FF: The Circle of Life : Part 14 Pg 39

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sandhya

@lovelysakshi

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#41

awesome

very unique story and I loved the characterization of Ram and Priya.

thank god she is not one of the women...thanks for clearing it.

loved the interaction between Ram and Priya. ammaji is fond of Priya...but feel bad for other girls.

continue soon and thanks for PM

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jineejiggs

@jineejiggs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

superb starting, I love the concept, this one will be very different from other one as it starts with a good jerk, plz continue, will wait for next part

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jineejiggs

@jineejiggs

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

part 2

simply awesome, am currently shortage of words to appreciate this concept, am loving every bit of it, plz continue ASAP

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sinalbest

@sinalbest

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Suberp update.. 👏
Very well written.. 👏
Continue soon.. 😊

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jmehta1957

@jmehta1957

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

pehla ff law of attraction ki tarah jaldi update kyun nahi kar rahi ho...jaldi update de do pls..

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anupam_dil

@anupam_dil

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#46

got busy❓

update plzzz

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shanaya1204

@shanaya1204

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Neha is not well...will update at the earliest

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DiehardRaYafan

@DiehardRaYafan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: shanaya1204
Neha is not well...will update at the earliest

Shanaya, please tell her to rest...we can wait for the update. Please convey our best wishes to her...I hope that she feels better soon😃

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vironikajain

@vironikajain

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: shanaya1204
Neha is not well...will update at the earliest

Get well soon Neha...Shanaya tell her to take proper rest..health comes first..
Will definately wait..

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Jayasree

@jayasree.rao

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Posted: 11 years ago

#50

Shanaya,

Just read that Neha is unwell.Pl. ask her to take it easy and take rest. The updates can wait so also we, the readers.

This is a very bold subject and loved the way Neha started the story and the narration.

Just loved the interaction between Ram and Priya and Ram's hesitation to know whether Priya is also one of the girls.

I saw this FF after the 2nd chapter and read both the chapter at one go.

Thank you and take care.

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