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Posted: 11 years ago
What can i say yar ?? Every time i read it only one word come out just wow. Bohat kuchh kehna hota he but awaj nai nikalti.To iss condition ko samjhlena ar jitni compliment duniya me he sab jodlena.

Update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very nice update
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sorry dear for late .. as yday was a busy day for me..
its superb as.. family party and .. RAYA's romance in full mood..
Thank u for ur pm

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Posted: 11 years ago
Finally I read all the remaining Parts 😊

Thread 4 (Part 47 to 59) :

Part 47 to 50 :
The way Ram make Priya to understand about the trip. He feels Prove when she attend the conference. Priya accepted everything for Ram & his happiness. They both madly love each others, it's shown in their wild love making scenes.Priya take Promise from Ram, if i leave you you must move on. For Priya sake Ram accepted.
Lots of Happiness, emotional ,Family scenes & RaYa scare all in this parts.

Part 51 & 52 :
This part is very emotional, Priya's accident , her miscarriage, how Ram broke down when heard Priya's death. Ram knew about her pregnancy, he felt his guilt. On the hand, Priya suffering Memory loss & Miscarriage. She knew only Name & country. this two parts full emotional

Part 53 to 59 :
After two years lots of change in every ones life Ram remain same person, his love for Priya is increased more. Priya living lonely life, always feel about her unborn baby & she got happy in seeing other kids & be with Dr's family. When Ram think about her, she get that voice. She told dr. that i heard one familiar voice calling & i seen blurry image.
Finally Ram came to Singapore & Accidentally spot her lady love. Soon he get her all details. The way he approach her, they became friends first & slowly Priya fall in love with him. But she scared about her past. Ram give her all his support & make her agreed for marriage. Ram felt happy that his lady love came back to his life, he inform that to his family & asked their support.
This whole parts are Awesome & very well written too 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thread 5 (Part 60 to 72) :

Finally Priya came back to KM, first she have fear but slowly she comfortable with every family members. All the family members hide their emotions & feelings for Priya.
Day by Day RaYa love increasing, both love madly each other.
RaYa got married, their love making.
RaYa attachment with Nuts Kid
Whole family plan for RaYa happiness
Ram told his wish to Priya that she want to be a father,
Priya accepted that & she too told that she also want to be a mother of Ram's child
Both are very understanding, both are fall for each other
Nuts Kid naming function
RaYa gone to hospital & clear some doubt about Priya's health
Priya gone to Her house, After long she call Sundhir & Shipra, Ma,pa that is very emotional moment
Finally RaYa gone Honey moon with whole family to same beach house
Ram remember every moment they spent in there
Priya done everything for Ram's happiness.
Totally Wonderful updates 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
thank you all for the comments, will come back soon with the final part
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jineejiggs

thank you all for the comments, will come back soon with the final part


Do you mean that next part is the end part ???😲 Final part ka meaning kya he sab kuchh yad ajayega to end karoge kya uskebad ka kya ?????
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Posted: 11 years ago
sorry 4 d late commenting...

The part was awsome and most interesting is that last part of the update is 18+ i must say...


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jeena1993


Do you mean that next part is the end part ???😲 Final part ka meaning kya he sab kuchh yad ajayega to end karoge kya uskebad ka kya ?????




I will finish the FF in appropriate way, the story will get the decent ending
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Posted: 11 years ago
This has been a wonderful journey with you all and my RaYa. I have grown with my characters, RaYa gave me the opportunity to express my feelings, giving words to my thoughts. For past 16 months they have been with me constantly and you all too, today is the final part of this story, I hope you all liked the story and will continue to shower your love and affection on RaYa.



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...the outburst was volcanic, they both were exhausted yet their need for one another hardly fazes out. The two bodies are tangled and lay under the blanket sleeping peacefully.





Kehte hain har subah ek nayi umeed leke aati hain, kya Ram aur Priyya ke zindagi me bhi yeh subah kuch naya leke aayi hain! waqt ke paas hi iska jawab hoga. The morning sun was bright and it was making its way to wake RaYa up from their sugary love making sleep. Priya stretched before her eyes fluttered to open. The sunlight made her stir and very slowly she opened her eyes. The night lamps are still on and the sound of soft snore is coming from the other side. Priya looked by her side and found Ram is sleeping like a child in cuddled position. She adjusted the duvet on her and looked for her night dress. The clothes are all piled up on the floor. She came out from duvet and took her night dress and came inside the bathroom. All she could do after entering the bathroom was taking deep breath. She was actually naked and has been holding her breath, still she feels uncomfortable in front of Ram being naked.


