New Story Ajeeb Prem Kahaani Part 16 last part B updated on page 29 - Page 15

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update.
Waiting for their marriage and
Please continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Good one.. Please continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow... Superb update...
Priya always handle ram very well.
So next Raya ki shaadi..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Priya is payaar mai to Ram shayar hi ban gaya
It was cute Ram is very much desperate to get married to Priya that can't wait for Neha Vik return from their HM. With all family blessing RaYa marriage is fixed in AK and KK Priya got mother father.
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update

but preview is different...
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Originally posted by: nprithi2002

nice update

but preview is different...
waiting for next...

contd soon



Yeah preview different in next part u will read preview scene...
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Yar all updates r so lovely please continue soon I have read all the parts really so superb please continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Part 13:
Recap:
Priya taking ram palm in between her hands.. she rubbing his hand: arey kehthe hai ki engagement aur shaadi ke beech ke pal bahuth khoobsurat hothey hai... wo dabhi dabhi hasi.. roz aapki phone .. msgs ke liye wait karna... good morning... good night msgs.. aur bahuth kuch.. chupchupke se milna... friends tease karna... upar se shaadi ki khushi... sochke dekho ... mein toh bahuth excited hu... ram looking at her intensly.. priya caught his sight.. priya looks away.. ram makes her to face him holding her chin...
Ram leaning towards her lips... priya closed her eyes tightly
ram almost near her lips... priya tightly closed her lips... she fisted her palm... tightly closed her eyes.. sweatbeads making their way from her forehead .. she breathing heavily...ram lips just a inch away... looking at priya tensed face...reading her expressions... he moved to her forehead... cupped her face in his palms... gave a tight peck sucking her sweatbeads possesively... priya released her fisted palm... her breathe also normal... still she closed her eyes...a cute smile dancing on her lips... seeing her smile ram lips too curved in to smile... some crazy thought came ...
ram in her ear : relax...open u r eyes... priya slowly opens her eyes... but she couldnt meet eyes with him... she feeling very shy... her cheeks turned in to bubbly pink... again ram cups her face in his palms... priya turned her gaze away... ram makes her to look at him... ram with his thumb caressing her mole on upper lip... priya felt a string of current passing in her each vein... ram takes off his thumb from her lip... kissing his thumb..giving lustfilled look to priya... priya couldnt sit there more... she just runs to her room asap... blushingly...rams smiles heartily looking at her retreatng figure...
priya enters in to room...closed the door... leaning to the closed door... keeping her one palm on her heart...caressing her mole...she enjoying vibes of being a would be wife... rams love and care towards her... ram came to priya room... ram can feel her presence... he stops
ram leaning on to priyas room door : priya... priya comes out from her dreamland hearing his voice
ram scratching his temple : i know u r listening to me... jabtak tum ready na ho tabtak mein apna limits cross nehi karunga... tum mere saath hamesha khush aur safe rahogi... ill promise u that ill keep u happy and safe... still if i hurt u am sorry... no reply from priya... ram concernedly : priya... tum sunrahi hona...?
priya didnt opened the door... but replies.. she turnes towards the closed door...: aap sorry math kahiye mr.kapoor.. mein aapke saath bahuth khush hu...i feel very safe and secure being in ur arms... after my dad arms... i feel u r arms and hug is the best place i can feel safe and happy... hearing u r heartbeat is the soothing lullaby for my ears (both remembering neha mehendi night scene)... both smiles... priya keeps her both palms on closed door... from outside ram too keeps his palms on the door... feeling each other from closed door...
priya : raath bahuth hogayi hai... aap jaake sojayiye... subah aapko drive bhi karna hai??? pls go and sleep... good night...
ram smiles : ok good night ... sleep tight...and please dream about me...priya blushes hearing this...
its another beautiful morning...
priya wakes up nudging her eyes... stretching her arms widely... looks at her side... peehu sleeping .. priya gives a peck on her forehead wishing good morning
priya : good morning princess...
