SS: DHADKANEIN Part 15 Updated on Pg 139 on 17.10.2016 - Page 58

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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update 👏
raya first kiss
superb bond b/w neha and priya
continue soon
thanks for pm

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lalmadhu

Hi Viji,


First of all, I m very happy that u came up with ur second story.😃

Ho...Love story of doctors ahem...ahem...Excitement started there...nope actually started with the title...and the thrilling element is weaved throughout the update though it being the first one. And by which my DHADKANEIN has sped up a little.

Well done Viji.👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 Lage raho...

First of all lemme thank you for reading this story even in your busy.
And second one likhne ki jurrat maine isiliye kiya as the readers here are so encouraging.. so thanks to u all.
ha ha ahem ahem..Doc love story of RaYa... Aweee so sweet of you..your comment just made me smile.
Thanks a ton Madhu..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lalmadhu

@ Part - 2


Beautiful update.

Over energetic Neha. Vik is an Ortho-surgeon. I think Neha is not a doc...? Excited for their meet too. And obviously for Raya...!!!😆

Ohh...Priya's feelings in the presence of Ram is well interpreted by Neha. 😆 😆 😆 The whole convo was full of fun. Enjoyed it to the fullest.

Vik and Priya met. Hehehe...Ram ko Priya pathli lagi...😆 😆 😆

Going to read the next one.

Thank you yaar.
Yeah she is an architect.. and can read Priya's mind well..
haa thin😆
Thank u so much
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Posted: 11 years ago
that was superb update...
Ram is already accepted Priya has HIS..
loved his teasing Priya in front of Nuts... Bechara Chiken ki bena kiya karega... lolz...

Ram did right with that stupid idiot...!!

waiting for next..
thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lalmadhu

@ Part - 3


Very interesting update with Priya's FB.

And why did Vik said like that and I m totally confused and I fully doubt Vik and Neha or may be together...

Anyways its soo interesting Viji.

And Priya's state of mind is very well presented. Great Work.👏 👏 👏

Thanks a lot Madhu..
Haa just she was lost in her thoughts
Lol U will know that in next parts
Am glad u liked it and your appreciation means a lot to me.
Thanks once again.
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow!! what a fantastic update...👏
i just loved it a lot...
beautifully written...
raya didnt confessed their love yet..but they feel happy with each other..
i love their nok..jhoks...in restaurant..😆
ram like a hero saved her from that nasty guy...
i love ram's reaction towards that guy and his demands with his MD.

continue ASAP..
waiting eagerly..
thanks for the pm..😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
I am loving every bit of the story
Nuts entry in the story as Ram Sis
Priya is feeling very uneasy in presence of Ram and as well as they all are going for lunch. She certainly love Priya as mentor
Ram is behaving very sweetly with her teasing him still Nuts can't make out they both like each other
that Raj is such a jerk how he try to misbehave with Priya i was so happy Ram came on time to protect her
Vik Neha are pillars for both of them who always support Raya
they both are true friend i really like awesome foursome
Ram acted like a RB in front of MD so that jerk can get punishment without revealing Priya's name
Aww they have feelings but still didn't confess
Will be waiting for next part thanx for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Doc,
finally i am here again to write something about this upate though knowing i cant giv full justice to it.. thats y this time i didnt call it ss comment...

What a twist to the story dear, only one word came from my mouth after reading is speechless!!!!?!
Really i got numb
i sat few minutes silently closing my eyes..
i felt like everything describd in this update is happening in front of my eyes..
Hats off to writers imagination..
i dont hav the capacity to comment to this update since i m not the writer..
kya kar diya yaar tune..
sucha beautiful writing..
the physical and mental trauma priya faced is very realistic touch u gave..
i loved Nuts~priya~ram convo in hotel..
The way ram teases priya is beautiful.

My god.. finally Ram brushed his lips with his lady but not intentionly..
unknowingly he poured all his love, insecurity to her with that kiss..
He protected her so sweetly calling her "my angel" i just loved that word..
while speaking with MD, he didnt disclosed her name superb.. only a true gentleman can do this..

This was an amazing update.
Very well written, and beautifully executed...
Loved the way their relationship is taking its shape..
Beautiful creation
. just a magic...

and finally The Ram Kapoor.. how did u create such a character.
I m falling in love with that character again and again..

finally before ending this, ek bada sa JAADU KI JHAPPI to the writer from my side..

Dear Doc.. Mein bahut proud feel kar rahi hoon apne aap ko ki mein is story ka hissa hoon as a reader
.
sorry for the late reply.

Again i say yeh dil maange more ..more .. and more..next update plz very soon...
thats it from my side...

love u dear doc.. bye...
Edited by rajhallur - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: armanz

Thank you so much.
Mole scene😆
Code blue is an emergency situation announced in a hospital when a patient suffers cardiac arrest (heart attack) so that a team of providers will rush to the specific location to start immediate resuscitative efforts.
Code green in some countries they announce to show patient revival and in some for evacuation

Thanks for the comment
Will try to update soon

ohhh!!! got it now... thankx for u r clarification...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sorrry for being late doc

Happy moments: Nutz introducing raya, and both having perplexed , wide mouth open, 😆
Ram and priya fantasizing about each other dil hi dil mein , and the way they met and attracted each other.
OMG ram fantsizing her as "HIS" sounds so good. The authoirty in the voice have two extra pulkas wah wah ramji , irada kya hai?? and the teasing tone like plumpy galz 😆😆
😉 and he was scared and his expression zindagi bhar k liye ghas phus kaise khaana hai awesome, the last part he never leaves a chance to tease her, Chalne ki practice karo 🤣i was like wow , he knows how to irritate her, make her occupied with his thoughts always.


Coming to Priya , she wanted run off ,but nutz had not given chance , behcari 😆 and her hesitation in tone as if she cannot control herself , if RK is around and can melt any time, she is now scared of herself 😆 girl instincts hihihi
and madam is fantasizing about him without even seeing him , just by Nuts description of her, amazing , she has submitted herself to him b4 itself.😉😆
Ram asking her u will cook non veg na and her immediate reply NO and the tone OMG 😆😆😆 superb doc awesome brilliant writing. Priya's embarrassed look on nutz praises for her that to in front of RK, the great CT surgeon. Madam toh kaafi khush bhi hogayi , inkaar bhi nhi kiya though she was full she had 3 pulkas [lol]😉 actualy she was liking his concern n protection and his authority over her. 😆😆 brilliant doc i can visualize her expressions so very much. only sakshi can fit here , and her embarrassed and perplexed and blushing face . hayye


The heartfelt thing is Raj being the monster , how can he be so , ufff Doctors bhi aise honge toh its really difficult to survive in this world [cry] but the reason behind him being molesting priya is this bcoz he hate RK or is it bcoz priya is accompanying RK, or he as a character always assault female staff??disgusting shit he is😭
Priya and her hurt and pain ,its hard to digest, some where it shaken me the whole incident, priya's cry n her washing away his touch , feeling irritated about herself ,her body and she the victim only can feel its pain and helplessness and frustration, Yes every feeling guilty about him/her being the reason of priay's such condition it often happens, but to be frank its the time not any one of responsible , but some odds bound to happen, unaware. so sad yet true.
the way ram was consoling priya as he had witnessed her breaking down soon finding him and hugging , the belief , faith in a person when you are in a critically bad situation.

uff heart wrenching, u justified the whole drama so well doc, the one being loved , cannot see her pain and getting angry and the girl being molested her condition and pain also her mental disturbance, superb kudos👏👏


Edited by bpatil3 - 11 years ago

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