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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: shonuz_mom
Nice update. continue soon.

Thank you,, Next update in couple of days..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: vironikajain
First of all welcome back Geetha😊...where have u disappeared?
Coming to update..
Too good..
Ram poured his heart out, his sufferings nd pain..which never gonna happen in show.. 😔
Very touchy..
Do cont soon..

Thank you Vironika, I am a silent spectator theses days..

Yes, this will never happen in BALH.. I only write fiction when I think the track could have been handed differently,,

About second part, I agree with you.. I am not satisfied with it too.. I think I had given too much gap.. I had the whole story in my head on Monday. I even written half of second part on Tuesday,, but. Then gave a break,. That broke the flow..

Anyway, I am more of a critic than a strory teller, you know it :)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: anupam_dil
kaash serial me aisa hota per waha pe tho dono kitna stubborn hai...any way I loved your update thanks for this

Thank you for liking it. Yes RaYa are not behaving like the mature couple they are supposed to be, I try to make them behave a bit maturely in my version ;)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: krunalidivecha
awesome

Thank you, second part posted..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Dsudipa
very emotional update, pls continue soon

Thank you,, hope you like the second part too

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: sinalbest
Very nice..😊
Cont soon..

Thank you for liking both the updates.. Hope you would like the conclusion too..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: kaparikh1
Hey Geetha, that was a superb update from yourside once again...And we can never expect logic in the serial, can expect only in such OS...Waiting for the next update...Loved it...

Thank you Kirthika for liking my attempt.. Yes, we are here provide the logical angle to the story which we can never expect from CVs.. Hope, you enjoy the next part too