SS: DHADKANEIN Part 15 Updated on Pg 139 on 17.10.2016 - Page 56

Originally posted by: aiyathasan

viji di update soon na.. Eagerly waiting for next part...

Originally posted by: BALHLOVER

aweee yippeee

no separation means my dancing mood..

next plzzz asap na di.. on holiday feeling bore

Originally posted by: bpatil3

hmmm I loved the whole scene of ram acting like a ternager getting fascinated by priya's mole. Lols why is he concentrating on her neck, I so knew it wgen priya was hesitating to stand in front of him lolz, priya ko lag rha tha ram is seeing her their, ye lafkiyoan ki bhi ajeeb instincts hota hai, koi ladka kis part pe concentration de rha hai, side look se hi pehchaante hai lolz 😆

But the way he was acting over the phone describing mole ufff priya ne daanta nhi, nhi toh ek aur garam chai ki pyaali ho, thande paani ki glass ho lolz

you again rocked with ur update... This stupid raj how dare he to touch priya.. Awww plz dont cry so much ram is with u he will definitely make raj life hell.. Haayyy raya first kiss... I m in raya land... Poor vikram... Every scene was described so perfectly i m in love with ram again... He was so caring towards priya... Di tnx for this wonderful gift in eid... Now waiting for next part.. PLz dont take much tym update soon...

Originally posted by: aiyathasan

hey di plz update soon na.. Feeling really bored.. Plz...

Originally posted by: luvsakshi

Vijiii

after reading this update

I was super happy

and its superbly penned down ..

and except Giri i wont comment anyone detailly but for this update

i want to give comment like that as im totally was in daze which word to praise

or which i should mention

this is just too good .. so I will detaillly i will commment how i felt after reading this .

Love you for the wonderful part ..

Thank you so very much updating .

Otherwise i could have killed you 😆

👏.👏.👏.👏.

👏.👏.👏.👏

👏.👏.👏.👏.

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Originally posted by: luvsakshi

Nuts: Priya meet my bhai Dr.Ram Kapoor aka RK top most CT surgeon and bhai meet Dr. Priya Sarma my mentor.
Both were still staring at each other with disbelief and shock.
Nuts: Bhai..bhai..she shaked him a bit..
RK: Haan..haan choti bolo.
Nuts: What happened to you bhai, chalo we will have lunch together, Priya is very hungry.
RK: Yeah sure.
Nuts: Thank you bhai, Priya chalo.
Priya was blank..Nuts took Priya's hand and walked ahead.
Priya came to her senses.
P: Natasha kaha jaa rahe hai hum? Please haath chodo I will walk myself.
Nuts: You said that you are very hungry thats why we are going to have lunch.
Priya was thinking, again I have to sit with him and Nuts is Ram's sister!! I never knew that the person whom I have imagined based on Natasha's description would be Ram.. and like this I would face him...
Nuts: Priya..Priyaaa.. kaha kho gayi ho.
P: Nothing Nuts.
Na: Chalo we will go.
Ram was waiting for them outside the lift. Priya waved off her thoughts and came out. When she saw that they were going towards exit door she stopped in her path. Nuts saw that and she too stopped.
Na: Kya hua?
P: Canteen toh iss side mein hain. We are going towards exit..
Na: Common Priya tum RK ke saath ho, why would he take us to canteen for lunch?
P: Woh baat nahin..actually..
Na: Toh kya baat?
P: Hmmm..you two have it na Nuts. I am tired, I cant come.
Na: No way Priya. You have to join us.
P: Please Natasha..
Priya didnt understand what to tell. She was in a state of exhaustion and more over she wanted to be alone. But she knows very well that she is a ziddi ladki and wont go with out her.
Na: Kya hua Priya? Why are you hesitating.
P: Tumhara bhai..
Na: Oh its completely Ok. Bhai bahar reserved dikhthe hain lekin main hoo na no worries.

Wah wah what an beautiful introduction ... Superb so both have heard about eachother from first onwards .. but in a totally different way but see they are so cute .they are thinking about each other .

Priya Gave a faint smile.. she cant tell her how her so called reserved bhai teased her few hours ago about a mole. She wanted to avoid Ram right now.

😆🤣I can so expect the reactions ..

your so called reserved bhai teased about a mole 🤣

P: No, no, not about that, you might be seeing your bhai after days na. So you two should have good time.
Na: Priya..please yaar agar maine unse kuch dinon ke baad mil rahi hoon toh, tumhe toh 2saal ke baad dekha hai maine. I dont want to go with out you.
P: Heaved a sigh..samjho Natasha..
Na: Natasha Natasha kya laga rakhi ho.. am your Nuts and call me Nuts. I know your problem. Bhai wont be a problem. Please chalo he would be waiting for us.

You penned so beautifully nuts character here .I really loved the way nuts dialogies were .. simply superb 👏

Ram was waiting in the car for the two woman. He was remembering the moment when choti introduced Priya. He has heard 'n' times from choti about her senior called Priya who guided her very well in her academics. He was wondering choti jaisi bindaas ladki apne padhayi pe itna dhyan kab se dene lagi. She used to say its Priya's magic. So that Priya turned out to be Dr. Priya Sarma...his Priya. The last word made him smile unknowingly. He was feeling good with that thought.

