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Posted: 11 years ago
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sorry to disappoint you, but not today
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Originally posted by: jineejiggs




sorry to disappoint you, but not today

To phir kb ?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello dear, can we please have an update today.. Thank you!
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As usual it is awesome. i love this story very much. The Doctor part is very nice. Much needed advice for Raya from a decent person in a decent way. Loved Neha - Priya convo too. Neha convinced Priya by hook or crook.😆 Loving the Priya's stubbornness and anxiously awaiting for Ram's plan to pataofying his biwi. Yes Ram is sensing how sad Priya is. thats a good part. Ram will make Priya agree to the trip that is I m very sure. 'But how' is that making the story more interesting. Waiting for the update dear. Thanks for the pm.
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And Again

CONGRATULATIONS for the new thread. Way to go dear.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello dear
Aj update expect karsakte hai
aj update do na plzzz
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Originally posted by: lalmadhu

As usual it is awesome. i love this story very much. The Doctor part is very nice. Much needed advice for Raya from a decent person in a decent way. Loved Neha - Priya convo too. Neha convinced Priya by hook or crook.😆 Loving the Priya's stubbornness and anxiously awaiting for Ram's plan to pataofying his biwi. Yes Ram is sensing how sad Priya is. thats a good part. Ram will make Priya agree to the trip that is I m very sure. 'But how' is that making the story more interesting. Waiting for the update dear. Thanks for the pm.




thanks for commenting😊, Ram will do anything to make this plan worked out and in that he will agree Priya for it, let's see how he does that, pleasure is all mine
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: lalmadhu

And Again


CONGRATULATIONS for the new thread. Way to go dear.




thank you so very much
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Posted: 11 years ago
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update is coming up in minutes
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hello everyone, here comes the next part, I hope you all will enjoy reading this


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...I will make you mine, on the other hand Priya said in her heart, main nahi jayungi kahin bhi, kuch bhi ho jaye main Mr. Kapoor ke saath Seychelles nahi jayungi.




For the next couple of days Ram was busy making plans and arranging everything. He was busy with his business as well as preparations, but no one knows that Neha is helping him secretly. Both Vikram and Neha are helping Ram to gain back Priya. In fact, it was Neha who made Ram realize that he is in love with Priya. Now he wants her in his life and for that he wants this trip to be forever memorable for them. He has already booked the best Hotel over there but made all the arrangements very simple yet classy as he gets to know that Priya likes simple things. The trip is for 7 days and Ram want to make these 7 days best forever for both of them. Mr. Prajapati has already allotted her leave but Priya doesn't know that still. They are leaving in 3 days and today Neha is coming down in Mumbai. Neha and Vikram have just shifted in Goa but she can't stop herself from coming to Mumbai for her best friend. Ram was in his chamber thinking and a slight smile came on his lips.


Priya was in Hotel, she was in cafeteria sipping her black coffee when Rishi came there, he took a cup and took his sit.


Rishi - abhi kaisi tabiyat hain tumhari?


Priya - aree mujhe kuch nahi hua tha, am fine


Rishi - jhooth mat bolo, u had a stress attack


Priya - tumhe kaise pata?


Rishi - I called u that day and moreover aaj Sir se bhi pata chala


Priya - maine toh Sir ko nahi bataya kuch bhi


Rishi - tumne toh humein bhi nahi bataya ke you are going for 10 days leave


Priya - whaaat?


Rishi smiled and said aram se aise react kyun kar rahi ho, jaise you don't know anything, yaar hum sab colleagues hain, tumne toh hamse bhi yeh baat share nahi ki


Priya is still now perplexed she couldn't understand anything, she said mujhe sach me kuch samajh nahi aa raha hain, I haven't applied for any leave...she couldn't finish her words when someone came and said Mr. Prajapati is looking for her


Rishi - its okay Priya, maine bura nahi mana, in fact I think you do need some rest also.


