FF: Kabhi Jo Baadal Barse... NOTE: Page 39 - Page 2

Originally posted by: ShazK.123

Uff next time health ko goli maaro 🤣... agar aapne force kiya hota i would have remembered about this... 😆

without reading aapne like kiya 🤣 itna bharosa hai mujhpe ke kuch accha likhungi?

Originally posted by: ShazK.123

second comment dekh ke mujhe laga ki itni jaldi "kal" hogaya aap keliye 🤣

actually kya hua tha ki maine yeh part pehle likha... lekin this wasn't the start of the story... mai sab kuch ulta karti hoon, toh kuch mahine pehle jab maine yeh story start kiya, toh i started writing from the middle... so this part was supposed to come after about 10 updates 🤣... but kal jab episode dekha toh yaad aagaya ki maine yeh likha... toh i decided to start from here and then do a reverse leap 🤣

uff agar mai yeh likhti aur CVs ko pata chala, phir story nahi hoti na serial mei... at least ab serial mei focus RaYa pe hoga 🥳

Thank you for commenting 😃

"sorry" kyun? aapka comedy accha lagta hai... senti hone ke baad comedy padhna health ke liye accha hai (yeh Dr. Kapoor ne nahi bataya... mera apna "vichar" hai... (maine vichar word sahi sentence mei use kiya na?)

ek psychology research padha tha maine about upset men and women and how they deal with their pain... that is how I decided to make Ram drink 🤣

first name decide nahi kiya... Rajat rakhne wali thi lekin Rajat naam se Rajat ka chehra yaad aata hai... aur chappal phenkne ka mann karta hai... joh parts maine likha hai sirf "Kapur" naam rakha hai for now... "Kapur" toh important hai story mei... shayad Rajat hi rakhungi, if i don't think of a name 😆

PM is liye nahi kiya kyunki mai irritate nahi karna chahti thi aapko 😆 post dekh ke decide kar sakti thi aap if you wanted to read or not 😆 I didn't want to force you 😳 aapko sach mei PM nahi chahiye? ab mai karungi... definitely karungi 😉

What an amazing storyline! It was sad to see that circumstances once again played its cruel game and separated Ram and Priya but what was circumstances which made Priya left. What was Ram hiding from her which, according to him for her own good? And why both of them behavingly stubbornly? And who is his HE, taking advantage of Priya? Why is He calling her Mrs. KapUr? Many questions.

Pls continue soon.

If possible add me in ur pm list.

Superb beginning yaar.

hey shazk u r back with another story on raya
have no words to descrbe just beautifully written
raya love each other but their ego is stopping them
pls continue soon and pm me the first part

Very heart wrenching yet beautiful story! It's difficult to see RaYa apart yet it's very appealing ( what a sicko I am! ) because then there milap will be emotionally satisfying😆 Waiting to know their love story..please continue soon.

Superbly written and very interesting.. lovd it...
Continue soon..
And can u plz pm from d nxt updates ??

Originally posted by: vishakupp

Looking forward to it. Please do update soon