peehu turning her side : please priya sonedijiye na... waise bhi aaj sunday hai... please 5 minutes...
priya taking off her duvet : arey... utto...bacche utona... aapki mr.kapoor jaarahe hai... tum aise sothey rahogi toh wo tumse bina mile chalejayenge... aur phir tum complaint math karna????
peehu jumps out from duvet rushes to washroom.. priya laughs at peehu
all gathered at breakfast table... everyone enjoying breafast.. talking with eachother... but ram and priya stealing glances at eachother... ram looks at priya... priya too... (priya standing opposite to ram ) . peehu took seat beside ram... ram signals her to come through eyes... priya adjusting her duppatta.. goes to peehu...acting like helping her... ram smiles at priya... ram entwins his left hand fingers with priyas hand... priya at first startled... later compose herself... he tightened his grip... she can feel how he is feeling now... just few mins... after that 1 month these two cant meet... thinking about that a lone tear escapes from her eye...falls on his hand..hurriedly she wipes off... frees her hand from his grip leaves tha place excusing herself... ram can understand her feeling..
priya in her room... she dont know why she crying... tears are making their way they are not at all stopping...she clutched her hand tightly (which ram entwined few mins before).. she opened her palm... theres something writen on her palm... wiping her tears... she reads message " jaane se pehle ek tight hug please... meet me on terrace within five minutes" priya blushes reading... she wipes off her tears... washed her face.. checking herself in mirror... her mobiles rings... its a message tone... without looking at id she opened message " ithni sajdhajke math aao... khudko roknehi paaunga toh gadbad hojayegi... kiss smiley " priya feeling very shy biting her lower lip... she runs to terrace... there ram stood with opened arms closed eyes (SRK Style)... priya runs towards him but stops in middle... she thought to tease him... she silently steps towards him... stood infront of him crisscrossing her arms towards chest... ram opened his eyes thinking why still priya didnt hugged him...priya stood there glaring at him with naughtiness in her eyes... ram shrugs his shoulders
ram : kya kya hua...? ruk kyu gayi??? ...
priya mocking fake anger : ye kya srk pose leke khade hai aap... ram frightened... steps back... priya steps towards him...: aur kya likha aapne... jyada sajdajke math aao...gadbad hojayegi...haan... she pushing him keeping her palms on his chest... both reached end... ram sensed that priya teasing him... priya about to push him again... ram held her both wrist... pulled her towards him... priya safely landed on his chest...ram encircled his arms... in slow pace priya too slowly tightens grip...both stood there like that for few minutes... priya lifts her head... both are still hugging eachother... priya can see lots of love in ram eyes... ram too... ram gave a peck on her forehead... priya closed her eyes...
priya in low tone : mr. kapoor aap mere haath mein wo sab kab likha...? (still both are in hug)
ram smiles... shows his palm...in which he wrote in his palm in reverse : aise he saying this he entwins his palm with another palm... eye lock...
priya blushingly jerks her hand which entwined : when she checks in her hand same imprinted in this palm also
priya teasingly : waah ram ji... aap toh badi smart hogaye ho
ram felt very happy hearing his name from her firsst time without any hesitation she said though teasingly...ram rolling his tongue in his cheeks
ram : kya...kya...kya kahan tumne...?
priya still looking at her palm : meine kya kahan... waah ram ji...aap toh smart hogaye ho...
ram teasingly : accha...?
priya irritatingly looks at ram : kya hai mr.kapoor...mein sirf ithna kahan ki waah ra...(she stops in middle... felt very shy...she turns to move... ram holds her arm... pullls her towards him...hugs from behind...encircling his arms on her waist
ram keeping his chin on her shoulder : hmmm... tightens his grip... mujhe nehi patha tha mera naam ithni sweet hai... he gave a peck on her earlobe... thank you
priya controlling her blush : cha...cha..chalein...sab wait karrahe hongey...
ram with pouted face : hmm... yeah...jaana toh padega...
Here kapoor couple waiting for ram...
