RaYa FF : Takdeer UPDATE ON PAGE -147,04/9/15 - Page 72

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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb part...
Finally Ram cane to know the truth about Pihu..
I seriously wish Ram does something to win back Priya and Pihu in his life...
Please continue soon...😛😛
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As usual superb update.. Please continue soon
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PART -24

NOTE:If anybody don't like the story progressing this way they can QUIT from here after .Though I myself thinking there may be two epilogues so lets wait for that ..

This is fiction story we are trying to put it in some positive way . Thank you in advance .


At KM,

Amarnath:- Kahan gaye the Ram. Meine tumhe mana kiya tha na Priya se milne ke liye

Ram:- Mein Priya se nahi apni beti se milne gaya tha aur aap muje meri beti se milne ke liye nahi rokk sake.

Amarnath:- Achanak se tumhe apni beti ki yaad kaise aayi. Priya bhi kisi ki beti hai.

Ram:- Don't start again dad. Please...Ram stared at them and went to his room.

Amarnath(angrily) to KK:- Dekha dekha apne bete ko kaise baat kar raha tha. Muje laga tha ki hamara beta sudhar gaya hai lekin nahi.

Kk:- Aap shanth ho jaayiye. Mein usse samjati hoon.

Kush is watching all this silently.

On the other side,

Priya:- Rajat mein yahan se jana chahti hoon. Please meri tickets book karwa do. Meine tumse pehle hi kaha tha yeh sab eise hi hoga. Mein janti hoon Ram ko abb woh meri beti ko mujse alag kar dega.

Rajat:- Priya eisa kuch nahi hoga and please eise kamzor logo ke jaise baate matt karo. U r a strong and independent woman.

Priya:- Nahi hoon mein strong. Nahi hoon. Aaj Ram apni beti se milne aaya tha dusri baar apni beti ko yahan se le jaayega.

Rajat:- Eisa kuch nahi hoga Priya. Muje lagta hai hame Ram ki wife se...He stops then continue...I mean Kush ki maa se ek baar baat kar leni chahiye.

Priya:- Rajat muje kisise nahi milna. Mein bass yahan se jana chahti hoon. Muje kisi ke saat koi business nahi karna

Jyothi:- Priya relax.

Priya:- No I can't. Mein Pihu par Ram ka saaya tak nahi padne dena chahti hoon. Rajat sir aap ticket book karwa rahe hai ki nahi.

Rajat:- Teek hai Priya mein travel agent se kehkar tumhara ticket book karwata hoon aur jyothi tum bhi packing kar lo.

In the room,

Ram is relishing the moments he spent with Pihu. He was so happy to see his own flesh.

Ram:- Thanks Priya...Thank you so much. Aaj tumne jo diya mein uska ehsaan kabhi nahi chukka paaunga. Meri beti...meri bachhi...meine kabhi nahi socha tha ki mere zindagi mein eisa bhi koi pal aayega jahan mein apne bachhe apne khoon ke saat khel paaunga. Tum nahi janti ho Priya aaj tumne muje kya diya hai. Thank u so much Priya. I want both of u in my life. Mein janta hoon Priya tum mere paas wapas nahi aana chahti ho aur na hi tum muje Pihu se milne dena chahti ho lekin Im sorry Priya mein tum dono ko dobara se khona nahi chahta. Tum dono ko paane ke liye mein jo karne wala hoon shayad tumhe pasand na aaye...shayad tum mujse aur bhi jyada nafrat karne lagogi but Im sorry Priya...kuch waqt ke liye hi sahi lekin mein tum dono ke saat rehna chahta hoon.

He sighed and closed his eyes.

In Priya's place,

Jyothi:- Priya tum jaakar fresh ho jao uske baad saat mein milkar breakfast karenge. Just then Priya gets a call from Amarnath.

Rajat:- Priya uncle ka phone hai

Priya wipes her tears and said "Mein kisi se baat nahi karna chahti".

Rajat:- Bachho jaisi baat matt karo Priya. Lo aur baat karo unse.

Priya took tha phone and lift the call.

Amarnath:- Priya muje kal Rajat ne bataya Ram wahan aaya tha. Hame Ram ko kal sab batana pada. Usse pata chal gaya tha ki hum usse kuch chupa rahe hai aur tumhare mana karne par bhi hame sab batana pada. Meine Ram ko mana kiya tha tumse milne ke liye lekin woh meri baat nahi mana.

