Jab we met AGAIN - 3rd & final part in page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: peeyara
lovely ending 😊
keep writing 😛

Thank you.. Sure, will try writing if I get any interesting idea 😊

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IAmNotActive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: tulshan1989
aww how cute raya are spending time alone on beach in each arms glad they reslove their issue and now will think for themselve

Glad you liked it.. I don't see RaYa as a couple who would ever think only of themselves... 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: priyajan12
awesome Geeta Mama

Thank you Priya :)

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IAmNotActive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: sparkling_gems
Nice story.. though I dont approve of Priya's decision of staying away from Ram for the sake of suhani.

Hi Sparkle, thanks for liking the story.. I am sure, many may not approve of Priya's decision.. I see Rayas people as providers, in particular Priya is someone who never like to be a receiving end, she thinks Suhaani had done her a favour, and Priya can't be satisfied until she return the favour..

I am not in agreement to that decision too.. As Ram suggests, hiring a caretaker for Suhaani is the better option, but Priya's nature won't let her do that, for her it is a comobation of repaying the gratitude and also a sense of responsibility she feels towards Suhaani due to thier earlier association..

Though don't agree, I understand that.. And Ram too undertands her deciosn, because after-all he knows her better 😊

Edited by ever_smily - 11 years ago

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IAmNotActive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: iLuvRamKapoor
Hi geeta this is awesome loved all the three parts amazing
But isnt it stupid of priya to leave her husband and kids for suhani?
I used to read ur takes on episodes which i miss now
You analyse the characters in a good way

Hi, very glad you liked it 😊

Priya has not left KM for Suhaani.. Frankly speaking, I don't approve her of leaving.. But the CVs decided to give us a separation and pinning track.. I am just trying to make the best out of the situation and make RaYa behave like the matured couple they are supposed to be..

Priya left KM because she thought she was doing a favour to her Mr. Kapoor. But. Now she is staying away because of Suhaani.. As I mentioned in my reply to sparkle, as per my understanding of Priya's characterisation, I feel, she would feel honour bound to take care of Suhaani..

Doesn't mean I agree to her thinking, but it goes with her typical behaviour.. Moreover, it is also my prediction, in future in the show, similar track might be shown... Just a guess, I have abosultely no clue how BT script works..

Yup, I am not active in IF these days.. I still make takes, share it only wth a set of friends, if you are interested, let me know.. I can PM it you..

Edited by ever_smily - 11 years ago

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IAmNotActive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: contactcharu
very nice... :)

Thank you 😊

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vironikajain

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Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Hi Geetha..
U re back..this update was awesome..loved it
RaYa behaved like a mature couple..they talked out all problems nd MUs btw them..good
How Ram got angry, longing to be with his wife but still understands everything nd is with her in his stubborn golu self( how he was adamnt in spending time with her), kanyadyan wala part(poor Ram that was his dream 😭..very nicely written their convo part at beach..👏
Ram lies down in her lap...very nice..want one scene like this in show too😔
Great job...thanx for this write up..

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IAmNotActive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: vironikajain
Hi Geetha..
U re back..this update was awesome..loved it
RaYa behaved like a mature couple..they talked out all problems nd MUs btw them..good
How Ram got angry, longing to be with his wife but still understands everything nd is with her in his stubborn golu self( how he was adamnt in spending time with her), kanyadyan wala part(poor Ram that was his dream 😭..very nicely written their convo part at beach..👏
Ram lies down in her lap...very nice..want one scene like this in show too😔
Great job...thanx for this write up..

Thank you Vironika.. Very glad, you enjoyed it..😊

Yes, this is the RaYa we all want to see on screen, the matured couple, who give & take..

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leena

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Posted: 11 years ago

#59

Part 3
awww awesome update too gud... I just so loved it puly matured & lovely part I enjoyed it so much too gud awesome way batter then anything else... too gud yaar I felt I m reading someone very expert writer's write up... its just awesome too gud... will be waiting for more from u...