KK : Beeji ye ram kahan gayab hogaya... late horahi hai...
At the same time both raya comes there walking hand in hand... both raya looking in to eachother eyes...KK tries to say ram something but they totally forgot about surroundings... both crossed walking hand in hand everyone reached to the outside corridor..both still walking they reached to end point...but they didnt realised priya trips ram holds her before she reach ground that when ram realized they came outside...priya too realised..she hurriedly gets up...composing herself..puling her kurti down...setting her duppatta...tucking her hair...she hiding her blush very difficultly...ram smiles at her just nods his head...ram turns his head
ram :maa...he stops as theres noone outside..he is shocked...priya looks at him
priya too : sab log kahan hai...
ram : wahi toh priya kahin mujhe chodke nehi chalegaye????
priya : aise kaise...?
ram teasingly : arey koi baath nehi... am ok withit...actually am super happy..side hugs her...priya smiles
at the same time they hear kapoor couple teasings
AK : Dekho krishna...aapki ram ab paraya hogaya hai... ab sahebjaade ko maabaap ki fikar he nehi... both raya felt very embarassed ram scratching his temple...priya tries to run from there but KK holds her wrist takes her in hug...
KK pecks on her forehead : thank you so much beta...meri iss pagal beta ko sambhalne ke liye... caressing priya chin...hum jaldi wapas aayenge beta tumhe lene...
AK to ram teasingly : beta ji... aap kahan thay ithni derse...? haan...
Ram scratching his temple...: wooo... papa ji...wo kya haina ab one month dur rehna hai toh...strength ke liye medicine leraha tha... Priya stood there in shock she didnt expect this type of answer... ram winks at her... priya felt very embarassed..she looking here and there.
KK goes to ram..holds his ear...: bahuth badmaash aur besharam hogaye ho... ab chalein...derhorahi hai...everyone settles themselves in car...
priya eyes catch something in parking lot... both priya scooty..and rams bike...front tyre kissing eachother... priya blushes thinking as them... ram too catches priya blushing face...looks at where priya looking... hie is grinning ear to ear...priya steps towards parking lot...she turns aside her scooty handle...ram takes out his mobile and taps a message to priya...priya phone beeps she opens the message
priya reading message :" arey yaar kamsekam unko toh enjoy karne do... mujhe toh tum nehi dogi...shaadi honetak...let them enjoy...wink smiley"
ram looking at his mobile...waiting for priya reply
KK : Arey bhai...ab jao bhi...ithni der usike saath he toh ho... abtoh poori zindagi usiko dekhna hai...ab jaayenge nehi toh wapas kaise aayenge...?
ram hurriedly keeps his phone aside : Ok Ok maa... sorry..holding his ear...soon rams car fades away from NGO
both raya are very happy eachother... they enjoying the feeling of being in love... daily messages... sweet cute fights...manofying each other...
neha teasings in video chats... priya preparing everything by herself for her own marriage..neha said that she will comeback from HM...But priya didnt like that so she said no and managing herself...as its a south indian wedding...her parents dream...so taking care about everything personally... days passing ... raya marriage just five days...raya enjoying each moment of these days... asusual these two still argues...fights with each other.. their evry phone call...video chat ends with a cute arguments... days just flew away just like that... today nevik coming back...it already planned that both raya together welcome them but these two had a fight before night... its priya fault...priya trying her best to manofy him...but ram very much upset this time... so many calls...so many msgs...so many video calls... priya sending but ram didnt gave reply... again she called again same ram disconnects... priya closing her eyes...biting her lip... with a sad face she drops her phone... sitting in couch...
priya thinking herself : priya ye mere ram ji tumse kuch jyada naraaz hai... tumhe toh sooli pe chadana chahiye ...amacchi noticed... priya explained her what happened between them...
amacchi teasingly : ye toh hona he tha... roothna toh uska haq hai ... tumhari kaam he aise hai...
