FF: The Circle of Life : Part 14 Pg 39

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anupam_dil

@anupam_dil

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Omg that was superb👏👏...

sorry every time we could not say different things as you r awesome writer we automatically get OMG in our mind...too good

and you cleared the air by priya's work thank god

thanks for pm

continue soon...

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akilagoud2

@akilagoud2

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

superb update neha n thanks shanaya
continue soon
thanks for pm

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vishakupp

@vishakupp

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Very different concept. Always love your writing. & thanks for Not making Priya one of Ammas girls. That would have been too cliched. Looking forward to this new angle.

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vironikajain

@vironikajain

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Wow!! That was a brilliant update Neha..👏
Ram's thinking nd his convo with Priya..so natural..use of simple words nd superbb writting made it a lot more catchy with different..
Priya's innocence is very shown nd her bond with Ammaji looks very good..
So Ram will make his directory on this topic too..
Loving it..
Looking forward to more..
Thanx for pm..

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Devisept7

@Devisept7

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Oh god u r just too brilliant neha u cleared all my doubts,i'm in love with this ff too and there r no fillers u just write in a very realistic way thanku shanaya continue

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DiehardRaYafan

@DiehardRaYafan

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Bandini...what a beautiful title! Again, I am speechless Neha! Absolutely brillant update! Please update soon😃

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SharmiRayaBasu

@SharmiRayaBasu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Hatts off!! Lovely story..amazing screenplay..awsome presentation..all over jst woww.!

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Zeenath Sheikh

@zeenathsheikh8

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Finally meri jaan mein jaan aayi:-) priya is not a___________

Awesome track plz continue as you have planned

Thanks:-)

Edited by zeenathsheikh8 - 11 years ago

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rayaBALH

@rayaBALH

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

ok i thought priya worked there as one of the girls but mera popat bana diya haha awesome update plz continue soon but what priya does there???????? doctor of ammaji? or teacher???? hehe time pass guessing :p continue ASAP :)