Priya said nothing and she disconnect the call.

Rajat:- Enough Priya eise kamzor logo ke jaise behave matt karo. Ram yahan sirf apni beti se milne aaya tha. That's it.

Before anybody say anything Pihu woke up from her sleep and came in the hall.

Priya immediately wipes her tears and said "Aap utt gaye chalo mein aapko jaldi se taiyaar karti hoon aapki kady didi aayi hai

Pihu(excitedly):- Kya...kadi didi aayi hai mein abhi jaakar taiyaar hoti hoon.

Jyothi:- Pihu bass aapko kady didi se milna hai. Muje huggy nahi dogi. Pihu jumps to her lap and Jyothi hugs her dearly.

Pihu:- Aunty mein jaldi se ready hoti hoon uske baad mein aur kady didi khelenge.

Jyothi:- Aur mein jaakar kady didi ko uthathi hoon. Ok

Pihu ran towards bathroom.

Priya gave her bath and get her ready.

Priya:- Pihu kal dadi ke ghar mein aapne kya kya kiya.

Pihu:- Haan mumma kal muje wahan bahut maza aaya. Mein Kush ke saat kheli. Usne muje apna kamra dhikaya, meine Kush ke papa ka bhi room dekha. Phir mein dadi, badi dadi aur kush milkar khele bhi. Muje bahut maza aaya.

Priya:- Wahan kush ki mumma nahi thi

Pihu:- Nahi Kush ki mumma wahan nahi rehti hai.

Priya:- Aapne pucha nahi Kush se ki mumma kahan hai.

Pihu:- Kush ne bola uski mumma hai lekin kahan hai pata nahi.

Priya(thinks):- Ajeeb baat hai Kush ki maa wahan nahi rehti. Kon hai woh aur Kush ke saat kyun nahi rehti. Papa ya mummy ne muje Kush ki mummy ke baare mein kyun nahi bataya.

Pihu:- Mumma muje Kush ke ghar jaana hai.

Priya(angrily):- Nahi Pihu tum wahan nahi jaaogi, kisi se bhi nahi milogi...samji tum. Hum do din mein Singapore wapas jaa rahe hai. Pihu becomes scared and left. Priya cover her face with her palms and looked down.

On the other side,

Ram called his lawyer and fix a meeting. After the call he hurriedly left to wash room to freshen up.

After got ready he came downstairs.

Amarnath:- Ram kahan jaa rahe ho. Shayad tum bhool gaye ho aaj project start karne ka pehle din hai. Hame time par pahuchna hai.

Ram:- Mein kuch nahi bhula hoon. But Im really sorry dad lekin mein aaj office nahi aa sakta. Muje kisi se milne jana hai and its very urgent

Amarnath:- Iss deal se jyada important kya hai. Tum bhool gaye ho Priya yahan hamare liye aayi hai aur abhi hame iss deal par jyada concentrate karna chahiye. Tum apna kaam baad mein bhi kar sakte ho. Issliye tum mere saat office chal rahe ho. Yeh bhi matt bhulo Priya chahe toh deal cancel bhi kar sakti hai.

Ram:- Mein sab janta hoon dad lekin mera kaam jyada zyada zaroori hai aur waise bhi aapki laadli Priya aaj office nahi aane wali.

Amar:- Tumhe kaise pata???? Ram kya kiya tumne Priya ke saat...dekho Ram agar tumne iss baar kisi bhi tarike se Priya ko hurt kiya toh keh deta hoon hum sabka mara hua mooh dekoge.

Ram:- Relax dad. Meine kuch bhi nahi kiya aur na kuch karunga but I want my daughter.

Amarnath:- Kya??? Soch samajkar baat kar rahe ho na. Priya kabhi bhi pihu ko hame nahi degi. Aur mein chahta bhi nahi hoon ki kisi bhi wajah se Priya ko apni beti se alag hona pade. Pihu uski zindagi hai uske jeene ki wajah hai aur tum eisa kuch bhi nahi karoge jisse Priya ko takleef ho.

Ram:- Wah dad itni chintaa sirf Priya ke liye

Amarnath:- Haan kyunki aaj Priya ki eisi haalat mere bete ki wajah se hui hai.

KK:- Ram Priya ko aur takleef matt do beta. Usse bhool jao.

