Update RaYa new OS~ Dabbu's Diary last part and Epilouge on page 15 - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aman Shortest update buddy
Waiting for more
so much interesting

thank u for ur pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: fan_forever

Hey hey... sara maha kir kira kar diya... itna chhotu sa update...

Not fair at alll...

But nice part... ye shanaya n ashwin... n rajjo too make them go away... to jahanuu... make raya one... n


PLEASE CHANGE THIS FROM AN OS TO A LONG FFF...



sorry i also wanted to give big update but sooo busy yar...nxt update all ashwin go away promise
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb update!!!
Eagerly waiting 4 next part!!!
continue soon
and thanks 4 pm!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: aman.anjaan



not possible yar in 1-2 update i ll finish it and nxt os is also ready


ohh k ... waiting eagerly for another os..😛
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Originally posted by: jodude



ohh k ... waiting eagerly for another os..😛




thanx and ll post soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey...another ossum os...hope ram reciprocates her feelings in d same way! n plz update ur earlier os too!!
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Originally posted by: aditig711

hey...another ossum os...hope ram reciprocates her feelings in d same way! n plz update ur earlier os too!!



thanx...sorry abt eariler os
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Another zhalak for Ram
she is looking so angleic in that and he is just staring at her 😉

aww she loves hhim from school days ..
good going

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi Amaan
I read this update when u updated
sorry not able comment it here

Superb update
I love Ram's scenes very much
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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~~~~~NOTE~~~~

Hiii friends...plz read this before u start read nxt part...
This part divided in 3 sections

Ram's Narration in " Brown " Color

Priya's diary entry in "Red" Color

And Ram remember some momery of days in "Blue Color "
Plz dont get confuse...if anything u can cmmnt i...hope u all undrstand


Here is recap


Recap:

"17 December 2010

Dear Diary,


Maybe I should move on.


He will never be mine
But this guy Aswin really likes me.


Yours truly

Priya "



OS~Dabbu's Diary Part-4



" 25 Jan 2011


Dear Diary,

Ashwin cheated on me.
Why do these thingsalways happens to me.

Why?

Am I not likable , lovable ?

Ashwin didn't like me and neither will my best friend.

Yours Truly
Priya "




" 26 January 2011

Dear Diary,

My bas***d of a best friend and jerk of a brother went to Ashwin's house and beat him up.

Even though he cheated on me , I feel sorry for the poor guy.


Yours Truly

Priya "



"27 Jan 2011


Dear Diary

Ram is out of clg bcoz of me...what i ll do alone in clg...i m sad but happy that ram cares abt me so much...its that only care no love ?????


Yours Truly

Priya "





" 14 February 2011



Dear Diary,


I hate this day

I searched for the perfect gift andcard for my best friend who stoke my heart.

But he got so many gifts and cards that my gifts seemed so lame.


Yours truly

Priya "


Duffer ur gift always special for me dabbu..

So that why u sad on valentain day
Ek bar bolke to dekhti dabbu kabhi kisi chiz ke liye mana kiya hai...ohh god dabbu...





3rd March 2011


Time : 3 pm


" Dear Diary

I m sooo happy today...
Me and Ram going to party as dance couple...i know how much i stressd before asking him for party...and he said yes in one time...i dont have words for how happy i m...may be today he know abt my feeling...finger crossed...

Your Truly

Priya"




Ohhh dabbuu duffer...why u silent all the time u r right main sach me golu hu yar...tu to ek bar bolti




I remember that day eveng


Date : 3rd March 2011


" 7 pm dabbu's place

Hahaha Dabbu yar itna sajne dhajne ki jarurat thi..

Priya: what...!!! Hum party me jaa rhe...

I : Ha pata hai mujhe lekin tumko itna dress up hone ki kya jarurat thi...

Priya : tum tarif nahi kar skte to kam se kam burayi mat karo...

I : plz...suno tum change karke aao sab mera majak banayenge waha...

Priya : what the f...jao nahi jana mujhe..

I : accha gussa mat ho...ab chalo jaisi ho waisi sahi...

Priya : what u mean jaisi hu...???

I : chalna hai to chalo warna mere pass dusre bhi option hai...

Priya : ok chalo...

8 pm @ Party Venue :


Me and priya on dance floor...
Her hand on my shoulder my hand on her waist...

Priya : Ram...ram...ram tera dhyan kaha hai...

But my concentration only one girl alone near bar...

Ha kya hua dabbu itna kyo chilaa rahi hai ???

Priya : tera dhyaan kaha hai...

I : piche ek ladki hai kya hot hai yaar..tu jaanti hai kaun hai..she turn

Priya : wo wo to roshni hai but tu kyu puch raha hai...

I : tu yahi ruk main abhi aaya...

Priya : ram sun...gaya fir se nayi ladki...

We reached home at 11...



Day end "

Ohhh god mene us din kya kiya dabbu ke sath...i have to read that day entry...


I flippd but there is blank page on that day...i chk next date..yes may be she was slept on that day...




Next page
4th March 2011

Dear Diary

I cried full night i cried...
I wanna kill my self...i dressed up for ram and he said those nonsense to me...why why

m i not good looking...
Uska majak banta hai mere sath
Ab main kabhi uske sath nahi jaungi...or wo sabke samne dance floor pe chodke us roshni ke piche chala gaya...

I hate u ram but more than i love you but god plz save him from roshni she is not good for him...
Ohhh shayd ram aaya hai bye...