Priya didn't said anything and came to meet Mr. Prajapati. He was talking over phone when Priya came in his chamber. He asked her to take the seat and finished his conversation over the phone.


Prajapati - Priya, I have called you to tell you that your leave has beren sanctioned, I have approved your 10 days leave.


Priya - Sir, kya main pooch sakti hoon meri leave application kisne submit kiya hain, as far as I know I haven't applied for any leave.


Prajapati smiled and answered it doesn't matter Priya, I have approved your leave on your doctor's reports, I want to see you healthy and hearty when you come back.


Priya - Sir, I know my reports and nowhere has it indicated that am unfit for my duty.


Prajapati - I know Priya but it is also true that you need rest so I am approving your leave.


Priya by now understood the matter and without making it more complicated came out from his chamber.


The rest of the day Priya was bracing herself to face Ram as she can clearly understand the entire situation. In the evening she came back and found Ram has already come back from his office. Priya looked at Ram while going for frenshn up and Ram could understand from her look that she got to know about her leave. He smiled in his heart and came to his study. Priya came out freshening up and couldn't found him in the room, she came in the kitchen and made a cup of coffee for her. Dadi and Krishnaji were not in the house and Rishabh and Natasha also didn't come back. Priya came in the garden with her coffee mug and sat on marble rock beside the fountain. She was trying to think what could made Ram do such thing, why is he trying to make friendship with her, why is he taking care of her. She doesn't want his pity. That day when he kissed her, Priya could feel something in that kiss of him but she can't let her heart build hope again, aur ek bar chhoth khane ki himmat usme nahi hain. She thought of confronting him and thus she finished her cup and came upstairs. Priya knows Ram is in his study so she came there. She before entering in knocked the door, it was open though but still she knocked. Ram was busy in his laptop, without looking up he asked to come in, Priya came inside.


Priya - Mr. Kapoor mujhe aapse kuch baat karni hain


Ram looked up immediately when he heard Priya's voice, Ram can see her anger in her eyes, aajkal Ram Priya ke har mood ko samajh pata hain. He came and sit on the sofa and asked Priya to have her seat as he can understand what Priya wants to tell him.


Ram - hum log beyth ke bhi baat kar sakte hain, saying he gestured her to sit down


Priya - mujhe jo kehna hain main khari rehke bhi kar sakti hoon


Ram - tum nahi beythogi toh mujhe bhi khara hona parega aur mujhe khare hoke baat karna pasand nahi hain, so I insist saying he pointed her his opposite chair.


For moments Priya looked at him and then sat down. Ram smiled seeing this.


Ram - ab bolo kya kehna hain tumhe?


Priya calmed her down and asked why did you ask Mr. Prajapati to sanction 10 days leave for me?


Ram - we are going to Seychelles for 7 days and are leaving in 3 days that's why.


Priya - aur aapko kisne kahan ke main aa rahi hoon aapke saath?


Ram had a sly grin on his face and he said because it's decided that we are going together, everything has been arranged.


Priya - Mr. Kapoor maine aapko peheli bhi kahan hain aur abhi bhi keh rahi hoon ke main nahi aayungi aap ke saath, in fact main aapke saath kahin bhi nahi jayungi.


Ram - you have no choice Priya, and moreover I haven't given you any choice, you are coming with me and it's final.


Priya - and if I don't come with you?


Ram - you will come with me


Priya - I will not


Ram smiled wickedly and said well let's see, now if you can excuse me can I complete my work


Priya came out from the study and came to her room, she has decided that tomorrow early morning she will go to Pune and will stay there for 7 days, lekin Priya ko kya pata tha ki woh jo soch rahi hain woh hone se raha. After the dinner everyone retired to their room, Priya thought of packing her bag once Ram goes to sleep so she did her routine work as usual and came and laid on the couch. After sometime Ram also came and lay down. In the middle of the night Priya tiptoed in the changing room and packed her bag. In the early morning she got up and also got freshnd up but she got startled when she came out from bathroom, Ram was standing in the changing room crossing his arm around his chest leaning on the doors.