Half an hour later, when Ram opened his eyes first he tried to feel Priya but couldn't get her. He got up from the bed and heard the sound of water and understood she is in bathroom. A wicked smile came across his face. Priya was on the other hand under shower. Her eyes were closed and she was savouring the hot water. It was soothing her skin, yesterday night they made wild love, she didn't say anything but she was sore. She was under shower when she felt two strong masculine hands wrapping her, immediately she buckled but the similar touch made her relax. Ram wrapped her in his embrace from behind and smelled her on the nape of her shoulder. His hands slowly caressed her sides. He palmed over her rib cage and took her mounds in his hands and weighed them. The nipples became pebbled under his touch, Priya shuddered from his touch. She has closed her eyes and she could see similar thing happening but couldn't recognize the persons. Some words were also ringing in her ear, those scattered words, precious mounds...milk...baby...feeding, she opened her eyes and looked at Ram. By now she can feel his palm on her thighs. Priya was already wet from his touch so when Ram took her under shower they both joined in the ecstasy of the union.


Everyone gathered on the breakfast table. Rahul, Riddhima and Sammy were taking care of Khush who was actually playing with them. Ram and Priya were late.


Neha - good morning, ho gayi tum dono ki subaah! Saying this winked at Priya.


Natasha - raat ko theek se soye na aap dono?


Ram - tum dono chhup karoge toh main kuch order karun?


Neha - tere liye order kar diya hain, tera favourite aloo ke parathe


Ram - yeh huyi na baat!


Dadi - chalo ab sab nashta khatam karo phir picnic pe chalte hain


Rishabh - wow! dadi aap toh bohot excited lag rahi hain


Dadi - kyun na hoyu aakhir sab saath me hain, mere bachhen bhi hain


Saumya - haan dadi bada mazaa ayega.


Krishnaji - lekin itne dhup me sab phir bachhen bhi hain...


Vikram - aap uski chhinta mat kijiye aunty maine sab arrangement kar liya hain


Bas yunhi baatein karte karte aur RaYa ko tease karte karte sabki breakfast khatam huyi and all came outside in the beach. A lovely morning it was, sunny weather with cool breeze blowing. Vikram arranged everything nicely and kept in mind about the needs and wants of the elders. Children were excited to play on the beach. With them elders also join the band. Priya and Natasha along with Khush were sitting with dadi, Krishnaji, Sudhirji and Shipraji, in fact so much so this time Ram also joined the team. All were watching them playing cricket. Ram was telling Rahul how to play and he was giving hands on learning to Sammy. Seeing Ram enjoying with kids made Priya smile a little more, how she wish she could give him his wn blood and flesh. She came out of her reverie when Natasha said,


Natasha - bhabhi why don't you join the team?


Priya - areee nahi baba, main yahi theek hoon aur waise bhi mujhe cricket ke C bhi nahi ata hain.


Natasha - bhai ko toh cricket ke ilawa aur kuch nahi soojhta hain


Priya - janti hoon, tumhare bhai ko cricket ke saath chhod doon toh woh wahi chhipke beythe rahenge.


Natasha - aapko pata hain Vikrambhai aur bhai jab dono ek saath match dekhte hain toh ghar sarr pe utha lete hain.


Priya - janti hoon, jab akele dekhte hain tab bhi wahi karte hain.


The loud noise of cheer let them look at that direction. All the children were shouting and jumping in joy and they all hugged their Ram uncle tightly. That moment Neha came to that place and took the bottle and wiped her sweat and started smiling looking at her children.


Priya - kya hua?


Neha - bachhon ki team jeet gayi, yeh fatty bhi na, bachhon ke saath jab bhi rehta hain bilkul bachha bann jata hain.


Hearing her Priya looked at her Man again and saw he is laughing and smiling with the kids.


