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Posted: 11 years ago
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So wait over now in this upate Ram's Narration in brown and Priya's diary entry in Red color...
Hope u like it...

Recap




I was watching "Movie" with Kartik

I heard miss Dabuu open the door.


We didn't turn around to look at her but I really wanted to.


But pretended like I did not.


She called out " Guys , how do I look?"


I turned around to look at her.


And I was blown away.




OS ~DABBU'S DIARY
Part ~3


I was blown away was an understatement. I didn't know a girl could ever be like this, this beautiful.

Surprisingly, she had done nothing but let her hair lose and kept a little blush in her cheek , and that alone , made all the difference in the world.


So there was abousolutely no words made to describe how stunning she was, no words.


Looking at her made me think of the times when we didn't have a worry in the world.


And also made me think that this stunning Dabbu before me used to play football with me , jump around and get covered in mud with me, used to steal cookies and when got caught make ridiculous exuses with me.


She has been with me all this time, but now it all just feels so different.


I can't understand this feeling that caught up inside of me.


Could I love this girl more than a best friend ? If I loved her the way she did, would she love me back?



I was getting more and more confused.


But there was no explanation of her being with 'Rajat'


May be she was hiding her feeling and making a mask of not liking me , not loving me more than a friend.


Only one way to find out, her diary.


I need to get Kartik out of here so I can read it.


Then the door bell rang.


I said ,"I'll get it."


I opened the door to see Rajat all dressed up as if he was the most handsome guy.


I wanted to tell him " Come on dude, your a total nerd with the weird hairstyle and specs", but I restrained it for miss Dabbu.


This guy made me sick. And something told me that he was just using my dabbu


And how can priya like this guy?


Than the thought that she that she was going out with Rajat to rid herself of the feelings she had for me, washed over me.


Then my dabbu came out and went to stand beside Rajat


That action made my heart burn.


They said their goodbyes to us and walked away hand in hand which made me really sick.


Dabbu was gone now , I had to get Kartik out of here so I can read the diary.


So I called Kartik's girlfriend who was a great girl and told her to call Kartik to her house.kamina saala hamesha ready rahta hai is cheez ke liye...


And after 2 minutes kartik hurriedly went out of the apartment.


I jumped out of the couch I was sitting on and rushed towards her room.


And searched for her diary but it was not inside of her blanket.


Where could it be?


Oh right ! She always keeps her private things under her bed.


I put my arms under the bed to search for the diary.


And suddenly my hand came in contact with a notebook.


I took it out , it was her diary.


I quickly put the numbers to open the lock.


The diary opened.


Finally I would know the truth , once and for all.

I flipped through the whole diary and saw entries which was dated since 6 years ago. I started reading and skipping the nonsense about her and reading more about me. I had to find out if she still liked me.






The first entry was her birthday


"12 jan 2009


Dear Diary,

I am in love with my best friend and theres nothing I can do.

He came over to the house today.

And we danced we played we watched movies.

I didn't want him to leave but he had to go.

Will he ever see my feelings towards him.


Yours truly


Priya...(dabbu i love this name when it cames from ram's mouth) "





I wonder this entry was from college days mean she loves me fron our school days...ohh god how stupid i m never saw her feelings...

I flipped again i just wanted to know she still loves me or not...so i flipped in speed but i stopped here and read another entry dated...






" 24 May 2009


Dear Diary,

He is dating the cheer leading captain , Shanaya.

I feel like curling up in a corner and crying my heart out.

Will this feeling ever go away .

Oh! Diary , why doesn't like me.

Yours truly
Priya...not anymore his dabbu "





I Skipped one year





" 26 July 2010

Dear Diary,


Thank God , he left Shanaya...


Maybe I will have a chance.

. Wish me luck

Yours truly

Priya...dabbu(blushed)





How many time i told you shanaya is just time pass...yar dabbu...

I was getting really confused. I skipped to 5 months later.





"17 December 2010

Dear Diary,


Maybe I should move on.


He will never be mine
But this guy Aswin really likes me.


Yours truly

Priya "




Sorry
nxt entry tomorrow...


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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
thnks for pm its nice and waiting for more 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
Awesome once again aman but tum naa bahut spences rakte hoo i cnt bear it yaar n plss continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
Short but nice update
Continent soon
Thanks for p.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
Nice update and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
Nice update ..
But very small😭

Plz come wit a big update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: itsmeg3

Nice update ..

But very small😭

Plz come wit a big update



sorry but busy yaar...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
hey senior..
superb update...
ye ashwin b hai kya is stry mai??😡
continue soon..

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: jodude

hey senior..

superb update...
ye ashwin b hai kya is stry mai??😡
continue soon..



ashwin tha...wait for nxt
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
hey senior
i wanna ask u one ques..

do u like the name dabbu..??😆
first story mai b priya k nick name daddu hai aur yaha b same name dabbu...😆

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