New Story Ajeeb Prem Kahaani Part 16 last part B updated on page 29 - Page 16

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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow... An update after a long time..
Very superb update..
Very cute Raya nok khoks..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very nice part plss update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
cute n sweet update just like RaYa

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Posted: 9 years ago
very nice & awesome update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very nice update as always.
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very nice update,,,,,good going at last me neha caught RaYa hugg, Neha to Neha hi hai yar!!!! super
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very nice update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Haye RaYa kissed and their PDA made Krishnaji and AK to tease both of them. But with this they are so cute has immense concern for each other. Good Priya is fine and now with Ram deal with her she has fulfilled with hug moreover Neha got another chance to tease them.
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Posted: 9 years ago

First of all sorry everyone... now a days am not able to give regular updates... jinko story yaad nehi hai wo log please read once again previous parts and do comment again :P i dont mind at all... now moving to update


Part 14:

Recap: KK : Pagal chalo humlog chalthe hai...everyone hugging each other... priya too hugging KK and her frnds ram stood in between them...without any one notice she hugged him and gave a peck on his cheek... ram didnt expected this...he stood there in shock...Nevik reachd there in their car... neha caught priya hugging ram...


vikram : chalein aunty...raya and KK in one car...nevik in another car...


Priya took rare seat... KK in front seat... both raya stealing glances from eachother... in regular intervals ram rubbing his cheeks where priya gave peck...


KK looks at ram...rubbing his cheeks: ram...ye kya hua tumhare gaal pe aise haath rakhe ho..ram hurriedly removes his palm...priya hides her smile


Ram stammering :nehi...nehi...kuc...kuch..nehi maa...wo aise he...glares at priya through rare mirror...there his eyes catches priya blushing reading looking at her mobile...


Again she starts tapping message...biting her lower lip ..ram heart skips looking at her blushy cheeks...Biting her lips... Ram thinking what makes her blush this much..he didn't do anything not even a message ... then...??? He eating his own brain thinking about secret behind priya s blushy smile... atlast everyone reached NGO...almost dinner time... everyone freshened up and enjoying their dinner with lots of teasing on nevik honeymoon... but these two love birds are living in their own world... they are just smiling but their not in this world... priya blushing thinking again and again about messages... and ram thinking about the secret behind priya blush... he couldn't take it anymore... he decided to know reason behind her smile...by that time peehu feeling very sleepy..she calls priya...peehu sat next to ram...


Peehu : priya meri hogayi hai... mujhe neendh aarahi hai...


Priya : meri bhi hogayi hai...chalo mein tumhe suladethi hu...she goes to peehu... ram audible to priya


Ram : peehu ko sulaane ke baad... Terrace pe...winks at her...priya blushes... and takes leave taking peehu with her...


After a while... ram waiting for priya on terrace... gazing at stars...his ears alert by hearing her beautiful anklets chimes... A smile adorned his lips... ram turns... a brief eye lock... priya steps towards ram..


Priya : ji...kahiye... Koi jaruri baath hai kya??? She lowers her gaze... ram feeling very strange as priya behaviour changed.. ram knotting his eyebrows... gets up from the swing... takes her both palms in his palms... makes her sit beside him...


Ram : baath toh hai... Wo bhi bahuth jaruri... hearing this priya looks at him questioningly...lekin baath tumhe kehna hai...wo bahuth jaruri hai mere liye..now priya gives a confusion look


Ram : are yaar...pls baath karona... mein notice karraha hu...tum wo priya hai he nehi...u r totally changed... ab pls batao kya hua hai... tum iss shaadi se khush nehi ho kya...?


Priya just nods her head...ram: toh phir tum pehle ki tarah kyu nehi ho... mujhse baathein kam kardi... Mujhse ladthi nehi ho... I know tumhe patha hai mein tumse gussa...wussa nehi hu...bas tumhe chidaneke liye..wo jhappi aur pappi ka rule rakha hai... priya just widenes her eyes and looks at him


Ram : kya...tumhe patha nehi hai...?priya nods her head negatively...hadh hai yaar... tum ithni kaise badalgayi ho... abhibhi ek lafz tak nehi kaha tumne... kya hua hai tumne... tum gussa ho mujhpe...ki meine sabke saamne daanta ...? Priya nods her head negatively...


Ram frustatedly : for god sake priya kuch toh bolo... aise sar math hilao... kahin tumhari awaaz chali toh nehi gayi na... mujhe dumb ladki se shaadi karrahe ho... dhoka karrahe hai sab milke... now priya glares at him angrily...