Ohh that last word made me also smile .. common how good he is in her thoughts .. 😛😉

He came out of the thoughts as some one blew horn, when he saw that they were no where near he rang to choti.
Na: Common Priya.. I wont go if u dont come.
Priya was hesitating. Natasha's phone rang. She saw that her bhai was calling.
Na: See he is waiting for us. Chalo ab. Unhe bura lagega. She dragged Priya with her. They reached car soon. Nuts told Ram that she will sit in the back seat along with Priya.
Ram: Kya hua choti, itni der kardi.
Na: Kuch nahi bhai, Priya was hesitating to come. It took time to plead her. She laughed out saying this.

Nuts bhi tho nuts ..she wont hide anything and priya is feeling nervous .and what a perfect lunch date you planned unknwingly to them

Ram: Gave a look to her from rear view mirror and started the car.
Priya was feeling strange. She didnt expect that she would go with Ram in his car so soon. Even if Nuts was there she was feeling nervous. She was praying that Ram should act like a stranger to her and should not tease her or taunt her.
Na: Tum bilkul bhi nahi badli ho Priya. Wahi hesitation, wahi silence and wahi khayalon mein khojana. Am here before you after years and you are not talking with me at all.
P: Woh baat nahin Nuts aaj main tired hoon.

Aww my baby tired and whatevr she is feeling ...he is doing that only

lol and i dont think Ram sit quitely 😆
Ram was sensing her uneasiness and he understood that it was because of him. He was grinning. He adjusted the mirror so that he can have glimpses of Priya now and then. Nuts was talking non stop and she didnt observe Ram at all.
Priya saw that he was observing her and thought "Oh my yeh toh abhi se shuru hogaye. Goddd why I came? He usually wont leave any chance to tease or taunt me. But I hope Nuts ke wajah se chup rahenge." Priya was unable to focus on Nuts blabbering.

Lol i told you na "Ye toh abhi se shuru hogaye 😆

how can she wil focus on nuts when Ram intence gaze piercing her 😉

In the mean while they reached a near by 5star which was RK's one of the regular. The manager came running when he saw RK. He greeted him and directed them into very well maintained porsch restaurant. He made the boys arrange a table soon and made them seated. He took order personally and left saying that it would be served in 20mins.
P: (self)20mins...waiting..ufff.. Hope he will stay calm.

Hahah .. 20 mins .. she has to bear his naughty looks and tauntings

awww ...

Na: Helloo..snapped her fingers infront of Priya's face. Kab tak sochthi rahogi yaar am talking with you for past 15mins except the ever beautiful smile am not seeing any other response from you. Kya hogaya tumhe. Did you forget me totally.

Yes the ever beautiful smile 👏 my baby is feeling nervous

P: Nooo...no way Nuts..I would never ever forget you. Am sorry, was preoccupied regarding some cases.
Na: Always cases cases..humein bhi toh thoda time do. Bhai bhi same hai..always work work. I dunno how the two important persons in my life can be sooo boring.
The last line made Ram and Priya stare at each other for a while. In those few seconds they felt their eyes expressed something unuttered till now. The feeling which they were hiding in themselves. Ram felt happy as he could see Priya's feeling for him in those eyes and it was definitely not negative. Till then he didnt think about Priya's feelings but now he was elated with the thought that she too might be loving him.

Wow In unspoken language both understood eachother that the other person is loving ahhh what a nice progression ..

Now when Ram had this positive ness obviously he wont sit calm

Na: Bhai, aapko Priya ke baarein mein humesha kehthi aayi hoon..lekin aaj aapse aise milwana am very happy you know. She is my friend, guide and philosopher. She was always good to me and because of her I improved a lot in focusing in my studies. If I excelled in academics thats because of her, If am a better person now thats because of her. She is simply awesome human.
RK: Smiled..very good so I am and I should be grateful to your mentor. Infact she is very good in counselling, dadi ko inhone bahut achi tarah se samjhaya, tab jake dadi have quit bothering about me.
P: Was feeling embarassed...aisa kuch nahin kiya maine I just told her and Nuts tum bhi na chup raho yaar please.
Na: I have so much to tell and I have told least.
RK: By the way how you know each other?
Na: She was my senior but UG mein we never spoke with each other. She joined MD in our college only then I was an internee. I used to be careless in everything, one day Priya saw me sitting idle and chating when there was plenty of work. Then she gave me a very big class that I felt OMG rather than listening this I should better work (Priya was like hawww) but she taught me so much even simple things.
Dont mind me Priya..
Ram smiled and Priya had to smile..

Haha i too smiled .. ..too good babes .. the two are praising her my queen is embarassing 😆

Na: Bhai she is a book worm if am right she might be going to library even now..
RK: Haan, madam told she is reading hypnotherapy books, giving a side look to Priya.
Priya downcast her eyes when a smile crept on her face.
Na: Oh you two have met already..
RK: Yeah in cafetaria I have seen her.

