New Story Ajeeb Prem Kahaani Part 16 last part B updated on page 29 - Page 14

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terrace... some white and pink curtains are dangling covering a bed which is decorated with flowers few hours before but now all the flowers scattered... whole terrace lit with nice aromatic candles... they tried to convert this open terrace in to a temporary room just ceiling open... sides covered with temporary walls... both love birds raya on bed inhaling each other aroma... looking at the sky... both covered with duvet till shoulders... ram giving wet kisses on priya bare shoulder... priya enjoying his sweet torture... she closed her eyes feeling his touch... ram didnt stopped his torture... finally priya pushed him hard on his chest ..

Ram rubbing his chest : OUch ... priya it hurts yaar.. he pouts

priya smiles tucking herself in duvet... : U deserve it

ram too smiles pulls her in to hug... priya lands on his chest.. ram takes her to side.. priya entwins her fingers with him... both are looking at sky while playing with entwined fingers.. ram looks at priya gave a peck on her forehead... priya just smiles

ram caressing priya hair : priya..

priya : hmm

ram : kissing her entwined hand : kuch nehi poochoge... ???

Part 12:

Recap : Ram looks at priya.. : haan...haan.. karunga.. ye moti ko sirf mein he jhelsaktha hu... priya glares at him angrily..starts to hit him

Priya hitting him on his chest : mr.karpur ke liye mein he theek hu... ram holds her both hands he pulls her in to hug...

Vikram stood behind ram : adjusting his tone Ahem.. ahem... Ram control bhai... yahan bade aur bacche dono hai... thoda toh dhyan rakho... by then ram and priya out from hug... both couldn't meet eyes with anyone.. they just looking down..

KK..AK.. Amacchi.. everyone came to raya... Ram and priya bend down to take blessings from .. while both bend down... ram thinks something mischievous... when priya touching AK.KK feet.. ram tto bend down but he took back a step... and pinched on priya waist... priya starled and she stood up straight.. she totally flushed in to red cherry tomato colour... she kept her one palm on where ram pinched... everyone perplexed by priya reaction... ram suppressing his laugh.. innocently

Ram : Kya hua priya.. aise kyu kamar pakdi ho??? Kuch hua hai kya... he tries to touch again giving another reason... but priya hurriedly took of her hand... controlling herself.. KK sensed something fishy...

Priya : looking at everyone.. adjusting her veil (she wore lehenga).. nehi .. kuch nehi...bas shayad pin chubrahi hai... now am ok .. priya glares at ram angrily.. ram rolling tongue inhis cheek

Ram : ok then aao aashirwaad lethe hai... priya tensedly stood beside ram.. while bending down

Priya under her teeth... ram can hear her : pls mr.kapoor koi shararath nehi... warna dekhlo... aap mujhe bahuth he acche tarah se jaanthe ho... so be serious... sab hai yahan pe koi bhi aise kaam math kariye jinse mujhe embarrass hona pade please... she is pleading him...ram suppressing his laugh just nods his head

Finally both took everyone blessings

Ram came stood beside vikram... Priya still with elders.. KK wants to do chunri rasam rightnow... so everyone discussing about that preparations.. slowly priya skipped from these discussions.. came stood beside neha...

Priya to neha : sorry yaar.. meri wajahse teri bidaai rasam postpone hogayi... neha mocking fake anger

Neha : ohh toh tumhe yaad hu mein... waah great neha turns to vikram calls him hey vikram come na ill introduce someone.. priya expected this reaction from neha... priya just stood there.. ram and vikram came there.. ram understood what happened... he stood beside priya side hugging her... Giving support.. neha looking at this love birds...

Neha to vikram : meet honewali mrs.Priya Ram Kapoor... she said sarcastically... tears falling down from priya eyes...vikram nudging neha hand

Vikram : kya karrahi ho neha... ithna accha moment ko kyu kharab karrahi ho... Dekh priya rorahi hai... Neha looks at her... she just few steps away... neha reached raya... stood infront of them crisscrossing her arms... both raya looks at her... priya wiping her tears...

Neha : mere pyare bhaiyya... Agar aap thodi der ke liye mere honewali bhabhi ko chodsakthe hai... taaki mein gale lagasaku... please... ram freed his grip from priya shoulder... priya shyly smiles... Ram moves aside... neha hugs priya ...