Your truly

Priya




Ohh dabbu main gadha hu yar...mujhe tumahari baat sunni thi party ke agle din hi tumne mujhe mana kiya tha...but maine suna hi nhi...

Again i remember what happen on nxt day aftr party





Date 4th march 2012

Time 4pm


Dabbu's place

Dabbu Dabbu...

Priya : kyo chilla raha hai...behri nahi hu main...

I : what the hell why dont u pick my call...

Priya : i was busy...

I : busy !!! Kis cheez me aap busy thi...

Priya : why shd i tell u evrything...

I : what !!!! What did u say...??

Priya : you hear right why shd i tell u ???

I : go to hell...main bus tujhe batane aaya tha ki main aaj date pe ja rha hu...

Priya : Date !!! kiske sath ??

I : roshni ke sath...hot date

Priya : ram plz stay away from her she is not good girl...wo sirf tere paise ke piche padi hai isse phle 5 bf the uske...

I : shutup yar !!!! Tujhe hamesha pata hota hai jiske sath me date pe jaane wala hota hu wo ladki me kuch na kuch galat hota hi hai...

Priya : dekh ram main teri best frnd hoo tujhe galat karne se hamesha rokungi. Aage teri marzi...

I : haa baba mujhe pata hai but its jst date...chal byee...




NOW I relaized how much she care for me...
I skipped 8 months






"10 December 2011


Dear Diary,

Christmas is about to come.

But bad news had to cover our lives

His father ( whom he rarely met but loved a lot) died yesterday.


His freaking new girlfriend Roshni was not their to support him in the ceremony .

I was with him all the time

His expression was breaking my heart.

I hate to see him like this.

Oh ! God help him and give him strength .

Yours truly

Priya "


Thank u priya u r savior i dnt know mera kya hota gar tum us time mera sath na deti to...or tumne sach kaha tha roshni ko sirf paisa chahiy tha...i left her i need one shoulder to cry it was u dabbu who always there for me...thank u thank u so much for all support...

I flipped again...






" 1st January 2012


Dear Diary,

I gave a little new year party with the help of Kartik to cheer him up.

He be came but some girl called him and he was gone before I knew it.

I hate him but I love him.

Somebody please get me out of this life.

Yours truly

Priya"





SHe hates but she loves me...sorry dabbu




" 4th april 2012


Dear diary

Ohhh i shared some naugty things to you...i saw ram shirtless today...he is so handsome...i went inside his room he is sleeping without shirt...
He looking so sexy...but he is not mine...i love u ram why dont u love me...

Your truly

Priya "


I blushed...ohhh so she saw me...chalo main use sexy to lagta hu...

I fliiped fast its all my and her life of one year...




"2nd February 2013


" Dear Diary,

I am not going to get him anything for Valentine's day this year.


I am going to be serious and study...

I have to get into Symboisis .


Yours truly


Priya "



" 3rd June 2013


Dear Diary ,


I , Kartik and Ram left home and are going to stay together.

We are going to start a new life.

Wherever he goes , I hope he gets what he wants.


Yours truly

Priya "




" 16 August 2013



Dear Diary,

I met this new guy Rajat.

I think he likes me.

I am in love with a person who will never look at me in that way so let it be.


I was here to start a new life , and I new life I shall start.

This new guy is just my type .

But I can't get over my feelings for my best friend

After todays incident


Yours truly

Priya "

Again i remember 16 august ko kya tha ohhh yes night classes at Mba hub (i gave a coaching class name MBA Hub)






20 days earlier

16th august 2013


@ MBA HUB

Sir : so frnds aaj ke liye bus itna hi...
Aaj hum kuch or baate karenge...

Ram to priya : ab ye kya baate karna chahta hai daabu...???

Priya : mujhe kaise pata hoga ??

Ram : are tumhare clg ka sir hai na...waha bhi itna bor karta hai kya??

Sir : so students Pyar kya hotaa hai ???

Student in one sound : what ????


Sir : are simple question pe esa reaction i said What is love give me ir opinions..

Some student giving stupid answers...

Sir : so Ram tumhare hisaab se pyar kya...

Ram in full Srk style : Sir Pyar dosti hai...
Love is frndship...
pyar ka pahla kadam dosti hai...
Ha pyar to aap apne sabhi dosto se karte ho
lekin wo insaan apke sabhi dosto se khaas hota hai...
Wo ye janta hai ki aap kis chiz se khush kis se dukhi hote...
Unki kaun si baat aapko hasati hai..
Kaun si rulati hai...
Pyar wo ahsaas hai jo dosti ko aage badata hai...
Lekin iska matlab ye nahi hai ki aap jisse pyar arte ho wo bhi aap ko pyar kare...Dost dost ki jagah or dosti me pyar apni jagah...
so mere liye Pyar dosti hai...

Sir : what a beautiful thought Pyar dosti hai...thank u ram...i think u r in love ram tabhi to pyar ke baare me itna jaante ho...

Ram : (blush)

Day end...


I turns to nxt page...

17th August 2013

Dear Diary

Aaj kuch esa hua ki mera pyaar ram ke liye or bad gaya...yes i love u more than anything ram...and i respect ur feelins ram we are best frnd i love u but u dont love me...that ok now i have to move on...
Move on with Rajat...but its hard to me ram to forget u...i love u...love u from core of my heart...

Your truly

Priya


After reading all of this , I was in shock.


My brain started churning and suddenly it hit me like a bucket of cold water.





Sorry for mistake...


Edited by aman.anjaan - 11 years ago

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