All gathered under that huge canopy and were enjoying the nature and cool sea breeze. Neha and Saumya were looking after the children while Natasha was busy feeding Khush. All were chatting and having fun. Priya excused herself and she started to stroll on the beach. She was enjoying the sea and the nature, chalte chalte kaafi dur taka a gayi thi woh ke achanak uske kaano me awaaz aati hain, Priya you made me complete, she looked around but couldn't find anything, she closed her eyes and the flashes of two people strolling on the beach, clasping their hands together, smiling, it seems they are in love so much with one another. The fragmented words and their closeness keep coming to her and Priya was trying vehemently to look into their eyes to know who they are but she simply cannot see them. Suddenly a touch make her open the eyes and she founf Ram in front of him, she took him in her tight hug and kept her head on his chest and mumbled mujhe kuch yaad nahi aa raha hain, bohot koshish karti hoon lekin sab dhundla dhundla nazar aata hain, saying she started sobbing. Ram didn't say anything, he understood her unconscious mind is sending the waves to her brain, Priya ke zehen me sab kuch hain bas usse yaad dilana zaroori hain, this place, their hotel room is giving her those waves of known incidents. Ram relaxed her and they strolled over the beach for few more moments before coming back to their family.


Kehte hain samay ke saath saath sab kuch theek hota jata hain, shayad Priya ke saath bhi waisa hi ho raha hain. After coming back from Resort she has become a bit more restless now a days, in fact aaj kal raat ko neend me she started murmuring things, though she doesn't remember those in the morning but he mind is coming out from its sleep. Ram ne kisi ko kuch nahi kahan hain but he is taking good care of his beloved. Iss din ka kabse intezaar kar raha tha woh, bhale hi Priya uske paas hain saath hain lekin usse kuch yaad nahi hain jo Ram ke liye kisi dard se kam nahi hain, Priya saath toh hain magar woh pyaar woh ehsaas nahi hain jo ki unn dono ka kabhi ashiana hua karta tha. Its been 2 montha that they have come back from Resort, Ram is out of India for some business meetings. Priya was in her room. For past some days she isn't feeling good. Whatever she takes it creates havoc in her stomach, for past two days she is vomiting in the wee hours of the morning. Aaj bhi subah ke 5 baaje she came in the bathroom and thrown up, she wasn't feeling too well. Aaj Ram wapas aa rahe hain, she thought of him and a small smile appeared on her lip. She came in the bed and lied down closing her eyes. When Ram entered in his room found Priya is sleeping, it was almost mid afternoon. He was taken aback seeing her sleeping. He came and placed his hand on her forehead, the touch of her beloved let her come out from the sugary sleep, she opened her eyes and found Ram in fromnt of her eyes. She hugged him tightly and kept her head on his chest, Ram too took her in his hug, they kept sitting like that for sometime when Priya asked him,


Priya - aap itni jaldi kaise aa gaye aapki flight toh late moring thi na?


Ram - flight time pe hi thi, tum need me thi


Priya - matlab?


Ram - its almost mid afternoon now, are you alright? Itni der tak soo rahi ho?, ma keh rahi thi kuch dino se tum bohot stressed bhi lag rahi ho, kya baat hain?


Priya hearing him took her mobile and saw the time, she hurridly came out from bed when Ram caught her wrist, kya baat hain Priya?, tum mujhse kuch chhupa rahi ho?


Priya - nahi Mr. Kapoor, bas kuch din se thoda sa thakaan si mehsoos ho rahi hain, bas aur kuch nahi, I am fine, ab chaliye chhodiye mujhe nahane jana hain.


Ram - may I have the opportunity to take bath with you?


Priya smiled wickedly at him.


The night witnessed the unison of two love birds, their surrender to each other and their wild love. The two bodies lay tangled under the blanket and were in each others arms. The sudden sound make Ram woke up from his sleep and he opened his eyes. after adjusting his eyes he saw the light from the bathroom, he hurriedly came over there where he found Priya was throwing up, he immediately took her in his embrace, and started patting her back to ease her up. After some moments they both came out and Ram made her sit on the bed.


Ram - ab tum mujhe batayogi kya hua hain?


Priya wiped her nose and said, I don't know, kuch din se bohot ajeeb lsg raha hain, for last couple of days subah mujhe vomiting ho rahi hain.


Ram - itni tabeeyat kharap hain tumhari aur tumne mujhe kuch nahi bataya


Priya - I didn't want to disturb you


Ram - hum aaj hi Dr. Mishra ke paas jayenge, I will take an appointment from her, tum ready rehna, saying this he made her lie down, took her in his arm and made her relax, Priya was exhausted and she felt asleep.


