FF: Kabhi Jo Baadal Barse... NOTE: Page 39

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

ShazK.123

@ShazK.123

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: anupam_dil
very very nice part👏👏 but come to current track soon as I want to see the reunion through your writing...continue soon...and plz PM me

Thank you... I will try to get to the present track quickly :-) 😃

Quote

ShazK.123

@ShazK.123

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: peeyara

lo mardi goli health ko

dr kapoor was giving you heavy medications na toh nhi kaha tha but ab kahungi 😉

i should have force you na...next tym pakka karungi😉
haan bht bharosa hai😛

🤣🤣 aapne toh sach mei goli maardi 🤣

how sweet, "bohot bharosa hai" 😃😃😃

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

ShazK.123

@ShazK.123

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: peeyara

kaha na control nahi hua 😆
koi bhi leap lo...reverse ya forward...doesn't matter...story se matlab hai😉
mujhe laga dr. kapoor ki hi advice hogi ..waise how is he? hv you visited him? 🤣
koshis karna k rajat na ho else kapur is fine...first name se hame kya karna hai 🤣
lkein kitna pila rahi ho yaar...kidney problem hogayi toh 🤣
u can irritate me...waise mujhe irritate karna aasan nhi hai 😎

side leap bhi chalega? 😆

Monday morning visit kiya tha... after seeing me, obviously accha hoga na? 😉🤣 uff, mai koi gandi baat nahi kar rahi... after seeing me and my health improvements, happy toh hoga na.

hahahaha okay no Rajat 😆🤢

Mr. Kapoor punjabi hai na... toh itni jaldi sharab ka koi bura asar nahi hoga 🤣

aapne permission diya mujhe to irritate you pata hai ki aapko irritate karna aasaan nahi hai

Quote

ShazK.123

@ShazK.123

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: lalmadhu
Very good start. Very impressive. Please continue soon,
Plz pm me for ur updates.

Thank you 😃 will update soon.

Quote

luvsakshi

@luvsakshi

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Thats a good start ..

You said you are not ekta ..😆but in the starting itself you separated Raya ...

Jokeas apart ,a wonderful story ,potryed very beautifully ,,,

suspence????😉 who is the kapUr ..waiting eagerly for it .

why they have separated and why he hasnt stopped

what she doing in Uk as some one mrs.kapur or what 😆

Pm me from next time...Jald se update dena ..

Take care of your health ...Congratulations for starting a story ..

Quote

ShazK.123

@ShazK.123

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: sparkling_gems
What an amazing storyline! It was sad to see that circumstances once again played its cruel game and separated Ram and Priya but what was circumstances which made Priya left. What was Ram hiding from her which, according to him for her own good? And why both of them behavingly stubbornly? And who is his HE, taking advantage of Priya? Why is He calling her Mrs. KapUr? Many questions.

Pls continue soon.

If possible add me in ur pm list.

Thank you 😃

so many questions 😆... but the answers to these questions will slowly be revealed as the story progresses 😉

its RaYa... stubbornness will always be a major trait 😆

will update soon. 😃

Quote

monika_RK

@monika_RK

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Superb start even i felt bad more for ram
Looking forward to next part
I hate rajat glad you arent bringing him

Quote

ShazK.123

@ShazK.123

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: bpatil3
Superb beginning yaar.
I m surprized and loved reading.
Emotions of raya were perfectly penned down.
continue soon.
Ekta nhi ho lekin separate toh kar chuki ho raya ko aur beech mein Mr.Kapur ko bhi ghusa diya pressent mein😆😆

Welll post the other parts soon if already u wrote😛

Thank you so much 😃😃

Ekta nahi hoon lekin uska phone aaya tha mujhe , aur usne order kiya tha separation ke liye aur haddi kapur ko ghusane ke liye 🤣

i started writing the story from the middle 😆 so the parts i have written will come later 😆

will update soon 😃

Quote

ShazK.123

@ShazK.123

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: tulshan1989
hey shazk u r back with another story on raya
have no words to descrbe just beautifully written
raya love each other but their ego is stopping them
pls continue soon and pm me the first part

Thank you 😃

RaYa have very big egos 😆

will update soon

Quote

ShazK.123

@ShazK.123

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: DiehardRaYafan
Very heart wrenching yet beautiful story! It's difficult to see RaYa apart yet it's very appealing ( what a sicko I am! ) because then there milap will be emotionally satisfying😆 Waiting to know their love story..please continue soon.

😆 me too... their milan is always very emotionally satisfying 😆

Thank you 😃 ... will continue soon