#84
Wow yaar raya r going to be parents hayeee now cant wait to read more n plss update soon atleast 2 times a week
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85
beautiful update...
wow Raya r going to b parents..
ram is very happy... Bt pata nhi ye niharika kya krna chati h... anyway pls continue soon n thnx for d pm...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#86
Superb update.
Raya to be parents!!!!!!
Why do we need to have so many villains?
Thanks for pm and please continue.
Edited by Sakshiashu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#87
Wow superb raya gonna be parents soon but make this niharika plans fail yar...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#88
awesome
waiting eagerly for the next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Read all the parts in one go and really I am loving it, the way story is progressing and the way you write really appreciate it. BALH ki yaad agayi kash BALH main ye sab dekhne ko milta anyway love all the parts. So Niharika is thinking to harm the baby or Priya, And what about Juhi well I really HATE her. Please please continue soon, Superb work!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 2
Ram is so caring for Priya thank god he came on right time either god know what would have bed happen to Priya. ... she is hospitalised hope she get well soon Nik still playing her dirty game Ram should now inquiry abt this in deep this is getting worse for sure...
I enjoyed it a lot moving for next...

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