priya pouts : kya amacchi aap bhi...she hugs amacchi... ab kaise manau inko...ithne dino mein aaj ye aise din hai ki meri subah unki msg aur unki chehre dekhe bina shuru huyi aur shayad khatam bhi... tears making their way from her eyes... amacchi rubbing priya arm...
amacchi wiping priya tears : shhh... chup hojao... chalo jao tumhari laptop leke aao... pehle mujhe krishna ko phone karke do... mujhe kuch baath karni hai... priya leaves to get her laptop... priya came back with her laptop
priya : amacchi ye rahi meri laptop...aap kya karrahe ho amacchi... meri problem ki solution dona... mujhe bas ek jhalak dekhni hai unki bas ek...
amacchi caresing priya cheeks : iss waqt ram ghar pahunchgaya hoga na... mujhe krishna se baath karni hai tu video call milao krishna ko... priya face lights up hearing amacchi plan
priya hugs her tightly gave a kiss on her cheeks : u r a rockstar amacchi... i just love u... amacchi playfully slaps on priya fore head
amacchi : ye jhappi pappi jinko dena hai unko do...mujhe makkan lagane ki koshish math karo...chalo ab connect karo jaldi nehi toh... before she completes priya opened her skype account both krishna, amacchi enjoying talking with eachother...priya searching for ram... but no use...she sat there wth a sulken face...
krishna teasingly : dekha beeji...abhitak shaadi bhi nehi huyi...meri bahu ki tevar dekho...shaadi kya fix hogayi madam unki best frnd ko he bhulgayi... amacchi shooks priya...priya ccomes out from trance...
priya : jee...maa...kuch kahan aapne...
krishna : ye lo... ye toh meri baath suni he nehi... very bad... priya didnt react... krshna sensed something wrong... uffo priya mein majak karrahi hu... accha bolo...kya hua aise muh phulake kyu baithe ho... priya about say ...
krishna hears ram voice : maa..maa...krishna : aaj ithni derkyu laga... ram sitting in couch..looks at the laptop screen...there priya looking at him without blinking... finally she saw him... ram too very happy inside but he didnt show... asusual priya hair strands falls...she tucks them back... looking at priya..his anger increased...before he burst out his anger...krishna questions priya
krishna : beta ye tumhari haath ko kya hua... ithni chot kaise lagi tumhe...aur tum bathayi kyu nehi...priya just looks at ram...his eyes reflecting his emotions... priya just lowers her gaze... now ram couldnt control himself he yells
ram : maa kuch poochrahi haina...jawab do...ab bologi ki nehi...? very irresponsible ... childish attitude... huh... krishna gets worried and felt bad abt whatever ram said to priya
krishna : ram... ye kya tareeka hai baath karne ka...
ram tears almost ready to make their way but controlling himself he turns aside and wipes off : toh kaise baath karu madam se... usko khudke alawa kisi aur ki parwah hai ... nehi... now priya starts
priya taunts : haan...sach kehrahe hai aap... mujhe kyu kisi aur ki parwah hogi... tabitoh kal raath se ithni msgs...ithni calls... karrahi hu...manaane ki koshish karrahi hu... and u saying i dont care about anyone... abhibhi toh mujhe kisi ki parwah nehi na bas aapki ek jhalak dekhne ke liye tabse yahan hu... msgs ki reply thak dene ki kasht nehi ki aapne..maafi toh durki baath hai... ithna gussa...? huh... she turns away her head
ram : tumhari kaam he aise hai ki maafi ke laayak hai he nehi... tumhe andaaza bhi hai meri kya haal huyi jab tumhari phone not reachable aur upar se news pe jo dikharahe thay... wo sab dekhke meri toh... most important tum maafi maangrahi ho kis baath ki mujhe bina bathaye chennai jaane ki ya phir kal raath jo tumne kahan uss baath ki...haan..
priya lowers her head in low tone : donoke liye
ram in anger : kya kahan tumne...?
