SS: DHADKANEIN Part 15 Updated on Pg 139 on 17.10.2016

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Cute_Saakshii12

@Cute_Saakshii12

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#811

Superb update !!
Love it!!!
Raya k first kiss!!!
And neha's teasing!!!
Plz continue soon and thanks 4 pm!!!

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Malati

@bpatil3

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#812

Thx for the PM Doc.

A beautiful update , oho love in the air blossoms😉😆

Neha k saamne uffo ram n priya how stupid they are😉 neha never leaves a chance to tease them.

I was like 🤣 priya n her embarrassment. blanket odhke sone ki natak🤣. Neha se bachna mushkil hi nhi na mumkin hai😛😆 aur vikki toh bada smart nikla yaar.

I couldn't control while neha was running to priya n suddnly came in search of ram for confirmation, itni curiosity toh apne romance me bhi nhi hogi usse🤣. Now that the gang is added with a no innocent gal, pls don't act smart Neha😆

Enjoyed it

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MyLuvRaShi

@MyLuvRaShi

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#813

awesome update
continue soon
thanks for pm

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Sandy198

@Sandy198

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#814

Love it dear.. 😃

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lalmadhu

@lalmadhu

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#815

Wonderful viji...I don't know why but I want to say it a DELICIOUS update. While reading I got the same feeling that I get when I enjoy the aroma of my most favourite food cooked with great care that too after a long time...mmm...yuuummmyyy...such a delicious treat it is...

Ram cools her down in the most haawwttest way...Gaawwdd..it is soo hot to handle...

I think u should share this kissing process with kiddo of ur gifted story...she may have a good lesson...(or is it already done...lol)

Raya are shining with love and passion...beautifully executed...

Neha being Neha...kisiko nahi chodthi...and vik warning her not to go overboard...they too are soo lovely...u etch their characters with equal importance...

Ram's after effects... Vik maza le raha hai...lol He had to remind that nuts is thr...Ram don't remember anyone...hayee...such was the effect of first kiss...lol

Loved nuts reactions...dropped a bombshell on priya...lol Hum kisise kam nahi...lol Want to read priya's reaction.

I don't say to continue fast coz I know...however if the update is going to be like this then I'll be waiting...till then tc...

Thanks for the pm. And sorry for the late reply...

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rajhallur

@rajhallur

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#816

MY DARLING DOC...

Before commenting to ur update I wil take the pleasure to wish ur baby

MANY MANY HAPPY RETURNS OF THE DAY...

coming to the update...

Ufff!!!!!!!!!!!! Kya likha hai yaar Doc...

Please TAKE A BOW!!!!!!!!!Absolutely brilliant piece of writing... Kaha se laate ho yaar itne saare ideas... wonderful in a true sense...

the lines I loved most here are again from Ram's dialogues...the dialoogues are purely from his heart...

"Haan mein tumse pyar karta hooon priya, dil se, dimag se, jaan se aure mere har ek boond se .. Meri ban jao meri jaan,, mere dil ko apne dil se sambhalo priya zindagi bhar ke liye"

hayeee, main mar jawa... kya lines likha hai yaar dil ko directly chooo liya yehh dialogues...

Yes it is indeed DELICIOUS!!!😛

The much awaited full mouth to mouth KISS, U r making it so damn seductive that I was blushing like Crazzzyy...

I dont know i dont know till now how many times i have read it already but i got same feelings that I experienced when I first time read it...

I have run short of words to appreciate ur talent...

In simple way U R THE BEST...

I have thoroughly enjoyed the emotions that ur story aroused ...

I loved this chapter very much... A true masterpiece...

U have portrayed Ram's feelings and Priya's reactions beautifully...

Each and every word of this update is mind blowing...

The way their relationship progressed and the much awaited KISS , it was like electric current passing through my veins...

U got me hooked to this story...

PLEASE TAKE A BOW FOR THIS SPLENDID STUFF U GAVE US...

and we are waiting for next update very eagerly...

abb to next update jaldi banta hai... after this splendid chhapter...

A HUGE JAADU KI JHAPPI IS UPDATE KE LIYE FROM ME TO U DARLING...🤗🤗🤗

At last sooorrryyy for the late reply...😆

Till then bye... take care...

LOVE U DOC...

👏

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sandhya

@lovelysakshi

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#817

wonderful update

scene starts with raya scene...beautiful romantic kiss...loved it and the way u describe is super.

Raya finally kissed and both enjoyed the kissed.

Neha-Priya scene was classy😆...Neha's never ending teasing and Priya's continuous blushing was very very good.

Ram-nuts convo was good. Ram worried for priya and wants nuts should spent some time with Priya...and as a good sis she did too.

lovely...loved the update

thanks for PM...Please continue

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kavs1

@kavs1

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#818

When will u update??
Pls update soon

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rampriya7aug

@rampriya7aug

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#819

heee u r a very good writer . i m reading now part 12.

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rampriya7aug

@rampriya7aug

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#820

how u know about doc life??????????????????

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