Ram - tum ready ho gayi?, kaho toh main chhod doon bus stand tak ya phir Pune tak, jaisa tum kaho


Priya fumbled and started to stammer, she wasn't expecting him to be up at this time, mmmujhe kahan, mmain kkahin nahi jaa rahi hoon


Ram - toh itni subah taiyyar hoke kahan jaa rahi ho?


Priya - woh main bas, meri aankh khul gayi toh socha freshnd up ho jayu, bas aise hi


Ram smiled and come back to the room and Priya kept standing there. Her plan failed; never ever she thought her plan will backfire like this way.


Priya was in the kitchen preparing the lunch boxes and breakfast and was constantly thinking how she can avoid the trip. She was so busy in her thoughts that she even didn't notice Ram was in the kitchen. Sweating from treadmill, Ram was in his track pants and t-shirt came inside kitchen when he found Priya in deep thoughts, he saw her and understood what she is thinking of,


Ram - aur koi plan hain mere saath trip pe na jane ka toh usse bhi azmaa sakti ho


Hearing him, Priya got startled at first and then look at him


Ram - nahin main keh raha tha ki agar koi aur kuch plan hain toh woh bhi kar sakti ho


Priya - main aisa kuch bhi nahi soch rahi hoon


Ram smiled and said achha hain and came out from kitchen.


Priya in her heart she said yeh Mr. Kapoor ko pata kaise chal raha hain ke main kya soch rahi hoon, ufff! she tried to concentrate on her cooking.


At the breakfast table, all sat together, Priya was serving them.


Krishnaji - chalo achha hain tum dono ne jaane ka faisla kar liya hain, toh beta packing shuru kiya ke nahi?


Natasha - bhabhi aap plz wahan jaake bhi suits aur saree mat pehnna...


Neha - no way chhoti, Priya ki packing main karnewali hoon toh no suits or salwar in her bag.


Hearing this everyone turned and saw Neha is standing in the hall. Priya came and hugged her and she too reciprocated her.


Neha - get ready Priya, tum aur main breakfast ke baad shopping janewale hain


Natasha - di can I join you both?


Neha - I have no problem lekin apne bhai se permission le le


Natasha turned to him and Ram smiled and said okay, she became very happy. Neha came and join everybody on the breakfast. Priya is on leave so no hurry for her, after the breakfast she was in her room when Ram came in, he took his wallet and his I-pad, and looked at Priya who in turn was doing something in changing room. Ram can hear her and he came in the room and saw she was unpacking her bag, a smile flashed on his lips and he said,


Ram - if you still want to go to Pune, then its fine


Priya turned and glared at him and said main kahin nahin jaa rahi hoon


Ram came closer to her and said tum koshish karogi bhi toh main tumhe kahin jaane nahi dunga saying came much closer to her and caressed her chin with his fingers, a sudden shiver ran down her spine and she kept looking at him. Ram was looking very suave and handsome today in his navy blue shirt and grey suit. Priya looked at him and saw he was also looking at her, for moments their eyes got locked. It was Ram who breaks that and shifted.


Ram - koi bhi help chahiye shopping me toh am just a call away


Priya was still looking at him, but Ram gave her a smirk and get out of the room.


2 hours later, Priya along with Neha and Natasha came in the leading mall of the city. Priya ko yeh sab bilkul achha nahi lag raha tha, ek toh woh Ram ke saath kahin nahi jana chahti hain aur upar se yeh Neha aur Natasha ne iss trip ko kuch seriously le liya hain, according to them yeh inn dono ki honeymoon hain, huh! Ab inn dono ko woh kaise samjhaye ki uski aur Ram ke beech kuch nahi hain aur yeh trip sirf ek eyewash hain, lekin ab Priya kuch kar bhi nahi sakti kyun ki uske plans fail ho gaye and moreover Neha jab tak hain aur kuch hone ki gunjaish nahi hain so she braced herself for this shopping. Priya ko waise Neha aur Natasha ki company achhi lagti hain so she without thinking much accompany them.