Neha : tut oh chupe rasthum nikle ho yaar... ithna sab kuch horaha tha ... pyar... shaadi ki planning... lekin banak tak padne nehi di... kaafi accha natak ki dono ne... great... priya out from hug wiping her tears

Priya sternly : koi natak nehi ki humne... hum khud patha nehi tha... ye ... sab... her voice lowered and her gaze too..neha burst in to laughter and hugs her... vikram.. ram too joined.. group hug.. at the end ram gave a peck on priya cheek... priya hit him on his chest.. both nevik laughs.. priya wiping her cheek...

Vikram : ram shaadi humdono ki huyi (sidehugging neha)... aur suhaag raath ki shuruat tum dono karrahe ho... ram lowers his gaze scratching his temple...

KK called them for chunni chadana rasam...(I copied this from BALH ).. KK wanted to this that day as after that nevik are going On their HM... As a Ram sister... neha presence required in this rasam.. so here rasam started

(On the occasion of Chunni chadana, groom's parents and close relatives visit the brides house. The grooms sister or sister in law presents the girl a red sari, as a token of acceptance of the girl in their family. Thereafter, the girl is dressed in the clothes given by the boys family. The main ritual of the ceremony is when the girls would be mother-in-law places a red chunni on the girls head and gives her some traditional jewelry. Following this is a ritual in which the girl is fed boiled rice and milk by all the relatives of the boy that are present at the time. The ceremony comes to an end with the exchanging of rings between the prospective bride and groom.)

Priya sat in middle... Neha came there with shagun saree... she handovered to Priya... priya took blessings from everyone... KK, amacchi gave a peck on her forehead...

KK : Ab jaake tayyar hojao... Priya leaves the place to get ready... after some time she came back wearing shagun red saree.. she did some lite makeup... her hair in to bun .. neha accompanied her.. raya looks at each other.. Neha giggles looking at them... priya lowers her gaze... neha left her for chunni ritual... neha went to ram... and closed his mouth...

Ram jaws dropped looking her simplicity... he stood there wide opened mouth... ram came back to reality by neha antics ... both nevik giggling... KK came forward and placed a red chunni over priyas head.. and gave some jewellery to priya as shagun... priya took blessings from all elders... Neha came there with a huge bowl of boiled rice and milk.. priya shocked looking at the bowl size... neha giggling...

Neha : aise kya dekhrahi ho... ithni saare log hai... it's a ritual yaar sab tumhe khilana hai... toh kam nehi padni chahiye na.. priya thinking

Priya : priya tut oh gayi aaj... ye bowl dekhke he meri jaan jaarahi hai... ab kya karein... Punjabi ladke se tere palle padi hai... hey ram bachale mujhe...agar moti hojaungi toh.. mr kapoor... just then her mobile beeps... her mobile with neha.. neha looked at the screen it flashed ram name .. she understood... she went to priya.. gave mobile to her

Neha in priya ear : dekhle,.. kuch special message hai from special person.. priya understood who is the sender...opened message

ye hi sochrahi hona Punjabi ladke ke palle padi hu... kiss smiley.. darling ab adath dhaalo... punjabiyon ki tarah petbharke khaane ki... don't worry agar tum weight puton karogi phir bhi I treat u same... coz mujhe sukhe patthe jaise Barbie doll ladkyian se jyada... mujhe teddy bear jaise fluffy ladkyian bahuth pasand hai priya blushing reading messages... her cheeks turned in to crimson red.. she about lock the phone again message from her hero...

oye hoye... meri sherni ko sharmaana bhi aathi hai kya... kiss smiley' priya expression changed reading this message .. she gave a stern look towards ram .. she replied

mujhe nehi patha tha ki aapko logon ke beech jaghda karane ke alawa ... aise pyar ki baathein.. romance shomance bhi patha hai.. tongue smiley...very impressive.. MR.KARPUR' she sent it and next sec gave mobile to neha... everyone start feeding ritual...

Ram read message : he smiles .. he didn't replid.. .. finally everyone fed her... its time for ring ceremony... but problem is they didn't purchased any rings... so everyone discussing what to do...being Kapoors amarnath ready to get arrange rings... he was about to call their jewelry shop.. priya went to AK

Priya : Papa... Ak turned towards her.. he felt very happy hearing papa from PRiya... he kept his palm over her head.. priya smiles

AK : kya beta kuch kehna hai kya...?