Lol ..Hypnotherapy book s

i so can imagine priyas smile there .. awww lil unknowng confession again

Priya was now worried what to tell, she was hesitating and concerned about Nuts reaction for her feelings towards her bhai. She was wondering what would Nuts say..

Aww she will be definately very happy ,dont worry priyaa 😉

She came out of thoughts when Nuts continued.
Na: So through out my posting I never left her side and the whole year she taught me so much subject which helped me to secure good rank in AIIMS. Iss sab ka credit main Priya ko deti hoon. She used to treat me like a kid when ever I went to her home. She is a great cook too. But only problem is she wont eat non veg so I never got a chance to taste it from her hand.
Priya was looking st Nuts like stop it please l.
RK: Howled at this..you dont eat chicken.. I cant stay with out eating chicken..how I should...by the way bana toh leti hogi na aap.
Priya was glaring at him and said NO.

OMG OMG OMG .. im laughing like anything 😆🤣
RK: Oh myy..main toh gaya.
Priya closed her eyes helplessly.
Na: Bhai dont worry we can eat later. Now dont order chicken, please she wont feel good.
RK: Haan..theek hai.(Puri zindagi ghas phoos khana padega Ram, tu toh gaya)

Lol,God what an eqaution the both are having

and nuts i sleast bothered about her comments

but Priya is sitting helplessly listening and glaring at him

awww Ram is too good in taunting 😆

Priya was praying gods that RK shouldnt talk anything about her.
Food was served in the meantime.
Ram saw that Priya's plate was having 2 or 3 starter pieces.He shaked his head and they started eating.
He was observing Priya all the while, but Priya who kept her head down didnt know that.
Main course was served and Priya asked for one pulka.
RK: Choti lagta hain tum apne khane ke matter mein bhi tumhare mentor se inspired ho. Koi insaan itna thoda khata hai kya??
Na: Bhai...
Priya gritted her teeth.😆😆😆
RK: Haan abhi tak toh she was saying she is hungry, agar bhook lagne se hi itni kha rahi hai toh nahi lagegi toh how much she will eat?
Na: Bhai.. she may feel bad please.
Priya was controlling her anger.
RK: Am worried for you choti, thats why am telling dont follow her regarding diet okk.
Na: Bhai please. What she will think. Stop na bhai.
RK: Haan..ok ok carry on.
Priya wanted to run from there asap.

Lol How cutely Ram is taunting and how nuts is pleading to stop

But whatvevr he wanted to say he said ...and priya wants to run from there 😆

Nuts excused herself when she got a call.
Ram grabbed the chance and served two pulkas in Priya's plate. She wanted to stop him but she didnt have that much energy to push him, so she stopped.
RK: Aise khaogi na toh gayab ho jaogi abhi dekhlo kitna thin ho.
Priya: Ladkiyan thin hi acche lagte hain.
RK: Haan thoda plumpy ho toh kuch problem nahin hai and I love plumpy...

Lol aise khaogi na toh gayab ho jaogi 🤣🤣

Ram love plumpyyy 🤣🤣

He gulped his words seeing her glare. P:Behave yourself RK. Nuts ke saamne kya kya bol rahe ho.
Ram grinned at this line. The authority in that voice, he didnt miss it. It would come only when we feel that the other person is our own.

Hahaha Now hitler came into mode.. how authritatively she warned him

loved it .. 👏

Priya was cursing Nuts for all this. She was waiting for her to come back. With much difficulty she finished the two pulkas and was about to serve rice.
Nuts came on time and seeing Priya having very less rice she served Priya one more helping.
P: Nuts nooo..

Mazaa agagaya 🤣🤣
Na: Kya noo..ek hi pulka toh khayi ho thoda rice aur khalo. You were hungry na.
P: I ate three okkk and you just sit here and finish your meal. You left me alone.
Na: Ohh very good you ate three.. Sorry yaar urgent call tha, bhai hai na yaha. Woh jyada baat nahin karte hai I know but he was sitting with you na.
P: Whatever..khalo ab. Dont go away while you are having food.
Na: Haan theek hai yaar.
Priya was feeling heavy when they finished their lunch. Ram didnt talk anything after that warning. Priya had no regret.

Lol .. so sweet of Ram .. he served two more pulkas and she is feeling heavvy .. Priya sweetly scoldeed nuts for getting up in the middle

They got out of the restaurant and were walking towards exit. Nuts and Priya were talking with each other walking side by side, Ram was just behind them, Priya tripped her leg and was about to fall to a side, she closed her eyes anticipating a hard hit. When she felt a strong arm touching her waist she opened her eyes. She saw Ram holding her safe from falling. Their eyes were locked for a while.

ahhh kya scene likha tum ne ..muhaaa

super re .. First touch ,,kaise hai priya ji .😆

Na: Priyaaa..are you fine. Thank God, bhai you were there. You held her, Priya you are not hit na anywhere.
Priya straightened herself and said No. She was trying hard to control her blush.
Na: Thanks bhai.
RK: Jinhe save kiya unhone toh thanks nahi bola.
P: Thank you..her voice was barely audible.
RK: You are "Welcome Madam".
Nuts moved ahead.

aww how nuts cared thank god she didnt get any doubt 😆

lol priya is blushing

you know viji i so can imagine all these infront of my eyes 😛👏

RK: In fact I have to thank you. Saying this he went ahead very fast.
Priya was left gaping at him. He is really impossible. But blush hovered her all again.