Ram taunts : waah...ab mujhe thodasa ittusa lagraha hai ki...tum wahi ho...??? Ok if u r not comfortable I don'task abt u r changed behaviour... take ur own time... and one more important thing Iwant to ask u... whats the matter??? Jabse car mein baithe ho tabse leke ngo aanetak ithna blush kyu karrahi thi.. aisa kya hai mobile mein.. ??? mein toh ek bhi msg nehi send ki tumhe...toh... aisa kya hua ki tum ithna blush karrahi thi...ekdum kisi aur duniya mein ho...???


Again priya blushes... in a jerk ram snatches her mobile... priya tries to snatch her phone... ram wantedly lifts his hands straight towards up... Priya trying to catch his hand... In this process... both raya came very near... theres no gap between these two bodies... ram sensed... ram wantedly bends back.. priya leans on him...ram again bends lil back...priya leans more on him... ram again bends...this time...he didn't thought that they will fall... both fell down on floor...priya wearing saree... its adorned her angelic curves perfectly... ram palms resting on her bare waist... priya shivering with his touch... but ram mesmerized by her beauty... looking at her face... asusual priya hair fall covering her face... Ram removes his both palms from her waist... he tucks her hair with his both pointer fingers... cupps her face in between his palms.. priya tightly closed her eyes... ram smirks... very gently he pecks on her forehead... a kiss with so much of love... Priya slowly opens eyes... eye lock


Ram looking in to her eyes :ab bolo aisa kya hai... mobile mein... mujhe jaanna hai ki mere alawa wo kaun hai jo tere gaalon pe ye gulaab rang sajasakthe hai (caressing her cheeks with his thumbs)...


Priya just blushes... bends her head down... aapke alawa meri zindagi mein aise koi nehi hai... jo mujhe ithna effect karnewale... so jealous hone ki jarurat nehi... she about to get up.. bu tram in swift encircles her with his hands...she falls on his chest...


Priya : ye kya karrahe ho aap...?Chodiya mujhe...


Ram tightens his grip : ab mein tabtak nehi chodunga jabtak tum mujhe tumhari blush ke peeche wala secret nehi bataogi..? sochlo... mujhe kya ??? mein yahan aise he rahunga...subah tak...ahaaa...am just loving it..


Priya : but am not at all loving it... pls chodiye mujhe... ram tightens his grip... mr.kapoor.. meri hadiyan tutjayegi... pls leave me... ram laughing... Priya finally gives up ok fine ill show u...but pls pehle mujhe utne dijiye... pls... ram loosens his grip... priya gets up...sets her saree...


Ram : ab bolo ..? aisa kya hai tum ithni laal horahi thi... now no excuse priya...you gave ur word... so

Priya blushing... she opens her mobile..opens whatsapp... handovers mobile to ram and runs towards the rail blushing...ram looks at mobile... at first he is shocked later...he too starts blushing looking at the mobile... raya jhappi aur pappi in lift pic... Another pic of raya jhappi pappi pic outside restaurant... Ram stands beside priya...still priya blushing..ram gives back her phone... priya couldn't meet her eyes..


Ram : kaafi cute pics haina..? very cute and happy perfect couple...? By then Priya cheeks turned in to crimson red...waise priya tumhe neha ki tips ki koi jarurat nehi...priya eyes widened.. she didn't expected that ram will read neha tips and tricks to seduce husband... She mimes shitt... and closes her eyes tightly...turns her head aside... ram smiles... tum ladkiya kithne baathein karthe ho yaar... aise personal baathein bhi hadh hai yaar..now priya in her thoughts gazing at sky... ram notice that...he place his hand on her shoulder..she comes out from her thoughts.. ram : kya hua priya..kahan khoyi ho..?priya just nods her head and smiles wiping a lone tear escaped from her eyes..ram worried now : am sorry priya.. mein toh majak karraha tha... mujhe laga tum samaj jaogi ki mein koi gussa nehi hu tumse..tum wo sab nehi...