Neha and Natasha were discussing among themselves about the attire Priya going to wear in this trip, Priya tried to stop them but Neha toh Neha hain woh kab kisi ki baat suni hain, she along with Natasha dragged Priya in the shop. PANACHE, as the name suggest is classy and elegant. Neha and Natasha came inside but Priya was hesitant to come because she can very well understand what both her sister-in-law are upto, but Natasha dragged her and they all came inside. Priya is feeling awkward as the store offers a large number of modern western dresses and lingeries.


Priya - Neha main...


Neha - main janti hoon tum yeh sab nahi pehenti ho, lekin wahan tum pehen hi sakti ho kyunki wahan sirf fatty rahega aur usse tumhe sharmane ki zaroorat nahi hain


Priya - par Neha...


Natasha - ufff ho! bhabhi aap pe yeh sare dress bohot suit karenge aur phir bhai ka reactions bhi sochiye, woh toh ek dum surprised ho jayenge, plz ab aap aur kuch nahi bolengi and saying this she literally dragged her to that corner where dresses were hanging.


Both Natasha and Neha chooses dresses for her, from Capri to short skirts, linen pants to frilled frocks, gowns to sphagetti short dress, every possible things to turn a man. Along with them some night gowns and lingerie, Priya was feeling really awkward now. After selecting the dresses it was the time for trial and Priya was giving trials to all those but it was seen that long floral dresses along with linen pants and sphagetti strap short dresses finally emeged as winners. With all these some short tops were also selected for linen pants but all these are in simple pastel shlades or in floral prints as Priya wanted them in simple things. The shopping was almost complete, Natasha was going through some dresses in another part when Neha came to Priya and handed her a dress and asked her to try it out.


Priya - bas Neha ab aur nahi, aree main sirf 7 din ke liye jaa rahi hoon aur tumne almost one month ki packing karwa di meri


Neha - ohh hello madam, you are going for your honeymoon, so you need all these saying she winked at her.


Priya blushed hearing her and came inside the trial room, she looked at the dress and for moments kept looking at that, it was a lingerie night gown till the upper thigh made up of fine white net and same colour crochet, it was almost transparent in design. Priya couldn't believe that Neha choose this one for her, she was in her two minds when she heard Neha saying


Neha - main janti hoon tumhe thoda awkward lag raha hain but plz try once, am sure it will look very beautiful on you.


Priya couldn't say anything and she tried the garment. It was till her upper thigh, the white lace is looking good against her skin. For moments she kept looking at her figure in the mirror, she was looking very sexy, was thinking in her heart how Ram will react if he see her in this dress but her thought get disrupted as Neha said,


Neha - am sure fatty will be in real shock when he sees you in this dress.


Priya came out from trial room and handed over the lingerie to Neha.


Neha looked at her surprisingly and asked what happened?, it didn't fit you?


Priya - Neha, I am not comfortable in it and moreover it doesn't suit me.


Neha - ohh common Priya, kuch nahi hoga, and am sure you look pretty in this lingerie, trust me, I am buying this for you and no more saying no' to this.


Priya - aree Neha meri baat toh suno...


Neha - no Priya, I am buying this and you will wear it, mere bhai ko bhi toh pata chale uski biwi kitni hot hain


Hearing this for moments Priya blushed but at the next moment she composed herself and said, Neha main yeh sach me nahi pehen payungi


Neha turned back and said iss dress me tumhe koi nahi dekhega sirf mera bhai dekhega, uske samne tum yeh pehen bhi paogi aur..., she didn't complete herself and smiled.