🤣 priyaa priya.. how she i sblushing at Rams thank you

Yes Golu is really impossible 😆

They got into the car and Ram drove away. They came to hospital and Nuts bid bye to Priya saying she has to go now otherwise dadi would kill her as she left home abruptly. Priya hugged her and said she will meet her again. Ram asked her did she get the car. Choti nodded as yes and waved bye.
RK: Be careful choti, drive slow.
Na: Haa bhai..dont worry.
Priya wanted to go but she stood near the car.
RK: Haan aap ja sakte hain. Happy reading.
P: Thanks for the meal.
RK: You are welcome. Shall I say something.
P: Nothing about my diet.🤣😆
RK: Noo.. its about... chalna practice karo..you will not fall again. Saying that he sped the car towards parking.
Priya was left howling at him. She gritted her teeth and moved towards entrance.

Oh my god .. I was grinning like a fool reading this 😆

Priya reached library and took rest for a while. She was studying regularly these days. She was utilising her free time to the maximum.
She opened the book and was engrossed in that. She checked time and it was 5pm. She was feeling tired because of the strain she had in the morning, she wanted to take a nap. So she started to go home. She entered the lift and pressed 0. When she came out she saw that it was dark and when she looked ahead she saw that it was basement and by mistake she has pressed B button.

P: Uff ab lift bhi chali gayi. Chalo will go out through parking. She started moving towards day light.
Oh soo madam is here now.. I missed you all these days. Welcome my jaan.

Who was that stupiddd 😡
Priya was dead shocked to hear someone there and when she scrunched her eyes she saw a man coming towards her.
P: Who is that and what the hell are you talking.
Oh toh aap RK ke alawa kissi aur awaj ko pehchante nahi ho kya. The man came under light and she was irritated seeing Raj over there.

Ohh this Idiot is following her ..
P: Am sorry I have to go.
Raj held her wrist forcibly that her bangles broke piercing into her skin. Priya let out a painful moan. "Kaha jaaogi meri jaan, come to me".
He dragged her and she was unable to free her hand. She was struggling to get freed.

Hawww God he is hurting my queen .. Ram bachalo yaar ..

how dare he 😡
P: Leave me Raj. You are hurting me.
Raj: My jaan u too are hurting me, you should know the pain na.
He pulled her to the near by wall and pressed her to the wall. He was standing all over her, she felt nauseating as his breath was touching her face. She turned her face away.
Priya was scared but she was repulsing. You are pathetic, leave me.
Raj: Ohh pathetic toh RK kaisa lagta hain? ROMANTIC?? Date pe jaogi kya? You know who I am? What I can do.
P: Go to hell. Just leave me.
Raj: Shut up..ok just shut up.
He pressed her hard to the wall that she winced with pain.

Hawww where is Rk ... how can he said those things to her 😡

Raj: I can take you to bed right now if I want but am waiting as I just want you to co operate me. I dont want to force you. Pata nahin pehli baar aisa kuch decision liya hai maine so dont make me mad okk.
Priya glared at him. She was feeling abhorrent and helpless. She was holding back her tears with much difficulty. She was covered by him that she was unable to repulse him and push him.

Such a nasty fellow he is ..

priya ek kick maro ink central place mai 😡 saala he will wince in pain and you can leave .. oh my

😡
Raj: You are mine, stop doing things which make me angry.
P: You are a moron. I will kill you if you wont leave me.

👏👏 yes he is a Moron .. priya bounce back my lady 😭

Raj: Oh my darling you are so fierce keep that for our romance. And mind you am telling you, stay away from RK.
Priya closed her eyes in hatred.
Priya yelled HELPPP..
Raj was quick for her. He closed her mouth and pushed himself close to her.
Raj: You shouldnt yell..you should moan. And if you want to tell this to some one you can, no one can do anything to me..he gritted his teeth..even that RK.
Dont worry I will leave you darling..just lemme enjoy your touch for a while. You are so sexy. I just wanna f*&* you.
Priya felt reviling. She wanted to kill herself.
SHIt ..where is Rammm .. she is suffering yaar .. she is sensitive

how this stupid is doing to her .

Lift stopped in basement and Ram came out of that, he started moving towards his car. He heard some sound and turned his head to that side. He could barely see some shadows as it was dim. He could make out that a man and woman were standing there.
RK: Stupid buggers, started in hospital too. He shaked his head and moved ahead.

Awww my Ram came... heyyy he wont see kya .. priya call him re ..