Ram:- Aap chahti hai na maa ki Priya aur Pihu iss ghar mein hamesha ke liye wapas aa jaaye. Bass ek baar; aakiri baar apne bete par vishwas karke dekiye maa. Mein janta hoon ki itna sab hone ke baad abb Priya yahan India mein nahi rukne wali. Muje Priya ko jaane se rokna hoga. Mein apni galti sudharkar puri izzat ke saat Priya ko apne zindagi mein wapas laana chahta hoon. Please dad...please maa ek baar muje woh karne dijiye jo mein chahta hoon.

Amar:- Tum jo bhi kar rahe ho galat kar rahe ho beta

Ram:- Janta hoon dad aur mein yeh bhi janta hoon ki isse Priya ko aur takleef hogi; shayad mujse pehle se bhi jyada nafrat karne lagegi lekin phir bhi mein chahta hoon ki mein apni taraf se ek aakiri koshish karke dekhu.

Amarnath and KK looks into each other. They said nothing.

Ram:- Muje der ho rahi hai. Mein koshish karunga kaam pura karke office aane ki. Saying this he left.

In Priya's place

Jyothi(to lighten up her mood):- Priya chalo na mein Mumbai ghumna chahti hoon. Tickets book ho jaayenge. Pata nahi phir kabhi mauka milega ki nahi.

Priya:- Nahi Jyothi tum chali jao Rajat ke saat mein thodi der akele rehna chahti hoon.

Jyothi:- Priya Rajat office gaya hai. Aur tum mere saat chal rahi ho and that's final

Priya:- Jyothi Pleas...mera sach mein mood nahi hai kahi bhi ghumne ka

Jyothi:- Priya don't behave like that. Problems sabke life mein aate hai so face it. Lekin uski wajah se jeena chod de yeh galat hai. Mein tere liye itne dur se milne aayi aur tu muje Mumbai nahi ghuma sakti.

Priya:-...said nothing.

Jyothi:- Fine tuje akele rehna hai ...reh...mein aur kady akele hi ghumne chale jaayenge aur haan aaj ke baad mein kabhi interfere nahi karungi teri life mein.

Priya:- Sach mein Jyothi tu na ziddi aur irritating ladki hai..pata nahi Rajat sir kaise jhelte hai tuje. Teek hai chal rahi hoon.

Jyothi:- Good...mein jaakar taiyaar hoti hoon tu bhi jaldi se taiyaar ho jaa.

Jyothi came out and wink at Rajat and said "Mission accomplished"

(Dear readers As I have no idea about law and order please don't dig-out its legal sides. This is fiction story and I wanted to bring Ram and Priya together so I have chosen this way to mould the rest of the story.)

Here Ram met the lawyer Sanjay and discussed the matter with him in detail.

After hearing Sanjay said "Hame sabse pehle Priya ko wapas jaane par stay lagana hoga. Then uske baad mein Pihu ke custody ke liye petition file karta hoon".

Ram:- Lekin kya court muje Pihu ki custody dega. I mean woh kaafi chotti hai aur Priya ka background bhi kaafi strong hai.

Sanjay:- Waise child cases par custody jyadatar maa ko hi milti hai. Lekin aap court se bol sakte hai ki aapko bachhe ke baare mein pata nahi tha aur aap kuch waqt apni beti ke saat rehna chahte hai toh shayad court aapko weekends par bachhi ko aapke saat rehne ka permission de de.

Ram:- Eisa nahi ho sakta ki mein kuch waqt ke liye apni beti ke saat reh saku.

Sanjay:- Phir aap ek kaam kar sakte hai. File for divorce

Ram:- What!!!!!!Divorce!!!!..Aapko ho kya gaya hai. Meine aapse kaha tha ki I want both in my life

Sanjay:- Relax Mr. Kapoor. Divorce se pehle court aap dono ko ek aakiri mauka degi. Around six months aur dekegi ki inn cheh mahino mein aap dono kya saat mein rehna chahte hai ki waqui mein alag hona chahte hai. Issi beech hum Pihu ki custody bhi maangenge court se.

Ram:- Aur agar Priya ne aane se mana kar diya toh

Sanjay:- Toh hum six months ke liye Pihu ki custody aapko dene ki appeal karenge. Kyunki uske baad toh bachhi maa ke paas hi rehne wali hai toh tab tak Pihu aapke saat rahe.

