RaYa Story : Phir Le Aaya Dil..Kya Keeje LAST PART on page 8 *18-1-15*

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aanchal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

All is well that ends well
Raya are now together and will normal life with Pihu and kush
Ram Priya are one soul
thanx for the pm

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ic_2000

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Nice ending but 1part is missing.

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Cute_Saakshii12

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Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Awesome!!
Love the ending!!
Thanks 4 pm!!

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rags06

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Cool..

Lovely ending...

Thanks for PM😛😛

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luvsakshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#55

Thanks for the pms

beautiful story ..

sorry for late

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Mitwaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Beautiful end. Thank's 4 pm. Sorry 4 late reply.

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leena

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Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Part 1
awesome too good yaaar loved thee concept I know Priya will be all right but the way u showwed Priya to take her heart out front of Ram its amezing... now moving for next part...

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leena

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Posted: 10 years ago

#58

Part 3
what a pain Ram is going though still smiling just for his kiddo... OMG awsome too good enjoyed it a lot... can feeel the way u penned down Ram's pain how he must be feeling so sad for it...

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leena

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Posted: 10 years ago

#59

Part 4
wwowoowowow what a lovely end of the story... Aayesh also went out & RaYaPee also happy with each other so good to read such a cute emotinal story it reall touched my heart... wish to read more from writer in future... do post next soon...