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sushfiza

@sushfiza

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

This is an awesome os..so beautifully written...

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Janilover

@Janilover

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

enjoy reading once agian...
simply supperbbb
thnx for pm

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aanchal

@LovingRaYa

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Beautiful journey of a husband-wife that was tied by a ritual and now entwined in each other arms discovering the love which they feel for each other under the moon light alone forgetting the world...
Thank you for the pm this was wonderful Os on Raya...

Edited by aanchaltulshan - 11 years ago

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Dsudipa

@Dsudipa

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

awesome OS, loved this, u written very well, thx 4 PM

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deeksha

@deekshasxn

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

omg...
i just read it because of its name... THE UNDISCOVERED DISCOVERY

but

when i read it i must say that its really a undiscovered love story which really discovered by you...

superb...👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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thelostgirl

@thelostgirl

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: luvsakshi
Wowww priya ...
This one was the best of your works
simply superbly penned down
and the indiscovered discovery of their confession perfectly penned down to soothen up Rayans
amazing 👏

keep coming with them
Thanks for the pm

Thnk u very much Neel di

Glad u liked it

Will come up with another soon

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thelostgirl

@thelostgirl

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: ic_2000
Beautiful story.

Thnk u very much

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thelostgirl

@thelostgirl

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: krunalidivecha
Superb
Thanks for pm

Thnk u very much

And u r always welcome

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thelostgirl

@thelostgirl

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: armanz
Awesome OS Priya. I loved the the way you made them discover their love. Kudos to you.
Loved the ending even more.
Thanks for pm.

Thnk u very much Fiji

M happy that u enjoyed it

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thelostgirl

@thelostgirl

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: rosinagoor
Priya
It's my pleasure to read this Awesome OS once again
I love this OS very much
You written very well 👏
Thanks for the PM 😊

Thnk u very much di

M glad that u liked it

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