~~pyar ke beech me hum nahi ayenge~~LAST PART PG36

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Jyothi

@jodude

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

part-1
sry for late reading and commenting...😊
park mai bench wala scene bahut acha hai...ram aakar jhor se bhet jata hai...😆😆😆
nice part...😊
thanks for pm..

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Jyothi

@jodude

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

wow!! nice VM...👏👏👏..pyar ko ho jane do...😛

Edited by jodude - 11 years ago

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veena singh

@veena23

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: bpatil3
Thx for the PM.
bechaare benaam book ko raya k beech me ghusaake accha nhi kiya veena😆😆😆
raya k beech acche acche kamine nhi tikte ye to bejubaan book hai😆😆

I loved the whole wriitng and enjoyed raya bematlab ka jhagdna, kahi bhi shuru kardete hai😆

I read all 3 parts @ a stretch enjoyed fully priya ki attitude , ghurna , ram ka baat baat pe irritate hona, bechain hona , frustrate hona awesome i can visualize them so very much.

Hahaha..wo to h ki raya ke beech koi nhi tikta pr kisi ke beech me aaye bina inki gadi bhi to age nahi badhti to kisi na kisi ko ghusana hi padta h

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Jyothi

@jodude

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

part-2
nice part...😛
raya fight is lovely...raya bade ache lagte hai...even they r fighting.😆
update soon...😊

thanks for the pm.

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veena singh

@veena23

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Part 3...

Priya park me baith kar book padh rhi thi...aas pas kya ho rha h kuchh nhi dhyan de rhi thi..actully use dhyan dena hi nhi tha...aur us insan ke bare me to bilkul nhi sochna tha aur is book ko ek normal book ki trh padh ke khtm karke next book padhna tha...so wo fluently padhti ja rhi thi...tabhi samne se awaz aati h...hello..priya samne dekhti h hi bolti h aur phir book me dekhne lagti h pr use kuchh ajeeb lagta h phir se samne dekhti h to koi nhi rhta h...use samjh nhi ata h to baju me dekhti h to ram baithkar muskura rha hota h...ab samne se ram muskura rha h to priya ko khud hi apna attitude achha nhi laga to usne bhi muskura diya...aur puchha...

Priya...mujhe laga aap ayenge nhi

ram...kyun??

Priya...aise hi..wo...aaj book nhi le aaye??...phenk di kya???

Ram...han samundr me...tumne hi to bola tha..

Priya...achha??...kal to meri bat sunne me bhi intrest nhi tha aur aaj meri bat man bhi li...wow

ram ko hasi aa jati h to priya bhi has deti h...

Ram...are yar i am sorry...book ki frustration me main tumhare upar chilla diya...

Priya...actully i am also sorry...same here..

Ram...problm ye h ki mujhe book wgrh padhne ka koi shaukh nhi h pr mera ek pagal dost h sale ki khud ki shaadi ho gyi h to wo meri shant life ko shanti se jeete hue nhi dekh pa rha h...pta nhi kahan se utha ke le aya wo book aur mujhe pakada di...aur bola ki mujhe wo padhni hi padegi aur wo bhi feel karke karke...aur mujhe in cheezo me koi intrest nhi h ye pyar vyar..faltu ka time pas lagta h mujhe...jinke pas kuchh kam nhi hota h wo log ye sab kuchh karke apne aap ko jhuthe dilase dete rhte hain ki wo bade khush hain...are main khud ke hi sath aur apni family ke sath bht khush rhta hu ye log pta nhi kyun nhi samjhte hain...

Priya...o my god...book me intrest ki bat chhod kar baki sari bate ditto mere bhi sath hain...mujhe bhi ye book meri frnd ne hi di h..humdono ke khyal ajeeb jarur hain pr kafi milte hain...bas meri weakness ye hai ki main agr koi book padhna shuru kar deti hu to khtm kiye bina chhodti nhi hu..ye mujhse nhi ho pata h...pr baki aur sari bato se main totally agree karti hu...mujhe samjh nhi ata ki book padhne se kaise feeling aati h aur kaise pyar hota h...sab duffr hain..m manti hu ki agr pyar jaisi koi cheez h aur apki kismat me hogi to khud hi apko dhundh legi na uske peechhe padne ki kya jarurat h...