The sounds became loud and his gaze automatically went there. Now Ram could see that the woman was struggling with a man to free herself.
RK: Oye who is there. What the hell are you doing here. He moved towards them.
Raj: Ohh the hero has come, very good. You better stay away from this.
RK: I know that you are good for nothing and you are famous for these acts. But not in the hospital. Let her go.

oh shit .. its basement na he cannot see who is she .. oh my

thanks to her stars
Raj: Oh is it so. What you will do to me? I am Raj Kishan okk. My people will kill you if I order.
RK: So what? Just get out of here.
Ram didnt expect that he will try to punch him. Ram held his hand in the middle and said "Dont".
Raj: Kya karlega bey? He was holding Priya's wrist with other hand.
Ram punched him so hard in the stomach that he fell down writhing in pain.
RK: I told you dont. Am RK and I dont need people to kill you. I can do that even now. Dont make me angry.

Good that bugger really deserve it

such an a** he is .. another punches also please

He turned towards the lady and asked her "Madam are you ok? Come I will leave you at a safe place"
Priya came running to him and hugged him tightly. She was letting out her fear, hatred and helplessness as tears.
Ram was feeling irksome. Its ok madam you are fine. Let me help you. Come.
Priya didnt move a bit and was crying copiously. His coat was getting wet.
RK: Aap aayiye dont be afraid. He tried to separate her. But he was unsuccessful.

Oh my Ram see her she is your priya .. uffooo

Please madam. I am feeling..
Priya moaned with pain Rammm...
Ram stopped his words and was shocked first. He was unable to believe that. He pulled her forcibly to see her face and he was shell shocked when he saw the lady in that dim light. He was very much disturbed.
RK: Priya..you??? Why are you here? What was he doing with you? Oh my Godd.. His anger was uncontrollable. He went to fallen Raj and hit him madly with his foot. He hit him on his nose, Priya tried to stop him but he shaked her off. Priya saw his rage and was worried that he may kill him. Ram please am scared let us go.

Woww wowww superb fantastically written

too goood

oh my what an expression he is in ..

poor fellow he might have get a jolt seeing her like that that too with this cheap guy ..

Good going

aww priya is scared .. yah Ram should look after her also na

Ram stopped hearing her and finally he stomped his foot on Raj's knee and pulled Priya towards his car.
He stopped near his car and asked her what happened? Why you came here? Why he held you?
She was unable to talk and was crying continuously she was unable to stand straight she leaned onto the car for support. Her tears were coming as sobs and he could see that she was visibly shaken up.
R: Calmed dowm himself. Priya its ok, dont cry, I came na, nothing has happened. Dont cry please.

Aww he also dont know na ..so he rapidly asked her questions when he himself in a shocked state seeing her like that .

viji you perfectly penned down their emotions .. well done

Priya's sobs were uncontrollable and her body was shaking with her sobs.
Ram cupped her face..Dekho Priya main hoo na, mat ro Priya please. She was just unconsolable. He was feeling miserable seeing her like that.
RK: I cant bear your tears Priya.. please kya karoon main tumhara rona band karne ke liye. He hugged her to his chest tightly. Dont worry my angel I am there here for you, I will just do anything to keep you happy.
He pulled her back and held her face.. She was crying and her sobs were getting more severe. Seeing her like that he felt his heart my stop any moment.

Awww Ram is true gentle men how nicely he is pleading her

mat ro priya.

awww he is miserable seeing his love in miserable state 😭

how beautifully you enacted them

Ram: I beg you Priya...kuch nahin hua..kuch bhi nohi hoga..I am here na..see me please..stop crying. You are going breathless.
Priya was inebriated, drained but her sobs didnt stop.
Ram was feeling miserable seeing her like that. He wanted to stop her sobs at any cost.
Suddenly he held her close and firm and he brushed her lips with his. He parted his lips and held her upper lip in between his lips. Priya wide opened her eyes with surprise, she was no longer sobbing but tears were running down her eyes. She wasnt in a state to anticipate such move from Ram. He was soft, gentle and she could feel his minty breath. He parted from her lips and looked into her dark brown eyes. His eyes were speaking with hers, they were pleading her to trust him. She hugged him not able to bear the love flowing from his eyes. He hid her in his embrace very close as if he was protecting her from the world.

wahhh the kiss was with pure love and protection

way to go vijji

simply superbly penned down .. and than their eyes speaks volumes

and She hugged him and he embraced her .. awww so beautiful

They didnt know how many minutes passed like that but Ram came to his senses first. He broke the hug and saw tears flowing down hee cheeks and wiped them. He opened the car door and made her sit, she said "apron"..
RK: Kaha pe hai?
P: Tears pooling up in her eyes "wahi kahi gira hoga".
RK: I will get them.
P: ...
RK went back and switched on the flash light in his phone and searched near lift. He could see her things fallen here and there. He collected everything and checked everywhere and came back.
He came back to her and when he saw her she was hiding her face in her palms. His heart ached seeing her like that. He kept those things on back seat and came around and got into the driving seat. He was about to start the ignition.