priya lil loud : dono ke liye mr.kapoor... pls yaar mein majak ki ... aap ithni serious...ram cuts her in middle..turns to krishna
ram : maa... bolo isko mujhse... krishna shouts closing her ears
krishna : chup...bilkul chup... ho kya raha hai ye... mein aur beeji dono yahan hai aur aaplogon ko koi farak he nehi bas ladne ke liye reason chahiye...shuru hojathe ho... dono ki shaadi hone jaarahi hai thoda toh maturely behave karo... ab bologi koi humein ki ye sab kya hai...priya tries to explain but ram replies tauntingy
ram : mein bolunga na aapki honewali bahu ka bravery stories...
priya : mr.kapoor ab bas kijiye mein theek he kehthi hu mr.karpur suits u best...
krishna : beeji... hum dono yahan se chalthe hai inndono ka kuch nehi hosaktha... both raya realise their mistake...krishna takes a step to go but ram holds her hand... priya stops amacchi both apologize
krishna looks at them priya tries to explain again ram stops her...krishna glares at them...finally priya accept
ram giving winning look : aapki honewali pyari bahu...parso raath chennai gayi thi... shaadi ki kaam se...and u know from past few days whats all happening there... mujhe achanak neha ka phone aaya wo kaafi tensed thi ye madam ko leke... madam ka phone not reachable...patha hai maa majaal ye hai ki madam toh ek baar bhi mujhe ye baath nehi bathayi... bas ek msg mein aaj bahuth busy hu...kal raath tak not reachable ... wapas aake aaram se baath karrahi hai mujhse...jab meine poocha mujhe kyu nehi inform ki..toh madam ko laga ki mein unko dominate karraha hu... control karraha hu...wo ithne saal independent hai...aagey bhi koi change nehi hogi...etc etc and all... mann karraha tha ki... he stopped and looks aside.
KK : toh tum naraaz hogaya...waise naaraaz hona tha laajmi hai... ab priya ye bhi boldo ye haath pe chot kaise lagi..
priya stammering : wo...wo...wo...inko phone karrahi thi baath karne ke liye...tab mein kuch kaam karrahi thi...meri peir fisalgayi aur neeche knife tha...galthi se meri haath uspe laggayi...uttne ki koshish mein jara jordaali mein toh...
amacchi : ram tumhare gusse ka he karan hua ye sab...priya ko ye tak ehsaas nehi hua ki uski haath kahan hai kis cheej pe hai...beta choti choti baathon pe gussa nehi karthe ...ye sahi salamath aagayi na...ab patch up karo dono
KK : haan ram jo hogaya so hogaya ab jaane do... priya looks at him with pleading eyes...
ram : next time kahi jaana hai toh baghwan ke liye inform karke jaao... and one more thing never ever say that dominating and all that stupid crap... priya smiles just nods her head positively...bahuth dard horahi hai kya...asks her concernedly... both amacchi and krishna releived...both moves away from there leavng these two love birds to enjoy ...
so many things these two shared...still ram lil bit upset on priya...priya also know that... KK calling ram for dinner...so time to say bye...
ram : accha ok bye now... pls apna khyal rakho...
priya smiles : aap abhibhi gussa ho... aap abhitak maaf nehi ki na? ram just looks away
priya : hmm mujhe patha hai... aap mujhse naaraaz hosakthe ho...lekin gussa nehi...ok mujhe saza dedijiye...jo aap kahenge wo mein karungi... tabtoh maaf karenge na aap...?
ram thinks abt something : accha...? saza chahiye tumhe...? ok then fine... aaj se shaadi tak jabbhi hum ekdusre ke saamne aayenge... mujhe dekthe he tum mujhe ek jhappi ya pappi dena chahiye...mujhe aaspaas kaun hai kya situation wo sab patha nehi ... tumhe saza poori karni hai..
priya shocked : ye kaise hosaktha hai...ram glares at her angrily he about end the call...priya yells : ok manjur hai lekin pls mujhe time toh dijiye aise dekthi he kaise karu agar sabke saamne rahungi toh kuch na kuch sochna padegi na plss... pls...
ram thinks for a while : ok mujhe dekhne ke 5 min pehle meri jhappi aur pappi dono mujhe milna chahiye...