Ram...whi to main bhi bolta hu jab shaadi honi hogi ho jayegi pyar hona hoga ho jayega...ab uske intezar me sara kam dham chhod ke baitha to nahi ja sakta h na...

Priya...han aur kya...khair jane dijiye..ek cheez achhi hui na is book ke chakkr me ki mujhe aap mil gye...

Ram...aur mujhe tum...

Itna dono bolte hi dono chaunk jate hain ki ye kya bol diya...?..phir asusual lagte hain ankhe aur bate ghumane...

Priya...aaa...mera ...mtlb h ..hum mile tabhi to jan paye ki...

Ram...hamari soch kitni milti h...exactly i want to say that...

Phir dono idhar udhar dekhne lagte hain...priya thoda sa aur book ko padhne ki koshish karti h pr nhi Ho pata h ram bhi kuchh der time pas ke liye idhar udhar dekhta h pr use bhi lag rha tha ki aur nhi baith payega yha to...

Ram...theek h phir main chalta hu...office bhi jana hota h yha se...

Priya...han mujhe bhi..chalte hain..by..tc

ram...u tooo

dono jaldi se wha se jate hain aur thodi dur jakr kas ke sans lete hain...jaise kahin atki hui thi..pr phir jane kyun dono ke hontho pr smile aa jati h...awaiye...

Dono apne apne ghar jate hain..phir apne apne kam pr...har jagah bade achhe mood me...har kam ekdm perfect aur smile!...smile ki to tsunami hi aa gyi thi dono ke chehre pr...har bat pr muskura le rhe the...kabhi kabhi to bina bat ke bhi muskura le rhe the..to inka ye wala attitude logo se jyada der tak handle nhi ho rha tha..are yar nature ka problm h na...duniya bhar ki chinta fikr karne wale log befikre ho jaye to doubt to bnta h boss...pr doubt kare kis bat pr...ye dono to sirf isliye khush hain ki wo dono akele namune nhi hain duniya me unke hi jaisa koi aur bhi h...duffr...inse pyar krwana to shayad khud pyar karne se bhi jyada mushkil hai...khair...ab jab sher ke muh me hath dala hi h to chot se darne ka kya fayda...to pyar to karwana hi padega chahe kitna bhi mushkil kyun na ho...khair priya ghar aati h to uski ma apne tantrum pr chalu...qki achha ho ya bura wo priya ke bare me kuchh jan nhi pati h qki priya kabhi kuchh bhi nhi btati h...abhi tak to shipra ki book ki uljhan suljhi nhi thi tab se ye smile tsunami...to jab wo kuchh jan nhi pati h to chillane lagti h...

Shipra...main to is ladki se tang aa gyi hu sirf apni manmani karti h kisi ki sunti nhi h...pta nhi bina mtlb ki itni sari boundries bna rakhi hain apni feelings ke liye...na khud kuchh karti h na kisi aur ko karne deti h...

Sudhir...are shipra kya ho jata h tumhe rh rh kar...

Shipra...main bol rhi hu sudhir...ye eklauti hogi is duniya me jiski soch aisi h...

Priya muskurati rhti h aur pure mast ke mood me shipra ko pakad ke bolti h...ji nhi...main akeli nhi hu koi aur bhi h jiski soch itni hi anokhi h

shipra...mtlb???

Priya...matlb kuchh nhi...relax..main sone ja rhi hu...aaj bht thak gyi

shipra...muskurate muskurate na...??

Priya...hehehe...gudnight

udhar ram abhi tak office me baithkar faltu me time pas kar rha h tabhi vikram aa jata h...

Vikram...kya yar tu abhi tak yhi baitha h ghar nhi jana h??

Ram...nahi...aaj ghar jane ka man nhi kar rha h

vikram...o teri...tabiyat to theek h tera aur ghar jane ka man nhi h...are cmon yar mera eklauta dost h tu tujhe kuchh ho jayega to main kya karunga...tu nhi badal sakta yar..teri yhi to pehchan h ki tu apne jaisa eklauta h is duniya...

Ram...hahaha...ab tu ye mujhe bilkul nhi bol sakta qki mere jaisa koi aur bhi h is duniya me...

Vikram...hahaha..tune glti se aina dekh liya hoga...

Ram...dikhaunga sale tujhe bhi ek din wo aina dikhaunga

vikram...mtlb???