superb .. how nicely he is taking care of her .. and priya is crying

P: Vikram ne bataya tha mujhe cautious rehne ko, I neglected. But I didnt..
RK: WHAT???
P: Its my mistake..
RK: No No you said Vikram..
Priya told Ram what happened in canteen the other day and how Vikram warned her.
Ram was fuming in anger...he took his mobile and rang Vikram.
V: Haan bol Ram..kaha hai tu?
RK: U and Neha will meet me in her flat in 10mins.
V: 10mins..pagal hogaya kya? Kya hua yaar.
RK: Just be there. He disconnected the call.
Vikram was bewildered with Ram's behaviour, he called Neha and told her what Ram said to him.
Ne: Priya theek hai na?
V: OMG I didnt ask him, it didnt flash to me. Come soon yaar, am leaving now.
Ne: Yeah will be there asap.

Vikram .. toh gaya now ...Ram will be in rage at his friend ,

and I love neha yaar ..

how spontaneously she guessed how about priya

superb ..

Ram drove the car towards Neha's flat after taking address from Priya. Priya was in pain from that has happened still she could sense Ram's anger. She had no clue at all what his thoughts were.
They reached their flat and Ram opened the door taking keys from Priya. He put her things on a table amd asked her to get first aid box. She searched for it and gave it to him. He took her to wash basin and washed her wrists then she observed the lacerations which were oozing little blood. She was staring at him as if she was surprised with a teary face. He made her sit on a sofa and started cleaning the wounds with betadine. Priya's eyes were on him but his focus was on her wounds. She was in a state of shock still Ram's actions were giving her goosebumps.
Neha and Vikram entered flat in unison. Neha rushed in calling Priyaaa...
Ram and Priya turned towards the door and Priya on seeing Neha broke down again. Her cry was loud and her chest was heaving up and down due to sobs.

Awww priya is in pain and how carefully Ram noticed her wounds and doing first aid . yeah by seeing neha priya would be more vulnerable and she is pouring her sadness

RK: Neha put ointment on the wounds. He got up and went to Vikram. He stood before him keeping his hands in his pockets and with an angry glare.
Ne: Oh my God...Priya kya hogaya baby..you got hurt..how??
Priya was shaking up with cry and he was unable to answer. She hugged Neha and continued her bitter cry.

loved these two girls bond ..

V: Kya hua Ram? Why she is hurt?
RK: Tu bata..kya hua hoga?
V: Common Ram dont be stupid, how can I tell? Did I see?
RK: Your stupidity had brought this day.
V: What I did yaar?
RK: Tune hi bataya na ki "I am in love" then why the hell you didnt tell me about your warning?
V: Warning!!! Kaun sa war... Shit Oh gadha Raj?? Kya kiya ussne?
RK: Tu mujhse pooch raha hai kya kiya ussne. Jaake usse pooch kya karne jaa raha tha.
V: Yaar main bhool gaya tha Ram. It just skipped my brain.
RK: Skipped..my foot his shout echoed in the room.
Neha and Priya both were shocked to see him roar.

I can imagine How this Raging Ram kapoor is . haa how he confessed Im inllove infront of them too .. but this is not the right time and four are in tension ..

P: Vikram ka galti nahin...
RK: You better stay out of it lady. Bol Vikram how can you justify yourself. You very well know about that bugger, you warned her very good but you should take some measures to keep her safe or you should tell me. Isnt it true.
Priya got of from sofa, Vikram kya karenge, unhe aur koi kaam nahin hai kya?
RK: He pointed his finger to her, I told you stay away.

lol...sorry but i couldnt help laughing while he saying stay out of it lady ..

Ne: Guys jhagda mat karo.
V: Yaha kaun jhagad raha hai, dikhta nahin hai kya yeh akela sab pe bhadak raha hai?
RK: How dare you talk like that?
Priya fell on sofa. She was losing her energy due to her continued crying.
Neha sat down worriedly beside her.
RK: Woh Priya se misbehave kiya agar main nahin jaata toh pata nahin kya ho jata... He was scared to talk further.
Neha turned towards Priya..
Ne: Kya kiya ussne Priya? Kuch hua toh nahin na?
The meaning of the question struck the other three very harshly. Ram's knees were weakened and he collapsed on the floor. Vikram rushed to his aide, Priya covered her face in her palms and started crying more and more bitterly.
V: Ram..Ram..yaar kuch nahin hua hoga. Dont panic. Neha take her inside and talk with her. Gooo

wow .. Ram might not asked this and he couldnt think that far .. and the question make them shiver .Im feeling so bad for them yaar ..

Ram is too distracted as well as priya ..

Neha pulled up Priya and took her towards her room. Priya was in daze all the while.
V: Ram mujhe maaf kardo yaar. I didnt expect that he will act so soon.
RK: Kyun usski nazar Priya pe padi yaar. Abhi kuch hi din huye na Priya ko aake. Why his bad eyes fell on her. She was crying helplessly. I couldnt do anything except smashing his face. I want to kill him right now. What all he might have done..Oh Godd how to erase this from her life?
Vikram was feeling helpless to see Ram like that. He kept his hand on Ram's shoulder to comfort him.

