New Story Ajeeb Prem Kahaani Part 16 last part B updated on page 29 - Page 13

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Posted: 9 years ago
superb update.
kya likhate ho yaar aap... too gud.
finally Priya ne bol hi diya k wo ram se shadi karegi.
fantastic.
loved it to the core.
pl continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update..
Priya proposed Ram in a very unique way...
Please continue soon..😛😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awww very sweet n cute part priya proposed to Ram hayeee pls continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superbly written and a beautiful update..
It's Priya who proposed Ram!!!!!!!
And Ram is speechless!!!!!!!!!!!
Please continue soon...
Waiting eagerly for the next update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 10

Ijust love this update
Ray a scene s r superb cute
The way they fight with each other is awesome ...
Beautifully written akka..
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
superb update...
raya scenes r superb
they didnt confess their love through words but they love each other
and always b there for each other
such a cute story..
continue asap..
waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago
Just awesome update..
Too good..
Continue soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
A fun filled marriage
Indirectly Priya said about her feelings to Ram and he was happy but seems entry of Abhay in story will make their life in problem
Neha Vik are married and so will be RaYa soon Krishnaji and Peehu is also happy.
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Posted: 9 years ago
update se pehle ye raha ek chotasa preview
terrace... some white and pink curtains are dangling covering a bed which is decorated with flowers few hours before but now all the flowers scattered... whole terrace lit with nice aromatic candles... they tried to convert this open terrace in to a temporary room just ceiling open... sides covered with temporary walls... both love birds raya on bed inhaling each other aroma... looking at the sky... both covered with duvet till shoulders... ram giving wet kisses on priya bare shoulder... priya enjoying his sweet torture... she closed her eyes feeling his touch... ram didnt stopped his torture... finally priya pushed him hard on his chest ..
Ram rubbing his chest : OUch ... priya it hurts yaar.. he pouts
priya smiles tucking herself in duvet... : U deserve it
ram too smiles pulls her in to hug... priya lands on his chest.. ram takes her to side.. priya entwins her fingers with him... both are looking at sky while playing with entwined fingers.. ram looks at priya gave a peck on her forehead... priya just smiles

ram caressing priya hair : priya..
priya : hmm
ram : kissing her entwined hand : kuch nehi poochoge... ???
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: joemahika

update se pehle ye raha ek chotasa preview

terrace... some white and pink curtains are dangling covering a bed which is decorated with flowers few hours before but now all the flowers scattered... whole terrace lit with nice aromatic candles... they tried to convert this open terrace in to a temporary room just ceiling open... sides covered with temporary walls... both love birds raya on bed inhaling each other aroma... looking at the sky... both covered with duvet till shoulders... ram giving wet kisses on priya bare shoulder... priya enjoying his sweet torture... she closed her eyes feeling his touch... ram didnt stopped his torture... finally priya pushed him hard on his chest ..
Ram rubbing his chest : OUch ... priya it hurts yaar.. he pouts
priya smiles tucking herself in duvet... : U deserve it
ram too smiles pulls her in to hug... priya lands on his chest.. ram takes her to side.. priya entwins her fingers with him... both are looking at sky while playing with entwined fingers.. ram looks at priya gave a peck on her forehead... priya just smiles

ram caressing priya hair : priya..
priya : hmm
ram : kissing her entwined hand : kuch nehi poochoge... ???


dont know anything...
aftr this today i want update basss
nehi to katti 😛😆

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