Priya stuttering : Wo.. wo...

AK : bhejijak bolo beta..

Priya : wo .. papa..agar aap bura nehi maanenge toh ... mr.kapoor ke liye kya mein apni papa ka ring pehna sakthi hu ...? AK smiles at her Innocence

AK : ismein bura lagne ki kya baath hai beta... balki khushi ke baath hai unki ashirwaad hamesha aapke dono ke pass rahega... par beta tumhare liye toh ring kharidni padegi na... ram overheard their conversation... he interrupted them

Ram : papa... priya ke liye ring hai mere pass... he took out the ring... Everyone giving suspicious look.. even priya too

Ram mumbling : wo...wo.. scratching his temple.. wo .. aaj mein kaise bhi karke priya ko propose karne ka socha,,,, toh... He lowered his gaze... everyone burst in to laughter..

So ring ceremony.. first priya kept ring in rams finger... and vice versa.. priya eyes welled in tears looking at her papa ring in rams hand... it perfectly fitted in his finger... Everyone busy in talking with eachother... ram noticed priya tears.. ram asked her through frowning eyebrows.. she just nodded her head... she said something in neha ear... neha just noded her head and went to KK .. said something to her.. KK looks at priya and gave a smile...

KK : mujhe sabse kuch kehna hai.. everyone turned towards her... ram aur priya ki shaadi south Indian style mein hogi.. kyunki ye meri honewali bahu ki choti si maang hai.. unki maa.papa ki iccha hai toh... hum kaise manakarsakthe.. south Indian shaadi ki preparation ke liye time lagegi toh shaadi ke baaremein baadh mein sochenge... abhi neha aur vikram ki bidaai rasam shuru karein... waise bhi bechare shaadi ke baad bhi ekdusre se durrehrahe hai kabse... winks at neha... neha lowered her gaze blushing... priya smiles at them

Priya : maa... KK felt very happy hearing maa word from priya...

Priya : maa... neha aur vikram abhi HM ke liye jaarahe hai toh...unke aane ke baad he meri shaadi fix karenge... tabtak mujhe time bhi milegi.. sab arrange karne ki... ram shocked... he is drinking water when these discussions happening between them... hearing priya words he spilled water ... he started coughing.. priya and kk both ran towards him... priya tapping on his forehead... KK rubbing on his back...

Ram holding priya hand : tumhari dimaag toh theek haina... priya astounded the way he is speaking... and surroundings also..everyone looking at these two only.. ram realized what he done.. biting his tongue.. holding priya hand.. he excused taking aside her from there

Ram : maa ek minute please.. KK just smiles

Both are lil bit away from crowd...

Ram : tu pagal hogayi kya.. ye kya karrahi ho...? Priya confused

Priya : mein.. meine kya kiya.. lagtha hai aap pagal hogaye ho.. aise koi sabke saamne.. she lowered her head... ab bolo bhi aapki problem kya hai.. dowry ki maang hai toh pehle se bolrahi ho.. shaadi ki cancel... showing her pointer finger towards ram.. ram just smiles and gave a peck on her finger.. she just took away her hand.. she hide her hand on her back

Ram : meri zindagi ki sabse badi dowry tum.. mujhe uske aagey kuch nehi chahiye... so teri dimaag se wo nikaalde... ab suno meri problem... tum ye kya kehrahe ho neha vikram aane ke baad he hamari shaadi...? Haa???

Priya taking a long breathe : oh god mr.kapoor... ye bhi koi poochnewali baath hai kya.. aur usmein problem kya hai...? Aur mujhe time bhi milegi sab tayyari ke liye... ram now pissed off

Ram shouts loud : bas karo yaar. ... unko mein HM pe One month bhejraha hu... ab one month ke baad hamari shaadi.. hadh hai yaar.. agar ye mujhe pehle patha hotha toh mein donoko HM jaane he nehi dungi... priya giving Haaw expression. Everyone heard ram

Nevik smiling uncontrollably... Kapoors.. nevik came to them

Vikram : so ye hai teri problem.. achha ok hum HM karengey.. tum dono ki shaadi ke baad he .. sab eksaath jayenge HM pe.. kyu neha.. vikram winks at neha.. ram just lowered his gaze... feeling very embarrassed

Neha : mujhe nehi patha tha... Mr.ram kapoor ithni besabar hongey shaadi karne ke liye.. wo bhi jiske saath hamesha ladthe rehthe thay.. saying this giggles.. raya glares at her...