Yes As Ram said this will be effet on her total life

i mean she always wil get remeber this na .. ohhh

Neha made Priya to sit on bed and she sat on her knees.
Ne: Priya. Koi problem nahin..nothing happened baby. Everything will be fine. We are there na. Dont cry. Please talk with me. Look at me Priya. Pleasee yaar..mujhe maaf kardo. I made you come here. I am..
Priya was shaking her head in negative and crying.. tumne nahin maine galti kiya. I Should have be more alert. I shouldnt have gone to a secluded place. It was by mistake Neha.. I didnt do..
Ne: I know I know baby... you are not at fault..no one is at fault. But please tell me kya hua waha pe.
Priya's cry was making it hard to Neha to hear but when Priya finished reciting everything Neha heaved a sigh of relief. Once she finished Priya got up and rushed towards washroom and locked herself in.
Neha was baffled with this, she went and knocked the door.. yelling Priya..Priya.
Ram and Vikram came running. They too were scared that she may harm herself.
After repeated knocks and yells.. Priya shouted back.
Dont worry Neha, I wont kill myself. I am trying to wash out his touch from my body.

Yeah priya might be crying and reciting priya na so neha is hard to get all but atlast pirya told and she is relived as by the time Ram came .

i can understand how priya might feeling with his words and his assault on her . she might unable to digest

and you penned down so well 👏

V: went out hitting his head. What I did, I should have told Ram when he expressed his feelings towards her. I should have taken some measures atleast..Shit he hit the chair.
Ram was drained out now, his fear was getting worse.
Neha pulled him with her..dont worry guys, ussne Priya ko hurt kiya but it was.. she explained everything.
Vikram's heartbeat got calmed down now. He saw Ram. He was clenching his fist, his jaw line was taut.
V: Ram...
RK: Neha take care of her...I will be back soon.

thank god he came to knw what al he did to her .. now i want Ram back in action

Saying that he rushed out of the house turning deaf ear to Vikram's calls.
He called MD and asked him to stay in hospital as he was coming. He drove to hospital and reached in no time. He entered MD's chamber and Thumped the table.
MD was baffled.. Kya hua RK?
RK: Woh gadha Raj Kishan..Usse aap abhi nikalo. Remove him. I want to see his end.
MD: Kya hua RK..aise suddenly kaise?
RK: Main woh sab kuch nahin jaanta, aap nikaloge toh I will be calm otherwise I will get his license cancelled and even get his name removed from register.
MD: Aisa kya kar diya ussne?
RK: Aap action loge yah main hi usse Jinda gaad doon.
MD: Calm down RK, you are a doctor dont forget that.
RK: Woh doctors mein ek kala dhabba hain. Terminate him immediately.
MD: Aise suddenly kaise kar sakta hoon RK? Aur uska uncle politician bhi hain.
RK: Ohh I see, then its ok. I am resigning right now.
MD: Got onto his feet. Are you mad?
RK: Yes I am, I cant stand him anymore. You keep him, I am going. Saying this RK walked towards the door.
MD: Ok Ok RK, pehle baitho, I will do the needful. But please calm down.
RK: Sir, aapko RK chahiye yah woh gadha chahiye aap hi decide karlo.
MD: You have put me in a soup RK, how can I lose you?
RK: Then why are you sulking. Terminate him.
MD: You are not giving the reason for your demand and he is a big aristocrat and upar se he has politician's support. How can you face him RK?
RK: To hell with it. If he is an aristocrat then I am RK, The Ram Kapoor, I have my own strings. I will see how he will live in Mumbai.
MD: Hum hospital se nikal sakte hai lekin Mumbai se nahin RK.
RK: Nikalna padega. He shouldnt join any where else or open his own set up any where in Mumbai and you will do that job for me. Pull your strings boss.
MD: Uff.. RK itna zid. Thoda mere baarein main bhi socho.
RK: Aap ek VIP ke baarein mein soch rahe hain..agar main chala jaaon toh guess how many VVIPs you will lose.
MD knew very well that RK is the best as doctor but as a man he was a devil. If he comes to business terms then he knows how much loss he would incur. So he had to give up.
MD: I will RK..I will but on what grounds.
RK: Hit the table with his fist.. grounds?? Shall I fill this room with all the lady staff?
MD: Shaked his head as No, Ok Ok I cant terminate him but I will transfer him to Bhuvaneswar branch. Please for me RK..accept this. Please.
RK: Gulped his anger. Ok but he has to go now. Immediately do that now.
MD: He heaved his breath and took the phone. He made few phone calls and finally he rang Raj.
Raj Kishan was yelling with anger when he heard the matter from MD. He had to go for it as his uncle too called him and asked him to obey as the CM was involved.
Raj: RK... I will not leave you. He threw his mobile.
MD: Happy RK. Now please calm down. Have coffee.
RK: No thanks. I have to go.
MD: By the way kya kiya ussne?
RK: Aapko reason chahiye yah RK?
MD: Ufff nothing take care. Bye for now.
RK sped out of room before the MD could finish.