priya with a pale face : OK...
ram : ab jaao sojao...kal nevik aarahe hai...receive karne tumhe bhi aana haina... tumhari saza kal se shuru... yaad rakho jhappi aur pappi...good night gave a flying kiss to her... both sign off

next day...priya reached airport waiting for nevik... her phone beeped...msg from ram... her lips curved with in a sec..her smile turned in to tensed face...
msg :"yaad haina dekthe he jhappi aur pappi " ill be there in five mins... priya thinking how to do that too in a crowded air port...she thinking abt that announcement nevik flight landed...ram too reached... he damn handsome in white t shirt... he wantedly wore that t-shirt he remember that day how priya looking at him in this t shirt... priya too dressed up well... especially for ram...too manofy him... ram too spell bounded on her simplicity and beauty...both stood there looking at each other... ram spotts nevik... goes to welcome them... priya to turns joins him...in the middle way just 4 mins left... shagun ki jhappi aur pappi...priya shyly lowers her gaze.. ram looking very beautiful... both reached nevik...exchnged hai hello...vik hugs ram... ram hugs neha and vikram... priya too hugs neha... ram just 3 mins left... nevik heard and confused priya blushing...
priya : aah...neha... mujhe bahuth bhook lagrahi hai... chalo kuch khaathe hai...
neha : yeah fine...mujhe bhi bahuth bhook lagrahi hai... humlog baggage leke aathe hai.. wait here.. neha sensed something fishy...
neha to vikram : baby tumhe nehi lagtha yahan kuch gadbad hai...
vikram : gadbad...? matlab
neha : matlab hum Honeymoon se wapas aaye hai...aur ye dono kuch nehi kahan...no teasing nothing... priya toh aise nehi...let me check when she turns there priya dragging ram in to the lift... neha eyes popped out...
both entered in to the lift...priya hurriedly pressed door close button...ram looks at her... ram about to say...just one min... priya hugged him tightly... took his palm gave a peck... both sharing eye lock...
neha come to them : ahem...ahem...adjusting her tone... ye kya horaha hai...? raya comes out from their beautiful love land...
priya : nehi...kuc...kuc..kuch nehi... chalo chalo bahuth bhook lagrahi hai kuch khaathe hai...
everyone reached Kapoor mansion except priya...as per ritual before marriage she cant come to KM... she went to do some shopping... ram worried abt her... every 15 mins he msg her asking hows she..where is she and all...KK knows that priya will come to receive nevik...both amacchi and KK decided that Kapoors will be there in NGO as helping hand for marriage preparation except amarnath...KK and Ram gonna be there... so as per plan KK packed necessary things and asked Priya to meet in some restaurant KK frnds wants to meet her... so priya waiting in restaurant... KK reached there along with her frnds... everyone had a nice chat... everyone praised priya... they are about leave... waitng outside the restaurant... Kapoors car came... ram came out and saw priya... priya very happy...both looking at each other...naughty smile lingering on his lips...he looking at hs watch stealing glances to priya
ram : maa.. 5 mins hai 10: 10 ke liye... haina...? KK didnt understood what he said even priya too... ram steps towards KK..hugs her and gave a peck..
KK : arey waah kya baath hai aaj meri bete ko mujhpe ithna pyar kyu...
ram : wo aise..looks at priya signals showing his five fingers
KK : Pagal chalo humlog chalthe hai...everyone hugging each other... priya too hugging KK and her frnds ram stood in between them...without any one notice she hugged him and gave a peck on his cheek... ram didnt expected this...he stood there in shock...Nevik reachd there in their car... neha caught priya hugging ram...
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Posted: 9 years ago
guys am really sorry for late update and one more sorry kyunki jo preview mene dithi wo update nehi di meine... meri data sab delete hogayi toh firse likhrahi hu... toh socha thoda raya before marriage moments likhu... so pls bare with me and my update ... preview wali part update kardungi jald he... sorry and thank you so much

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