Ram...mtlb kuchh nhi...chal ghar chalte hain...

Vikram...pr abhi to bol rha tha nhi jana h

ram...han pr ab bol rha hu na jana h...to chal...

Khair kisi kisi trh rat biti agli subah dono ekdm time pr park me...hi hello hua dono me aur baith gye dono phir se whin..priya to apni book padhne lagi pr ram kya kare...wo to book laya nhi tha...usne socha book lana chahiye tha...pr wo padh bhi to nhi pata h aur wo yha koi book ke liye thodi na aya tha..toh kyun aya tha??...heyn ye to use bhi nhi pta ki kyun aya tha??...bas aa gya..khair 10 min idhar udhar ki bate sochne ke bad priya ke chehre ki trf dekhne laga...priya book padh jarur rhi thi pr use feel ho rha tha ki uski nazare us pr hi hain...jo ki use uncomfrtable kar rhi thi...thodi der jabrdsti book me dhyan lagane ki koshish karti hai pr nhi ho pata h to ram ki taraf dekhti h aur isharo me puchhti h ..kya h be??...ram muskura ke nazare hata leta h...

Ram...are main kya karu??...tum to book padh rhi ho

priya...han to main to book hi padhne aayi hu na

ram...han wo to h...tum aise chupchap book padhte hue bore nhi hoti ho...??...main to so jata hu..

Priya...hahaha..book shanti se hi padhi jati h...

Ram...pr humko isko intresting bhi to bna sakte hain?

Priya...really???...how???

Ram...look..vry simpl..

Priya...explain..

Ram...are dekho tum chupchap book padh rhi ho...main chupchap baitha hu to humdono bore ho rhe hain...to tumhe book padhne me intrest h mujhe sunne me to tum kahani padho pr tez tez...to main kahani sununga..

Priya...hahaha..vry funny ..apka mtlb h main apko kahani sunau??

Ram...toh kya bura h?...padh to rhi ho suna dogi to dono ke liye intresting ho jayegi...

Priya...ji nhi...main ye nhi karne wali hu...

Ram...cmon tum apne dost ke liye itna bhi nhi kar sakti ho??

Priya...excuse me??...kaun dost??

Ram...are main..baitha to hu tumhare samne

priya...hahaha..apse dosti kab hui??

Ram...heyn nhi hui??

Priya...nahi to

ram...oh ok ok...but hamari soch ki itni achhi compatibilty h to hum dost to ban hi sakte hain...if u dont mind...

Priya...han ban to sakte hain...pr main itni jaldi logo se dosti nhi karti hu..

Ram...are cmon yar main koi 21 sal ka awara flrtbaz ladka lagta hu tumhe jo tumse dosti kar ke tumhe fasane ki koshish karunga...

Priya...are maine aisa kab kaha??...aur pls 21 sal ke to ap kahin se bhi nhi lagte hain...aur main bhi koi 16 sal ki nhi hu ki koi bhi ake phasa le mujhe...itni jindgi to jee h maine ki logo ko pehchan saku...to i think..

Ram...what???

Priya...hum dosti kar sakte hain...

Ram...chalo phir aaj se dost hue...

Priya...hahaha...mujhe lagta h apko dicision khud hi lene ki adat h...

Ram...hahaha..i am sorry..

Priya...no no its ok..frnds..

Ram...sure..

To b continue...

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peeyara

@peeyara

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#66

arey wah dosti hogayi 😆

pehli bar raya ki itni jaldi dosti huyi hai 😆 and that unki soch ki wajah se jo hamesha different hoti hai but is bar same hai 😛

thank u for the pm 😛(as pm karoge toh advance mai 😆)

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rosinagoor

@rosinagoor

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Part : 2
Very nice update
Ram & Priya park scenes are cute
specially their fight scene, i imagine that scene while reading
After fight both r think about each other, that's a lovely scene.
Totally cute update
Thanks for PM
sorry for the late reply

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rosinagoor

@rosinagoor

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Part : 3
Both RaYa asked sorry to each for the yesterday fight, that scenes are lovely
Both share about why they reading this particular book, that scenes are cute
Coming to another park scenes,
with three days, RaYa became friends,i like that scene & you wrote that scene very well
thanks for lovely update
thanks for the PM :)