The entire convo is like on fire .. How gracefully He dealt the issue the way he send Raj out was spectacular and he hasnt taken priya name and moreover he gave jerk to MD

you want to know the matter or me .. 😆

he [MD]could have got a shock
He drove back to Priya's flat in 15mins. He was eager to see her, to hold her, to control her.
He reached their flat soon and he rushed in, Vikram was sitting in hall with his head in his hands and Neha was waiting outside washroom.
RK: Neha kya hua..
Ne: Heaved, She isnt coming out.
RK: Knocked the door loudly. Priya bahar aao..abhi. Otherwise I will break this door.
Priya was standing under the shower while tears were flowing out her eyes. They were mixed with the water and were washed onto her body. She was as if she was bathing in her own tears.
RK: Abhiii ka matlab janti ho na Priya.
Priya gathered herself and replied weakly Neha unhe bahar jane ko bolo, am coming out.

Oh my she is still in shower

i loved it

Abhi ki matlab janti ho na priya 👏
Neha had no need to bother as Ram left the room already. Priya asked for her towel and dress. Neha gave it to her. After 10minutes Priya came out weak, drained out, with read eyes and tired face. She took two steps and fell down.
Ne: Priyaa. Kya hua tumhe. RK..Vikram..She supported Priya from falling down and was calling her repeatedly.
Ram came in and was terrified at first. He moved fast and lifted Priya in his arms. He took her to bed and lied her down safely. He checked her pulse and breath and told to Neha not to worry. She might have gone weak after so much strain and might have fainted. He asked for a glass of water. Neha gave it to him. He made Priya sip it and lied her down again.

yeah afterall this stress and contious crying she might be stresed out and fallen

hmm poor girl . .
RK: Its ok Neha, I will sit with her. You can go talk with that duffer.
Ne: No need Ram, I will take care, you might have to go home.
RK: I wont leave her until she is ok. So please.
Neha shrugged off her shoulders "Okay" then I will go and make dinner arrangements.

aww i so can understand Neha &Ram

Neha wont leave priya in such situation but as he know Ram is very well tc of her so she left her . Good scene

Ram sat beside Priya holding her hand. His gaze was fixed on her face. Tears were welling up in his eyes. A lone tear escaped his eye and dropped on Priya's wrist.
Neha went to kitchen and Vikram followed her.
V: Kya bola Ram ne?.
Ne: He wont leave her until she is ok.
V: Hmmm
Neha hugged him and started crying. She was putting up her strength till now. She was terrified seeing Priya like that.

awww baby I can understand how neha is putting up the strgnth

how much she is bubly also .. she couldnt see her friend like this na

V: Neha please..sambhalo apne aapko. She needs you.
Ne: Agar kuch ho jata toh?
V: By god's grace kuch hua nahin na. Come on aansoo poch lo. I will help you in cooking. Come.
Ne: No need, I will manage.
V: Tumhe bura laga kya Ram ke behaviour dekh ke.
Neha shaked her head in negative. Agar usse kuch hojata toh I would kill you first then myself.
V: Ufff...Kamaal hai yaar.
Ne: I left her in your responsibility dont forget that.
Vikram couldnt answer anything for that.

haha she wont change .. she will kill him and than herself

always this type of girls will take our mood in to normal paths

you have written very well

It was an hour and Ram was sitting patiently with her.
RK: Agar tumhe kuch hojata toh main zinda kaise rehta Priya??
He was holding her hand firmly.

wowww.. super dialogue

Neha came after keeping for rice and saw that Vikram was standing outside Priya's room leaned to the door. She came to him and looked at the view before.
V: Pata hai Neha, RK kitna arrogant dikhta hain usse bhi jyada strong hain. Maine usse apne papa ke death pe rote hue dekha. Tab hum inter mein the. Lekin yeh RK..yeh naya hai..I have never seen him suffer so much. He loves her to eternity. She is very lucky.
Ne: RK is more lucky my Radhe. Mark my words. Saying that she held his arm and kept her head on his shoulder.

They stood there staring at the most beautiful couple on earth.

Wow both freinds praising their own friends ..

Priya is lucky

no Rk is luck to have her ..

wah wah ...

The perfect mixtures of every emotion is in this

Love you for the beautiful update darling ..

Love you so much

Muhaaa

Another stupendo fantabulous mindblowing update

waiting for more

Originally posted by: armanz

Haan am waited eagerly Neel for your detailed comment..

Lol haan you wont spare me I know.. am not Giri na😆

Thank you so much for your love.

Originally posted by: rosinagoor

Mind-Blowing Update Viji 👏
I have no words to describe
I am speech less
Thanks for the Update
Thanks for the PM too
Continue soon

Originally posted by: luvsakshi

I told you na .. 😆

Haha I wont spare Giri also don't you knw 😉

No need of thanks for Love

okayyy