RAYA FF -Sirf Meri Ho *THREAD-7 updated part-79 on page-143

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luvsakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: armanz

Babyyy it wasnt full comment kya karu time hi nahi mila..sorryyy
but now u can see i have given my full comment..hope it will appeal U.😳

Nooo

but as i thought you were busy

it was full comment

let me go and reply to that

Love you

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luvsakshi

@luvsakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: armanz
am crazily baby seeing you back.
Awesome dear..I terribly missed ur updates all these days..Its like am able to have refreshing feel now after reading this..Love you and Thank you so much for the wonderful update.
I am after reading it.
Neel..I missed you very very baldy gal..but glad you took ample rest before coming back..and this is what I call BACK WITH A BANG..WELCOME SWEETY..

Coming to the present part.. It was Mind blowing, tremendous, entertaining as usual and above all sweetly and pleasantly touchy to heart..Had a smirk all the while. It was colourful..
Lol enjoyed Neha confronting Ram for his deed and how sweetly he manofied her..Golu na bahot smart hai..

Vikram bhi na mota kaha upar se deny bhi kiya

Neel meri pyaari kitna bak bak karti hain..

Loved the moments between Priya, Ape and Krishna ji..
Rishab is na fun of the family..always keeps the surroundings alive..yeah hope he takes care..

Lo my favourite character came again..Patakha NEEL..
Loved her teasing at the same time loved her more for putting some sense in Priya..but ultimate was her gonna be caught ouch wala scene..why slip your tongue and then bite your nails..
She wont change ever..
if Priya catches her deed she will be and
Loved Neel and Priya scene totally... the car one was even good .. until she bid bye I enjoyed every line..
Poor Ram caught in between two naughty ladies.. it will be a puzzle to him what they might hav discussed
Tho Vik n Neha played their part well..
Priya had no option there..
LOL the guards are getting on her nerves.. let her be spared from this headache re..😆
Ram bhi na how he is scaring her ..better she comes back to bed and sleep peacefully after their ahem ahem..
WONDERFUL RE..
Sorry for late reply but I enjoyed it very well.
Continue soon.
Pm reached my inbox..uff i told u I dont check..😆

Love you so much

OMG OMG Im just Thud

you know i dont want to spoil your precious and gorgeous cmment with adding my lines re

Its so so beautiful like this let it be

I will give reply here only

Im so happy to see your signature comment

Lol yah neha did taken class for Ram ...haha the smiley was supercool

and Golu knows how he can manfoy 😆

Vik always vik ..he said mota and he denied the fact hehe

Lol...Ye kya re ye parrot ya our kuch ..But the bird is beautiful 😆

Rishab is always a fun loving guy and he is most imp characer of this ff

Pathaka Neel again 😡Niii

Yeah My dialogues were good na Lol thanks to Giri

im glad you liked it

Lol...always neel will slip her tingue its common infront of friends 😆

Haha the nailbiting smiley is just awesome 😆

Lol...What was that washing and mixy wala smileYs

Im Rofling out here 😆Lol

Yeah priya can do that thing easily 😆

Yah poor Ram caught between two ladies

and it will be always puzzle for him to think

Priya had no option

and She has to teach them from next day

and yeah Ram is scaring her

and i love that your smiley

yaar where all you are getting

aww that so sweet of you

Well we will se wether she will comeback or not

Thank you for the greatest comment darling

Muhaaa

Love you loads

aNd tight hugs

Mistake se aagaya pm 😆 sory

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Jyothi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#123

waiting 4 the next part... 😊😊😊

Edited by jodude - 11 years ago

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rosinagoor

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Posted: 11 years ago

#124

Neel Dear,

Waiting for the update

Edited by rosinagoor - 11 years ago

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luvsakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: iLuvRamKapoor

Hi Di Welcome back sissy u r back with bang So glad to see u in the forum
Coming to the update i had hugs smile especially the last scene the way you guys present story shows how mush you are fond of the story

Firstly i loved these lines
He soon entered Kapoor Industries with his dashing look. He was looking so smart ,enough to drool over by the staff on his charm

