Raya OS: Begin Again - Page 6

Originally posted by: urvi2788

Beautiful writing...seems can't get enough of it...wanna read more n more 👏,,

very nicely penned down

Originally posted by: peeyara

thanks for pm Jo 😛

it was sweet n lovely OS 😛

but ek problem hai, itna bada OS kyu likha 😆 lagta hai bht tym tha tumhare paas 😆

next tym thoda chota likho Jyoti 😆

Originally posted by: sssabcd

lovely os... Very nice..

Originally posted by: iluvusakshi

JO..aur b three situations pending hai. agar apke paas time hai to kya aap likhoge..plzzz.

Originally posted by: aman.anjaan

hey jo junior 😆
u r a forum senior 😆😆😆

lol god knows kya comment karna tha or kya comment ho raha btw lines acchi thi...now coming back to Os
i read long back it was amazing par itna bada kyu likha main abhi tak pura pad nahi paaya😆😆😆
:lekin achha tha superr Jaipur track par bahut kam OS ya ss Hai do continue Jo
sirf Iluvsakshi(atleast apna naam to batao madam)😆

Ki demand puri ki ab meri bhi Write One FF(SS hi likh dena chalo koi nahi OS ) on Dubai track waiting

Originally posted by: luvsakshi

First sorry ..I know im damn late but you know na busy with work

ok coming to os

it was beautifully excuted and perfectly potaryed the feelings of ram and priya having second child ..

Loved it .. do write more ..

hope you are preparing well for exams .😉

Thanks for the pm