Ram:- Aur Priya

Sanjay- Mr. Kapoor Priya aapke kilaaf jaakar complaint kar sakti hai aur prove kar sakti hai ki aap Pihu ko apne paas rakne ke capable nahi hai...agar eisa hota hai toh aapko character certification dena hoga..Uss waqt ho sakta hai aapse puche ki aapke aur aapki wife ke beech mein rishtaa kaisa tha, aap dono kyun alag hona chahte hai.

Ram:- Eise mein toh muje Pihu ki custody nahi milegi.

Sanjay:- Mr. Kapoor aap bataye the na aapka ek beta hai Kush. Aur aap Kush ka bahut achhe se khayal rakte hai toh bass Kush ke through court ko yeh prove ho jaayega ki aap Pihu ka achhe se khayal rakk sakte hai.

Ram become tensed and Sanjay continued:- Mr. Kapoor koi bhi maa apni bachhi ko kisi ke hawale nahi karti. Agar aapki wife sach mein Pihu se pyar karti hai toh woh Pihu ke saat zaroor aayegi.

Ram:- Kya yeh sab hoga

Sanjay:- Aapko kya lagta hai Mr. Kapoor wahan baitha hua insan nahi hai...woh bhi insan hi hai aur uska bhi ek parivaar hai...woh bhi jaante hai ki jiss tarah ek bachhe ke liye maa ka pyar zaroori hota hai waise hi ek baap ka pyar bhi uthna hi zaroori hota hai. Aap iski chintaa matt kariye. Mein sab karwa dunga. Mein jaldi se stay order ke papers ready karwata hoon uske baad custody ka dekenge.

After visiting so many places of Mumbai finally Priya and jyothi came back home It helps her to divert her mind for sometime but she is very tired. All her stress reduced to some extent.

Jyothi:- Priya abb tu jaakar thoda sa aaram kar le. Mein bhi bahut thak gayi hoon sham ko chai par milte hai. Jyothi turns to go when Priya stops her.

Priya:- Jyothi...thanks

Jyothi:- thanks kisliye

Priya:- Mein janti hoon tune yeh sab mere liye kiya hai

Jyothi:- janti hai na...toh abb jaakar aaram kar...she hugs her and said "sham ko milte hai"

In office,

Amarnath:- Toh Priya nahi aayi

Rajat:- ...(silent)

Amarnath:- Muje nahi pata tha ki Ram ko iss tarah se pata chalega aur woh Priya se milne jaayega. Tumhe kuch pata hai Rajat kya hua kal raat inn dono ke beech.

Rajat:- Nahi Sir muje nahi pata...Priya ne kuch nahi bataya.

Amarnath:- pata nahi yeh ladka kya karne mein tula hai. Ek baar mein Priya se milna chahta hoon.

In the evening,

Rajat:- Priya ticket book ho chukka hai kal sham ki ticket mili hi.

Priya:- Thanks Sir, and Sorry ki aapko meri wajah se itni takleef uthani pad rahi hai.

Rajat:- Priya mein chahta hoon ki tum apne decision ke bare mein ek baar phir se soch lo. Mein nahi chahta ki tum eise yahan se kisi ko bina bataye chale jao. Bhagna kisi baat ka solution nahi hai.

Priya:- Mein baag nahi rahi sir mein wahi kar rahi hoon jo Pihu ke liye sahi hai. Please Sir dobara mujse aap yahan rukne ke liye matt kahiyega. I already made my decision.

Rajat:- teek hai Priya...as your wish.

Edited by luvsakshi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb update..!!👏
priya's insecurities abt pihu was nicely portrayed..
priya wanted to know abt kush mumma...
jyothi is like neha here...😛 she was trying to lighten the mood..
priya wanted to leave India... ram filing for divorce n custody...
so he z trying to stop her like this..😛
good going..👏
continue soon..😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow super!!!!!great going,ram abb aage kya karne wala hai,,,priya air pihu vapis jayenge ke nahi ...interesting continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb n hope raya comes closer
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Posted: 10 years ago
Strange Ram family know everything about Priya but they didn't tell anything to her about Kush mom. Ram to get back Pihu and Priya in his life trying legally. Don't know wat will she do when she came to know wat Ram did this time. Continue soon dear.
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Posted: 10 years ago
nyc part...ram's actn wl hurt priya more ...bt hope fr d bst...continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Good one. Please continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
You r doing the story very good please continue. Soon

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