Priya : nehi aisa kuch nehi mr.kapoor... aap bahuth special ho mere liye...mein aisa kuch bhi nehi karna chahthi hu jiski wajahse mein firse akeli ho... isliye jo aapne saja di mein wo poora karne ki koshish ki... isse vishwas ke saath ki aap mujhse root sakthe hai...lekin naaraaz nehi...mujhe dar tha mein pehle bhi aapko...lowers her gaze...agar iss baar aapko mana nehi paayi toh...meri duniya he khatam hogi...isliye mein... ram keeps his finger on her lips... Priya looks at him...ram holds her by shoulder


Ram : priya tum khudko change math karo... mujhse lado...jhagda karo... tease karo..taunt karo... jo meri pasand thi aur hai aur hamesha rahegi... maa...daadi...duniya wale kya kahenge...wo sab sochna bhi math... mujhe meri priya wapas chahiye...jo baath baath pe mujhse compete karthi thi..argue karthi thi... 2 din ke liye accept nehi karpaya hu yaar...toh lifelong kaise accept karu tumhari ye jo tv serial wali bahu character...priya punches him in stomach...he laughs...tum meri Jhansi rani ho...waise he raho... ram hugs her..priya resting both her palms on his chest


Priya : mr.kapoor... as per me...shaadi se pehle aagey badna matlab wo jarurat banjayegi... agar hum shaadi ke baad aagey badenge toh... wo hamari aanewali zindagi ki khubsurat pal hogi... mujhe aapke zindagi mein jarurat banke nehi...aapke zindagi ki khubsurathi banke rehna pasand karungi... still both are in hug... ram smiles


Ram : priya tumse he mein hu...tumhare bina mein kuch nehi...tumhari har khushi... mujhe bahuth matter karthe hai...jisdin tum mere dil mein aayi ... ussidin meine promise kiya apneaap se ki ussdin...usspal se... mera harsukh tera... tumhari har dhukh mera... Tumhari har faisle ko mein aankhe bandh karke maanunga... coz I trust u more than myself... Rahi bath physical realtion ship ki... it doesn't matter to me yaar.. tum mere saath poori zindagi rehne wali ho... wo kaafi hai mere liye... now priya encircles her hands around him..hugs him... ram smiles by her gesture... ram thinks to tease her


Ram : iska matlab ye nehi ki hamesha aise he rehne wale hai hum... mera bahuth plans aur hopes hai first night ko leke... so tabtak ready hojao...priya looks at him with wide eyes... a slight blush smile dancing on her lips... ram winks at her... priya slaps on his hand


Priya : dhath... bahuth besharam ho aap... ab mein jaarahi hu sone...kal se shaadi ki tayyariyan shuru...all the best...


Ram pulls her holding herwrist..keeping his chin on her shoulder : abhitak tum mere besharami dekhi he kahan ho... priya feeling goosebumps by his proximity...he gives a peck on her ear priya frees herself and runs from there... ram still stood there smiling ear to ear


Priya reached her room...breathing heavily... ram too comes down settles in his room... his mind havoured

with priya thoughts... his mind recollects neha msg to priya... he thoughts something takes out his mobile and taps a message to priya


Priya sharing her day... her feelings... with her dairy...just then her mobile beeps... she know the sender...


Message : Uss pagal neha ki baathon mein math aao... tum saree mein just beautiful aur sexy lagthi ho... in detail shaadi ke baad bathunga... especially u look hot from back view... Reading this priya blushing to the core.. she stands up and steps towards dressing table...turns back and tries to look back... this time she hear ram voice


Ram : oye buddhu...mein saree me kahan...night dress mein nehi... waise ithni mehnath kyu karrahi ho...meine kahana in detail bathaunga thoda sabar rako shaadi hone tak... she searching from where he is talking...just then her eyes caught his glimpse near window...


Priya rushes towards window :aapko sharam nehi hai...aise ladkiyon ki room mein ...? Ram stops her in middle


Ram : haaw... mere sharam ka chodo... tum ladkiyon ka kya hai... aise aise messages ...cheee making weird faces...aur tum kam thodi na ho... room mein choti bacchi bhi hai...aur tum kya kya sochrahi ho... aise mirror mein kya dekhrahi thi..haan... bolo.. priya starts stuttering...wo..wo..mei..mein


Ram : chup..bilkul chup...sab rules sirf ladkon ke liye... censor board sirf hamare liye hai kya...ladkiyonke liye nehi... haan.. ab jao jaake sojao... subah se shaadi ki rasmein shuru ...ithni bhi responsibility nehi ... jab dekho... chee... Chee... making weird faces he leaves from there... priya in anger shuts windows harshly... Ram laughing... punching in air... Reach his room and drifts to sleep


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