Priya this time can't say anything, she was blushing again, its not that she didn't like the lingerie, in fact she was looking very beautiful in it when she was giving the trial but she knows very well she can never wear this in front of Ram aur waise bhi inn dono ka rishta aisa nahi hain ke she wear such things but she can't say such to Neha, so she was trying to lying to her but Neha didn't listen to her anything and bought that particular lingerie for her. Now shopping was complete and they three came to their favourite restaurant.


Natasha - mujhe toh bohot bhook lagi hain


Neha - tujhe toh hamesha hi bhook lagti lagti hain


Priya - sabse zyada bhook mujhe lagi hain becoz itne trial ke baad am feeling very hungry.


Natasha - haan aur maine dress select kiya hain jo kafi challenging bhi hain toh mujhe bhi bohot bhook lagi hain.


Neha stared at them for moments and then said galati ho gayi jo aap dono se ladne chali thi, theek hain lets order something, actually bhook mujhe bhi lagi hain, in fact aaj kal kuch zyada hi lag rahi hain


After placing the order these three lovely ladies engage in girly talks and Neha shared her honeymoon tips with Priya, though Natasha was there still they had a blast. Both Priya's sister-in-law gave her all sorts of erotic ideas how to lure Ram's attention, in fact Natasha shared some erotic ideas from classy English novels hearing on which Priya blushed from core but Neha left stunned and said


Neha - chhoti so you are reading such stuffs these days?


Natasha - di main bas woh...


Neha - have you read Christian Grey?


Natasha - di aap ko kaise...


Neha turned to Priya and said why are you smiling?, kahin tumne toh...


Priya - yes I have read the book, infact all the 3 parts


Neha's eyes got widened and she almost screemed in excitement, kya tumne para hain?, I thought tum yeh sab nahi parti ho


Priya smiled and said but I have read it


Natasha - and you liked Grey, right?


Neha - it seems someone is drooling over Grey, hmmm?


Priya smiled and said so lets do one thing, let us find one Christian Grey for chhoti, kyun?


Neha - brilliant idea, kyun kya bolti hain?


Natasha - kya bhabhi aap bhi!


Priya - kyun? isme sharmanewali kya baat hain?, koi hain tumhari zindagi me toh bol do main maa aur dadi se baat karungi


Natasha - nahi bhabhi aisi koi baat nahi hain, main...bas...woh


Neha - chhoti tu janti hain tu mujhse kuch bhi share kar sakti hain, kya sach me koi hain...


Natasha - nahi di, main aap se aur bhabhi se kyun chhupayungi, sach me koi nahi hain


Priya kept her hand on her and said agar kuch bhi hoga toh tum mujhse share kar sakti ho


Natasha kept her hand on Priya's hand and said trust me bhabhi aisa kuch nahi hain


Priya smiled and said I trust you


Neha - achha filhaal hum tumhare aur fatty ki baat kar rahe the and am sure mera fatty kisi Christian Grey se kam nahi hoga


Priya - kya Neha tum bhi?


Neha - trust me Priya, mera fatty kisi se kam nahi hain, itne dino me itna toh samajh hi gayi hogi tum


Priya was about to say something when food was served and all geared up for it but Priya was thinking of Neha's words and with that the night in Amritsar and she said in her heart, main janti hoon Neha tumhare bhai ko, and yes woh kisi se kam nahi hain, Priya was thinking about him and her experience with him but Neha's voice made her come into the reality.


Neha - kya soch rahi ho tum Priya?


Priya - nahi, kuch nahi


Neha lowered her voice so that Natasha can't hear her and said itna mat socho, just take it the way things are going on, I am sure fatty will make this trip memorable for you both.


Priya smiled and started eating.





bohot koshish ki thi ke Christian Grey ya phir book ko apni writing me nahi le aayungi par yeh teeno ne mujhe woh nahi karne diya aur upar se Ram ki aisi haarkaton ki wajah se mujhe Grey ko lana hi para agar iss update ko parte waqt kisi ko bhi Christian Grey ya phir uski erotic sensual acts yaad aa jaye toh mujhe plz blame mat karna


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