Priya was in changing room, when Ram called her up


Ram - I have got the appointment, sharp @6:30 in the evening, tum mere office aa jana, then we will go.


Priya - okay, I will be there.


Ram - waise ab kaise hain tabeeyat tumhari?


Priya - abhi thoda sa better feel kar rahi hoon


Ram - theek hain abhi tum rest kar lo, will talk to you later, and yes take your previous reports.


After the lunch, Priya opened their cupboard and was searching for her reports when she found a diary. She took it out and opened a page.


When Priya didn't arrive at Ram's office and with repeated attempt to call her failed, he became panicked. He came to Kapoor Mansion and came to his room. The room was slightly lit with bed lamps and Priya was in the balcony on the swing.


Ram - main kab se tumhe phone kar raha hoon tum receive kyun nahi kar rahi ho?, are you alright?


Priya looked at him, there was a blankness in her eyes, we lost our baby Ram, main aapko aapki gudiya nahi de payi, I lost the baby saying this she cried bitterly holding him firmly. Ram was flabbergasted at first but then his eyes fall on the diary and he understood Priya has read that and perhaps she got her memory back. itne dino me peheli baar Ram had tears in his eyes as well. Yeh pal sirf ek pati aur patni ka hota hain, jo dard inn dono ko hua hain woh sirf yeh dono hi mehsoos kar sakte hain, jo sunapan hain woh yeh dono hi baant sakte hain. Ram held her tightly in his embrace but Priya was constantly blabbering and sobbing, dono ko kuch bhi kehna sunna nahi hain aaj sirf ek pati aur patni apni rishten ka gehrayi me khona hain, ek dusre ke saath chalna hain, ek dusre ko tham na agar ek ladkhaye toh duja usse sahara de sake, bas aaj ek bar phir ek dusre ke saath jeene hain, ek dusre ke hoke. Ram was holding her tight but Priya became unconscious in his arms and he took her to the bed and lied her down. He tried to bring back her consciousness but nothing happened. Ram called out everyone and also called Dr. Tripathy.


Krishnaji - kya hua Ram Priya ko?


Ram - maa Priya ko sab yaad aa gaya hain, hum og baat kar rahe the achanak behosh ho gayi


Dadi - waheguru ki lakh lakh shukriya ke putaar nu sab yaad aa gaya hain


Krishnaji - sab kuch yaad aa gaya hain tab toh miscarriage...


Ram - haan ma, usse sab yaad aa gaya hain


Krishnaji - itna bada sadma kaise bardaasht karegi woh!


Dadi - kuch nahi hone denge hum apni puttar nu, tu dekh lena Krishna, babaji sab achha karenge.


Meanwhile Dr. Tripathy came and started checking Priya, being the family physician of Kapoors he know about Priya.


Krishnaji - doctor Tripathy sab theek toh hain na?


Doctor Tripathy - Mrs. Kapoor, Priya is pregnant but she is very weak, so she needs rest. Nothing to worry at all, she is keeping fine. Turning to Ram he congratulated him and came out of the room.


Krishnaji came and hugged Ram tightly, she kissed his forehead and said, main aaj bohot khush hoon beta, bohot bohot mubarak ho.


Dadi - oye Golu, aaj tune iss dadi ko pardadi bana diya hain, jeeyunda reh puttar, waheguru tum dono ko bohot bohot khushi de.


Saumya came and sat beside Priya who was still in deep slumber. Congratulations! bhappa.


Ram looked at her with his unique smile, but his eyes were moisten with tears.


Later at that night, Priya stirred in her deep slumber feeling wet on her stomach, her eyes flutter and she saw Ram was caressing her belly and was talking with someone. Priya called him very feebly,


Priya - Rammm


Ram looked at her and saw she was awake, he immediately took her in his hug. Tears welled up in her eyes and they spilled down creating their own path. The naked reality has come up, she has lost her child, their symbol of love. Ram felt wetness on his sleeve and cupped her face in his hand. He wiped those tears and placed one of his hand on her belly and very softly said, we are going to be parents, you are pregnant with my child. For moments Priya looked at Ram with blank expression and then clutched his kurta tightly, she just stared at him and Ram caressed her hair, finally she broke down and Ram took her in his embrace. Ro lene do inn dono ko, jo dard 2 saal se dabi huyi thi aaj bahar aane ka raasta mil gaya hain isse, inn aansoo ke saath sath woh 2 saal ki har taqleef aur dard bahar aa raha hain, beh jane do inn aansooyon ko, aaj ke baad ek nayi seere se shuru hogi Ram aur Priya ki kahaani jahan sirf pyaar aur khushiyan hi hongi.


