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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: .pia_12.

SUPERB update!!!!
when every thing was solve yeh misunderstanding hona tha...
poor RaYa...😔
when is this mu will be sorted !!!!
will be waiting 4 the next update
continue as soon as possible...
and thanks 4 pm!!!!

most probably in next part Ram ke saamne saara sach aa jaayega thanks for comments🤗
will try to give update in 2-3 days
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update Sandi..
Finally Priya chali gayi..par mujhe yeh sep forced laga..i mean Ram ne phone kiya..Priya ne uthaya bhi par baat nhi ki or Ram ne nhi bataya bcoz he wanted to surprise her( koi sirf surprise dene ke liye aisa karta hai? Matlab he exactly knows how upset is Priya..she was crying in mrng too..phir bhi he didnt though to tell her this somehow)..chalo phir bhi yaha tak samjh aya..

But mujhe yeh samjh nhi aya..ki Priya ko nhi pata tha Ram aane wala hai?..why she left Parul then next day only? Ab Ram next week hi aata na wapis? Toh kya tab tak or rather jab tak Ram call nhi karta ya usse pata nhi chalta through Sunita Priya ke jane ka toh Parul Sunita ke pass rehti? Koi Maa aisa nhi kar sakti hai..usse pata hota ki Ram aane wala hai or wo uske aane se pehle nikal jati Parul ko Sunita ke pass chodkar toh samjh aata kyunki Ram aane hi wala hota wo Parul ko sambhal leta phir..par yeh chiz samjh nhi ayi mujhe..sry if u felt bad..sep hona hi tha..par agar aisa hota ki Priya ko pata hota Ram aane wala hai ya fix day hota week ka ki Ram uss din ayega hi uss waqt Priya ka jana zyada sensible decision hota..my POV

Pain of a mother is nicely shown..Priya doing everything of Parul for the last time with heavy heart nd her continuous cry..when Ram left she felt tug in her heart as she knows that she is seeing him for last time..how she was controling herself infront of Ram...very good nd touchy scenes..
Priya went to clinic to abort the child..😲 but its good she changed her decision..what she thought was right that her parents will not accept her with child nd even so called society also will not accept her like this..so ultimately she left nd went far away from everyones life for her child nd with her child..tough life ahead for her as single mother..but she is brave enough to live it for her child...👏
Vik- Nuts convo was very nice..he made her understand what Ram did was right nd for her good only though his way of doing this was totally wrong..Nuts understood this nd all is well now for time being..jab tak dusra bomb nhi phut ta unn par😆

Present is eeeks..😆 Esha ka blush karna nd shy smile 🤢
Priay will wear that saree😉 But kaise dekhte hai..
Chocolate walevscene ki explanation mast thi..hahaha..poor u hum kitna pareshan karte hai queries or confusion se😆
Thanx for pm.,
Edited by vironikajain - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sry for this much long comment..pata hi nhi chala jab likh rahi thi 😆
Nd give update whenever u get time..happy journey
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hum toh deewane ho gye, aapki chocolate mystery sunn ke😆😆 lekin convinced nhi hoon main, ram kapoor ko aisa kya kam pada tha jo apni beti ko box k badle mein box me se ek hi chocolate de diya😆🤪




Must Must say the story is progressing so well.
How beautiful sandhya, you have evolved so much as a writer.
I loved nuts n viks conversation, he understands things so well , succeeded to convince n make her realize she is committing the same mistake as ram did. Beautiful.
KK is not happy seeing her son's dried face, kehte hai na maa bin bataye hi samjh jaati hai bachhoan ka haal. Too good.

Priya's state was explained so well, n her motherly love n pain was described beautiful ly.
Peehu still not comfortable with esha, it happnes happens with kids often.
Well red and green pehennnewali ek hi toh hai. 😉😆 Uss combination pe toh priya ka patent laga hua hai, so dusre ka choona/pehenna mana hai😆😆

Oye rajjo kab aayega ram k paas bechare ko kaha ghuma rhi ho ekta sis, transfer wahi kiya na jahan paani milta hai😛😆. Mujhe pata hai aap uski comfort ka poora dhyan rakhogi fir bhi rha nhi gaya issiliye poochi😆

Main ekta sis kahoon shayad issiliye, ram priya ki Milan ko shaadi k mandap tak kheench rhi ho, green red combination k saath. Lage rho😆😆


P.S: maine iss baar aapka rajjo nhi kaha, kyunki aapka toh ek hi hai chandrama sasi, jisski chandni aap ho, toh sirf rajjo likha hai😛😆😆
Edited by bpatil3 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update. So Priya left and coz of kids uski family se bhi dooor hogayi😭

Ram wanted to know why Priya left him! But did he ever tried to confront her..? I dont think so...! Lets see what he will do to get her answers. The next day is shaadi, I m excited what will happen and how Priya will get to wear the saree..😛 😆

Ye kya baath huyi...aap ne bola ki jane se pehle Ram ko bachhon ke baaren mein patha chaljayega...lekin ab aise hi chod kar jaa rahi ho...Not done...Just kidding! Waise vacations par jaa rahi ho kya? Enjoy a lot.

Haan I m a Tamilian (Sorry Neel..😆) And I watched Ullam Kollai...only upto Season 1 ie.Before Priya goes to jail. Waise U know Tamil?

Thanks for the pm. Whenever possible plzz update...Its a request.
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
continue soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update
What a MU between RaYa...
Ram & Isha should not get married...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aanchaltulshan

Very well written
Priya shouldn't leave before speaking to ram
Vikram with love made natasha understand that she is doing wrong with ram and now she is also accepted the marriage of raya
But now priya is leaving everything because of one mu
In present the marriage arrangement is going on
So ram want to meets once with priya to confront him
Looking forward for next part continue soon
Thanx for the pm

Ram wants to meet one more time...but kya milege ki nahi will know in next part
thanks for comments🤗
will update in two days
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sinalbest

Hi Sandhya.. 😊

Excellent update.. 👏 ⭐️
Waiting to see hw Esha exits & Priya enters.. 😉
thanks for pm...
Continue soon.. 😊

😆 haan jald hi exit entry ka kaam shuru hoga
thanks for comments🤗
will update in two days
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MittalKanu

Nice part

Finally Priya chali gayi
Continue soon.

Thanks for comments🤗
will continue soon

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