I felt u wrote for me lol

aww loved the Neha Vik and Ram scene and Vik Called ram as Teddy awee i lovethese two

ram called Neel to know about priya's present state of mind thats a good move

Ape's entry y is she worried that In Laws arent staying with them they are newly married after all they should be happy lol

Finally Pathaka entry she makes Priya so happy
and she made her normal i know the reason she chose kurti over saree

My RAm is so intelligent na easily solved the issue

awee the last scene yeh madam na khud soyegi na ram ko sone degi lol

That idea of scaring her is brilliant

cant wait for the next part

Thank you so much fr the warm welcome darling

I can understand how you might be grinned while reading those lines for Ram 😆

The writer might have written for you

Lol yeah vik called him as teddy and their friendship is awesome

You na ..kabhi nahi sudharegi Lol

Ape is worried for inlwas bcz she wanted to stay with them

They will lead their married life but if with them its like a complete package 😆

Achha choti bhi badi hogayii ...Good that you guessed why neel chosen kurthi for her

You took the point out na thats very brilliant ..Loved it

Lol Yah After all its Ram plan only na so he will solve like easily

haha scary thought is brilliant but we will see how its gonna happen

Thank you so much dear for the omment

will try to update soon

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luvsakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: armanz
Wat r u doing??Editing??Kya re

Haha sorry

yaar

posting 4 updates at once

so confused hu

soo was checked before posting

so i wrote editing Ki

😆

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luvsakshi

@luvsakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: rosinagoor
Cute Morning Kiss 😉
Loved a lot Ram-Neha-Vikram scenes

I am die to read you(Neel) & Ram conversation, it's as always Beautiful

What a lovely Friend Neel is 😊

Lovely Priya, Ape, KK & Rishab scenes

OMG! Neel newly married Girl 😲

Lovely Neel, Priyu & Baby scene

Neel & Priya, that Security Guard scenes is very funny 🤣

I really die to read this Neel scenes,

Giri , when I read this Neel scenes & Her Dialogues are remembering our Neel Darling. The way Neel speak, everything correct match with this Neel. Give lots of scenes to this Neel 😃

Simply wonderful scenes between Neel & Priya 👏

I like Ram's expression, while Priya & Neel's discussion

RaYa scenes are Magical

Super RaYa & VikNeh scenes

Very cute, beautiful & Naughty RaYa bed room scene

Thanks for the PM Neel 😛

To Giri : I think she must go & sleep with Ram 😉
All the very best for your Exam Dear 😊

Thank you Rosi

Lol You are die hard fan of my convo with Ram 😆

Thanks for that and yah everybody giving eqaul imp in this story

and yah Neel is newly married girl in this 😆

Lol yah giri will write thinking me in my mind i think 😆

Yah Raya scenes are always magical to us

Naughty scene in their bedroom will see hw its going to turn out for priyu darling

Rosi your guess may correct she will go and sleep with him

but as we cant sure will wait for until the update

Thank you for the wishes dear

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luvsakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: sandhyasn
Welcome back neel🤗

Coming to part

story is moving very smoothly...Priya is well recovered...but still she doubted Ram...she is not fully convinced with Shruti's explanations...so many things hovering in her mind.

Neel and Priya part was superb...both are really good friends. Neel stopped laughing when Priya asked about Bus😆...I can imagine that scene...off course I imagined you😉

Muje pata hai ek na ek din Priya sach pata lagakar hi rahegi.

I can imagine Ram's expression when two girls are busy in girly talk...very good scene. Ram frustrated face...then the evening with Nevik was good.

so their plan is working...Nevik are sending their kid to tutions...Priya is going to be busy with baby boy and tutions...kahi ram ko romance karne ka mauka na mile😉

lady guard followed Priya every where😆..loved it.Priya got angry and slept in cough...Ram played horror CD...I think Priya KK ke saat sone chali jaayegi or she bought Nuts baby and made him to sleep in between them...agar kuch nahi hua Priya Ram ke paas hi chali jaayegi😉

beautifully written...loved it

thanks for PM...and please continue soon

P.S Best of luck Giri and do well in exam