A year later...


Ram - chalo aaj papa aur gudiya dono khelenge ek saath.


Ram took the child in his arms and came out silently from the room. Moments later, Priya opened her eyes, she was still feeling sleepy, her hands searched for something but couldn't find it, a smile appeared on her face when she heard him talking with their angel. Priya wrapped herself in a shawl and came out from her room. Ram was sitting on the stairs of the courtyard holding their angel tightly in his embrace and was talking with her. She is a daddy's girl, barely some months old she is completely in with her father. Priya was watching father-daughter from stairs, Ram was talking with her and she was responding in her own way, wriggling in his lap. Priya silently came to them, the sound of her footsteps let Ram looked at her and he smiled back.


Priya - kya baatein ho rahi hain papa aur beti me? saying she also sat beside him.


It was early October in Amritsar, subaah ke sirf 6 hi baje the, everyone is still fast in sleep, thand bhi dheere dheere apni ahat suna raha hain. The sky is bright with orange streaks as sun is gearing up to start its day. Kapoors have come to Amritsar to visit Golden temple to take blessings from babaji, dadi ki yehi khwahish thi so all have come this time, with that Saumya is too pregnant so it was all good to take the blessings. Priya ki dil i khwahish thi ke woh apni bachhe ka naamkaran uske pushtayni haveli me karegi so that the child will get to know about her roots, her family aur Priya janti thi iss baat se Ram ko kitna achha lagega. Hospital se discharge ke baad jab woh peheli baar ghar pe aayi aur sabne unn dono ka welcome kiya tabhi Priya ne yeh tayy kiya tha toh jab naamkaran ki baari aayi usne Krishnaji aur dadi se yeh baat kahi,


Priya - maa, dadi mujhe kuch kehna hain aap dono se


Dadi - bol na puttar


Priya - dadi woh main soch rahi thi ke agar hum iska naamkaran Amritsar ke haveli me kare, isse bhi toh apne roots ke bare me pata chale, apne sanskar apne darohar ke bare me jane


Krishnaji - Priya beta...


Priya - agar aap logon ko sahi lage toh hi...


Krishnaji - iss se acchi aur koi baat ho hi nahi sakti hain


Dadi - jeeyundi reh puttar, babaji ka meher sada tere upar banaye rakhhe, ab main chain se jaa sakti hoon, mere iss ashiyane ko sambhalnewali aa gayi hain, mere Golu ko samhalnewali aayi hain, bas mujhe ab kisi baat ki koi fiqr nahi hain.


Priya - areee dadi aap aisa kyun bol rahi hain abhi toh aapko aur jeena hain humare liye, inn sab bachhon ke liye.


It was decided then that naamkaran will be held in Amritsar and with that all will take the blessings from babaji.


Priya kept her head on Ram's shoulder and said aap khush toh hain na?


Ram looked at her for moments and then said yaad hain tumhe Priya jab peheli baar hum dono Amritsar aaye the aur main yahi pe beytha hua tumhe mila tha uss din bhi woh subah ka hi waqt tha!


Priya - yaad hain mujhe


Ram - toh phir yeh bhi yaad hoga maine kya kahan tha tumse?


Priya - aap aur babuji isi ngaan me kabhi khela karte the aur aap bhi wahi chahte hain ke aap apne bachhen ke saath khele isi aangan me


Ram - and you made the dream of mine into reality, main bohot bohot khush hoon. I always wanted my angel and you gave me that so thank you.


Priya placed her hand on his mouth, yeh hum dono ki pyaar ki nishaani hain, she is the one who completes us. Priya placed her hand on the child and said she is very lucky to have you as her father. Ram clutched his daughter and Priya more to himself and said I think I am lucky to have you both in my life saying he softly kissed the child's forehead and then kissed Priya softly.




Thank you all for loving and supporting me and showering your love on my writing, I hope I have done justice with this FF of mine. If you all liked the part then do hit the "LIKE" button and leave your valuable comments.


Take care and God bless you all.


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