3rd One Shot Of Sakshi Bday - Page 6

Originally posted by: luvsakshi

Wow ..

first attempt is such an awesome OS baby

will give my fulll comment later

absoultely beautiful

Unreseriving 😆

Sorry for late .. You know what Jo I have read this three times , can't belive this sweety jo has written haha , What way of moulding the story line in your way when the divorse things happened .I loved the way how Ram aproched her .The intense you created is hot and romantic betweeen them .

Loved hoow he asked promice on me . beautifull narrated and the end , the greetings from him , the biggest gift for a female .. wowww superbly predicted "

loved it , totally mind blowing .. very sorry for late .. 😉😉

and awesome ring , outstanding cards .. very well penned down ..

Lovely bday gift ..

Originally posted by: luvsakshi

Unreserved my comment

sorry for late reply

Originally posted by: jodude

hahaha... thanks for ur lovely comment...!!😊

ohhh really u hv read this three times... thnk u..😳

edo ala kudiresindi apudu... 😆😆😉

sandy di hs insisted me to post it...😆

Originally posted by: lalmadhu

Awesome OS Jo.

First the selection of the plot for ur first attempt is simply superb. And u handled it very nicely. Every element is placed accordingly and and the result is a wonderful cook-up.👏 👏 👏

Thanks for sharing it to me. Enjoyed it to the core. Kaash the show had something like this. I wouldn't have minded even if it could have ended like this...

But very happy with ur work. Do write more.😃 Only after ur exams.😉 😆 😆

Originally posted by: sssabcd

very well written os...

Originally posted by: sssabcd

very well written os...