Priya : nehi vikram tum log jaao... mujhe patha hai neha iss din ke liye kabse intezaar karrahi hai.. aap log chalo... Maa aapko koi problem nehi na unki hm ke baad... ram left the place angrily hearing priya words...KK just nods her head saying no issues.. KK signals her like what about ram ???

Priya : unko mein sambhalungi.. samjhadungi .. both smiles... ab chalein maa... neha vikram ko derhorahi hai...

Happily nevik went to enjoy their HM

Ab shaadi hogayi hai... kal sab apne apne ghar chale jaayenge.. phir sab raya ki shaadi mein milenge... raath ki andere mein Sirf ye NGO building roshni chamak rahi hai... jahirsi baath hai bhi aaj he ek shaadi huyi hai yahan.. aur kuch dinon baad ek aur shaadi ke liye tayyar hai...

priya made peehu sleep.. she ticked her under duvet... asusual she going to her favourite place i.e. terrace... in the middle way all of sudden her heartbeat raised... she expecting ram there... and there he waiting for her...

he stood there with a flower in his hand... priya smiles... ram too.. ram offered flower..priya accepted flower... both steps towards railing...

priya :toh aapko patha kaise chala ki mein aarahi hu... jaise mein aathe he aap meri taraf... ram smiles...scratching his temple

ram : tumhari aane se pehle he tumhari kushbhu mere tak pahunjaathi hai hawa mein ye kehne ke liye tum aarahi ho...priya blushing... all of sudden her eyes caught engament ring in ram hand... ram knows her gaze

ram : kya dekhrahe ho priya ... priya startled

priya : kuc...kuc..kuch nehi..bas aise he... she starts to move.. ram pulls her holding her arm.. she landed near his chest... priya hairs covering her face... ram tucked them back... Priya closed her eyes... ram moving his finger over her face outline... He turned her..hugged her from back... keeping his hands over her palms ... near her nape..he blow air... priya feeling cold shivers... ram smiles

ram : ab bolo ... ring ceremony mein bhi tumhari aankhon mein aansu kyu... abhi bhi ring dekhke tum ... kahin tumhe mein force.. priya jerked turned facing him...she kept her fingers on his lips...nodding her head negatively

Priya : mein bahuth khush hu mr.kapoor... U r the best thing ever happened in my life... mujhe aur kuch nehi chahiye... mein toh bas... she clinged her head down.. ram lifts her head holding her chin.. ram held her by her shoulders

Ram : bas... kya priya... Koi problem??

Priya : wo.. bas... ring kaafi old fashioned.. aur aapki status... ram cuts her in middle

Ram : tu sach mein pagal hogayi ho priya ... mein bahuth khush hu... ye ring sirf ring nehi papa ki akhri nishaani.. aur hamari rishthe ki pehli nishaani... its very special to me... priya eyes filled with tears.. she biting her lower lip.. .hugs ram.. ram first shocked. But later he too joined he encircled his arms protectively... For some time both stayed like that there... after that ram broke hug.. gave a peck on her forehead... Priya closed her eyes feeling his lips touch.. priya freed herself from hug...both entwined their hands.. sat there...

Ram : ye tumne bahuth galath ki yaar...shaadi ko one month postpone karke he pouts

Priya smiles at his cute childish antics.. to lighten his mood.. teasingly : kya mr.kapoor... mujheh laga aap bahuth khush honge ye sochke ki humein time milenge shaadi se pehle time spend karne ke liye... lekin aap hai ki...

Ram : ismein khush hone ki kya baath ... will u pls enlighten me pls

Priya taking ram palm in between her hands.. she rubbing his hand: arey kehthe hai ki engagement aur shaadi ke beech ke pal bahuth khoobsurat hothey hai... wo dabhi dabhi hasi.. roz aapki phone .. msgs ke liye wait karna... good morning... good night msgs.. aur bahuth kuch.. chupchupke se milna... friends tease karna... upar se shaadi ki khushi... sochke dekho ... mein toh bahuth excited hu... ram looking at her intensly.. priya caught his sight.. priya looks away.. ram makes her to face him holding her chin...